Reviews by Cullen16
Summary: Past Featured Story

prelude

My version about what happens between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn.  Bella and Edward push the boundaries of their relationship, while Emmett, Jasper and Rosa must go abroad to keep the Volturi at bay until after the wedding.  Alice is the only person that knows everything.  B/E/Emm/APOVs.  Rated M for future chapters.  Canon.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84289 Read Count: 10852
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Restraint

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Happy Place

I wonder where the boys really went??  Did they really go hunting?

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Considerations

Emmetts story was so sad.



Author's Response:

But it ends happily... there's more of his story in another story of mine that I haven't posted here yet.  Look out for The Newborn.  I'm working to get each of my stories transferred here. Thanks for reading and writing!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Temperature

That place sounds beautiful.



Author's Response:

It is... it's modeled on hot springs I've been to near Port Angeles!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Arrival

Jasper better stay srong!!!! I love the adventure you have them going on!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Arabian Days

wow! Your a great writer! I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

THanks!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Penance

This is a really touching side to Edward, it's so sad that he did something for each person's loved one on his list(having to go over it again), but I can totally see him doing something like that and I really liked it.



Author's Response:

Thanks... this might be my favorite chapter.  It really gave me insight into Edward's character, and I was able to hear his voice much clearer after I wrote this.  Oddly, this chapter gets probably the least traffic out of any of the chapters in the story. FUnny how that works.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Arabian Nights

*tear*

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Discovery

Aro is such an ass!  They will still kick there newborn ass! I'm so happy for Jasper!!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Reversal

:) Great chapter.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Long Night Redux

"Oh, for the love of all that's holy!" lmfao

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Reunion

Poor Emmett! lmao!  He is so funny when he is supposed to not think of things!



Author's Response:

Hi Cullen16!  Thanks for reading and for all of your comments.  This was my first fan fic, and it's always nice to see new readers comment and enjoy it! m

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64225
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That was seriously so sweet when he offered to build a fort with her! sigh...   Can't wait to read EPOV!!!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm so glad they are progressing so much!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yeah.... I can see how staring at a picture of him would be grueling..... lol

Can't wait for Renee to meet him :)

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lol Great first chapter :)

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh he is forward!!  Yeah she def. needs to teach him a thing or two ;)  I like that she goes home and updates her blog.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Bella!  I hope there wont be to much more of Jake.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hahahaha! Love that he just found her on Twitter!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good thing the next chapter is already posted!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

All I have to say is I'm soooo glad that this is in EPOV! Hot!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

The ladies love the good doctor....lmao!  Yes, yes we do! 

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I love Alice and Rose conversations!  They are so funny!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

hot hot hot!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

For the emotions being everywhere, you did a great job!  So romantic and funny and sad......

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Why can't they just admit they really really love eachother! Gah! Can't wait for the ball :)

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Sigh.. I hope he did say that.  So sweet.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I really liked what Bella said about the poem and being your own person, especially the built in GPS part.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

oh shit is right!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

beautiful

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

sigh.. I have a perminately goofy grin plastered on my face while reading your story... starting to get strange looks from my husband.. lol

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

We love the smoosher! lol  Such a sad past though.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

:( I hope his grandma is ok and he goes to see her!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

How freakin cute was that! Edward is so sweet building her a fort :)

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

YAY! Carlisle!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

That was a beautiful letter, so sad and when he said he was proud of him.. sigh

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great chapter. Can't wait for them to meet!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I'm seriously about to cry!  Your story is so sweet. When he asked him to be his best man.. sigh

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Can anyone be any more perfect!

Unforeseen Events by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

ue

Banner by mimozka

Only 25 days remained until Bella would take my name and belong to me forever. Somehow, she was changing me. Somehow, I didn’t hate myself so much anymore. I was beginning to be able to accept what I was. Dealing with some other individuals was not becoming easier, however. Maybe it was just angst. I was having a hard time controlling my irritation these days.

 

 

A moment of passion becomes a fright night for Edward and Bella. Alice and Jasper are  not helpful.

Post-Eclipse, canon-based,canon pairings, vamps. Comedy/Romance.  First story in my Unforeseen Events Series of 6 books.  Rated NC-17 for some language, mature themes & lemons in some chapters. Mature content will become more explicit as this series progresses.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11444 Read Count: 9416
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2009 Updated: 11 Sep 2009
Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Charlie, No, Please! Don't Shoot Me!

omg! My stomach hurts from laughing so hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

here's a Cullen, there's a Cullen, here's a little fuzzy Cullen...

 

Hello.  Glad I made you laugh.  My mission accomplished:)  Please keep in touch.

 

 

Minibusted by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

After Alice puts a risque engagement photo of Bella & Edward in all the local papers, they attempt to lie low and avoid the gossips. 23 days before the wedding, BD, canon-based.

A Sequel to “Unforeseen Events”. Please read UE first or this will not make any sense:)

Rated NC-17 for sexuality and some language. Lemons in some chapters.

To learn what kind of 1910's slang Edward might use, go to www.alphadictionary.com/slang

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14139 Read Count: 4945
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2011 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Confronting the Scandal

I really loved all the family moments! I'm so happy that they are all going to get along now! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)  I always wanted more family moments.  Having the time of my life writing these, so get used to having me around for a while:)

 

xo

Summary:

utv

 

Banner by mimozka

Bella and I were now being babysat at every moment. Alice had peeked, five days earlier, and had Seen... distressing things. I couldn't even kiss Bella these days without having Alice and company show up to remind us that we couldn't get carried away.

 

The fallout was threefold. One, we were dangerously horny. Two, we were nervous wrecks. Three, we were Bridezilla and Groomzilla We were no longer behaving in our accustomed fashion. We were nuts.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11110 Read Count: 5575
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2009 Updated: 18 Sep 2009
Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Worse Than Charlie

I'm really enjoying your story :)  Your a great writer!



Author's Response:

Thanks, hon.  Keep reading:)

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Revelations

That was so heartbreaking when he was crying out for her!



Author's Response:

Poor Edward.  He loves her so, and himself so little.  But that's going to change, as the couple learns to communicate better.

Summary:

This is an outtake from Prelude, about the last whole night Bella and Edward spend together before the wedding.  It can be read on its own, but otherwise, it fits between chapters 22 and 23 of Prelude.  They've been testing Edward's limits, now how far will they go before they get married?

tln

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10354 Read Count: 1676
[Report This] Published: 09 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

The image of them and the storm raging outside is just beautiful.  You have a gift, thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

And thanks for writing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner for TFICF

Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Decisions

Yay! I can't wait till they meet!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

Yes!  Keep going with this story!  It's beautiful.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

That got my heart rate up!

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow.. that was the hottest first chapter I have read!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved the chapter... curious about the Jake comment... I hope she isn't currently dating him.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Carlisle seeing Edward leave her room was pretty funny!  I'm glad the chapter ended with them going to work things out :)

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Noo! Jacob and kate!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

:(  I hope Bella answers soon! Edward should go see her!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

*sigh* Edward is so perfect.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I usually wouldn't go for that kind of thing but that was HOT!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Daddyward so sweet :) and of course Carlisle!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm seriously about to cry!  Kate is such a bitch!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This is so sad!  I hope they find her soon!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Really good chapter!

Prenuptual Posturing by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

There are 3 days remaining until the wedding, and houseguests are driving Edward and Bella mad. Fourth book in the Unforeseen Events Series.  Rated NC-17 for mature themes and lemons.  All our favourite canon characters, taken in a slightly AU direction.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62357 Read Count: 12033
[Report This] Published: 05 Oct 2019 Updated: 10 Nov 2009
Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sleepover At Charlie's

*sigh* so cute!



Author's Response:

Nothing like a little 'condoned' E & B snuggle, is there:D

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Madhouse

lmfao!  Seriously the funniest thing I have read in soooo long!



Author's Response:

Ah.  My mission in life accomplished.

 

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Rehearsing

lmfao!  Love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)  I've been trying to figure out how to get away with drawing a picture of this.  *snickers evilly*

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Seriously love you!!  Your writing is amazing and I love your series!  Can't wait for "Toasty Warm"!



Author's Response:

Oh, thanks so much for the kind words.  Stay tuned.  Promise the next one will start going up today.