Reviews by Mauravt
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171465
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww I love Esme.  I wonder if there is an evil Esme fiction - if so, I am not interested.  I like your Esme - she's perfect.  Thanks for the story.  I am glad I found you on boycott fanfiction weekend :-)

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh Rose you are in the dog house.  Hopefully she will suck it up and apologize and not be mean to Bella.  Hmmmmm

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh shit - evil Rose has emerged.  Be afraid - be very afraid.

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oh no!

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Le sigh.....Edward is perfect!

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yikes, Hopefully this is the end of Renee.  Please don't let anything happen to Noel.

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Jeeze she can't cut a break.

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love Charlie and Carlisle - even though they are evil Mo Fo's :-)  Jasper puking - hillarious.  Thanks for the story

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923137
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Holy shit!  What did he do?  I am afraid - I thought maybe branding, thn maybe piercing - now I am afraid of rape or female genital mutilation.  Oh My GOD - please update soon so that we can find out what happened to poor Bella.

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 69

Edward is being a fuck slut!! 

Get home to your girl, Edward

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

What a complete and total cluster fuck.  I wish Bella could know Aro out and use the satalite phone.  Holy shit when are they gonna catch a break?  I think the most disturbing thing to me is that Aro continues to nurse from Bella - ick - I am a breastfeeding advocate - breastfed all of my kiddos.  Aro's constant violation of Bella in this way is still freaking me out! 

Thanks for the chapter. I understand your need for time to prolong the time between posting, but I really hope you don't leave the story. Please, please, please!

I am dying to find out what has been tattooed on Bella.  We have been waiting 50ish chapters for this wedding we are getting wedding-blocked (which, incidently, might be worse than getting cock-blocked).  ;-)

Please don't be gone too long - you will be missed.

 

 



Author's Response:

Have you read the Grapes of Wrath? What did you think of the part where the young mother nursed that complete stranger? Just wondered, cause that always disturbed me.   Im not going to abandon this fic, and its not gonna be that much longer than the two weeks, who knows, maybe it will be ready by then :)

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

This story is like a multi-car pile-up and I can't stop rubbernecking.  I am totally discusted by the image of Aro nursing at Bella's breasts (I actually have a physical reaction - not a good one). 

I can't help but feel that Bella would be in much worse shape psychologically.  She seems incredibly resilient for a virgin who is being repeatedly and horrifically violated on an hourly basis. Hmmmm - just think she would be a little more checked out.  Just sayin.

This may be my favorite Jasper of all time.  :-)  And holy hell when are James pictures going to show up?  And will Edward see them?  I really want Bella to attach the milking machine to James' dick while repeatedly beating him with a baseball bat.

Thanks for the story....I think :-)

 

 

 

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Go Edward!  Now he knows another humiliation that Bella has had to face - this makes me profoundly sad.  Make it better - make it better - please.

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I am so glad James got a taste of his own "medicine", but it wasn't nearly enough.  If he had been gang raped by all the men on the island....maybe.  I just can't get the image of Bella dressed as a cow out of my head.  He deserved something like that....just sayin.

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Oh James is a sick fuck...and I still can't help but be totally disturbed by the oral nipple stimulation to produce milk.  The image of Aro sucking Bella's breasts haunts my days. 

Please tell me that there is an end in sight.



Author's Response:

There is an end in sight, but I do have to say, that the lactation thing is a very hot fettish right now, and as a woman who produced milk BEFORE getting pregnant, I know this entire thing is possible.

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

How is Bella not catatonic by now?  It seems as if the repeated sexual assaults would be affecting her personality more.  She seems amazingly resilient.  I prob. would have killed myself after the anal rape.  Yikes...marry them off already...please?

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Damn...cock blocked with a warning that the next chapter won't by up for a while.....that sucks! (and not in the licking icing off Edward's fingers kind of way)

I did REALLY enjoy Tanya's lesson for Edward.  I think it really helped him understand what Bella has been through on a visceral level.  BRAVO Tanya.

Despirately waiting for the wedding and nervous that that Jasper's plan will fall apart. 

Thanks for the update...and please don't abandon us - this is my favorite fiction guilty pleasure right now and can't wait to see it play out.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I will not abandon u!

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Freakin amazing chapter. I could use a 6k lemon after the many many James/Aro tourture marathons. Will they just share their feelings already.....sheeesh - they clearly love each other. 

Still pretty nervous about the wedding ritual.

 

Happy New Year!

 

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Missed you - happy new year!

 

Great chapter - Can't wait for the "wedding".  I feel like you are lulling us into a false sense of calm before you strike with the crazy angst.  I'm ready.....i think.

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Yikes - I was going to say thanks for the Valentine's chapter, but now I am not so sure ;-)  That was a very hard chapter to read.

This is the longest 24 hour period in fanfiction history...when are we going to get to the wedding.  I will tell you it is gonna suck for Bella to be screwed with a fresh tattoo - ouch.  Any holy shit - Tanya!! How the hell will she be able to stand tomorrow, much less be assaulted all day.

I miss the fluffy chapters....Thanks for the update!

 

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 68: The Second Elizabeth Part 6

Good to know the Aro has been consistent with his crazy, ass behavior.

I dont know who to feel worse for, Elizabeth or Charles :-(

 

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 72

Ha Ha - cutting a hot dog lengthwise?  Seems fitting! 

All I keep thinking about is Bella's tattoo. Wonder what the hospital staff thought of that?

Thanks for the update - I am sad that this story is coming to an end.  :-(

I am ready for some super serious groveling from Edward. 

Thanks,
Maura

 

 



Author's Response:

HOLY SHIT... i cut out all the tattoo stuff... now i have to go back and look to see where i can throw it back in!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: September 1st 1843

Love the first chapter, great set-up....and I love, love, love the embeded pictures - they really add to the experience.

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: September 11th 1843

Hmmm.....Esme and Carlisle have Grandchildren and Edward is their eldest....so how old is Edward and is he married?

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: September 13th 1843

Love Esme - can she adopt me?

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: September 17th 1843

You are killing me.  How old is Edward? 

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: September 22nd 1843

Wow - I am exhausted just reading about Bella's life.  I just sat on my ass today and read while it rained outside.  I guess i would have died back then, huh? ;-)

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: September 28th 1843

wow 16 and 29 - that is quite the age gap.  it is boardering on icky.

Reviewer: Mauravt Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: September 28th 1843

I am not warming to Edward yet....he jut seems like a dirty old man (hee, hee).  I know I will grow to love them together, but I am not there yet.