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Bio:
Seventeen year old Alli Wilson falls hard and fast for the cowboy next door. She lies about her age, and has the most magical summer of her life. Things get down right awkward once school starts and she stumbles in to her AP English class to find the cowboy next door is her new teacher.
First assignment? An Essay: How I spent my summer vacation.
Lemons.
Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54159 Read Count: 21171
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Love this story... I am glad your back and posting it daily I'm craving it like my caffeine.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks! I liked your comment more than chocolate!
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
You and your cliffys please don't leave us hanging with the blood stained man like you did in second spins :P
Author's Response:
I wont!
Poor Julien. I have re-written the next chapter of Second Spins THREE times. I just can't find a way to explain what's happening without it soundly totally cheesey. I will keep trying.
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Love Gran and Margot can't wait for homecoming.
Author's Response:
Alli's got a lot of cool chicks in her family.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Oopsie on Jason and Ali wonder if anyone noticed that almost kiss and about the ending I'm just holding my breath and hoping you get 10 tonight
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you're invested in the story. This is a pretty big cliffy!
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I knew that little biaotch would be a problem when she was introduced
A few chapters back. I'm going back to 1 and read the belly butterflies, baby goats and a hot man swimming in summer and hope for another update today
Author's Response:
Mmmm - good idea. Nothin' wrong with revisiting a little skinny dipping action!
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I have been reading this story since you started it I'm sorry for my prior lack of review but you should know yours is the first story I have felt compelled to review at all thank you for an amazing original.
Author's Response:
Being considered review worthy is truly an honor! I can't tell you how encouraging it is to get such wonderful feedback! Thank you thank you thank you!!!
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Old fashion soda shops are very cool I have been to one in Texas and one in Arizona
I feel for Ali with the prune juice I have been there but PrepH shopping for grandma I think there is some rule that says a cute guy has to see you buy embarrassing stuff at least once.
Author's Response:
Getting caught in embarrassing situations is the story of my life. I've learned to make awkward an artform.
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I hope Jason remembers his " worth the wait" words in the future.
Author's Response:
Ah yes, my not-so-subtle foreshadowing...
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Belly Butterflies :) you never forget that exited giddy feeling you get from a new crush/romance
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I have never had poison oak but who would complain about it or stink tea when it is being applied by a Adonis countryMan
Author's Response:
Sadly Alli's sensitivity to poison oak is autobiographical for me. Even more sadly, I have never had an Adonis Counrtyman anoint me with stink tea or any other itch relieving substance.
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Hot man swimming in the summer :) NAKED I think that sums it up.
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Good to see Margot's there for Ali I wish she would listen to her older sister but where would be the fun in that ;)
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Wow I wasn't expecting that but Jason handled that like a pro.
I hope he puts Yvette in her place next chapter
I have read second spins can't wait for the updates so may questions and Julian is totally drool worthy with the french/ italian thing and that was a terrible cliffy you left on that story
Author's Response:
There are certain things in this world that are absolute truths:
Yvette is a cunt.
French/Italian lovers with mad skills are swoon worthy.
I am a cliffy bitch.
Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Yvette argh I hate that sneaky bitch. I really cant wait until she gets what coming to her
Author's Response:
Every school has an Yvette... and they all suck.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Some Teachers are worse than students. It's all very sad. I hope Ali opens up soon to her parents.
Yvette is a thorn but i personally would rather see your story the way you wrote it
In completion no deviation
Author's Response:
Thanks! I did add a little snippet about Yvette, but it in no way changes the ending of this version of the story.
Date: 04 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Sniff Sniff *dabs misty eyes* I am honored that you mentioned my comment in your notes. Dreams really do come true :P Anywho. On a serious note that is a horrid thing that Ali and Jason are dealing with and it sounds like there may be some T R O U B L E with Daddy
Im glad We are going to hear from Julian and Laura soon they have been missed.
You seem to like the J's both of your men have them Jason,Julian are you going to keep the theme if you write story number three?
Author's Response:
LOL - my sister said the same thing about my proclivity for choosing J names. Jason was the name of my childhood sweetheart, so that's why Alli's beau is named Jason. Julien named himself Julien, but his last names are all family names from my husband's family. Lara is a twist on my mother-in-law's name Laura. Second Spins is a gift to her in a way. (It's hilarious hearing her review chapters as she reads them. Especially the steamy ones! She gets very flustered.)
I have two more stories begging to be put down on paper. One is supernatural and deals with guardian angels. The other one I'm toying with turning into my first fanfic. The hero in it could easily be played by RPatz, but it's just as easy for me to make them my own characters. Do you have a preference?
Lara's common sense and her body are of two different opinions when it comes to Julien Diotallevi.
She remembers all too well the passionate summer they spent together on the French Riviera. It left her heart-sick, pregnant and alone.
She never expected to see him again, but what happens on the riviera doesn't always stay on the riviera. Now he stands before her, still as breath-taking as ever, only this time he comes bearing startling news, and a legacy of danger.
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Categories: Original Fiction, Mystery, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44801 Read Count: 5671
Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Forget the fanning I need a serious cold shower after that or a Hot man would work as well where are the Julian's or Jason's when you really need them.
I can't wait to see where this new twist takes them. Yummy French/Italian and a prince/king I can't wait to see more.
Author's Response:
Thanks - yeah, I surprised myself with that lemon! I had no idea what they were going to do. I kind of needed a filler flashback. I'm so pleased with the result!
I hope Lara's passport is up to date!