Reviews by brii
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315856
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: brii Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

haha i was so confused about the last...scene i didn't get thath they were in the closet till i read the authors note. i completely thought that whole scene happened in the middle of a club full of people.

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: brii Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really like the idea of your story and you seem to have a very good grasp on your characters but i don't think i will be able to continue reading. You're writing is a little to rough around the edges for me. You really paint every scene of the story but all the detail is a little amarathine at times. I find myself skimming over the text and unable to distinguish between what is inconsequential and what is significant because there doesn't seem to be a shift in detail. The morning scene most likely wasn't as important as when they first bump into each other, but the writing style seems to be the same. I'm attempting to make this as constructive as possible and i hope you receive it that way.

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143214
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: brii Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

i love this story so much i read it all in one night and i just can't get enough. i just came, and went through all the chapters again because i looked up one of the songs and absolutely loved it. anyway please update soon and continue with the song suggestions =)