I absolutely loved the story, it had everything a good story should have to keep readers coming back for more.  I loved that you write the characters with flaws and all everything isn't rainbows and butterflies but in the end their love held them together.  Now I'm not saying I don't enjoy stories that are all rainbows and butterflies occasionally but what you had with this story was perfect, they grew together they made mistakes they pissed each other off they laughed they cried and they did it together because they realized they are stronger together than apart.  Like I said perfect!  I can't wait to see what you have in store for them in the sequel!