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I don't write, just read. I like Twilight and Gilmore Girls fanfic
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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171538
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I love this story with all my heart. I wasn't too keen on the Charlie POVs but I grew to love them, because they do give some insight to the other characters (:
I can't wait for Bella to become more comfortable with herself and with Edward.
And Edward!! He calls her Baby!! AWWWHHH!! :D
Returning to her hometown after college, Bella is thrilled to be reunited with her friends Alice and Jordan. What she doesn’t expect is the undeniable attraction that she feels for Jordan’s husband Edward. When lines blur, friendships are tested. ExB, All Human, Rated M for language, adult situations and lemons!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66851 Read Count: 13519
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Playful Existence
Holy eff.
I clicked this on the first chapter just about 4 hours ago and could NOT. STOP. READING.
Yeah, this is pretty much amazing.
I fkng LOVE it. I can't WAIT for the next chapter.
erin
Author's Response:
YAY! I'm so glad you're liking it! I'm going to try to get the rest of it posted today!!
He is the world champion. She is the daughter of his sponsor. Edward Masen has to teach Bella Swan, but who will teach who in the end? If you think that tennis is a boring game you are wrong. White Polo shorts, skirts and a lot, lot of sweat...
Written for the Sport of Love Challenge.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6954 Read Count: 797
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Match Point
Ok. So I got the jist of this story, but only because I didn't try to read the entire thing word for word. This is great and all, but there were so many mechanical/grammatical errors that I could concentrate well enough. I had to skip down every line or so just to keep from getting caught up in trying to figure out what you were actually trying to say. Wonderful effort, but you're just..not..there yet. A bit more practice is all you need; then you'll be well on your way (:
Author's Response:
First, I have to tell you that English is not my maternal language. I’m from Greece and English is the first foreign language that I learned.
Second, when I wrote the story I had it checked also from a friend whose mother is from England and the changes she made were only in a few sentences. I’m certain that we both missed a few things but I cannot do something different now.
I’m sorry that it wasn’t up to your expectations but that is what I had to offer.