Reviews by WB Crazy
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Cullen's have just moved to Forks, there first day of school is boring as many. Until Bella Swan a strange girl who seems to avoid the people at Forks high, she is what as known as a freak. But how could she know of what the Cullen's are?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38083 Read Count: 42574
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2010
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This story is all over the place it's hard to keep up. Who wants to kill Bella besides Royce and where is Blake? Why is she not telling everything to Edward? What the hell has gotten into Emmet?

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29923
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Alright so Edward is so awesome and  love his potty mouth. Seriously who the heck is Faith and what is wrong with Esme?

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I understand the situation but please don't let then try to take her baby from her? Please?



Author's Response:

{We will have a HEA, I promise you!}

Thank you so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the double chapter this week! Look for Chapter 9 to post sometime tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

This story is amazing. I love it already, I really hope that Bella puts a dedication page in the books for her son. That would be so cute



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up in just a few minutes, so keep an eye out!


I've been posting the story every Friday. On Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease. (Both links are on my profile here if you're interested)


Thanks again for giving my story a chance!


<3 Shel

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Awesome chapter but I have to ask where does Edward and his family think his son is? I mean for people who loved him so much, how could they not be looking for him



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease. 


Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out!  http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/


Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!


Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel

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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing. 
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"


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Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I think she's doing the right thing, it's just that Victoria has a secret she's trying to hide and her family is powerful. Who knows what she'll do to keep those secrets quiet



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I have a feeling that the shit is going to hit the fan. Edward is going to react much worse then Emmet did. He's going to be pissed at Bella and that's sad because all she's done is the right thing for that little boy. Jack should remain with her and there should be some type of visitation set up for the Cullen's. Or she should have to remain in the same city as them plus they get visitation but primary custody should remain with Bella. I can't wait to see what happens next as always you amaze me. I love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Before she agreed to stay she should have spoke with Jasper first. She needs to use her  head cuz it's not just her that could lose Jack and I think that Edward is up to something. What parent wouldn't be?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!


XoXo

Shel


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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.

"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."

"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."

"Duly noted, Alice."

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

i Feel so bad for Edward I know he was an ass to her but really what parent wouldn't act like that at first. I really hope they can work something out where everyone can be happy. I know there's still more drama to come  nothing good ever comes easy



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

It's nice that Edward continued to treat her nicely when they woke up. So Edward really being Esme's brother that's a sweet and sad story, didn't see that coming. I wonder will things change when Jasper gets there? Yes he's a friend but he is also her lawyer will Edward see that as an attack against him or not even worry about it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!

My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today! 

Hope you enjoy the teasers!

XoXo  Shel


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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.

Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father. 

"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward. 

Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded. 

"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."

 

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

I knew Jasper was gonna be pissed off and I bet Edward thinks that's her boyfriend. No matter what it was a bad move on her part to decide to stay with them before speaking with Jasper.



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified! 

Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!

XoXo

Shel


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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.

"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.

He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."

Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.

"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."    

 

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: a life

I think you picked the perfect baby, she is beautiful. Also I hope she shot him but not killing him. Edward Would surly kill her then

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: abandon and sacrifice

Um how many kids does she have now and is she pregnant again? That was so messed up of Alice

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Damn she has madd kids but they are all beautiful. I want to see them all together again now that they are older. It seems like most of them look like her. Hey what happened to Jasper's son that she had? Was Joseph the one that belonged to Jasper?



Author's Response:

yes it was.

thnx for the review

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

All her kids are cute. I thought he wouldn't want her anymore if she couldn't have kids. That seems to be all he wants from her. So he still wants her even without anymore kids or is he gonna get someone else who can have children while still trying to hold on to Bella?

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238938
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think as a side effect to the new pills Bella will start to change little by little because of Edward marking her will his venom. The thing is I bet she is different from others and will be the only one to have this side effect. The government till find out and want her, to run test or whatever. I can't wait to see of I'm right



Author's Response:

I like the way you think. Bella's side effects will come slowly. And the marking venom will play a role =) And you'll just have to wait for the rest and see what happens next. lol

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hell yeah there's a lot going on. So my first question is the way she described Vitoria chocking her she should have had pretty nasty hand print marks around her neck yet it wasn't mentioned at all. Is this because they cuts were more serious and they only thought to deal with that? Also when she was passed out why didn't they lick her face to seal the cuts thus leaving her face scar free? Also Edward's peen seems to me mad large is this going to be a problem? I mean the girl's not a porn star lol. Sorry couldn't help myself had to put that in there. Love that Peter and Char are in this and apparently the good guys. Mike doesn't seem so bad just kind of creepy as hell and somebody give me a match because that mom in the store was a real bitch. Hey Edward and Bella being bonded he can't tell when somethings not right with her? Like some ind of stress call or something? They seem so in one with each other every other way, just seems strange that they wouldn't be in that way as well. Please tell me that after everything that's going on that they decide to keep Angela away next weekend and skip the party as well? By the way if the girls that were killed were also raped shouldn't they have that Vamps scent all over them thus making it easy for Charlie and his crew to hunt them down? From what Ben said in math class the sent should be pretty strong for the males to pick up. They all live in town together and it seems everybody knows everybody shouldn't they know their scents as well? Furthermore where the hell is Edward? He's stuck to her hip all the damn time, so what was he doing that he wasn't at her house or demanding she be at his?



Author's Response:

LOL. Yeah, told ya. Lots of stuff goin' on.

Anyways, for your q's. Yes, you are absolutely right about bruising on Bella's neck. I didn't focus on that in this chapter because the cuts which are on her face were more serious. But you'll see in the next chapter when Edward reacts to her cuts, he'll go crazy about the bruises too, he'll be angry aout every little scratch on Bella. A little of darkward in the next chapter because of Victoria, but not much. He'll want to hunt her down immediately.

 Okay now for the face licking question. lol. Charlie and Renee didn't lick at the cuts because you'll find out that when a male is bonded, like Edward is to Bella, usually the male takes her of his female. But the cuts won't be a problem, once Edward licks them since they are new, they'll go away, leaving her face without any scars.

Now as for your Edward peen question....LOLOLOL....love it btw. Yeah, it shouldn't be a big problem, but as you know , these vamps are huge....so that means everything on them is much bigger, including peens.LOL It'll be interesting when I write the sex scene ;) I think the first time they 'do it' it may be a little challenge.

Aww glad you like Peter and Char. They will definitely be around a lot more. Yeah, Mike isn't too bad. But yes, waaaaaayyyy creepy. He's definitely infatuated with Bella, but I hope for his sake that he'll back off more. LOL yeah that mom in the store was a real bitch. And yes, Edward will be able to feel Bella's stress soon. The reason why he didn't feel hers right now was because she's human and the bond although strong between them, is still different if she were a vampire. It will take him longer to sense that something is wrong with Bella, the more he'll mark her, the better.

What fun would that be to keep Angela away, don't you like the conflict? LOL Nah, don't worry about Angela....yet. She'll be fine because she'll be surrounded by a bunch of good vamps, and Charlie and Edward will make sure that the girls are not left alone at any time. As for the party, they'll still end up going. And Edward won't let Bella out of his sight, he'll be way more protetcive of her now since the Victoria incident and the killings. But I think the party will be a more positive experience for Bella than negative. But you are absolutely right, there's a psycho vamp out there that is killing human females that look like Bella. So all the vamps who care for Bella will be very alert.

Now for the scent question. When the human girls were sexaully assualted, the male vamp didn't leave his semen behind and his body scent was washed away by the rain. Also there are no fingerprints. I will try to cover all of this in the next chapter.And yes, the vamps do know their each other's scents, but some vamps won't care that Bella belongs to edward. They still see her as a blood bag. All I can say is that i hope that they will give Bella the respect she deserves soon because Edward won't tolerate Bella being disrespected. And some vamps that do respect Bella is because she belongs with Edward, and Edward is freared. Now the bad vamp will be eventually caught because he'll be careless and leave his scent behind. Someone will recognize the scent and know it was that vamp who commited those crimes.

LOL Yeah, Edward's usu. stuck to Bella's hip but he doesn't want to be too overbearing for her either with his protectiveness. He does want to give her some space, but that won't happen now bc of the Victoria incident. He's going to be quite protective of Bella.

I hope that I answered all your questions. Love 'em btw.

Thanks for reading, the comments and the q's =)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This chapter was awesome, no surprise there. I really like how all the chapters are so long. There's so much going on and the way you write I feel like I'm watching a movie. I can't wait to see what happens next. With Bella having trouble at school and all I would think that they wouldn't allow her to go anywhere on her own. I mean yeah she goes to school and all but out in the community with her being the only human and having it all so new it just makes sense that she have someone to protect her if need be. No I don't think this is the Cullen's job but Charlie and Renee should be thinking this way. Hey are they going to get her a car soon? I think it's safe to say she's not going to be running away. Please don't give her that nasty truck? Especially with them driving and Escalade. Also I'm surprised there's no rules about marking a human. Before it was said that Vamps give birth and it's safe to say that they will be getting it on. Being that they kill Hybrids, why would they not make some kind of law against that? Speaking of, does human birth control even work on Vampire spunk? K I know I'm talking your ear off but it's your fault for writing such a kick ass story



Author's Response:

 Thank you so much =)

I agree, Bella shouldn't be venturing off by herself without protection but she'll persuade Renee by going by herself bc the little grocery shop is really close by. And this would create conflict. I think Bella feels brave bc she's Edward's mate. But she's kinda nutz in a way bc any male vamp could take Bella away and claim her as his own or any vamp in general could harm or feed from her. Very dangerous situation. Charlie and Edward won't know about Bella doing an errand alone....until it's revealed. They won't be happy at all.

Yeah, I say ney to the truck too. lol I want something kinda ...sexy for her to drive.

Yeah, there's no rules about marking a human bc it's very rare. So far Bella is the only human with a vamp mate. Vamps didn't think it was possibly for a vampire to have a bond with a human- a mate bond. Oh there's a law for creating hybrids and it's punishable by death bc some vamps have mated b4 with humans and have created hybrids. Aro doesn't like that one bit. lol

Great question about the human birth control. No it will not work on Bella. You see a vamp's semen is way more potent compared to a human's. The vampire pregnancy rate is a lot higher, She'll need to take bc pills created for female vampires. Carlisle will have to help in tht department. lol

No don't worry, I love questions. Ask any you like. It really gets me thinking.

Thanks for your awesome comment and questions. I hope I answered them for you and of course, thanks for reading =)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

As long as Angela doesn't take Bella's spotlight. Though it'll be strange when Angela is discovered to be Ben's Mate. Shouldn't take long after that for Aro to get to Forks especially with the connection Angela and Bella have. Now I have to ask the guardsmen said that Bella was beautiful. I know it was stated to be unusual for vamps to be attracted to humans for anything other then blood and playing with them sexually. So is Bella suppose to be considered extremely beautiful by the vamps? If that's that case I'm thinking that when Aro comes he might just want her for himself and not as a play thing. That would be crazy sick.



Author's Response:

Oh no, Ang won't take Bella's spotlight. She'll be important but E&B is my main focus.

Yeah, Aro will definitely be intrigued about Bella and Angela having vamps as mates. To answer your question about vamps being atrracted to Bella because she's beautiful. And it's yes. Bella is very irresistible to most male vamps. There will be some that only desire her blood or as a sexual play thing....or a very few others may not find her interesting at all. Bella is more desired by vamps than humans because it does have a lot to do with blood appeal. Her smell is very addictive and unique to vamps.  It adds to her "irresistibleness" lol  There will be members of Aro's elite guard that will want Bella. And Aro may too. Aro would actually break his own rule about hybrids being created. He def would turn Bella if he desires her to be his mate, even though they are not true mates. Could you imagine Aro turning Bella? That would be one way she could be with Edward, although Edward would have to take Aro down after. And then there's sick and twisted Caius. He may be even worse than Aro. But yes, it would be crazy sick. =) But it would be very fun to write. lol

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Didn't meet Riley at school. I was wondering if he's gonna be playing the same role like the books/movie or if he will also have a lil crush on our Bella.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Riley,Bree and their parents just moved to Forks from Seattle. Riley will have a little crush on Bella. Bella has quite an affect on males...but it's because she possesses something.

Thank you for reading and comments.

~Jells

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Aro must know about Edward and he's trying to see what he can do to bring Edward to work for him. According to the legend Edward is suppose to take him out one day so maybe he's trying to  handle Edward before he gets handled. Since they believe in all that legend stuff. What's with all the vamp/human talk now? I really don't like it can we get back to the cute pet names again? Oh and how is Angela/Ben



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Aro definitely wants Edward close. It's kinda like that old saying "keep your friends close and your enemies closer." But you'll see what happened with Aro for now next chapter.

LOL. The vamp/human thing is something that just kinda happened, but he still calls her kitten. Depends on the charcaters, ya know? Anything goes. lol

Ang and Ben are coming up in ch 17. IDK if I can squeeze them in ch 16, the chapter is already finished.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I bet you it's those pills they have her taking that Carlisle didn't want her taking. Edward isn't going to be happy cuz she's going to be close to death. Leaving him with no other option but to change her or lose her. Aro will see this as a betrayal especially cuz of what just happened with his son. Yep the shit is about to go down. Oh and madd props to Bella cuz if a cock that size was coming at my whooha I would close up shop. Sorry anything over 9in is just too much for me I do like to walk lol



Author's Response:

Hiya waves*

Love your thoughts. You'll see soon what's going on with Bella. I love mindfuckery ;)

LMAO yeah, Edward's umm...peen is quite large...but so are all the male vamps in this story *giggles* Oh speaking of peens, Tygs and I found this article on this guy...I think he's Columbian or something, can't remy, but anyways, I kid you not, his schlong was looong. All the way down to his knees. At first we thought it was fake, but it's real. The pic was old. Poor guy, there's no way in hell he'll be able to get that up. =/

Anyhoo,

thanks for reading and your thoughts

XxOo

Jells

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105150
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!

I think that Leah and Jake did the training. Also at the end when he says oh no I think he discovers that he friends and trainers are the wolves. Something he's not going to like nor will he tolerate he to go there any longer. To bad I think that's the one thing she will disobey him about. She won't give up her friends/family on the res. Then come the trouble. Please tell me I'm right?



Author's Response:

I cant say too much but i can tell you the dreams will all be working up to figuring out the mystery of what changed in Bella's life and sent her on a differant path than the books. Some of you ideas are correct but i can't tell you which ones, Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up

When is he going to figure out Jake's a wolf and why was he not jealous or pissed or something about the phone call?

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's

 

How's he gonna explain his behavior to her and his reasoning for him not wanting her there? What will Jake do when she doesn't come around? Also jealous Edward is hot as hell, I hope he comes out again soon

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

i can not take emmette  what an ass please tell me jasper comes into play soon



Author's Response:

Jasper will play a big part in the next half of the story.  ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

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Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Armpits & Coffee Stains

What the hells going on with Bella? She seems to be scared of people not just nervous. Also did she say she has emotional problems or was I seeing into shit? Also why was he looking at her like that? Scary much?



Author's Response:

Everything is revealed little by little.  Thanks for reading!

Summary:

A Bella/Edward Story

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Bella loves Edward, much more than she should. Edward is an addict. Bella deals with it. Years of this cycle begin to take its toll, and Bella is fed up. A near fatal accident forces Edward into a coma, and Bella reexamines her previous decision. Will Bella stay, or is it all too much? OOC/AH

The story is based on events that happened to me in real life. I've just changed the situation some and adapted it to fit Stephanie Meyer's Characters.

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Warning:

This story is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. Some themes include underage drug abuse, adult drug abuse, violence while under the influence, poor judgment while intoxicated, graphic medical scenarios, graphic sexual situations that are consensual, explicit language, and extreme angst. Be advised, this work of fiction is not suitable for everyone. If you are under 18 or find these situations upsetting or uncomfortable, please move on. Otherwise, I urge you to read with caution.   

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148282 Read Count: 31054
[Report This] Published: 29 Oct 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Soma

Alice is a real bitch, sitting there trying to give attitude. All this shit is half her fault. Who the hell drives down the street with their fucked up brother on her car? Jasper on the other hand has surprised me. Edward is his best friend and he knows what Bella means to Edward yet he hasn't even attempted to say a word to her. What the hell is up with that? Show comfort to Alice instead of who it is due to. I saw Alice as an opportunist but not Jasper, I guess I was way wrong. Esme is the only one who seems to keep her on the up with all the info. I hope that continues cuz Carlisle doesn't seem like he really cares much about his son at all



Author's Response:

I will say this about Alice--she doesn't think about how her actions will affect others. It's part of her selfish nature. As for Jasper and the rest of the family? Well, they have major issues that will come out later. You're right, though. At the moment, Esme is the only sane one in Edward's family.  

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When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268927
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yeah shit is about to hit the fan because no matter what the situation I don't think Carlisle and Esme are going to just hand their child over. Also I'm pretty sure that child doesn't want to be handed over. She loves her family, I'm sure at some point she might want to get to know her biological family but she'll want to stay where she's at and she should. That's all she's known and at 17 why uproot her now?



Author's Response:

Exactly:)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow you made me cry with that shit lol. Anyway, that was some messed up shit how things were handled. They did have to treat that family lie criminals. Hell they ever treated Bella like a damn criminal and she's the one that was supposedly kidnapped or whatever. That's some B/S. I  hope the swans know that this gets them no brownie points with their daughter. Also just because I have some photos and some off the wall story doesn't prove shit. The cops shouldn't have treated one family like shit cuz they've know the other one longer. That messed up, the whole situation yes but most importantly how the shit was handled. They shouldn't have been able to talk to the kids without the parents there and if they were Tanya should have been called first. Also because of the matter at hand they should have been given some info beforehand so that a lawyer could be called if wanted. Cant wait to see what happens next also I really like how often you update. Please keep it up



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Rose sounds a little insensitive, I mean they just had a lot of shit happen and she thinks she's owed the explanation? Nice, Edward handled things good I think by not trying to defend Garrett and his family even though that's his friend. I'm still wondering why they haven't called a lawyer yet? I mean yes Tanya works for social services or whatever but she isn't a lawyer. I think they are going to need more then Tanya right about now. Also she handled the case but she doesn't work in the state of Washington, so how much can she really do? Unless she moved there too and it wasn't mentioned yet. Anyhow I'm wondering how school's going to go come Monday morning. Did the Swan's ever stop to think how what they're doing is affecting Bella? They had to know this was going to be hard on her. Charlie had to know he's her teacher. He could see everyday how much of a happy child she was.



Author's Response:

Like I said, things are getting messy.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I know that the Swans are hurting too but when you have a child you put that child first. You put your wants and needs after your child's. I don't feel that the Swans did that. Yes it's as sad story and yes I know they love her but did they ever stop to think about her? The child they claim to love so much. What their actions would do to her life? And what if they were wrong in their accusations? They would have ruined a family's good name not to mention all the emotional shit they caused by the carelessness. So hurt or not, love or not. You think about what that child needs and not just about what you want. That's the difference between the adults and children. They're supposed to think about the long term affects and the consequences.



Author's Response:

Very well said!!

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I think that since the teachers know what's going on they should have looked out for all kids involved better then what they seem to be doing. They are in school to learn not talk shit about stuff they know nothing about. Problem is most the times it's that adults talking more shit then the kids. Kate was wrong for what she said. No, she didn't say it to hurt Bella but there's a time and place. Her jumping right in when things are still fresh trying to plead her man's case was just tacky as hell.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

There's so much info in this chapter I don't even know where to begin. I just think that people should just back off and let her deal with the new info she just received. She's got so much coming at her right now of course she's going to break after a while, hell anyone would



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow I didn't see that coming, I thought it was going to be his mom or something like that. Now I can see why he feels for Ben. Poor Bella is so twisted around right now. If they don't get her into counseling soon and I'm surprised they haven't done it already. She's going to seriously break. How is she suppose to know what's right anymore? Everyone has an opinion but it seems like no ones really listening to her. They all want her to feel this and that but have they stopped to think about how they would feel in her position? Yes many are hurting but no one is hurting like her. Esme and Carlisle should stop and realize that them saying she should be civil and except them and stating that she has other siblings is a big slap in the face. I mean did they stop to think that she would feel like they were throwing her of on the Swan's now. Like they are excepting they are not her parents and not seeing themselves as that any longer. Yes obviously that's not how it is but to a 17 year old child with with years of abandonment issues that probably how they are coming off. Also I really think that people are expecting too much too fast. She didn't even had a chance to process before people started coming in telling her how she should feel and what she should do.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Innocence by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When you find yourself needing who you know you shouldn't want, do you turn away from him or embrace him? Now being continued. AH & NC-17

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117172 Read Count: 89192
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2010 Updated: 28 Nov 2014
Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Girl needs to talk to someone before she goes crazy....Besides I think Mr. Carlisle is having his cake and eating it too as in he's a liar and a piece of shit

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I get there's a lot more to this story but could we please move it along because I'm so sick of her feeling sorry for herself. I mean the girl is in college....it's not that hard. She's making shit harder then it has to be

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yeah she should have saw that one coming. She basically had to make him stay. Any time someone doesn't do something of their own will it doesn't usuallyy last

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Please tell me she gets some sense soon and stops letting him call all the shots

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I guess at least she has someone but really....All he has to do is plow her with sweet words and she does whatever he wants. Stay with him or don't either way she needs to get herself a backbone. Sorry but I don't like weak females and that seems to be what she is

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh the drama is just beginning....Esme won't make anything easy

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh he's so not telling the truth, he just doesn't want to lose her. She has school and she'll never know if she flies back to take care of business or not. Happy to see she's making some rules this time

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm sick of all her crying does she ever toughen up a little

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I think she's acting like a little bratty bitch and she needs to stop. She makes the fucked up decision to be with Carlisle and suddenly it everyone's fault? She decides to keep seeing him and that's her dad's fault? She needs serious help and clearly she's not ready for any kind of relationship, she's way too young acting and I'm so sick of her freaking crying act

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129742
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Taken

So they can't mate with a human? Well then Edward is in trouble. They were so close that's crazy. I've noticed that Vamps seem to have a pull to her. Like they can't bring themselves to hurt her even if that's what they set off to do. Is this part of a power she has? It's like they all want to love and or protect her. I can't wait to see how her life with Peter and Char goes. Bella is use to the finer things in life and is very spoiled, will she get that same treatment?  Will Phil and Elise stop at nothing to get their daughter back?



Author's Response:

The laws are a little more strict here. Vamps can't take humans as mates. Now let's say a vampire buys a human servant- he or she could do with him or her as they please. Such as feed from their slave, have sex...and so on. <--- kinda twisted, lol Yup, Edward is in trouble. LOL Yes, that's exactly right. Vamps do have a pull to her =) It's a power she has, but she has no idea. If she were turned into a hybrid, she could turn the power off and on, and it would be so much more stronger too as a hybrid. Bella was definitely spoiled, and has never seen the true nature of vamps until now. Things will change for her, she won't be spoiled anymore. Phil and Elise will be devastated, they'll search for her. But it will be very difficult to track Char and Peter down since their scents are masked, and they are escaping using a SUV. The scent trail ends when they enter the car.

Thank you for reading and your comments/ questions. =)

~Jells

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

So is this man Jasper or Caius? I have to say I love Living Amongst The Vampires, it's one of my favorite stories. But like you'll I can appreciate a good dark story. Usually I like my dark main character to be Jasper because of his background but Edward works for me too. Can't wait to see where this goes



Author's Response:

Thank you!

You'll find out more soon. I'm working on chapter 2.

I haven't read to many darkspers. Hmmm maybe I need to check those out.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Hate

It's good so far but it's killing me not knowing who's who. Was it Carlisle and Esme that took her to Arizona or Em and Rose? Also please tell me they are not going to be leaking that green and red shit out all over the place? I just picture them needing bibs and always having nasty ass stains on their clothes. lol



Author's Response:

It's definitely not any of the Cullen's. 

*gasp* Green and red shit??? And bibs and stains? Are we talking babies here? lol The vamps will still in this story secrete venom when fighting or when they feel threatened, that's just how it is. They will resemble the LAV vamps, yet they will be more vicious since this will be much darker.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A New Beginning

I'm happy I got the background story but I really want you to fast forward too. This Mimi seems really jealous, I hope she doesn't take it out on Bella and be mean to her. Also that was cool how Edward could sense her inside his mother but there has to be something special about Bella cuz all vamps that came in contact with her seem to automatically love her. I hope this has something to do with a kick ass power later. I hate when people just use the should thing. There was such a big deal about her in the books and I think that if she was that wanted and all that then there should have been more to her that just a shield. Most vamps only had one power, she should of had many to set her above the rest. Thus making her the most important human out there



Author's Response:

Thanks! lol Yeah, the fast forwarding will be coming up next chapter, although there will be one more scene where Edward is still a baby. But this scene is very important, it will...I guess...explain why he'll be darkward...or kinda hint to it. You'll see about Mimi. But no, she won't be mean to Bella. You could say she'll be like a nanny or grandma to her. Thank you, glad you liked how Edward could sense Bella. Oh and yes, Bella is definitely special. The vamps can sense that =) And it does have something to do with...powers. =) Yes, I would have loved for Bella to have more than one power in BD, I agree.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

~Jells

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The set-up

Wow that was the shit. I can't wait to see what happens next. Jasper is gonna be fucking strong I just know it, both the boys are. Now my question is which on or the boys had such an affect on Bella? If could have been either, they were both in there so who's to say



Author's Response:

Thank you! =) Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Good point. It was Edward who had the affect on Bella because they are the true mates.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull

This chapter kicks ass, I love Jasper but Edward kicks ass. I'm so happy that Edward has all these gifts. It would suck to make him so special and powerful if all he could do was read minds. Please tell me he continues to be the strongest? I want Jasper to get stronger but I think no one should be above Edward ever. I hope they can get him under control because he's bouts to rip Bella's vajaja right up. I wouldn't want to be her right now. Please tell me that Carlisle isn't Mr. Pussy Nice Guy in this story too. He always seems so weak. Being that he runs shit in Forks and Caius is his brother he should have at least a lil evil running through his blood



Author's Response:

I love your thinking! Well Edward is the strongest, but technically he isn't the ultimate vampire yet, he has a little ways to go. Jasper will change and for the fucking worse. but i can't go into detail but know, he does a whole  360 when bells comes into the picture. lmao! Carlise is just a darl as caius with a little bit of compassion but not much not much at all. He like Edward was brought up a certain way, and one human *bella* will not change carlise, but you'll see...

Thank you for reading and reviewing

~*TYggy~*

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit

I feel so bad for Bella, I mean the girl can't catch a break. Even the soft/nice one Jasper was a dick around her and I have a feeling it'a gonna get worse. Carlisle is the shit, I love the way he's not all soft and shit. Was the blond vamp at the gas station James? Edward's such a dick, I hope he gets a lil better but not much. I like him all bad ass like he is. Also when you bring Alice into the story please don't make her part all big and important. I really can't stand her know it all ass, she gets on my nerves. I thought Bella was suppose to have something special about her that drew vamps in yet made them want to protect and not harm her. I guess I was wrong about that shit. Also why didn't Jasper and Esme follow Edward when he went after Bella and attacked her? I mean hell they we madd close and nobody heard shit? School starts next week so there should have been peps everywhere. Yet nobody heard shit, nobody came to investigate a strange sound or something. Shit humans were up in that school too and our asses are nosy by nature so they should have went to see what the hell was up with all that noise that was being made. Or do human teenage girls normally leave school naked, crying and bleeding? Cuz he did rip all her clothes if I'm remembering correctly. At this point I'd be surprised if Bella didn't say fuck it and try to taker herself out just to end all the pain and bullshit. Oh don't even get me started on Char. If someone reminds you of your daughter that you love so much, why the fuck would you treat them no better then a nasty ass cat? Sorry I'm a dog person, I can't stand a sneaky ass cat. lol Moving on, Bella better be one bad ass bitch. I want her to be hella strong and powerful as a human and unstoppable as a vamp or half breed or whatever. I mean like Sarah Conner or Resident Evil kick ass. I hate how they made a big deal about her in the book when all she was was a shield that didn't even stop physical attacks. That's some bogus shit I mean at least let her be the only character with multi power?



Author's Response:

Nah, Bella wasn't naked. I would've said it if she was. LOL if she was, Jasper probably would've eye fucked her, hell maybe he would've even approached her and fucked her. Maybe....u never know with Jasper and what he has planned. lol She wore her gym clothes home, and since it was the end of school day, everything was pretty much deserted except the admin office, they ususally stay open a lil while longer before school closes. But yeah, had it been crowed with students, Edward and Bella would've put on a show ;) in front of everyone lmao Jasper and Esme didn't follow too soon after because Edward is extremely dangerous, as all male vamps, in their primal forms are, esp him. He's one mean scary mofo. Could've been extremely deadly for either if they happened to make a wrong move. Yeah, poor Bella. She' s got it quite tough.  Bella does draw vamps in, but it doesn't always mean they want to protect her. That would've been awesome if Bella had cool multi powers in BD. It was sad when I found out she only had the shield power. =( Oh well...lol

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

~Jells

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59013
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight

I'm happy that she finally told the right people what happened that night. James is an ass and I hope Jake doesn't have to pay for taking up for a friend. James is an asshole so I think that he's not going to sign his rights away just to be a dick. He'll fight for custody or something like that. Anything to get a rise out of Bella. I think it's just fine if she wants to keep the plan and give up the baby but I just want to know is that really what she wants or is she doing what her parents want?



Author's Response:

very good questions.. its  shows that your a passionate reader. i will keep this review in mind for later chapters.. it helps to know what a reader is thinking and  what they are curious about

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect

I like that fact that she's not tripping all over Edward and his looks. Thanks for making her real not a love sick teenager



Author's Response:

This bella has way to many problems to all of a sudden fall all overt the handome doc.. i dont think its realistic for my bellas to be like that. I want a strong woman who has goals and no matter what life gives her she will always seek success in the long run

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace

If Jake was really a friend and cared about what was best for her he would have told someone. James is still walking around and can do that to any other girl and it's not right. People like Bella need to be protected and as a friend he should have told her father. Also you said that her and Esme were driving to Port Angeles, I don't think they have that in AZ. I'm sure it was a typo, I just wanted to bring it to your attention just in case you want to go back and change it. Can't wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

omg.. thanx for catching that whew...  that will teach me to write at 3 am... i agree with you abt jacob we will get some head way with that next chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

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Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223966
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I don't like Alice so I probably wouldn't read that story if you did it but this one is kick ass. I don't think that she should except the rule about them being the only girl's she can hang with. That's not right, he keeps adding the B/S rules. I hope she calls him on it too after she finds out about Charlie for sure and the fact that he knew. She can't keep things from him without getting in trouble so that should work both ways

30 Days by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 222]
Summary: Past Featured Story

30 days

30 days for him to make her prom queen. 30 days for her to turn his world upside-down. AU/AH. OCC. Canon pairing.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24840 Read Count: 39107
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2011 Updated: 03 Mar 2011
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Day 30

I would like to read 9 months just to see how they would handle things. I mean with her trying to be a midwife and him with his music thing. Would they both continue school would his dad come around? So many things you could do with those 9 months, it could be very interesting.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Day 29

Sorry but it just seems like Bella has shit so backwards and has a lot of growing up to do. In every relationship shit happens, you deal with it. You work it out, you don't just run from it or break up

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Day 28

I can understand where she's coming from but really I think it's stupid to break up. They know each other and have been getting close. They could have worked it out and still been together. I mean all she had to say was lets slow our pace down a little until I'm more comfortable with what happened and the and together we'll move past it. I think Bella's always making shit harder then it has to be.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Day 27

I know he messed up and all but it's not that serious. I mean he could have tried to lie and deny the shit. He didn't want to lose her and to me that should mean something. That sentence right there should tell her how much he truly cares for her. I hate that she's walking away from one of (The World's Greatest) in R Kelley's words over something so meaningless and stupid.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Day 12

Oh I think the weeks gonna kill him, he'll be begging for a Saturday

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Day 13

It's all cute now but as Edward said Bella is beautiful but a bitch which is why not many guys will risk asking her out. I wonder if James will want back what was his if now he sees someone else getting close to her

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Day 22

Well shit she might as well seeing as they spend so much time together and she just gave him the cookies. Not to mention that neither one of them are seeing or even trying to see anyone else

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Day 21

Hell yeah I'm with Edward, he deserved to get his ass beat

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman.  A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH

First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning. 

 

image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138749
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2016
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Surprise! Or not.

I'm with her, how the hell does one forget to tell his girlfriend about his daughter

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2673819
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

He's a hard ass but he's also so sweet....I want a Mobward

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

He's a hard ass but he's also so sweet....I want a Mobward

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143214
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

K I still really don't get her but they are both strange as heck so I guess they just work somehow. I think he wants more then just to say sorry. I don't know if it forgiveness or her though

Summary:

 

 

 

A heartbreaking tail of Edward and Bella in foster care. How do you become a "normal" person after being abused in every way, brainwashed, and manipulated. can they make it life together or will it rip them apart?

This story contains physcial, mental, and sexual abuse. slight slash. this story may offend some, so don't read if you offend easily. very occ.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85652 Read Count: 19374
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2011 Updated: 04 Oct 2011
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

They are so confused I just feel for them. That being said Edward seems to be so selfish and I know where it stimes from but it still gets to me.... That Lauren shit was so not okay and I'm happy Bella spoke up for herself and stuck to her guns

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I know she's been through so much and her head is all kinds of messed up but hell I'm even frustrated with her at this point

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

How could they all be so stupid and leave her unprotected knowing he's roaming around out there and already making/trying to make contact with her

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Yeah she's making me mad and she won't learn until she's messed up or the cause of someone else being messed up. I hope they all learn that when it comes to James, Bella can't be trusted

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Stupid, stupid, stupid. She's being a brat and every one's catering to her.... Edward needs to keep moving on and doing well cuz she brings out the worst in him and eventually she's gonna bring him down with her. Not to be mean but you can save those that don't want to be saved at some point you gotta let go and put you first

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yeah he's gonna take a while to wrap his head around the fact that she isn't your girlfriend if she doesn't have the free will to deny nor will he ever have her love and trust



Author's Response:

He's definitely having a hard time wrapping his head around anything.  Thanks for reading & reviewing.  I appreciate it.  :)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Right now it seems like she's just going through the motions not really feeling anything he wants her too. She's taking her mind somewhere else. At this point he's never gonna get her love. I have to wonder about Aro, if he wanted her then why did he put her on the sailing block in the first place?

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Rose is going to make Bella feel like shit, like she's beneath her. Bella's probably going to retreat to her shell like self causing Edward to be pissed and somehow Esme to find out. Interesting dinner indeed, I can't wait to see if I'm right. Plus if she jump every time your boyfriend moved people are going to start to think things

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow Rose wasn't playing around with Edward. It was kind of nice to see him be put in his place by a woman, very nice. What was the deal with Carlisle? He was acting like he really hated the girl. Now is that cuz he has no respect for women or is he like Aro and wanted her for himself?

Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I think her mother is a hot mess. Bella better stand her ground cuz if not her mom will pounce. That lady is crazy as hell. You don't come up in someone else house like you pay the bills yelling and acting like you run shit. Mom or not respect my shit, hell I say she got off easy



Author's Response:

I agree 100%.....and it isnt over yet..... thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts!! I love the feedback!

Slither by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

    

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OOC. AH. An outcast who had everything, but eventually lost the one thing that was truly important to him. She was back and her presence would turn his world upside down again. 'He needed her but she left him.' Mature content. E/B    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46224 Read Count: 8034
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2011 Updated: 01 Mar 2012
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Oh yes I fucking love. I can't wait to see what happens next please come with this story I want to know what the hell he did that she saw and why she doesn't stay in one place for too long



Author's Response:

Don't worry, an update is happening very soon.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. =) 

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Break Me Even More

Umm yeah why is she married to James of all people? Also it was only a year and she was so hurt from what he did that she left his ass at the alter yet she so quickly married someone else? Also what does he do for a living and just cuz people were mean to him as a kid that gives him the right to be a dick? What the hell is with Emmett, where's the family loyalty



Author's Response:

It's over a year. (a year and a half to be exact). There's a reason why Bella is married to James, and it'll be revealed in later chapters.

Edward is an investor. And as for Emmett, I can't quite get your statement, but I'm guessing you assume he's doing something bad by interacting with Edward. Emmett is not blood related to Bella or Jasper. He is related to Alice.

Okay, I hope I answered your questions. PM if you have more.

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Denials and truths

K you have me so out in left field. What the hell is going on? She left cuz of a kiss? That seems a little extreme.Also she's so pissed over a kiss yet she's married already. I know that I don't have all the facts yet but right about now it's now looking good for Bella. I mean she walked away without a word and yet she thinks she owes him nothing after all this time? I'm sorry but I call B/S. He at least deserves the right to have his say as to what happened. After all it did cost him everything? I mean why would she not want to hear him out? From what he says there love was amazing shit like that doesn't just go away. You have to give me something here, don't leave me hanging? I hate it in left field its lonely. lol



Author's Response:

The kiss was not just a simple kiss. In the next chapters, you would have an idea why B left him.

And as for Bella being married to James, there's a valid reason for that. Well, as you know I can't give away as much details as I would like too. Don't woory, I'll update soon. Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Vacation and surprises

I think it mean that she's married but not for love or anything like that. They may be good friends and she asked for a favor thinking it would keep Edward away so she didn't have to deal. Maybe he agreed because she needed a green card and had no one else in his life at the moment. I don't know, I'm reaching but it's killing me that I can't figure all this out. You have me stumped and that rarely happens so I'm going crazy lol



Author's Response:

Lol. Well, you have some nice guesses there. We'll see if you got some right (of course in future chaps.)

Anyway, thank you. =)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Forever scarred

She needs to make up her mind, what she wants? I mean I would go crazy with all the back and forth. I thought it was just a kiss with Tanya, he made it sound like nothing was really to it. But Bella mentioning the dry humping has me questioning what the hell really happened that night. Are we going to get the answer to that question any time soon



Author's Response:

To Edward it was nothing. Though it would really be hard to explain to anybody why he did that. It was stupid really. 

I'm still building up their characters. But don't you worry, they will have a talk soon so some of the questions will be answered.

Thanks. ;) 

Just Breathe by jtmd24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Just Breathe Banner

 

What happens when the man you've loved for 6 years starts to change right before your eyes? Bella is forced to question her heart when the black sheep of the family returns. In the end, will she put her trust in the right person?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106360 Read Count: 20213
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2011 Updated: 07 Jul 2011
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Battered and Bruised

Edward better get there fast before there's nothing left of her to save. Also at the beginning did Jasper feed her some of his blood? If kinda seems like that's what he did knowing Alice like he did and what she'd probably do. He doesn't want to lose Bella so he took drastic measures before Alice could do more harm



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  Next chapter will be posted soon.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Consequences

Bella is as good as dead if she doesn't get some vamp blood un her ass very soon

Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63795
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Alright, father and son both have a past with women cheating on them. Oh she has her hands full and I hope they don't think she's trying to be a player by seeing them both. Well kind of seeing them both but not really. They are both awesome but I'm cheering for Carlisle

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Edward does seem nice but they are getting to know each other as friends and Bella just told him that her whole life was all about Molly. With that being said he should have included Molly in the plans for the next get together. Not only that but he seemed to stumble a little after she said she was her daughter. No Bella shouldn't include Molly with whatever she does with him but it would have been nice for him to put that out there.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

I think Bella should listen to her daughter. I'm all Carlisle, the problem is will he have time for a new relationship including Molly with his work schedule?



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and giving a comments.  I'm working on the next chapter now and then debating wether or not to do an outtake with Carlisle and Edward.  Either way, we will be getting to know both of them better real soon.

Thank you again!

-Lisa

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

I think what Jasper did was sweet. Sometimes we want something so bad that we are blind to the obvious and it take others who care about us to pick up on the little or not so little flaws that we allowed ourselves to overlook. Are they going to continue to go this slow? I mean by now they shouldn't be scared to kiss each other. To me that's not really rushing anything



Author's Response:

Jasper loves and cares for Bella.  She has been hurt so many times and he just doens't want to see her hurt again.  they are going to take it a bit more slwoly for now considering that this is really both of their second relationships.  Carlilse thinks he's rusty and poor Bella just doesn't know what to do!  We'll see what happens though.

Thank you for commenting and reading!

-Lisa

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100874
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Murderous thoughts

Okay was she really about to let him go there after he had just been with the nasty girl and probably didn't even shower? Yeah a little self-respect please Bella....

Summary:

New York City"s night life is always up and running, wether it's a club or a strip joint. but their is only one club that has it all, sexy women, alcohol, gambling, drugs, and a supply of rooms in the back that only the elite can get into, for private dances from one of the sultry untouchables. And if you are a high paying customer you get to spend the night with one.

NC-17 for sex, drugs, gambling, violence, and more sex.

Real banner inside

 

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32148 Read Count: 20570
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2012 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Isabella

I was hoping Edward's looks would be more........He's cute but not WOW

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 5: school

I really love how possessive Terry is. He is crazy about Tifany

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Karen

Well they can't be soft and me mafia... I love it

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Revealed Truths

OMG..........

My Perfect Match by HappyMess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 141]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan never considered online dating. After all, she was only twenty-one. But after too many glasses of wine, her best friend convinces her otherwise. AH. Olderward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58757 Read Count: 64578
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 08 Nov 2012
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Rosalie is a spoiled brat who needs a serious wake up call and the members of her family really need to give her one.... I feel like they are letting way too much slide and that's how shit gets out of hand

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324451
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Our Mess

The ring is beautiful, was there a band too if so what does it look like

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153196
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That a girl, don't let that hoe get away with her little comments. Also Edward gets points for calling Tanya out on her shit

Author's Response:

Haha.  Well, Bella goes to a girls boarding school, so she's learned to deal with bullies and skanks!  As for Edward, despite how cross he's been with Bella, he's not going to let anyone else - even his girlfriend - talk shit about her.  Next chapter will be up in a few hours - hope you like it.

Thanks for taking the time to post a comment, I do appreciate it.

Liz

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

You gave him what he wanted how does that make you powerful? Girl you got me on the edge of my seat

Author's Response:

in a D/s relationship the submissive is as powerful or more powerful than the Dom. It is true that once the scene begins the Dom/Domme is in complete control, but not did the submissive have to consent in the first place, but also can call "red" if you will at any point, thus giving the submissive great power. At that point Bella made a choice as to whether or not she wanted to submit to his desires to serve him. This is why so many people involved with the BDSM lifestyle get upset when people confuse slavery and torture with BDSM. I enjoy a good spanking or punishment, but if at any point I didn't like it, I would simply call red and end the scene or permenantly end the relationship.

Always on my Mind by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Written with Siobhan! He said I had no life before him. He said that he was my past present and future. I couldn't remember life before him so he must be right. He promised that he would never leave me, but one day that all changed.

Thanks to Christag for the banner!

Thanks to Stepaine Mason for the other banner!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159709 Read Count: 59807
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Don't tell me they're going to keep her up for 3 days him and his dad totally messing up her head? How can be expect her to be so open with him when he doesn't talk just yells and etc.. punishing her for her thought/dreams. She has no control over that sort of thing. She better learn to watch what she says to Esme. It might her feel better at that moment but it will cost her dearly later

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This story makes me so mad this family truly has some freaking issues but I can't seem to so reading it so that clearly shows me that maybe I have some issues too. Are you getting into my head... Awesome story, you're an amazing writer

Isabella by Velley Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary:

Isabella had to deal with her overbearing mother all her life. What happens when Isabella meets Renee's new mysterious boyfriend? Will he change everything? What will happen to her relationship with her mother?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61364 Read Count: 19809
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2012 Updated: 18 Apr 2013
Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Isabella

Well that took a different turn then I was thinking.... Here is was thinking that the man had multiple personality disorder due to something traumatic in his childhood but no he's just f**king crazy and a genius to top it off. So if he's so smart and has been killing for so long what makes them think they can outsmart him?