Reviews by WB Crazy
Isabella by Velley Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary:

Isabella had to deal with her overbearing mother all her life. What happens when Isabella meets Renee's new mysterious boyfriend? Will he change everything? What will happen to her relationship with her mother?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61364 Read Count: 19809
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2012 Updated: 18 Apr 2013
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Her mom is a real bitch... I hat people who put others down to make themselves feel better and to hide their own insecurity. And what's with Edward? Was it his plan to get with Bella from the beginning or did that come later? Hell maybe not at all, I hope he's not trying to be all player and shit, have both mother and daughter. That just wrong

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

How Old id he again? It sounds like his parents think he's dating her and her mom is just coming along to dinner... Is he waiting for her to be done with high school before he goes after her? Also how can he just stand by and allow her to be treated so badly?

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yeah big mistake to leave with someone she doesn't know. He's really gonna hurt her and I wonder if he'll do it alone or will daddy help out

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

What the heck is he up to?

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Okay Now I'm going out of my mind trying to figure out what's up with Edward and his family... How come Bella doesn't see how cold he is when Rose say it at first glance?

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Why the heck is he so scared of Rosalie

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I think he's strange and he likes control and to her her in little ways... the chocking

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow.. didn't see that coming. How very bold of you to kill off such a big character. I'm seriously intrigued

Author's Response:

There is a reason for it. Trust me.

Thanks for reviewing!

The next chapter is coming very soon.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

No one is who they seem... This story has me all turned around with more questions then answers

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I know you just reviewed chapter 20 but it disappeared so I'll give you a preview of chapter 21 here.

 

Chapter 21 preview:

“It was an accident,” he whispered. “I didn’t mean to do it. I…I was just trying to make her see reason. I didn’t mean to push her.”

“What happened?”

“We were arguing and…I was just so angry. She was threatening to leave me.” 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward was 19.  Bella was 13.  They were next door neighbors.  Charlie was the chief of police.  Carlisle was a doctor at the local hospital. 

Edward’s little sister Alice was also 13 and Bella’s best friend. 

While home from college for the summer, Edward spent time with his little sister and her best friend so their parents could all go out for dinner.

Over the next several years, Edward and Bella became good friends, until the summer she turned 16 when she transformed before his eyes.

 

Banner for my story

AH, ExB, Mostly EPOV, sort of coming-of-age, hopefully a little poignant, with a splash of angst until Bella's at least seventeen.  Mature for language, eventual lemons and a very spunky Bella.

 

Banner made by yours truly!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77808 Read Count: 67190
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Level Head

What the hell happened? Ugh lol

Author's Response:

A lot of people have asked, and I really wish I could say.  I promise it's going to be revealed, along with a lot of the aftermath, but all in good time.

Thanks for reading.

 

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Ragweed & Dandelions

Is it gonna keep going this slow or are we gonna take take a leap in age to move things along

Author's Response:

Just because Bella's so young and Edward's not head over heels in love with her doesn't mean things are moving slow.  This is the story I planned, and it involves a slow burn so these two can heal and realize they're made for each other.  Sorry, chica, but no.  And I'm hitting highlights left and right to move things along.  I did say in the beginning that this would be a slow burn.  It's not for everyone.  I understand.  But when you wait for something good, it usually happens in a way you least expect it.

The work is always worth the reward, and I'm working on several chapters ahead right now.  I'm hoping to get a lot done soon, so stick it out, and you'll be glad you did.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I hope you'll keep reading to see these two come together.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: A Wish is a Dream

When does it get out of this pity party faze? He always sounds like a Debbie Downer. I know how his dad and Charlie are but he's grown and still letting them run things, no one says he even has to come home. Yeah it would hurt his mom but even she would have to understand... If she can't control her husband then she'll lose apart of her son. Better that then to have her son lose so many parts of himself

Author's Response:

Hopefully, it will end soon.  I'm working on upcoming chapters right now.  But the thing of it is Edward isn't going home for just his mom.  I think in the next few chapters, possibly more, we'll start to see him changing for the better.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167465
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

God to be 16 again... If I could turn back time

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87332
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Nothing wrong with a possessive guy... I myself love them

Author's Response:

Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree.  Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella.  Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella.  Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy?  There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry.  Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters.  Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow.  We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing.  Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”

“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.

“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.

“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.

“Am I hurting you?”

“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”

“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.

“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.

“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.

“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Gosh I love this story and I can't wait to see where you take thing.... Her mom is dead ass wrong with all the shit she's pulling. I can't believe that with how close they were that she's acting a straight fool now. Who's the kid in the relationship again? Poor Jim he seems so nice and he's being pulled all kinds of ways.

Author's Response:

Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree.  Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella.  Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella.  Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy?  There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry.  Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters.  Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow.  We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing.  Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”

“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.

“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.

“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.

“Am I hurting you?”

“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”

“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.

“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.

“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.

“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.

Conventioneers by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Innocent event coordinator Bella has her sanity challenged when the adult toy show comes to town. How will she cope with a world she's never seen and a man who's very comfortable in it?

 

conventioneers


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22548 Read Count: 30227
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Jul 2013
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Year Two; Day One

They're so cute together...... I don't think she should be alright with him messing with Rose anymore. I know he hasn't done it in a year and things should stay that way. I would be completely insecure in that situation, knowing she knows him sexually better then I do. Therefore knows what he likes while I'm still trying to figure things out

You Own Me by bee1982, too_cute_24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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You Own Me banner made by the talented Ellen. 

The continuation of Bee1982's  one shot 'One Wild Night'

written with toocute24. 

At the roll of the dice, Edward wins what he has been dreaming of for the last two years. A night with his mob boss's son's girlfriend, sexy pole dancer Isabella Swan. What will happen in one night full of passion and lust?

What dangers will follow after their one wild night


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22 Read Count: 241002
[Report This] Published: 30 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Apr 2013
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2013 Title: You Own Me

They are taking way too many chances....Edward doesn't seem to be using his head, he's being too careless

Summary:

Bella the teen mom. Edward the sexy olderman. How do they meet and can they have more? Lets stalk them and see...

Very little angst and as sweet as i can write!

 

thanks to christagbanners for the banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35295 Read Count: 95390
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was pretty decent of him, I hope he keeps being a good guy from now on

Visually Challenged by Velley Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyone in town views Bella as the perfect teenager. She never gets into trouble and always seems to do the right thing. What happens when she starts falling for the towns visually challenged recluse? How will her strict parents react?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51475 Read Count: 24098
[Report This] Published: 25 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2016
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I really want to know how he lost his sight and if it can be reversed some how. In todays world most anything can be done... So is there something that can be done and he doesn't want it for whatever reason or no? Also who is the she he mentioned in his story

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

I think that Phil isn't so alright with Bella staying there

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I want more no more retreats until this story is finished. He's so sweet when is he going to ask to touch her face so he can get a feel for what she looks like? Is he gonna do that cuz I think that would be the beginning of her really seeing she's falling for him

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! You have to wait and see. He just might do it.

 

Preview:

“You’re a beautiful person.”

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I think it's Em, Jasper wouldn't just show up. Either was it's cuz Edward misses her

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Charlie's probably mad at her mom cuz she most likely left him for another man and who would blame her...........He's a dick

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

I feel sorry for Bella her parents only care about themselves. They have no clue what's up with her

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Bella certainly has a lot to deal with

Summary: Past Featured Story

beyond

The job market is bad, and recent college grad Bella's dreams of being a teacher are crumbling away. Edward is a single father and doctor, struggling to raise his seven year old daughter by himself. Fate intervenes, changing them both forever. Drabble fic. Alternating POV's.

bts

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22851 Read Count: 161045
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2012 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

All he's so freaking cute.... I hope the mom (Jane) doesn't try to come back into the picture and mess things up

Summary: Past Featured Story

tglc

Perpetually down on her luck, things start to turn around for Bella in the strangest of places. Her new job. At a strip club. When a certain … 'Client' takes an interest in her. But how long will that luck last? Romance/Suspense/Humor. AH. BPOV.

 

Banner Mady By LOT 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87466 Read Count: 152464
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I love her I'm not about the B/S attitude it's great....To me Bella's not hard enough on Edward for some of the shit he pulls and I still say he and his fam are mafia or some shit. Things still don't seem all set on the table as they say. He's holding something back still

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Was Jake up to some sneaky shit and got caught by the girls....Did Alice take him out while Bella was in the bathroom? She's way too trusting

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yeah keep it to yourself for a little longer friend

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Alright how old is Edward and what's his relationship to Esme? Already figured out that Carlisle is blue eyes, is Edward their son?

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What is it that Bella went to school for and where is her family? She mentioned her mom sending her email but what about her dad and how come they don't check in with her or help financially?

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Okay how old is Edward I have to know?

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Calling the popo will probably only cause more problems. She needs to figure out why they don't like her man's family

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

If Edward's so worried about her, why doesn't he have a man at the club watching/looking out for her? That way if she doesn't feel well that person would be the one to drive her home or whatever

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717458
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I hate that he's about to get some booty from the hoes but we all have our moments. Hey does CJ want him some of Bella?

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I know he's single but it pissing me off to see him wasting time with a bunch of hoes. Also what's with Jasper's change of attitude? To me he talks shit but seems to be all consumed with the lifestyle/money and respect the mafia guys get. So is/was he just being a hater

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I absolutely hate that when a guy cheats the girl he's messing with is the one to get the ass beating... Why not check or get rid of your man? He's the one who's suppose to be committed/loyal to you not that girl. She's not your friend and she sees something she wants, it's your man job to back her ass down and reject the offer. If he can't do that then it's time to trade his ass out. It makes girls look stupid fighting for some guy that 1 they don't really want and 2 isn't worth the hassle. Have respect about yourself and carry yourself accordingly. That's how a girl gets respect in the street not out there fighting showing her as acting like a fool

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Why not just talk to Jasper about his feelings for Bella, you know what if and shit? I mean he allowed her to be with Jake also he talked to Edward about Alice with her being Bella's best friend wouldn't that be sorta the same thing....

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wait was Bella pure before him

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I do not think that Edward is gonna be able to walk away so easily

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

What the hell was that? Is Jasper being as ass to her cuz he don't want to go on his date with Alice or does he have other issues with Bella

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Why is she so unhappy? If he keeps with the yes/no bid she's going to really flip her shit....They better be careful depressed people can do the most unthinkable things at times. (Don't like life, why not end it?) I don't want her to secretly have these feelings but the way things are going and with no one ever taking her seriously, who knows

Raising Ashlynn by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ra1

 

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thanks to teamalltwilight and le crepuscule for the awesome banners!

 

Bella meets a man who in one night leaves her body humming for more. What should she do when the next time she sees him, he is dropping off his daughter, begging her to keep her. With an odd sense of obligation, a person who never saw herself as a parent—is now moving across country with a child who thinks Bella is her mother.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30699 Read Count: 31990
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Jan 2013
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Please don't tell me he wants a baby already... You knows cuz he missed out on so much

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So how much time has passed so far because Ashlynn seems to really be growing

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

It's probably his pride....He feels like he should be taking care of her not the other way around

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I bet he robbed those banks didn't he

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Raising Ashlynn

Yeah I don't think Edward is gonna like all the Sam attention, married or not. Also the fact the Ash called him dad along with her best friend.......

The Pull by Janiedoe12 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 313]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella left Edward and everything she knew in Forks ten years ago. She knew he would never leave the MC, but circumstances drew her far away to accomplish her dreams. When Bella returns under somewhat mysterious circumstances, Forks will never be the same. AH. Tattward/Bikerward. Think Twilight meets Sons of Anarchy.

 

**Rec'd on The Lemonade Stand- go check out more recs from the TLS ladies!!**

 

tpull


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91763 Read Count: 60928
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Dec 2015
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Still trying to figure out how what's going on with everybody all ties in together.......... I can't wait to see what Tanya thinks will get Edward's attention. Also I hope Esme's B/S catches up with her soon, I can't stand her ass

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Still someone needs to check Esme......

Summary: Past Featured Story

working title

Bella Swan is offered the job of a lifetime. The personal assistant to one Hollywood's biggest A-listers. When she begins to develop feelings for her boss Edward Cullen will she be able to handle all his personal requests or will his domineering behavior cause her to run from her chance at true love. Story will contain, language and themes of domestic discipline including spanking.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Stories I've read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71498 Read Count: 52759
[Report This] Published: 24 May 2013 Updated: 26 May 2013
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Best line so far (Yeah sorry buddy that doesn't actually make it feel all better. Why don't you kiss my ass?) I can't stop laughing at her inner monologue

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Seriously the damn girl is full of drama.....She really letting her age show

Summary:

 

Bella prepares to navigate through the entertainment industries perils as famous Edward Cullen's new girlfriend. Will she survive or will she be just another Hollywood tragedy? What happens when Edward reveals something that may cause Bella to rethink her relationship with the man she loves? Read Part One first. Warning for spanking and domestic discipline.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148461 Read Count: 50479
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2013 Updated: 27 May 2013
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Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Is Jake in love with her so he's trying to deal with that by keeping his distance and doing whatever to get his mind off missing her so much? Edward treats her too much like a child

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Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He was wrong on so many levels, don't get me started

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Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh great now they're gonna say she's doing Emmett. People are assholes sometimes

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Date: 29 May 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Is she going to tell him about the CD and the songs she helped write in it

Author's Response:

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Alright you have to stop dropping these little hints and not elaborating it's killing me............

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Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

She might as well just take her spanking now......She won't last 30 days

Summary:

Tile LGOR

 

Two different worlds collide, when Isabella Swan has to go undercover to investigate Jasper Whitlock. Can she keep up the lies or will her true identity be revealed? Are they both losing their grip on the reality? J/B AH


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Drama, Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40407 Read Count: 6800
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2013 Updated: 27 Mar 2016
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter three

Yeah he's acting way too nice, sweet, weak to pull off being apart of a crime family....Toughen him up please

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter two

Jasper is coming off a little soft to be a mob boss...I know she's not suppose to know this about him yet and all but normally mob people carry themselves in a certain way and exhume power. He just comes across as a normal every day nice guy

Summary:

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Bella is a twenty two year old mother of three and a widow. Her husband Emmett gunned down in a shootout with the DEA during an undercover raid. She vows to take her children away from the life, to let them grow up normal but then she meets the new Underboss Edward Cullen who falls for her and her children but refuses to play second to Emmet's ghost. Can she let go of her past?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30219 Read Count: 11772
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2013 Updated: 02 Jan 2018
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

I like Edward so far but it seemed like Emmett treat Bella like gold.......Will Edward be willing to do the same or will he want hoes on the side

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Date: 20 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk

I think Bella shouldn't get too ahead of her self.......Carlisle hasn't been in charge this long by being stupid. She's gonna get herself hurt, her kids in danger and Edward killed if she's not carful. It Might be better to just trust in Edward and let him handle things.

Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87105
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice

What's with the pills? I don't understand what's wrong with her also what was the bet? I'm kinds lost here

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Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: The Untainted

I can't wait to see how the meeting with Edward goes.... Did she borrow the money from people to pay for her schooling?

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Freed.

Okay so where is Bella I would think that he would want to see her.....

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Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bye bye Tanya.....

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Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

While all this is going on with him....What's up with Bella she was attacked

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The summer of 2005 was the summer that changed Bella Swan's life forever. Sent to Ohio by her mother to attend a school for debutante girls not quite up to par, she meets Edward Masen, an apprentice. But is that really all he is? A story about psychological abuse, redemption, and healing. AH {{REWRITE/Formerly titled The Perfect Partner Program}}

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93131 Read Count: 110637
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

This is the first story that has made me hate Esme and I've read a lot so kudos for you.... Please don't let her fall for his tricks anymore and if so please let her girls bring her back to earth again

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98332
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I like that he can joke around but still not let anything slide.....As in Jake lol. Now Alice I hate, she's a know it all busy body and I never liked her character so that fact that people don't seem to like her in this story is great

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

It's sweet that they are finally on the same page but don't let Edward get all soft please...I enjoy the asshole side of him

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Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Please tell me Aro's really on her side and this isn't some crazy set up?

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Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

He's such as ass.....I mean he doesn't stop until he's sure she's totally hurt.

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Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OMG is he ever gonna treat her better? The man is crazy...I know her family should mind their own business but his family would worry if the tables were turned also she can't control what they do so why is he taking that shit out on her?

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281096
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I freaking love Edward...He's an ass but in a good way

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please make it into a mini story I want more of this Edward and Bella.

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Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think Tanya's about to find out she has the power of shit when it comes to Edward...but will he allow her to mistreat Bella and turn a blind eye

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Please don't let her start dressing like them with Esme buying her clothes and all..... I like the way she dresses, comfortable. Jeans, shorts that kind of stuff when not going out

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Gotta love Em....Edward shouldn't have made her come and endure all that was Tanya and this James ass

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

(Banner by Mina)

 

A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142639
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

Oh she's not going to be able to handle the love scenes......What woman could

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Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six

This is an awesome story but this chapter was a little too Disney for me....Everything was so perfect with the song and everything, it was coming too close to cheesy

Author's Response:

Your response made me laugh. I had to show him pulling out all the stops before a bit of angstiness could take place. Hope you continue to read, but I can't promise to hold back on the cheese...it's a fluff story after all.

xx Dee

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine

Oops was all he had to say.....Oops well that was real sensitive of him.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I let that one slide. It's crazy to me how differently people pick up on little bits and pieces of the story. He got the permission, but didn't know what exactly they would be taping that day...he's not the director, just does what he's told, but he could have been a bit more understanding...especially after his jealousy of Jacob.

xx Dee

Unexpected things by sjdavis84 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 168]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The accident prone waitress runs in to a jerk. Little does she realize how her life will end up changing, hopefully for the better. The jerk she runs into isn’t so much of as a jerk as he is arrogant and dominant… But Bella doesn’t know that.

 

Thanks AstridGreenEyes for the Awesome banner!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49952 Read Count: 41537
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 23 Jun 2015
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Umm can she at least brush her teeth please............

Author's Response:

We will get to that! I have included it in the chapter I am working on now just for you! :D

Relentless by StillDreaming85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 576]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by OTB

Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185511
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2014 Updated: 16 Jul 2015
Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2014 Title: Relentless

Kate seems like she's a bit jealous

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Yes, Kate is jealous. I think I would be too. x x

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Umm did she tell him her last name?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Nope she never told him her last name ;o) x x

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Relentless

Yes but where is Aro?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Hmmm I wonder. lol x x

The Devil In Me by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

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Banner made by Fallingsnow Winter 

 

The devil is charming, sweet and manipulative and he always get's what he wants no matter the cost. A dark story of love. ON HOLD UNTIL AUG 2016.

 

And StillDreaming85

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English, French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58663 Read Count: 52217
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2014 Updated: 19 Apr 2015
Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Please tell me her plan blows up in her face? What a greedy bitch

Summary:

OOC. AH. Charlie was one of the few things that connected Edward and Bella. She loathed him while he worshipped the ground he walked on. It was this connection that would turn their lives upside down.

The Anthem of the Swan

Banner by Vivi En

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Rich & Notorious
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16898 Read Count: 4692
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Apr 2015
Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Life Unexpected

Isn't it kind of......I don't know nasty to ask your kids to marry each other?

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Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: The Poison

There should be a clause that if Alice or other family members cause trouble then they forfeit any and all money they inherit....Take that shit Alice

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 479009
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
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Date: 05 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Tony Stark because of his job with weapons. I think it's cute....

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Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yes please someone tell me what the hell is up with Jessica

Summary:

lwoc

Summary: After her parents are murdered, Bella and her brothers flee to the protection of their Godfather. When Bella discovers information that puts her life at risk, her only choice is to marry a man that she hates. Edward is a hard man, one that wants nothing to do with his reluctant bride. Can this pair ever learn to love each other...before their enemies destroy them? AH E/B


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25286 Read Count: 66598
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2017
Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good I like when Bella is smart not helpless. I hope this is the case in this story

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Who is Royce King's son?

Author's Response:

you are the only one to ask! Trust me you will find out....

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Edward is a winey little brat...Really what mafia underboss acts like he does? You're never suppose to show feeling he needs to work on that if he is to be in charge. Also I thought that mafia was big on family...therefore I'm sure kids are in the equation

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72893
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Does Carlisle ever stop being a monster

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Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Does he ever treat Bella better and do we ever find out why he hates women so much? Is the whole story just him being an ass and Bella dying at the end?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113980
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 5 (Part 1)

I am so loving this story. Could the chapters be longer?

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 2 (part 5)

Maybe the baby needs the milk directly from the tap....

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Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 4 (part 3)

This is what I'e been saying they try all along....I mean she is the wet nurse, isn't that what they do and then her milk could build up more and she could pump more. I don't know I didn't breast feed but it makes sense to me

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 5 (part 6)

Jasper is so dang sexy

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Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 5 (part 8)

When does Esme take care of her own children? It seems like she's always there

Author's Response:

It does, but this has actually been 3 days I think. She goes home soon. Her ex husband has custody of the girls. It's a long, sad complicated story.

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 13 part 2

Love the scenes here........Very sexy

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 17 Part 8

Okay I get he wanted to tell her but in a public place where your son is sick isn't the time........