Reviews by LolaYaKnow
People Change by kuntrygal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was the bane of Bella Swan's young existence until her mother unexpectedly moves her away. What happens years later when she moves back? Do people really change?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82271 Read Count: 32257
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Uuuhh there's body shots and then there's this... This is sexual assault.

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923479
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I feel like this plot of Edward not being with Bella cause of flimsy reasons is asisine, why they aren't together is so flimsy I'm surprised you can make a story out of it...

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 74

Of course they are Edward.. The had like several fucks sessions before also doing it on the fake wedding night. ALL where he creampied her

So really, his cum has 2 days to settle in a ovulating woman so really it shouldn't be a suprise. 

Pressing My Luck by Shahula Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 50]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella faces fierce competition to be crowned Ink God. Her biggest rival is the man who taught her everything about ink, not to mention love. With a lot of talent and a little luck, Bella knows she can win it all, including Edward's heart.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20759 Read Count: 19621
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So Edward was right about Bella? Tho she didn't leave him for his age, she left cause of career ambition. Very young person trait. 

 

I can't help but think Bella's pov is skrewed someway. If Edward loved her so much, I doubt he was happy she left and then cut off communication, seems very harsh on her part. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So Edward was right about Bella? Tho she didn't leave him for his age, she left cause of career ambition. Very young person trait. 

 

I can't help but think Bella's pov is skrewed someway. If Edward loved her so much, I doubt he was happy she left and then cut off communication, seems very harsh on her part. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So Edward was right about Bella? Tho she didn't leave him for his age, she left cause of career ambition. Very young person trait. 

 

I can't help but think Bella's pov is skrewed someway. If Edward loved her so much, I doubt he was happy she left and then cut off communication, seems very harsh on her part. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstar
Date: 01 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That Bella and james arguement, it stinks of 'if you can't handle the heat, don't come into the kitchen.' She took a serious shot at him first. 

 

What makes him a asshole when she decided to belittle him? She started it and couldn't handle the heat afterwards. Using any BJJ or Boxing skills taught to her just because she can't take a few words is hella immature. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I mean if she loves Edward.. It sure doesn't feel like it.. And why would say that? I hope that isn't the only it's brought up..

 

But Edward is too much of a gentlemen and obviously loves Bella so I doubt he is gonna ever bring that subject again or even be harsh with Bella. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I mean.. I guess I expected Edward to at least be more caustious with Bella.. or at least ask exactly how many more men she has been with... But nothing at all? 

 

Also Emment is overbearing and pushy. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So even tho we know Bella broke them up cause of her career... Edward fee;s no type of way about anything?

 

Also for him to not ask about her previous relationships or vice versa or anything.. At this point I don' think many questions are gonna get answered. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

It's seems so OOC to have Edward have a 'few girls' with the way you have written him. 

And still with Bella, honestly she isn't willing to compromise or give up anything to be with Edward. And his business is BETTER and BIGGER then hers, why would he give his up? That's like going from 100k a year job to 20k street preformer just cause it's fun. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

It's seems so OOC to have Edward have a 'few girls' with the way you have written him. 

And still with Bella, honestly she isn't willing to compromise or give up anything to be with Edward. And his business is BETTER and BIGGER then hers, why would he give his up? That's like going from 100k a year job to 20k street preformer just cause it's fun. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

It's seems so OOC to have Edward have a 'few girls' with the way you have written him. 

And still with Bella, honestly she isn't willing to compromise or give up anything to be with Edward. And his business is BETTER and BIGGER then hers, why would he give his up? That's like going from 100k a year job to 20k street preformer just cause it's fun. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

It's obvious Edward won. But what I don't get is Bella. It seems Edward has run a successful shop for a good long while now, and is now expanding into CALIFORNIA. So his brand is only gonna get bigger. 

I don't get Bella giving up him up the first time, I know you framed it as a mutaul break up, but that's a farce. This Edward would take several bullets for Bella, in no way would he want her to leave him, but he would never keep her against her will.  I understand her ambition played a major factor.

Also I don't like how you have  Edward talk like their first break up was mutual and then the communication break off was as well. It wasn'tand Bella stop the long distance cause she cared for him too much. Also I remember Emment about say how Edward was after Bella left him, the break up wasn't mutual. 

I realize now that this is probably one of those angst free stories, but I gotta say, this could have a used it tbh.  With the way you wrote Edward. superb, but if only he didn't have Bella on this pedestal and maybe played hard to get for a couple of chapters before he finally showed her gentle man she remebers and they reconnect. It would have improved my opinion on this fic. 

But as I see it now, 6/10. Edward is great, and their interactions weren't bad either. Emment was too overbearing and pushy, seems like the sort of thing that Rose wouldn't go for, there's playful and then theres the guy that barges into your home as soon as you crack open the door and won't stop talking. Still hate that argument with Bella and James, she started it, don't get violent cause you can't handle words. And the break WAS NOT mutual.