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Playing Games by bagpuss Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Short Story.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3239 Read Count: 31011
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2012 Updated: 13 Sep 2014
Reviewer: princessesta Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'd like to know what Dan and Louise look like. Kinda like a physical description. Is he handsome or is she just plain looking? I couldn' place a picture of the characters in my mind.



Author's Response:

Although there aren't absolute descriptions, during the story Dan is described, sort of. I've added a couple of bits below.

Hair neither black nor brown, his skin tone quite pale. His profile, though still chiselled, was softer than she’d remembered, sleep blurring the edges. Dark stubble sprouted across his cheek, heavier than the night before.

A dark, fine knit sweater over an open necked white shirt, dark hair, pale skin and brilliant blue eyes.  He was good looking, just as she'd remembered, lean and pale with just and edge of louche. 

I seem to have been a bit remiss with regards to Louise. She is described as being only slightly shorter than him in heels, so that makes her about 5" 6' in bare feet and Dan about 5" 10'. I'm pretty sure I've mentioned she's blonde, longish hair. Attractive, I'm sure that's mentioned, though not directly, more in his reactions to her.

Anyway, I hope that helps! Thanks for taking the time to comment.