Membership status: Member
Bio:
I am an avid reader and am writing my first story. So here is the thing, I have a really wild imagination and I think up some rediculous senarios for my characters! Daydreaming has always been my favourite pass time - ask any of my former teachers!!
I love poetry and am a hopeless romantic at heart -- yes even having had my heart broken, I believe in HEA!
When or IF you read my story/ stories, please don't take them seriously, take them with a pinch of salt and a shot of tequila!!
Michele
You can catch me on twitter as justginger007 and on fanfic my pen name is justginger - I had to change it here because it was already taken!!!
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389633
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...
loved it! glad they are getting back on track
Author's Response:
First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:
Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”
My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.
Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!
He was right there!
Right fucking there!
Suddenly, I felt overdressed.
My clothes felt too tight, constricting.
All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.
I blame that bitch, Eve!
Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.
What?
No!
Give it to me!
Don’t tease me!
Pleaseeeeeee!
At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.
One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.
He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.
Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.
Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.
Right?
Wrong...
Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.
Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”
Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.
Hey, don’t judge me...
Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
oh my....what a first chapter! WOW!!!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
wow - great chapter and loved the conversation!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. It means alot to us. WE need to know that you do actually enjoy it. Thanks xoox DLIR and Ari
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover
Hi there - I love this story and I want to know if you would mind if I rec it on my story posting this week. I write a story call People like Us.
LET ME KNOW IF IT"S OKAY?
THANKS
Michele
Author's Response:
Thank you for wanting to Rec this story. We appreciate it and your review. I look forward to reading your story as well... DLIR AND ARI
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection
oh my word!!!! update soon
Author's Response:
Update we shall....xoxoox thanks for leaving a review....DLIR AND ARI
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent
THIS IS SO WRONG ON SO MANY DIFFERENT LEVELS - NOT MY LOVELY SPARTAN!!!
Author's Response:
LOL IKR. Poor Spartan he has it so bad LOL Thank you for your review. We love hearing from you.
Sincerely
Ari & DLIR
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life
I pimped your story on my latest chapter because oh my - it's good - it rocks! great chapter!!!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think
awesome and wonderful damn angela!!
Author's Response:
I know...we contemplated having her die somewhere...but thats to easy...hahha....xoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness
I have faith in you to fix this ....
Great Chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for having faith....pray to the SMW lord......becuase I WANT SPARTAN......................lol DLIR AND ARI
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy
i hate that these two are messing each other up so badly - something's got to give sometime
Author's Response:
Time heals everything.....:)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings
was it eric - the loon?
Author's Response:
You willl soon find out........ :) DLIR AND ARI
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's
wonderful chapter - I'm so sorry about your brother Ari. I have lost a brother as well and my heart goes out to you.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Use Somebody
great chapter - I just wish that Jessica would leave or get lost or whatever... we need some more of your brand of kink ladies, it's been far too long... we need our dose of Spartan...please....
Author's Response:
heheheh I want Spartan to....but yah re refuse to have them together while things are all messed up...It wont be tooo long sooo dont worry ...Spartan will make an appearance soon
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
she really is insane! great chapter
Author's Response:
xoxoxo yup she is...hahahh We hope u enjoy part 2 xoxoxoxo
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2
I bet he was with skank at the time!
Author's Response:
heheheheh hmmmmmmmmmmmm was he??????????
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period
go edward!!! I love the hardass E!!
Author's Response:
mmmmmm he is smexy when he mad
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies
what? Mommy Esme? Go Edward!
Author's Response:
LOL and the twisted plot thickens :) Ah you haven't seen nothin yet. That's all I'm sayin cuz I don't want DLIR to beat me she's mean that way ya know. LOL JK
Thank you for your review sweetie.
x0x0x0x0x0xx0
Ari & DLIR
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2
I hope that Esme and Angela get stuck on an island together!
Author's Response:
Umm now there's a thought DLIR. Stuck...together on a island. On the other side of the world! :)
Thank you so very much for your review.
xx0x0x0x0x0x0x0x
Ari & DLIR
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Weeping Willow
this was so sad - I hopeat that they get their shit together soon
Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade. But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.
Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters. She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life. She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves. And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.
Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
oh my. what now? great chapter!
Author's Response:
lol Thank you!
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
I hope they make it too. will he take her with him or leave her behind? this was a great chapter
Author's Response:
I'm going to have to leave you guessing, People. :) I'm glad you're liking it so far!
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
I can't wait to see what has happened to her!
Author's Response:
I won't keep you waiting too long, I promise! :)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
good chapter - i hope tral finds her soon
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
NOW YOU HAVE TO HURRY!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
No, no I don't. LOL
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
NOOOOO! what will happen to pani and bebe and tral or Bach??? this is terrible!!!!
great chapter though
Author's Response:
LOL, Terrible? Really?
Thank you!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
wow. what an amazing chapter. I stand corrected it isn't a bad thing, but it is going to be a hard road ahead. I'm glad to see that Ben is going to rise up to the challenge.
Everyone's lives are going to change and maybe not for the most convenient but it is for the better.
I'm excited to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying this so much! Thanks!
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
what a great chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
i can't wait to see what you write next
Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.
Banner by busymommy
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204643
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
loved this first chapter
Love comes to you when you least expect it. But can your love survive an unexpected event?
E & B . Not intended for readers under the age of 18. Mature content is involved. This story is written by DLIR, just for fun. SM own all Twilight. Edward. Bella. etc .
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132261 Read Count: 33801
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: No regrets
i'm on this like warm butter on buns
Author's Response:
He HE get coozy....xoxox DLIR
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: My name is Bella
NOOOOOOO
Author's Response:
Yessssssssssssssss...I know.... : ( keep reading :) xoxoox DLIR
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: For now
poor sad bella, alice and edward
Author's Response:
I know.....hope u enjoy the rest DLIR
This story picks up a year after Edward and Bella were married. He changed her on their honeymoon and there was no baby or confrontation with the Volturi. Bella realizes as they return from a trip to celebrate their first anniversary that the Cullens have been keeping a secret from her. Now, they want her to join in on the fun.
This story contains slash, fem-slash, polyamorous groupings…ah hell. It is a damned sexual buffet. If you are not into that sort of thing or if you are under 18, then just move along little ones. This story is NOT for you.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11296 Read Count: 13861
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Family Affair
OMG!!!! I need a shower - an Edward, Jasper, Emmett, Carlisle!!!! Good heavens girl - is this even legal???????? This was seriously hot and oh. my. word. I think I have a case of the vapers......
Author's Response:
Michele,
Something that good...no way it's legal. But damn was it fun to write! LMAO!!! Do I want to know what 'vapers' are? ;)
Thanks so much for the rating and review!
Nickey
After her brother’s death Andria DeAngelo is leaving Lake Tahoe, California in search of a new start. The tragic death of Bella Cullen had torn the Cullens apart and left Edward in a constant state of depression. He only lives because of Renesmee. When Edward and Andria meet Edward must control his desire to kill her. Can Andria get away from the memory of her brother’s tragic accident? Will the Cullens be torn apart forever? Or can Andria save Edward and the Cullens and show them happiness and love again?
Lemons in later chapters!
Thanks to Frozen Soldier for the AWESOME banner!
Thanks again to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner!
made by Mehek18 for thetwilightawards.com! Thanks!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 218274 Read Count: 7840
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Dreams and Changes
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it!
Bella is Domme who is in search of the right sub. After several profiles are searched she interviews two. Go through the interview with her, and see how her test weekend with her potential new submissive works out. Is he the right one? BDSM themes, Hard core Lemons. AH, very adult themes if under the legal age to vote please move on to another story. The top banner was made by the fantastic and awesome: Christagbanners ... You can see her wonderful work by checking her out at christagbanners (dot) blogspot (dot) com. The Black and Red banner, below is my First place award for Fans Vote in the Dommella's Dungeon Contest. Thank you to all my loyal readers.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127084 Read Count: 48041
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
Loved it TAT - what a great chapter so much depth and emotion - are you sure you aren't a Domme???
Hugs and Kisses, Kasi,
Michele
Author's Response:
Michele~
Thank you, the last few chapters have been a huge struggle for me. The next chapter will post sometime early next week, unless all hell breaks loose between now and then. I am absolutely sure that I am not a Domme, however after all the stories I have read, I do know that I could never bottom either. So maybe it is in the thoughts...lol I am not sure I would make a good Domme, I like to laugh too much and I think I would laugh at the worse time. I am rather good at being a bitch, but you know that is a middle aged female thing...LOL My 13 yr old told me the other day that it was wrong for me to think Robert Pattinson was hot, and I informed her that I was not old enough to be his mother so we were good! She informed me that Taylor Lautner was hotter, and I pointed out that she has a sister older than Taylor and that was indeed wrong.....I got the HUGE eye roll. My 13 yr old is trying to get me to select sides, and where I think they are all hot I am stuck on Edward, I think I could spank him...HeeHeeHee. I really love your last update on People Like Us and you never stop amazing me with the LONG ass chapters, filled full of hot, steamy, and yet well thought out and written story line as well. You are one of my author heroes! Thanks for always being here for me and having a kind word to share with me. I heart you big time. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 13 Preview………………..
I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship.
We were kind of, weren’t we?
I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France.
I chose the 1960; because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: A Sub Search: Epilogue
Oh my word, Kasi,
Once again you brought me to tears with your story, I loved this chapter and this story. I am so looking forward to reading the other two stories. You are just flying ahead in leaps and bounds, Girl! Good for you and congratulations on your nominations. You really deserve them.
Take care and we will talk soon.
Love,
Michele (peoplelikeus)
Author's Response:
Michele~
Thank you for always, always having my back and being there for me. I am so grateful for your support of my story. Thank you so much. I am done with the subward for a while for sure, I have the stalker story onthe burner and that will post under the suthor name JessAndTAT, please check that out and let me know what you think.
Kasi~
xoxo
Hugs to you chicka!
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Search Is On
you are a mistress in waiting! this is a brilliant first chapter and I wish you every success with the story. I will be excited to read it. I don't normally read DOMELLA stories, mainly because I just can't get my head around it but this will be my exception to the rule.
Great job honey!
Love, Michele (plu)
Author's Response:
Gasp! Teary eyed...big smile.
wow. What an awesome review. Thank you so much Michele.
Thank you so much!
Kasi~ xoxoxo
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
oh my goodness, TAT, you. are. awesome.
xoxo (two thumbs up)
Author's Response:
Michele~
Thank you...I am like giddy at the response so far!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
sigh!!! best christmas present ever to get great reviews!
Kasi~
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: His Scene
Hey Kasi girl - you did great sweetheart. This was an incredible chapter. You have got a great story here and I look forward to the next chapter xoxo
Author's Response:
Michele~
Thank you sweetie I am grateful for hearing good things from you. Your writing on this subject makes me feel more confident and I just hope to continue to keep the strong Bella I am going for. The next couple of chapters are going to show her in a softer side a little, but I want her to be questioning herslef a bit and we are going to get some history on both her and Edward and why they both are 40 or older and still single. by the way you will have mail from me in a few because I have a question for you.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day
I loved this chapter kasi, I really enjoyed reading their back stories. Am excited to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much...the background coming out really needed to be done.....Thanks so very much for always reviewing and for reading my story! I am grateful for friends like you in the fan fic life!
Kasi~ xoxo
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
I loved this chapter - you are so good at being a Domme :)
Author's Response:
LOL Michele you crack me up...I would suck so badly in this lifestyle....I would be laughing to hard to beat anyones behind! AND I would sucker punch the first butthead that hit me...LOL I love your reviews you always make me smile. I will email you the teaser via the contact button the next chapter is so lemon filled the teaser is a partial lemon. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
xoxo
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
wow - sorry that it's taken me so long to read, but I'm really busy with writing, but I loved this chapter Kas. You are so good at this, I need some lessons!!!
Author's Response:
Michele~
I coudl take lessons from you and from several others. I am struggling with this much more then I struggled with My Sisters 3. I think I am workign it out, but I tend to worry the next chapter will post soon and I will send you the preview the way I always do via the contact button on here. Thank you for your support, as always it means everything to me to have it.
XOXOXO
Kasi~
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
wow - he loves her ....is that good or bad?
Author's Response:
I know right! LOL HEEHEEHEE. I am loving this so much right now....just wish I could loose the writers block! arghh.... you have mail....thanks for reading and reviewing like always.
Kasi~
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
okay, so I have to say that this was a great chapter! Im pissed as hell at Bella right now and I am hurting for Edward, but it was good!
Author's Response:
I am actually getting ready to post the next chapter here in a few minutes, so I am not sending the teaser to you for chapter 11, and as soon as I have the teaser ready for chapter 12 I will send it over.....have faith in the HEA.
Kasi~ xoxo
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
great chapter and as always the plot is awesome!
Author's Response:
Michele~
Thank you so much. I have posted 15 already, so no teaser there, however I am working on 16 and it will be HOT! I have the ending all done in my head and it will come to an end soon. Thanks as always for the story love. You are a great writer and a wonderful friend!
Kasi~
xoxoxo
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath
Hey Sweetheart - I loved this chapter and I'm excited to read the next one!
Author's Response:
Michele~
I am really glad you liked this chapter, the story is almost finished. The next chapter is goign to be a long one. Lot's of closure will take place. Thanks for always being a supporter of my story! Watch for the big PIMP out of People Like Us in my next chapter post! Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 18 preview…teaser
“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.
“I was just coming in to get Bella. Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”
“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.
“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess. Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.
“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek. “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.
“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed. See you both in the morning,” I say.
I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door. We walk hand and hand to the living room. Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure. He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest. Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.
Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59013
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight
awesome chapter - she is so brave!
Author's Response:
yes, she was. i am so proud of my bella:)
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence
wow - this is a great first chapter!
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Discarded Soul
hello mama!
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Common Thread
great chapter
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace
so rosalie knows - I wonder if she will tell
Author's Response:
eeek, i wanna spill so bad ... next chapter 12/12
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
awesome chaper
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
thank you so much for your posting - I loved the chapter and I hope that Renee meets her fate at the bottom of a cliff somewhere!
Author's Response:
ty for reviewing i agree renee is a very good personal at all.. karma works:)
While facing the height of tension in their marrage, Bella wonders if she will be able to make it through the holiday season with out her husband. Holiday o/s AU/AH
This beautiful banner was constructed by the AMAZING Evenstar! Thank you, sweeheart! Merry X-mas!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6291 Read Count: 704
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Long December (One Shot)
it was beautiful and touching
Author's Response:
I'm happy to hear that. I have been working on trying to evoke emotion in the readers and expanding on my writing skills. Your review gives me hope!
Happy Holidays!
When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm. Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
what a bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she devil! i hope she gets hers! and bella gets edward
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I LOVED IT!!! WHAT A GREAT CHRISTMAS STORY!!!
And I got the name thing :)
Happy New Year xoxo
After a long absence a submissive gets a summons from his Mistress.
My entry for the Dommella's Dungeon.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7956 Read Count: 1087
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Toy
you closet mistress you!!!! wow - damn girl you are so good
xoxo
"I think you liked me touching you in front of your ex, didn't you?" E & B are alone for New Year's ... or not. Written for the Squeeze My Lemon, Lemon writing exercise.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2754 Read Count: 2290
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
wow - that was hot and a great read. Refreshing and different! I really enjoyed reading this story. Happy Holidays
What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra? What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time? What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?
This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon. The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.
Can a new love save her? Can his voice pull her from the darkness?
This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding? If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).
The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService. Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74057
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- When It All Went Wrong
You know that I love you right? And you know that I am a huge B & E fan, but I trust you, so I will just say that this was a great first chapter and let's see where you take us!
Merry Christlmas
Author's Response:
Michele,
I am so glad you love me. ;) Right back at cha! I also love, love, LOVE a good B&E pairing, but I have been itching to write a C&B pairing (you know my secret love affair with Carlisle) and this idea finally came to me so I gotta go with it.
Thanks so much for the rating and review! MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!
Nickey
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- The Witches of Alaska
I was so getting ready to blast you again, but you redeemed yourself at the end there girl!
BRILLIANT CHAPTER
Now if we can just get B & C on the same page.... (hint, hint) a kiss, a touch..
I love you like crazyglue!
Michxoxo
Author's Response:
LMAO! I was wondering how you would take this chapter. ;) I'm glad you didn't feel the need to grab the torch and pitch fork again. And aren't we a little greedy looking for some smoochin' already? We don't even know what is going to happen with Kate yet (you forgot about her didn't you?). Actually, I know what is going to happen but I am not telling {doing evil dance}. But because I love you, I will give you a little something to knaw on...there will be at least one kiss in the next chapter. Hmmm, does that make it better or worse???
Till next time
Love ya lady,
Nickey
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Bad Things Come In Three's
oh my word - I am speechless... but not in a bad way, promise :)
Author's Response:
Yeah these first few chapters are not pretty, but I promise good things come to those who wait. ;)
Thanks for the rating and review!
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- A Race Against Time
going very dark here girl - but it's really good - this is my first e & c fic - if it is that, trusting you babe.
Author's Response:
I believe you meant to ask if it was a B & E fic (since E is ash), and yes it is. I have read a few and have to say in the right setting, I enjoy the pairing. I wanted to write this for a while, but I needed to find the right way to remove E & Es. I promise not to abuse your trust, but it is going to be a little while longer before we can see some light though the dark.
Thanks for the rating and review!
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Exodus
okay, no seriously! Nick you need to step in here - FIRST NO EDWARD, NO ESME AND NOW .... a shell of Bella??? Not fair, please send some ray of hope .... TRUSTING YOU....
Author's Response:
I promise you that a HEA is in the playbook for this story. Just have a little faith in me to get you there. Bella is a shell...on the outside. Keep in mind that this story follows the four months that Bella has spent alone and broken after Edward and the Cullen's left her. She was damaged even before learning of Edward's death and her own suicide attempt. The human mind can only take so much before it turns in on itself to cope with the pain. On the inside she is in a very happy place (with her Edward). Edward may not be real, but to her he is. He is there to help her heal.
The only ray of hope I can offer is a promise that it is always darkest before the dawn. And it is pretty damned dark roight now. ;)
Thanks for the rating and review.
Til next time
Nickey
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- And Then There Were Three
Okay my sweet friend - HOW MANY MORE CHAPTERS OF TEARS TO COME??? I just need to know how many boxes of tissues to buy next week. Seriously Nickey, this story has so many raw emotions right now, but it is good - great even and I can't get enough of it!!
Love, hugs and kisses,
Michele
Author's Response:
Ah Michele, I am so sorry for making you cry again. I forget to warn you all because it doesn't make me cry. I know, I am an unfeeling, cold-hearted beeotch. What can I say? As for your furture need for tissues, I would have to say that at least the next three chapters have tear dropping potential, but there could be more need even after that (just not as great of a need). Since I am writing as I am posting (a new thing for me since I normally pre-write far in advance of posting) I can't guarantee that even after Bella gets better that the angst won't sneak back in here or there.
Thanks for the love!
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Choices
Oh you are so wicked! Your snippy little comments did not go unnoticed by me Missy!!
"Almost makes me well up" - wicked!
Well you know what side I am on - HEA and lots of your special brand of loving, Darlin' - so bring it on - we are not the lilly livered saps that you think we are - we can withstand many chapters of angst and tears - these are fighting words!
Just saying...
I loved this chapter by the way.
Michele
xoxo
Author's Response:
Now, now, don't gete your panties in a twist. It wasn't just you who mentioned needing tissue alerts. Don't be so defensive. ;) And yes I am wicked...you should know that about me by now, silly girl.
Thanks for the rating and review! I always love to hear what you think.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Which Life To Choose?
Hello my sweetheart, remember when you read this that basically I love you, okay?
Now - WHAT ARE YOU THINKING?? We have just gotten over the loss of our two favourite bronze haired people and NOW you want to bring the DENALI'S into the mix??
Seriously, is this in any way fair? Tell me, does it really seem reasonable to you to make us read the shitstorm that those...those 'WOMEN' and I use lightly - are going to unsleash on our poor Bella? You are a sick and devious woman, Miss Nickey, you lore us in and give us a false sense of security and then BAM! YOU HIT US WHERE IT HURTS MOST!!!! Another term I could use is DIABOLICAL - yes, that's right, I went there!!!
P.S Give that wonderful husband of yours a kiss from your sisters here in the 'Twighlight Zone' and here's one for you MEWH!
Love you Chick, this was really good :)
Michele
Author's Response:
Oh Michele, what did you tell me a while ago...was it have a little faith? Believe it or not I never intended to add the witches into this story, but my pre-reader begged for a love triangle and since I refused to bring the mutt into this, Kate got the role. But I have to say as I am wrinting the next chapter that I am glad she convinced me because I love how it is turning out.
Now, go put on your big girl panties and hold tight. I promise I will bring Bella and Carlisle through this. Just have a little faith in me and them.
Thanks for the review and rating. You know I love to hear what you think!
Love ya
Nickey
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Songs of the Heart
Oh Darling, you are good!! That was wonderful!! NO TISSUES!!!! Okay, okay, there were a few moments when Edward knew that he would have to say good bye, but I didn't cry! Aren't you proud of me??? I thought that I was turning into a fucking basket case, because everytime I opened a new chapter, the waterworks would start!!
Okay, so I know that the GOODBYE is coming soon, just make it quick okay?? and then if you could throw in a dose of hope and a dash of maybe I don't know, cheerfulness - then that would be good too. Oh! Oh! Maybe you can put in a pinch of laughter or smiles or at least a sprinkling of the beginings of friendship between C & B - okay, I'll go now, but only coz I have to.
So, in case you didn't get it, I really loved this chapter, Nick!!
Love me
xoxo
Author's Response:
Michele,
Can I tell you I love your reviews? I am not sure I can promise that particular blend of emotions in the next chapter, but I will promise 'hope'. Everything else will be up for grabs (but the other emotions are coming in the next 2-3 chapters, I promise).
I'm glad you had a reprieve from the water works, but you may want to stock up on tissues for the next one (yep, it even made me well up).
Thanks for the fabtabulous review and rating!
Till next time
Nickey {mwah}
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions
Well, it's about bloody time that you cried!!! I've been gushing tears since chapter one chicky!!!
Honestly, I loved this chapter. It was bittersweet and tender and heartwarming. The promise of things to come...
Nice job, my friend,
Michele
xoxo
Author's Response:
Okay, listen missy...I have lost track of how many times PLU has brought me to tears. It is not as easy for me to cry for this story because I know the good times that are trying to beat their way out of my brain. But yes, Edward's goodbye was my undoing. As much as I am excited to start writing B&C, I love Edward and hate to see him go (even if it is for the good of the story).
Thanks for the rating and review!
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Picking Up The Pieces
Hey Sweetie Darling,
I loved this chapter and I am so glad that E & R are back. As for you and hubby, you take care of yourselves, okay. Give him a big kiss from us girls over here on tcws and you make sure that you get plenty of rest too.
I am excited to read the next instalment, whenever it's ready.
Tons of love,
Michele
Author's Response:
Michele,
Thanks for all the love sweetie!!! Being on here is like adopting a whole new family. Just one more reason to love Twilight. :)
I'm trying to bang out the next chapter before next week so maybe I can get it ready to go before hubby's surgery.
Love ya bunches,
Nickey
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- The Kiss That Kills
my fingers were speed dialling the Volturi as I was reading, I swear, Nic, you are making me older than my time!
For the record, I love you bunches!
xoxo
Author's Response:
You were going to sic the Volturi on my ass for a little extra angst?!? Seriously?!? Need I remind you of four friends being held at gunpoint by two psychopaths?!? Hmmm? I think those who live in glass houses should not call on the creeps from Italy, don't you?
And for the record...I love you right back. ;)
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart
Seriously, you finally have me routing for Carlilse and Bella and then you block us??? You need help, you naughty writer you! Thank Goodnes that there were no tears this time. So, is he going to turn her? is he? Is he? Is she gonna have his vamp baby? Huh? an Esward? (sic) Love you lots and stax, have a great weekend.
hugs and kisses,
Michele
Author's Response:
LMAO! Esward?!? Now who is the sick one? You are a very curious kitty aren't you? Well since you are such a fabulous friend I will answer one of your queries. No, there will be no hybrid baby making in my story. I thought SM went a little off the reservation with that one (though I do agree that it worked well with Jacob and the treaty in all).
Thanks for the review and rating. You stroke my ego just the way I like it.
Mwah
Nickey
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- To New Beginnings
You dirty girl you! Look at you getting me rilled up over Carlisle! Oh man, that was hot!
you write a great lip lock Babe!
love, hugs and mooches.
Michele
Author's Response:
Are you kidding me? Everyone should be hot over Carlisle! He is my second favorite Cullen man. ;)
And what are you doing reading when you should be writing your ass off right now?!? (See, two can play that game. Hi Pot, it's me Kettle.)
Big sloppy ones right back your way
Nickey
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Loving A Vampire 101
A review "virgin"??? OMG! I think that we have created a monster here fellow 'review hags'!!!
Okay, so just let me say, I loved this chapter and - yes there is an and - EVEN i got hot and horny reading the make out scene with C & B - and THAT, people is freaking amazing, seeing as I don't do B&C - but this story makes me impatient for them to just DO THE DEED!!!
So, is she going to change? Huh? Huh? come on, you can tell me - I won't tell, I promise (I do not work for Summit) - tell us!!
Okay, be like that then!
I love you anyway, Pumpkin!
Love,
Michele
Author's Response:
Michele,
I look forward to your reviews almost as much as updates to PLU. You always put a smile on my face, even when you are yelling at me. ;)
You keep saying you are not into C&B stories, but I believe you are truly a closet C&B fan. You just hate to admit it. Come on, it is ok. You are among friends. Just say, "Hi. My name is Michele and I am a Carlisle and Bella fan." See? Now doesn't that feel better?
And as for your question about Bella being changed...umm, well, sorry. Not gonna tell ya! Yep, I'm evil! I am thinking about having my name changed so 'Evil' will legally be my middle name. What do you think?
XOXO
Love
Nickey
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Yes
Okay, okay - I. loved. it. Happy now? Honestly sweetheart, you did really good!
And I will even check out your rec!
You know you love me!
xoxo
Author's Response:
Yes I do! And Yes I am! LMAO!
Thanks for the love!
Nickey
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder
Happy Birthday to Little Dude! And now Miss Thing, I need to tell you - wwwwwooooowwww! I need a shower, a fire and Dr C! That's all, not much. This was so good - well worth the wait.
With love and birthday wishes,
Michele
xoxo
Author's Response:
Michele,
I still have not figured out what is wrong with my pc. I am typing on my dino-laptop now, so I am pretty sure it is a security thing run a muck.
As always, thanks for the love and the rec!!!
Nickey
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- A Christmas Wish
Okay - don't let it go to your head! CONGRATULATIONS!!!!! I AM SO THRILLED FOR YOU - YOU DESERVE MORE THAN ANYONE I KNOW!!! Seriously, Nickey, congrats darling, this story is so deserving. Loved the chapter loved the loving - and the smexing! xoxo
Author's Response:
Damn it! My ego just grew too big to fit out my door and it is all your fault! I love all my reviewers, but coming from you means so much because your writing totally blows my hair back! Thank you so much!
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Sex, Lingerie and the City
Happy Birthday to youuuuuu - Happy birthday to yoooooouuuuu - Happy birthday Dear Pervieeeeeeee - Happy Birthday to yoooouuuuu!!!!!!
I hope that you have a day filled with love, laughter and lots of semxy time!!
You really are pushing the envelope, you know - Esme wasn't his mate and Edward wasn't hers??? You are lucky that I love you!
I loved this chapter by the way - My favorite lines in this one???
"How am I supposed to focus on my vows if I want to snack on the Pastor?"
yeah, that had me snorting into my coffee.
Love you stax and more, my friend.
Michele
Author's Response:
Michele,
What a beautiful typing voice you have. Thanks for the song!!!
Yeah, the mate thing kinda came out of left field, but I had to think of a reason why Carlisle feels so connected to her. He was able to leave Esme everyday to go to work, but has not been able to even consider that at this point with Bella. And like Jasper said, they have the capacity to love more than one person in their lifetime. And really...tell me one time in all of the books where you felt like Carlisle was REALLY bonded to Esme. Hmmm? As for Edward, he was always confused by his love mixed in with the blood lust. And since he had never been in love before, it would have been very easy for him to think Bella was his mate when she wasn't.
Thanks for the love lady. And in case you haven't voted for the Avant Garde Awards yet, here is the link.
Till next time
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Unwelcome Visitors
OH MY GOD!!! ARE YOU EVEN KIDDING ME???? seriously, you want love and kisses after THIS???????
Hah! Okay, so l thought that you wrote this beautifully, sweet friend - great job, but seriously, NO MORE HEARTACHE or i am coming after you!!!
Love, hugs and smooches,
Michele
Author's Response:
Now, don't get your panties in a twist (oops, forgot...you don't wear any)! LOL! I never asked for love and kisses. I asked for reviews and votes...completely different.
I swear, I think you read this some times just to see if I can catch you off guard. Well grab the wine and smokes lady...Chapter 22 is coming up soon! And as for heartache...no comment.
Thanks for all the love!!!
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans
Okay, okay - damn you write a great change chapter! It was amazing, I felt as if I was there! You did good girl and thanks for the pimp!
And I do wear panties - sometimes...
:)
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks for the rating and review! I'm glad you enjoyed the change drama. Just wait till Bella gets her vamp on! ;)
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition
I loved it! Okay, I will admit that when I read that she couldn't remember who they were, my fingers were actually twitching!!! I promise you, I was reading and in my head I was thinking, "okay, BI-ACH - ARE YOU EVEN KIDDING ME???? SHE HAS AMNESIA??????" - but I didn't say any of that, I forced myself to read on, and you my sweet friend didn't disapoint.
It was brilliant! You have hit a writing slump? Come on! Never!
- I need you to write the Emmett and Bella 'battle' - also, some bonding with Jazz would be great,
- maybe he can take her 'fishing' (do Vampires eat fish???) -
- hmmm, what about some hot dominant sex from Carlisle? I mean come on, the poor Vamp has been sweet, gentle and patient for almost two freaking years - I say - LET HIM JUST GET HIS ROCKS OFF for ONCE!!! (Yes, this is pervy me talking!) At least let him show her who's boss...in the bedroom - just once.... * whimpers* come on, you know you want to...
- Bella learning to do things at 'human' speed and strength again - should be fun - the first time she drives a car and crashes her foot through the floor boards - closing a window - hitting the table in anger and watching it splinter into pieces - maybe this can be a chapter of learning how they teach her to adjust?
- Are the Volturi coming at all?
- Bella learning to use her shield? and the other vamps coming - perhaps for the wedding?
Okay, I think that's about all I can think of off the top of my head, did I mention the sex? You write good sex, write some good sex, can you believe that I'm jonesing for some Carlisle and Bella sex scenes.....so sad...
Love, hugs and smooches,
Mitchie xoxoxo
Author's Response:
You are such a good friend!!! Thank you for all the ideas. If it wasn't for you, Chapter 24 would probably still be sitting and collecting dust in the back of my brain. And I am sorry I made your hand twitchie, but I guess you deserve it for all the times you have done the same to me with PLU. FYI, I have been reading but am still having issues with my reviews not showing unless I am on my dino-pc, so I am adding them all in today.
CH 24 should be up in a little while thanks to you woman!!!
Love ya!
Nickey
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One
I loved this chapter sweetheart - you nailed it! awesome job Darling xoxo
Author's Response:
Ahhh, thanks bunches babe! That means alot. ;)
Thanks for the R&R.
XOXO
Nickey
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Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223966
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
oh man - i would never have been able to be that strong!!!! I know that she needs time, but he didn't know and yes, he was an asshole, but he is sorry and he is trying so please don't make him suffer too long.
and of course we want it now, but not really - spread it out a little.
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
loved the chapter - hated the cliffy!!!!!!!!!!!
:)
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
wow - an epic chapter! I hope these two stay this happy, but with Carlisle waiting back home, who knows!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
WHAT??? Okay.... kinky Edward much!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
sorry no time - on to the next chapter - and he is LAZY and I can't wait for Bella to change that!!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
This was a great chapter! Hmmm Edward is stern but he seems really kind as her.
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
more spankings - geez, Daddy doesn't give many chances! another great chapter
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I loved this chapter - what is off about the guys? Why won't they talk to Bella??
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
oh man - that renee is a BITCH!!!!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
i'm sad that I'm all caught up!!!!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
great story and really good chapter
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I loved this chapter and I think that an a & j story would be great
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
oh dear she really puts her foot in it every time!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Waht a great chapter!!! I'm glad that Bella stood up for herself - even if it does get her a red ass!