Reviews by soundsofmusic
Summary:

Hockey is an emotional sport for the players and the fans. For TT25.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34783 Read Count: 15816
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2010
Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This story is AMAZING!!! You've combined two of my favorite things:Twilight and Hockey! The development of the characters is so good, and I absolutely love the plot so far! I can't wait to see what comes next!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it as much as I do! I'm such a hockey freak! I couldn't not include it in one of my stories.

 

Thank you so much!

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29923
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so good so far! I have to say I'm kind of a sucker for a cocky Edward. ...And that sounded a lot dirtier than I meant it, lol. I am really excited about this stroy and I can't wait to see where you take it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. LOL I love a cocky Edward too ;0)

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm so glad you decide to make it a full length story, it is way too amazing to leave as a one shot! And I'm glad you finally answered the mystery of what happened to Bella and Seth's parents, that was driving me crazy, lol. This chapter was so good, and I loved the entire scene in the car. It was nice to see a more caring side of Edward. I can't wait to see where this story goes!

Fracture by KatieJane4815 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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What are the chances of meeting your soulmate? What if you meet them at the age of 4? Edward and Bella have known each other since kindergarten. A fateful late night call opens their eyes to potentials they never thought of. AU, B/E, A/J, R/Em. Lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62958 Read Count: 27936
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Oct 2010
Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: An Incidental Incident

I have to say I'm intrigued. I can't wait to see where this story goes! Do you know what your posting schedule on here is going to be like? Because I might give in to the temptation of not waiting, and just go read it on ff.net. Great story so far, can't wait to see what comes next! =)



Author's Response:

At the moment, I have no idea exactly how often I will be posting on this website. I'm going to upload chapter two right now, though. I may make a little author's note at the beginning of the chapter and set up a posting schedule there :) 

Thanks so much for the review!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Beautiful Insanity

I just got back from vacation to four new chapters from this story - so excited to see what happens in them! This chapter was pretty great, I loved how Bella stood up to Edward. And the peek into Edward's head was fantastic!

I can't wait to find out what Alice's deal is with Bella. If it is just the fact that Bella doesn't worship them, or if it's something else altogether.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! Consider the chapters that welcomed you home from your vacation my little gift to you for reviewing :) Maybe you should go on another, longer vacation so you can come home to even more chapters! ;)

 

Thanks,

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Addiction

Edward pinning Bella to the lockers was hot! But Bella playing him back, and reversing the situation around on him was amazing!! This story is soooo good so far!!! =)



Author's Response:

Ahh, you liked the locker pin, eh? ;) (sorry about the "eh", I'm Canadian) Thanks so much for the review! I thought the locker pinning was pretty hot myself ;)

 

Thanks,

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: In my Arms

Bella was so cute and naive going to ring the doorbell for the party, lol. And I have to say, I'm not sure how I feel about her trying to get Jake to look like they are closer than they actually are.

And I have to say, I was surprised by the tattoos. I love tattoos though, so it was definitly a pleasant surprise, now if only we could get Edward shirtless, to see his tattoo, and well, drool over a shirtless Edward, lol.

I don't know how I feel about Edward's admission that he's never dialed a wrong number. If he dialed Bella on purpose did he just pretend he was calling someone else so that she wouldn't know? Or did he mean that he didn't technically call Bella on purpose, but he was glad that he dialed her number in the end?

Can't wait to see what happens next!! =)



Author's Response:

Okay, the whole wrong number thing I shall address first :) He dialled Bella on purpose, and yes it was just to pretend he was calling someone else. He did it to see what her reaction would be, and frankly, he was tired of waiting for something to magically happen between the two of them. So he took the initiative, and called her, but then freaked out when he realized he had no clue what he was going to say to her.

As for shirtless Edward, oh yes...mmm, I know exactly what you mean. He'll be shirtless soon enough!

 

Thanks for the review!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Battlefield

Aww Poor Edward. He finally apologizes and Bella is too passed out to hear it. I have to say, the Alice thing is driving me crazy, I need to know what her deal is, lol. Can't wait for the next chapter on Monday, this story is great!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! Well, your chapter is here! Now all you have to do is read it, and then hit that review button and let me know what you thought about it lol!

Of course I couldn't let Edward off the hook too easily! He thinks that things will be perfectly fine with just an apology, but Bella had other plans...which may have involved passing out.

 

Thanks!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Sign

Oh my gosh! Edward saying "five more minutes Bella" was the cutest thing ever! It just shows how comfortable he seems to be with her, when he's not trying to hide it. =)

And I loved that when he went to check if he forehead was hot he tried to make it look like he was casually brushing her hair away from her face!!

Shirtless Edward! Sooo happy you went there! And a celtic knot? So hot.

The twenty questions game was cute, it shows that he really does want to get to know her.

Cliffhanger much? Bella better not lie, lol I would hate for Edward to get dissauded from persuing her. Then again, it might make him work harder...now I'm not too sure what I want her to say, lol

(And thanks for clarifying about the Edward's initial phone call to Bella, it gives me a better grasp on his thoughts)

Can't wait for the next chapter =)



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward is definitely a cutie! He couldn't hide his comfort in the situation when he was half asleep, that's for sure! He tries to hard to hide how much he cares, but I think he reached his breaking point at the end of the chapter--no more hiding for him!

Shirtless Edward may be paying us a few more visits ;)

I'm about to upload the next chapter as soon as I'm finished replying to reviews and being a good little author :)

 

Thanks for the review!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Crush

Awww!!! They're adorable together.

Bella is crazy though. How could you go off to shower and change while Edward is sucking on your neck?!?! Definitly Insane.

This chapter was great, I'm off to the next one now...



Author's Response:

Well, I never said she was sane lol

Thanks so much for the review!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Use Somebody

I wonder how the rumor got started that Bella and Edward slept together... hmm..... And I have to say I'm a little shocked at Angela's reaction.

I loved that Edward got annoyed when Bella opened her own door, their banter about it was great.

I don't understand Angela and Jake. How can you turn on your supposed friend so quickly, when you're not even sure if the rumors that are flying around about her are true or not? I'm glad Edward stood up for Bella and put them in their place. They deserved it. Great job as always!!!



Author's Response:

Clearly they may not have been as good as we thought they were, but of course Edward wouldn't stand for their shit. Well, at least my Edward wouldn't!

I'm glad you liked the door opening banter! I liked writing that part :)

I'm about to update with two new chapters, just to let you know :)

 

Thanks so much for the review!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Cooties

So it was Rose. That I  wasn't expecting, though I guess I should have seen it coming, lol.

I think it is absolutely adorably that Edward has been crushing on Bella since she was five, so cute! And the fact that it made him blush is even cuter!!

Finally - the Alice mystery might get resolved! Can't wait to get to the bottom of that!

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Appeler

Finally the Alice mystery is solved!

I can't believe that Edward had them all going around trying to make Bella's life easier - he's such a sweetheart! Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Don't Trust Me

WHAT?!?!?!?

How did this go from them being the perfect, happy couple for a month and half to Tanya b.s. and now JESSICA STANLEY IS IN EDWARD'S BED??!?!?!!?!? What the Hell?!?!?!?1

Oh, Edward has a LOT of explaining to do.

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: It's Going Down Tonight

Impromptu tattoos can be such bad decesions, lol. Luckily, these didn't turn disaterous.

I still can't believe that Edward showed up drunk, I really hope that Bella eventually gives him a chance to explain himself.

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Let This Go

Glad to know for sure that Edward definitly didn't do anything with Jessica. And I'm glad he's going after her - he needs to make her listen to him.

Bella needs to realize that the boy that has looked after her since she was five, at least needs to be heard.

Can't wait for the next chapter! =)

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: It Complicates Everything

I find it interesting that Edward was still a virgin, I definitly thought that that wasn't the case.

As for whether or not they should have waited, Bella might be right, they aren't exactly the norm for a couple, so maybe they weren't supposed to plan and wait. I just hope neither of them comes to regret it.

Can't wait for the next chapter, as always! =)

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: We all Learn to Make Mistakes

The shower scene was so cute! I loved the softer side of both of them.

As for the Alice and Rose inquisition, I'm glad that Bella and Edward didn't really tell them anything, it's not their place yet.

I have to say - Charlie shocked the hell out of me. What father assumes that their 18 year daughter is going to live in an apartment with her boyfriend, after they've only been dating 2 or so months?!?! He didn't even seem that upset about it

Can't wait for the next chapter, as usual!

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254986
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Loved this chapter! I have to say that I'm glad Edward didn't have Esme help him pick the engagement ring, it seems more special this way. I'm also glad that Jess finally got what was coming to her! 

Can't wait to see the bet play out I have my fingers crossed for Bella as the winner!