Luv'n the "momma needs a new pair of high heels." It was a much needed line, to break the tension in my shoulders from all the violence! Your story brings awareness to readers, the devastating truth that women and children suffer, this type of abuse in the sick underworld of sexual slavery. This evil has no prejudice to whom it consumes as victims, including boys and men. Without question, the detailed scenes are painfully brutal to read. I quickly skimmed thru the first several chapters. However, i admire your bravery & determination to make it known just how ugly any form of abuse is. It is an eye opener of how this disgustingly cruelty exists. Closer to us than some of us would like to think of. Not only do men, but women, also committ these evil, horrible violent crimes. Sadly, more often than not, they were subjected to the same abuse. It is a vicious circle. I believe, 1 out of 3 females has experienced a form of sexual abuse. Is it a possibility to post a summary of the first ten chapters?

Wow, i wasn't expecting Bella's reaction. Edward having a a blast with Mike was gruesome, yet kinda funny. The details were gross, but hey that's what reading fiction is about, hoping this doesn't really happen in the real world. But, having heard many stories from law enforcement friends and family, shit like this happens, maybe not the same scenerio here, but similar crimes that are just as crazy. It just doesn't make the news because people would go into hysteria. Just like Y2K, etc. Swear half the population is crazy in one way or another in this world. Damn that was very creative, Mrs. S. King, lol!

Daddy Edward, that's so fuck hot! Great story of a father's love, dedication and determination to raise his little girl. Def think he has Bella as that "type" of girl wrong. She just can't resist him. I'm guessing she's only been w/Jacob. I like how you had Kate as his booty call. Poor Tanya has a rep as a whore in most stories, ha. Good detailed, heart warming, and the plot is fun to read. This is on my fav list. Thanks for the story!

That was intense. This is getting real good and i feel like biting my nails, nervous and anxious for what is coming up next. I am not a nail biter either, i think it's disgusting, but damn i am tempted. Now i finally understand why some peeps can't stop it!