What does Aro want with Bella? Does he want her for himself or is he going to give her to someone else to marry?

This chapter was surprising I didn't see this coming. I thought Felix was a good guy but I didn't think he was going to fall for her. Love her like that, I saw a brother like love. This is even better. I hope he comes back for her

Hell yes poor Charlie but I think he just got lucky because to me Felix loved Bella. I don't know what kind of love it was for him but I do know that it was there.

I don't mind running aound after story, it's worth it. I do feel as if the story is starting to run a little slow. Maybe it's me just wanting to hurry up and get to the Demerti scene I don't know but I do wish the updates would come more often. As always your talents are amazing

Please don't let them do this to her? She has been through so much already. I know that is good old Daddy C at the door and lord knows she would have no problems in sharing her. Or just take her and rape her himself. At this point if I was her man I would just give up. Take myself out, she is strong

No I don't want a Emmit POV, I would rether have a Rose POV. Also I like that Bella is a good girl that does her school work and gets the grades but it seems like ever since she started being bad on the side. She turned into a push over and a bit slutish. I like a dom Edward but make Bella stong too not so much a weak lil girl

Great chapter, I was able to pretty much call what was going to happen. I think the problem is that Edward is use to being so forceful with her and what he wants for them that it's going to cause issues. I think she's going to decide with her parents that she can't do this at her age and a abortion would be in her best interest. Edward is going to flip and they are going to spend some time apart. Edward is going to do whatever he has to, to try to hold on to her and the baby. Can't wait to see if I'm right

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Your rant was well done as well as the chapter. I know that as readers some of us can get a little greedy but please see it as a compliment to your mad writing skills and not any kind of put down. I look forward to the up coming chapters.

I want the next chapter to be the visit. I don't really care what was said between him and Emmet. They'll be fine, him and Bella's relationship should be the focus. There's so much riding on these results. I mean she could be having someone else's baby and they won't know that for what like 8 months. By then Bella would have already walked away, what would Edward do?

Wow that was good, I did call that one right but it was still good. I want Bella to want an abortion and I want Edward to be dead set against it. She is still in high school with everything ahead of her. It's only reasonable to think she wouldn't want this at this point in her life. Edward being older will want the baby, Bella and that happy little family. Knowing him, he'll fight like hell to keep her from ending the pregnancy and ending things with him. Can't wait to see if I'm right

Yeah can't believe that just happened. What an ass wipe, if Edward even questions her I'll kill him. He should know her better then that. Also where is all this coming from? I mean I thought D had a little crush on her but to just out right be an ass? Wow, can't wait ti see what happens next

I think Vicki is a nice person who has been there and deserves to be treated better then what she is. She has done nothing wrong and now that Rose wants to act right doesn't mean that Alice and whoever should become like Rose use to be and go all bitchy on Vicki. Was Edward really sick or was there some other girl involved there? Seems a little suspect to me

If she gets to have Peter when she needs time away from Jasper and his monster, does this mean that Jasper gets to have someone else too? I don't know about anyone else but I'm guessing that Bella isn't going to be happy about that

K I know he was hurt and all but he messed up by not be fully honest with her and really is she suppose to give up having kids? That'd big that's not like alright I wear jeans instead of shorts. Come on Edward

This was a cute chapter but I would really like to know the deal with Aro and the clan. Also I think he really likes her, Edward I mean. He seems just nervous about putting himself out there. Probably because of the name he's made for himself so far.

The story is awsome I can't wait to see what happens next. Does Demertri give Bella up or does he come back for her?  He seems to really have a thing for her. I thought he bit her too she said she felt a sting and then he soothed it with him tounge when he went down on her. Am I wrong?

That was awesome, you can Bella a crazy sick power. I hope she learns everything that she is capable of. If so I don't think anyone would be able to stop her. She would be the most powerful Can't wait to fond out who's in the house

That chapter was wow confusing. First I would I want to know is Aro is keeping all of them then why are they so sad for her? Also if he is keeping all of them then why can't she remain with Edward? Why does she have to be with Jake? Wouldn't her being happy work more in their favor? Most importantly what the hell is her power? So many questions, each chapter seems to leave me with more questions then answers. Can't wait to see what happens next

I'm guessing Alice or Daddy C

Edward is such an ass, man you rally make me hate him. I really like this story and am dieing to see where you take things but it kills me that the updates are so random. Can't wait to see what happens next. I want her to try to kill herself again. Maybe a close call and I mean a real close call will make him change his ways somewhat. Some times you don't realize what something means to you until it's nearly taken from you

Story is awesome but please let her end up with Daddy C. Edward seems like ftoo much of a Jerk and I think she didn't sleep with him but he will make it look that way so that he can hurt his dad. I think he knows what's up. The boy isn't stupid

Wow didn't se this coming. Daddy C better get his head out of his ass and man up before I drop him. I hate that she continues to get hurt by these men. I hope when he finally does come around and he better, she makes him work for it

Wow a lot happened in this chapter and I loved it. Bella messed up but he has put her through so much he really needs to make the first move. She deserves to be happy and be reassured that she worth more to him then he's shown by not contacting her

Yeah but is that the end of it or will Royce be back for more? He doesn't strike me as too smart when it comes to Rose and the fact that he couldn't gt something that he wanted.

I hate Rose, she's a biotch and I know she did something to Bella's dress for the MTV awards. I hope Bella handles her ass soon

How bad we've fucked this up, I don't think so there was no we in that. It was all him, she loves him but she doesn't want to ask him to give up what he has going on for her. She probably thinks it's selfish of her to ask and also she said we'll see. She wanted to talk about it at a later time so that she can have more time to ponder the situation and come up with a solution having fully thought everything out. As always can't wait to see what happens next

Well nobody ever explained what the hell the whole click was doing in his room in the first place. That seems a little suspect to me

Alright well we knew she was and evil boitch. But why is Jasper working with her? Does he really like Bella and playing Victoria or is this all part of the plan. The pet that she has is that how she's controlling Jasper or is he really working with her? So many questions

Wow a lot went on in this chapter. I have to say without Bella, Edward would be so lost. Thank goodness for her. Poor Emily, I just hate Tanya even more after this. Funny how her lawyer is related to one of the boys who attacked her. I would if that would be of some help to Edward in court when Tanya drags him in

Please don't tell me Bella was listening and Jessica snuck up on her ass or vise verse? Classic, can't wait to see what happens next

Wow, I can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder who the new Master is. Is it James or someone else? How will Edward show his affection for Bella without scaring her? Since she has never had any type of sexual contact with a man. Does she even know about those things? Since there was no schooling, did Alistar tutor her? Does she know how to read and do math and such things

I can't wait to see what happens next but all these POV's are killing me. There is so much going on, it's exciting and nerve recking at the same time

I think you should keep an EPV but please don't do what so many people do and give one chapter with BPV then turn around and give the next chapter pretty much the same but in EVP? To me it just makes me feel cheated. I get so excited for the next chapter and when I get it I find out it's almost the same as the one before but with someone else telling it. I hate the whole recap thing. The way you have done it thus far is perfect. Also I don't want her to make it easy for him in anyway. He made he life hell and if he wants to keep her he should have to work for it. I don't care what his excuse is. Don't make her all too forgiving. Can't wait to see what come next, love it so far

I'm so excited to see what happens next. I can't wait, this story is so good so far. I really like when she calls her baby, it's so sweet

I really like this chapter, it shows them getting closer and of course I still love when he calls her baby. Alright I so love that you took my idea to put the movie quotes in but now I'm pissed that I can't find it ha ha. So here is what I was thinking, at the beginning of each chapter you could at least tell us the name of the movie/book that the quote came from. It might make things a little easier. Now also some people got a little sneak peek.No fair but what would be fair is that the people who get the movie/book quote right are the ones but get the treat of a sneak peak. What do you think? I can't wait to see what happens next. I want to see them be more intimate them just the little kiss on the head and the cheek. She did say anywhere but the mouth, can we play with that a little

10 things I hate about you is the movie (I know you think about me naked) (I want you I need you oh baby oh baby) Awesome movie by the way. I love how they are getting closer and she is letting him in more. Oh and the Supernatural episode was the shit but scary as hell.

You’re birth is definitely something to celebrate - New Moon

I know where she's coming from with being mad at him for acting like she was his property but he just loves her so much. I think he;s scared of losing her weather it be to someone else or after the year is up and deal is off. Please let her go easy on him

I have to agree with Edward, she needs to start giving him more. He's been amazing and it doesn't seem like it's give and take you know. I would hate for him to look else where for what she's not giving him. Also I think that if she keeps it up that he's going to start to get mad at her and they're going to start to fighting. Didn't find the quote but I had to tell you that I loved the chapter

This story most definitely doesn't suck I'm just a lil late with reading my updates.  “Take me now, or lose me forever.” God I love Top Gun, great movie

"You think I'm gorgeous, you want to kiss me" Miss Congeniality, awesome movie. I love how Bella seems so much more outgoing now. Her mom is a real biotch and someone needs to tell her about her shit. Who tells their kid to get a divorce when their the happiest they've ever been?

'My name is Emmett, and I'm addicted to porn and I masturbate constantly"Sorority Boys awesome movie. I can't wait to see what happens at the doctors app. I bet she's having twins since she made such a big deal out of the size of the house they could buy. That would be some funny shit

Alice knows how they are and how their family works. She should have thought about that instead of running her damn mouth so much. If I was Bella  would be pissed at her because now Carlisle will probably break up with her to keep her safe. Alice and her big ass mouth 

I like that she is being strong I hate that everyone thinks that she is not facing or dealing with things because she is not all crying and shit. He messed up and she is moving on with a nice guy so far. That's what she needs. Please keep her strong and not some lost puppy that Edward can run over? Also please don't let her hurt James due to Edward that's so not right? Can't wait to see what happens next

I loved this chapter. I'm so happy she let herself go and didn't second guess her feelings for him. I also really like how they didn't do the whole I love you thing yet. Sometimes it doesn't need to be said out loud to know it's there. God I love that he makes her feel special. I hope he keeps it up, can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully good things, I think she's been hurt enough

I don't know if this is suppose to be a Bella/ Edward story but I really like that James is the good guy for a change. I want her to be with him not cheating ass much. Can't wait to see what happens next

That's right girl don't take shit from nobody. I think it's great she left but she didn't go far enough in my opinion. I mean really she's just around the way from that other life. Like yes she got away but she's scared to move further and really see what the would has to offer.

I love that he gets jealous. I know that sometimes things can be brought too far but I don't think Edward has crossed that line yet. Although something tells me he's well on his way. Maybe not a hit but a push or a shake. It's going to happen because Bella likes to walk away from him when they are fighting.

Alright so she can see dead people but that still doesn't explain how she knows things. Like Angela said you can ask her anything personal and she'll know the right answer. So do dead people tell her the answer or does she just know by touching that specific person? The story is amazing so far, I can't wait to see where you go with it

I don't think the Volturi would come all the way to Forks to kill people. Maybe someone wanting it to look like the Volturi. Can wait to see what happens next

Aro is going to want to change her but is she going to tell him and the guard about Royce. Maybe there's something they can do