Date: 01 Jul 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope he admits everything too!
Author's Response:
Now that is the million dollar question...LOL Thank you for reading!
Date: 01 Jul 2015 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm so glad they're going to talk, they need to. They can't dance around any more.
Author's Response:
The conversation will be pretty intense. The chapter is pretty much written, but there are so many moving parts that I feel that I need to take my time tweaking it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2015 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 22
Omg awesome please post the next chapter soon sitting on edge of bed waiting
Author's Response:
Thank you! The next chapter is pretty much done, but it's complicated so I am really taking my time editing it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01 Jul 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
So glad to get this update. I am wondering if Bella will walk in on Edward and Alice in a compromising situation. Lol. Glad that Edward and Bella are going to finally talk.
Author's Response:
LOL I have a few things up my sleeve on that front, believe me! I'm glad that you are enjoying the story so far. I hope to post the next chapter soon.
Date: 01 Jul 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
Can't wait to read more!!😎😉
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope to post soon!
Date: 30 Jun 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoying this story and was so excited to see an update! Can't wait unto these two finally sit down and have some frank discussions, so they can really get to know each and really start to explore a deeper relationship. Looking forward to next chapter! Thanks for your hard work on this!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I know that this is a very difficult story line, so I am glad that people can appreciate it's uniqueness. Thank you for reading!
Date: 29 Jun 2015 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
I want you to feel appreciated. Love the story. Thanks
Date: 29 Jun 2015 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Edward
Author's Response:
OOh, he will be just fine. Thanks for reading!
Date: 28 Jun 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad I found this story. Great begining!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Can’t wait to read your reaction to the next chapters.
Date: 24 Jun 2015 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to see how Edward and Bella's relationship is going to progress.
Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you are enjoying it. I am working on the next chapter as we speak. Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 08 Jun 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love it so far and cant wait to read more! Hope you can update again soon.
Author's Response:
I'm so happy that you are enjoying it. The next chapter is already done, I'm just tweaking it a bit. Thanks for reading!
Date: 08 Jun 2015 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
For some reason chapters 1 thru 9 are missing. ;( from the reviews I'm missing a lot of the citrusy goodness. ;(. Can you try reposting them?
Author's Response:
Hi there...Yeah, you are definitely missing out on some serious citrusy. I'm sorry that you are having difficulty. I just logged onto the site and I was able to view each chapter with no problem. Try logging out and logging back in to see if that works.
Date: 02 Jun 2015 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wrong chapter posted, or just reposted for tech reasons?
Will look forward to the next one! T
Author's Response:
It was just reposted for tech reasons. I hope to update soon! Thank you for reading!
Date: 28 May 2015 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 21
James! Whata rat bastard. And yes Lawward is sexy sexy sexy.
Author's Response:
I know! James is a serious piece of work. I love lawward myself! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 28 May 2015 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 21
I love it!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 28 May 2015 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
TThanks for giving us Edward's POV with what happened with Jacob.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you appreciated it. Sometimes, both sides need to be told even if it seems redundant. Thank you for reading!
Date: 28 May 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
OMGosh! Bless Bella's heart. That is awful what happens to Vicky. I did not know that she died. I wonder if we will ever find what where James went with his little girl and how his life turned out.
Author's Response:
I know! It was a horrible situation for someone so young to have been apart of. I do plan on adding James' fate to a later chapter. Thank you so much for always letting me know what you think! I means a alot to me!
Date: 25 May 2015 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oops I meant..add more chapters, darn tiny keyboard..lol
Author's Response:
Hi there...Yes, I plan on adding more chapters soon. As a matter of fact, I just sent them to my Beta for review. I hope to have them published soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 25 May 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great story...are you going to add more chaters?
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2015 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow! I love this Edward.. can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Me too! There is nothing sexier than an intelligent man! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 15 May 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am so proud of Bella. Glad she got to beat the shit out of him. Lol. Glad Edward showed uPlease and was there for her.
Author's Response:
I can honestly say that this is one of my favorite chapters to date. I love this crazy pair! Thank you so much for reading.
Date: 15 May 2015 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved reading the Flashback of Edward's 1st time with the girls. Why are Bella's tires flat and who is she talking to. So glad I can go on to the next chapter. Loving this story.
Date: 13 May 2015 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love this story, I hope you will continue with it. Thank you for writing it you are very talented please let me know if you will continue with this story ryantc@bellsouth.net
Thanks again
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! To answer your question, yes, I plan on continuing this story until the very end. The next chapter is written, but I am still tweaking it. I hope to get it done soon.
Date: 13 May 2015 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Glad Bella was some what honest with Rose and Alice. I understand why Bella is scared about them being friends. But when she says things like "who would want someone like me for their best friend". Whay does that say about Leah??? Loving this story.
Author's Response:
I know, but as you know she's a confused little thing. She will get it together. They both will. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 08 May 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am glad that Edward and Bella are more open to try and see where their friendship" can go.
Author's Response:
I think that any sucessful relationship should have a strong foundation of friendship. Thanks again for reading.
Date: 05 May 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
Jake is such a jerk. I am glad that she didn't let him ruin her evening. Loved the story about Mike Newton. Lol
Author's Response:
Yeah, Jake is definitely a piece of work. I always felt that Mike was hilarious in the Twilight movies, so I added a little bit of that to my story as well.
Date: 02 May 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
They are definitely comfortable with each other. They are kind of like swingerz. People who change partners. Lol
Date: 02 May 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
Glad Leah talked a little sense into Bella. Can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response:
Bella definitely needs someone like Leah in her life. She grounds Bella in ways that few people can. Thanks for reading!
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
They both have it bad for each other. It's a losing battle
Date: 28 Apr 2015 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
You seem to think fellatio applies to both men and women. Oral sex on a woman is cunnilingus.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the clarification.
Date: 23 Apr 2015 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
LOVED the story about Edward. Lol. So glad the evening went so good for them.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you liked it. I thought that it was important to show that they all have a genuine friendship as well as the kink. Lol
Date: 23 Apr 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
Boy when they finally have sex they are liable to brare each other from fucking so hard. Lol. There is lots of sexual tension between them.
Author's Response:
Oh their time together will be epic, believe me! Lol
Date: 22 Apr 2015 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
You are so bad to end this chapter like this. Lol. But I am so happy that I can go on to the next chapter and don't have to wait for an update.
Date: 21 Apr 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for telling us how it all began. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
You are very welcome. I thought that it was important to explain that so that it makes sense. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
Finally, they are going out. Can't wait to see how they find out about each other's sex per fences.
Author's Response:
It will be interesting to see how you respond to the rest of the story. Thank you for reviewing each chapter as you read. i really appreciate it.
Date: 16 Apr 2015 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
Bella has plans with Paul, so dies that mean that Edward is out of luck? How did Bella, Leah, and Paul all get hooked up together?
Author's Response:
That whole situation will be explained in a later chapter.
Date: 16 Apr 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
I had to laugh at Alice and Emmett. Lol
Date: 15 Apr 2015 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Orgies, everywhere. Lol
Date: 15 Apr 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Rose and Alice are some sex machines. Lol
Date: 14 Apr 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
I can't believe that they openly share. Worder when Edward gets with Bella if he will want to share.
Date: 14 Apr 2015 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
So Edward and his best friends share. I guess Paul and Leah share Bella. Very interesting.
Author's Response:
I thought so too. LOL Thank you so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2015 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love your story can not wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really appreciated it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really appreciated it.
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2015 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
That was mean... u left us hanging!! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Lol...I will make it up to you by reviewing soon. Thanks for reading!
Date: 24 Feb 2015 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
Im glad you brought up the issues between them, it makes it more real.
Author's Response:
I felt that it was only right to do so. I don't want to give off the impression that a lifestyle like this is easy by any means. I had to show the back story and how it some fine tuning to get to where they are now. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 23 Feb 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you, great chapter, T
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad that you are enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2015 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
Are these two ever gonna get together cause edward and bellas whining is getting old it is about time they started telling each other about their needs and how they feel about each other
Author's Response:
They will eventually, but you'll need to be patient. You have to understand that they are both under the impression that they are falling for someone who has traditional relationship beliefs. Most people find what they do to be unacceptable, and they know this. Personally, I would find it very hard to broach the subject for fear of rejection, especially with someone who I really want. This is not a simple, 'I like you, do you like me?' scenario. It's very complicaated, and I have to showcase this struggle because it is a very real and obvious concern. Your frustration is quite comical to me because my characters end up having a similar discussion. This only means that I am setting things up the way the way that I am supposed to! LOL Thank you so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2015 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love your story can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I will try to update soon!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2015 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hurry up and post!!! :) I can't wait to read what's next
Author's Response:
LOL! I will definitely try. The next chapter is with my beta as we speak. It would be too cruel to keep my loyal readers in suspense too long.
Date: 22 Feb 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward to the rescue!
Author's Response:
You better believe it baby! LOL Thank you so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh my gawd!!! I have never read a story like this and I am soon hooked!!! More soon please!!! I'm sure we haven't seen the last of Jake...and I'm beginning to wonder about James as well! Please update again soon....I so need more!!!
Author's Response:
I'm so gladthat you are enjoying this story. I do have a few tricks up sleeve. Stay tuned! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love your story can not wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reaching!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2015 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
What a work out Edward!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
I KNOW IT BEEN BUSY .YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER PLZ UPDATE SOON
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I will try to get a schedule for updating down for the new year!.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is freaking unbelievable and I mean that in a good way. I cant wait for Bella and Edward to hook up and reveal their lifestyles to each other. I just wonder if Bella start hooking up with the new gang what will happen with he old gang.
Author's Response:
Now you'll just have to keep reading to find out. Lol Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
Awww man.... I'm a newbie, but I have enjoyed every moment of this dirty little tale. Can't wait for the next one, I'm dying to find out all the secrets and for Bella and Edward to get together.
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you are enjoying this story. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 25 Oct 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm new to your work. Been enjoying it very much. I'm hoping the story will start to pick up now that B&E konw how they each feel.
i see a threesome with the ladies happening...
Author's Response:
A three some could definitely be in the cards but I haven't decided yet. We shall see. Thanks for reading. I really appreciate it!
Date: 25 Oct 2014 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
Just found you, read straight through. Love love love this. Had to attack my husband in his sleep last night.
Author's Response:
Lololol! I'm glad that you are enjoying this story so far in more ways than one. Thanks for reading!
Date: 21 Oct 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm ready for some BellaXEdward action--that's why I read these stories!
Author's Response:
Lol! You must be patient. It will happen eventually. Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Oct 2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yay!!! So glad your back! Can't wait to the next update!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 18 Oct 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
So so so excited to see an update for this story! It is bummer that real life has been so crazy for you. I hope it calms down so you can keep going with this story. It is getting really good, and I can't wait for Edward and Bella to really get to know each other better and figure out how similar they really are! Really hoping to see another update soon!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing. I hope to finish the next chapter soon!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
yes yes yes bring it on i have waited so long i want bella and edward together and you are writing again thank you so much
Author's Response:
I'm sorry for the wait and thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love this story. Hope there Will be more chapters...
Date: 14 Aug 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
Please update soon! I can't wait, I am so addicted.
Date: 09 Aug 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
amazing story! hot hot hot you have an amazing style of writing can't wait till you update again!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
seriously after all that you tease us with him wanting to be friends what is wron gwith your guy such a loser he better do better nxt chaper or i am giving up on edward i was liking the story
Author's Response:
If you feel that Edward is a loser by trying to take things slowly and not seduce his way into Bella's life and make the situation worse, then you have missed something truly fundamental about his character. Perhaps you should move on to another story that doesn't upset you so much.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great updates!! I was so excited to see the new chapters because I was afraid you might not continue the story. I am really enjoying this, although I am anxious for some yummy Edward/Bella action, and for them to realize just how alike they are. Can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 06 Jun 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
Their sexual frustration is making me frustrated
Date: 04 May 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
When will Bella and Edward come clean with each other? Please update soon! Love it!
Author's Response:
It's going to take a little while, but it will be worth the wait. I hope to post the next chapter this week or next week. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
im dying here are you gona update soon i really want bella and edward together
Author's Response:
LOL! Patience dear one, it will come. Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Apr 2014 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
please continue this story!! i'm really enjoying it and keep refreshing to look for updates. please update soon and continuously! thank you
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you are enjoying it! I hope to add the next chapter some time next week. Thanks for reading!
Date: 14 Apr 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
Cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
I am glad that you are enjoying the story. Thank you for reading!
Author's Response:
I am glad that you are enjoying the story. Thank you for reading!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
Don't do it Bella! Please don't tell me she will hurt Edward! She will just hurt herself! Please update soon!
Author's Response:
I will try to update as soon as I can. Thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
I just found this story and was dying laughing during the green face and hair part so so funny. I can't wait to see how it continues from here. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reading. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story so far.
Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
This story has become my guilty pleasure. ;-)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I appreciate that support!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I appreciate that support!
Date: 12 Apr 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
so this is a free for all sex club
Author's Response:
For the most part, yes but instead of welcoming in strangers, they keep it solely within their group of friends only. Thanks for reading!
Date: 11 Apr 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
This story is so good! It is more than collection of sex scenes. The heart and the way your characters look inward to figure things out,elevates it beyond simple erotica. The scene at the table when the tale about Edward's hair was told actually brought me to tears because I was laughing so hard. I do have question. Is there an "ETA" on when Bella and Edward are going to figure out each other's likes? I have no problem with your multi partner story line. Personally, I'm just tired of the Bella and Paul sex. It feels like they are almost monogamous because they have so much. It could just be my desire to see Bella and Edward happy and together that makes me not want Paul to have that much access to her that he is bending her over the sink first thing in the morning. That should Edward's perogative. LOL! Again this is good story and I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your indepth review. To show my appreciation, I will give you some insight into my intentions for this story. Sooner or later, the truth is going to come out, but I honestly cannot tell you how soon that is going to happen. I know exactly how it's going to come out and how it will all come together, but that will not happen for a while, and I ask that you bear with me. Right now, I am building the foundation of Edward and Bella's romantic relationship in the most traditional of ways. It has to be strong because I feel these two characters deserve nothing less. I'm sure the slow burn is probably driving most of the readers crazy, but it will all be worth the wait. Other situations are going to come up that I hope will intrigue people enough to hang in there. That's all I'll say. Feel free to ask me questions and I will try to answer them without giving anythig away. LOL Thank again for reading!
Date: 11 Apr 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
Enjoying your story! It will be interesting to see how long it takes Edward and Bella to realize they are more alike than they think! :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really appreciate it.
Date: 11 Apr 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
Can't wait for Bella's reaction
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 11 Apr 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
MORE MORE MORE!!!
Author's Response:
Will do! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love your story ,can't wait for the dinner.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm very pleased that you are enjoying it!
Date: 11 Apr 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awesome chapter! Thanks for the quick updates keep it up please! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Most of the chapters that I posted were already uploaded on the fanfiction website, so I am just uploading them here as well.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it! Emmett cracks me up. What position was she in to cause him to cry like a baby? Keep it coming!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you are enjoying it. Alice is extremely flexible, add in strong kegel muscles and that is what poor Emmett had to. He had been a bad boy and needed to be punished. He cries but secretly he loves it. LOL Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love it can not wait for more chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad that you are enjoying it so far.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
I just found your story last night and I love it. Keep up the great work!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am really glad that you are enjoying it.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am confused! Emmett is wih Rose but Edward is fucking her and Emmett isok with it. Jasper is with alice yet he wants Edward to come help service her and everyone is ok with the free fucking going on....really!
The story started out pretty good but all the interscrewing is a bit much for me and my liking. Yet the story did capture me to read the whole chapter..good.
Wish you the very best with this story.
Thanks, Janis
Author's Response:
In the summary, it does say multiple partners so there is a warning there for those who do not fancy a story like this. I would have added more to that, but the way this site is set up, it did not allow me to do so. In essence, they are all swingers so it's really not all that confusing that they are okay with their partners being with other people. They trust each other and they only keep the relations within their small group. Sorry that this is not your cup of tea.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
I cant wait until they get together! Thanks for the quick update but im greedy like all your other readers so please update as soon as you can. Thank you for the two chapters!
Author's Response:
LOL! Thank you! I have several chapters done and I am in the process of uploading them all. Thanks for reading!
Date: 10 Apr 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love the story!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I'm glad to hear it!
Date: 10 Apr 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
This is great! Please update asap ;-)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am in the process of uploading all that I have done so far.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
YOUR "OFF" TO A GREAT START!! THAT'S FOR SURE.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I'm glad that you are enjoying it.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
Damn! When will they finally give in? Please update soon! l LOVE IT!:)
Author's Response:
It's going to be a long road, but they will get there eventually. There would be absolutely no fun in getting them there too quickly, no wwould it? ;) LOL I'm glad you are enjoying it. I have several chapters that are already done, and I will upload them soon. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
Holy crow this is something
Author's Response:
Yes, it is one hell of a sticky situation. Thank you so much for reading!