[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter-35: Let’s Create New Memories, Baby!
I love these two. I am so glad that they are moving forward and communicating a little better. They need to open up to each other more. They also need to talk to the parents. What they did was wrong, but they need to work toward forgiveness. They love their parents too much not to make amends.
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They will, trust me. ;)
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Ann
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2014 11:18 AM Title: Chapter-35: Let’s Create New Memories, Baby!
Good luck! I love the story as well:)
Author's Response:
Thanks and thank you for the review.
It's always great to know someone loves my crazy story. :)
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Ann
Date: 23 Jun 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter-35: Let’s Create New Memories, Baby!
awww for Em feeling guilty. Silly Boy. Glad she is accepting her beauty to herself and E. Don't blame E for being mad for the lies of ommission. But they do need to listen to the 'rents at some point. Great date.
oooh for they getting warmed up!!!. yey for snuggling
Author's Response:
More snuggling time coming right up.
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Ann
Date: 23 Jun 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life
Smart with the necklace. Between hand washing and gloves, its smarter to put on a chain. their texting is cute.
Uh oh. Wonder if this video thing is going to backfire. hmmm sounds like Esme and Renee have some things to answer.
Author's Response:
The answer is coming up soon. :)
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Ann
Date: 23 Jun 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter-33: Halloween Horror Stories
aww sounds like everyone is coming along nicely. E needs to get off the pot soon. They need date nights or 20 questions nights or something.
Aww for Candy Batman. Glad she told him about Jake. And he about Skankya.
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Date: 23 Jun 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter-32: Two L-Words
hmmm nice dream.
Em has apoint. Aww for him being in luv too.
Ang is such a sweetie.
Author's Response:
I thought you might like the dream. ;)
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Ann
Date: 23 Jun 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter-31: Who the Fuck is Ian?
ooh E being standofish in the romance dept, insulting her truck, and Aunt Flo gonna visit....you're going to be lucky to be alive soon.
Chocolate and Ian works. LOL for jealous E. ROFLMFAO over tampons.
Author's Response:
Chocolate and Ian works for me too. ;)
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[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter-30: What? How? WOW!
jeez Renee has no filter or sense of propriety.
their texts are too cute.
Glad they stopped but she didn't go cookoo.
Author's Response:
That's classic Renee for you, I think. ;)
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Ann
Date: 22 Jun 2014 10:16 AM Title: Chapter-21: Back to Square One
It isn't Alice I hate, it's Bella! But Edward is not really standing up for himself and being a man...but Bella is still a bitch! In my opinion, just saying.
Author's Response:
LOL. Like I said, keep on reading please. :)
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Ann
Date: 22 Jun 2014 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 20: Time for Drunken Dancing!
I just started this story tonight and I really love it! They have both been thrown into an almost impossible position and are seriously lacking in the communication department. And not one of them is more at fault than the other, but man, Bella is a fucking bitch. She overreacts, flies of the handle, and makes almost every situation worse. She needs to watch herself or she will lose Edward.
Author's Response:
First thank you for reading my crazy story and actually liking it! :)
Yes, she's a bitch or brat, or maybe both. But if you continue with the reading, you'll see how much her character grows up throughout this.
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Ann
Date: 22 Jun 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter-21: Back to Square One
Bella sure is a brat.
Author's Response:
Because that's what I intended her to be. But if you continue with the story you'll see she's becoming more matured with each chapter. :)
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Ann
Date: 21 Jun 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter-29: A Little Piece of Me
oooh birthday/anniversary. Gives him some ideas I bet.
She's way to worried about what others think.
Like seeing the insight to her life. ROFL for the Royce stunt.
nooo sleeping in separate houses isn't going to bode well I bet with the parents. Gun Range...LOL.
Author's Response:
I loved writing about her life and Rose and Bella's friendship. :)
The gun range was just a last minute idea. So I'm glad it made you laugh. :D
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Ann
Date: 21 Jun 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter-28: The Geek and His Nerd
aww for Mr Geek and Mrs Nerd. Glad she finally got him to tell her about that night. I like those bands too. Can do without the poppy girls singers though. lol.
Loved their banter in the kitchen.
oooh B's birthday. Can't wait to see what he comes up with.
Author's Response:
Those are actually my favorite bands... :D
The poppy girls... sometimes good for setting the mood but that's it. My RL bff forces me to listen to those so... I have to endure. :P
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Ann
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 27: Who Said First Dates Should Be Awkward?
awww for giddy B. Good advice from Rose and Jazz. Gotta love Rose's big sis/BFF threat.
Flowers were a sweet touch. ROFL for her messing with the waitress. SHe does need to quit jumping to conclusions.
Author's Response:
Rose's threat is what makes her my favorite character here. :)
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Date: 21 Jun 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter-35: Let’s Create New Memories, Baby!
FINALLY!! SOMETHING THAT SAYS... HEY THEIR NOT TEENYBOPPRES THEY ARE TRUE BLUE GROWN ASS ADULTS. MARRIED ADULTS. DUH!!! READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
I thought you might appreciate this one. ;)
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Ann
Date: 21 Jun 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 26: Lonely Beds and Miserable Hearts
awww E is so sweet. Glad the parent brunch went well. LOL for overprotective brothers.
Esme is sush a sweetie.
Ugh James needs to find a new profession. awww B needs to find a little courage. Maybe he's scared because of how she blew up about the sex thing. Good advice from Rose.
Ugh those two need to communicate. ACK. Don't blame E for being pissy with his Dad.
lol for his verbal Diaheria. Yey for date!!!
Author's Response:
I know! I was so damn happy that I could get these two to this point. :D
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Ann
Date: 21 Jun 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter-35: Let’s Create New Memories, Baby!
Best of luck . That was a wonderful chapter they are coming together.
Author's Response:
Thanks and thank you for reviewing. :)
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
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Ann
Date: 21 Jun 2014 8:48 AM Title: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life
Why didnt they tell them about there past with each other???
Author's Response:
That will be revealed in due time. Have a little patience. :)
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Ann
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter-35: Let’s Create New Memories, Baby!
Thank god ... relief at last!
Author's Response:
LOL! I can practicall hear Edward say those words... or at least his balls saying them. :P
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Ann
Date: 20 Jun 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?
lol for Ms Drool. aww for Ms Rosie liking Em. Rose is right and B is in denial.
Author's Response:
Haha... :P
Rose is usually right in this story, because she's my favorite character to write about. :)
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Ann
Date: 20 Jun 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 24: Decepticons Prepare for Battle
LOVE me some Criminal minds....Moore and Gray, yumminess.
Dessert (including drinks) isn't dessert unless its chocloate in some form.
I think the separate rooms was and is a reasonable request. Esme would understand. Think its stupid to fake it. Things will be more awkward then.
While I think she should contribute to the bills, since she is doing all the cooking, I think 70/30 would be reasonable. Ah well who cares what I think. LOL
You should listen to your logical brain woman. The ring on a necklace would be smart. My ex did it all the time. Between hand washing and gloves on and off constantly, it was a recipie for loss (he's an RN).
aww for pouty E. Em is too sweet sometimes though.
Author's Response:
Sigh... me too... Gray is the yummier one though... ;)
She's just making excuse to not wear it publicly yet. Because, if Angela can wear her ring at work, then so can Bella.
I love writing Em and Rose in this story. :)
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Ann
Date: 20 Jun 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 23: Tentative Friendships
Glad the chief is backing E. Em makes some valid points about the marriage.
Glad they are talking things out FINALLY. aww for the his sweet words and the coffeemaker.
Rose and Jazz are too funny. yey for being back to hugging.
mmm parents coming to town huh? I'm guessing they are going to hide the separate bedrooms and friends part.
Author's Response:
I told you he's adorable. :)
Girl, another bang on guesswork!
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Ann
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter-35: Let’s Create New Memories, Baby!
So good to see them finally moving forward but they still are hiding too much from each other. I do hope the talks with the parents will enlighten them another degree.
Author's Response:
It will... just hold on a bit longer. :)
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The next chapter should be up on next Friday.
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Ann
Date: 20 Jun 2014 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 22: Eruption of Bella-vius
ugh Skankica and Whoren make thing difficult for us non-skanky women.
Childish, but I had to laugh at Bella's tripping. Ugh between Newton and the skank twins, Bella is going to go insane.
they are both bi polar I swear.
Author's Response:
OOOhhh.. love your names... Skankica and Whoren... lol. :P
I intended to make you laugh with that so... mission accomplished. :D
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Ann
Date: 20 Jun 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter-21: Back to Square One
oh Alice, ya'll do need to meddle a little before Bella just walks out completely.
E and Em are gonna have a cow if Alice moved in with Rose and Jazz.
aww for Rose and Em getting together. Glad Ali realizes that they were all wrong to push this wedding thing. Wonder if she'll tell the 'rents?
Author's Response:
She's gonna back off and let them take the wheels which is a big change for Alice. I hope you liked the shoe threat. ;)
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Ann
Date: 20 Jun 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 20: Time for Drunken Dancing!
Those two really need to have a convo over what they both really want.
Ugh Drunk Bella isn't going to turn out well I think. lol at least drunk B is hilarious. hmm wonder if she'll remember this in the am. He was right to stop her though.
Author's Response:
He's a gentleman at heart... most of the times. ;)
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Date: 20 Jun 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 19: Truce?
awww for Mr Pouty. Silly girl needs to let the man drive her. He's trying to be nice for a change.
Co-Exist indeed. Those two are too hilarious. Ya know if you got a keurig, you could make tea & coffee. Love mine.
The texts are a nice way to keep in contact. co-exist..... that has me thinking. Wonder when the mom's will start asking/bugging about grandkids.
Well At least they aren't yelling at each other at work or home. lol Wonder who gives in first and kisses the other?
Tornado Alice is a force of hyperactive nature.
Author's Response:
He's gonna kill you with his adorableness, I promise. ;)
I hope you're enjoying the read.
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Ann
Date: 20 Jun 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 18: Nosey Pantoprazole Lover
Em is so crude. I actually think its smart that they don't jump to the physical right off. THey both need to get to know each other....and not yell at each other so much. Space huh? not a good idea since she's prob gonna take it as rejection.
Actually staying away for the night was prob smart so they could both cool down.
ok if Lauren is a nurse and doesn't know that ibuprofin is Advil, she needs another job. Scary.
Oh e.....you are digging yourself a HUGE hole. Poor B. He is really being a wanker. While she needs to be tactful, he was completely in the wrong with his insinuations. She forgives too easily.
Author's Response:
Em's crudeness is to apease my pervy mind. :P
His comments will be explained later.
Ed's still clueless. But he'll come in line soon .:)
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Ann
Date: 20 Jun 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 17: Strike Two
cereal and omelets? I usually have one or the other.....if I eat breakfast. LOL
oooh wont they both be surprised when she gets to work.
hmm So he has a thing about females in medicine huh? He's in for a rude awakening. Why should she have notified the hospital when it just happened. Why couldnt he have done it?
Glad she like Ang. I've always liked her character. ok lying by ommission??? You knew he was a Dr, you could have asked. Did you tell him where you worked? But I can understand her reluctance to tell people yet. But she was out of line picking a fight over that, but so was he about the name thing
Author's Response:
Skipping breakfast is not a good thing to do. Trust me, I suffered because of this. :(
He doesn't necessarily have anything against females in medicine. He just doesn't like that female nurses and as such like to stare at his hot ass. ;) :P
I like Ang's character as well. :)
Like I said, they have a lot of growing up to do.
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Ann
Date: 20 Jun 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 16: Grocery Shopping and Cereal Boxes
Guess its going to be awhile before they are comfortable around each other.
Rose is too funny. oh Bella you are in denial. The boy wants you. Take a look at his pants sometime. LOL
wow Em is a real man whore huh? Crude seems to be his middle name.
Babybel. LOL. Oh E you two and the snarkiness of you both is gonna make this a long road. He does seem to shift moods quickly, but she is quick to anger/judgement too.
Too silly arguing over cereal.
Author's Response:
LOL! I like your pants comment. :P
They both have a lot of growing up to do.
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Ann
Date: 20 Jun 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter-15: Who The Hell Doesn’t Like Coffee?
I prefer tea myself. LOL The food was nice to give her options. She did overreact about that part though. I agree that they should have been allowed to get to know each other first. I still don't get what the rush was.
Well they've progressed to hugging. LOL
Author's Response:
I had a long discussion with one of my friend when I wrote this chapter. It was about merits and demerits of tea and coffee. :P
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Ann
Date: 20 Jun 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 14: Step Into My Life
oooh these two have a long way to go. Alec was too cute.
Author's Response:
Indeed, they do.
Thanks... I enjoyed writing Alec's part. :D
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Ann
Date: 19 Jun 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter-13: Seriously… who are you?
Lying to your bride right after appologizing for being an arse is so not the way to start dude.
ugh why was billy invited. What a wanker.
aww Poor Jazz. Em and E need to be nice.
hmmm horny E appears. kinda hope B makes him wait a bit. LOL for her shoving the garter low and Rose threatening E was hilarious.
Author's Response:
He's totally clueless, isn't he? :P
Sorry, I had to put Billy there. He was the one to introduce the concept of Jake in Ed's mind.
Don't worry. I promise you, by the time you get to the current chapter, you'd be worrying about E getting bluballs. :P
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Ann
Date: 19 Jun 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter-12: Married to… who, now?
lol for thinking its a dream. I was hoping for a slap or an anfry "you!!!" moment. Ah well. Mabye later.
oooh he forced the kiss?? sooo not cool.
Wow she is a pushover. E really needs to answer for being an arse. I get why he was but it was really NOT cool at all. He deserved to get yelled at.
So is she taking his name or is she going to hyphenate it or use swan at the hospital to keep a separate professional name?
Author's Response:
I like to be unpredictable. So, she did neither. ;)
If she was not a pushover, she'd never have agreed to an arranged marriage without even seeing the guy, right?
The name-thing is coming up soon.
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Ann
Date: 19 Jun 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter-11: It’s Happening!
oh B....that's sooooo not a good idea.
Why get a wax when you plan to sleep in a separate room for awhile? Wishful thinking?
Esme is def an angel. Em is such a goober. awww B you need a pep talk hun. but I don't blame you for being a bit put out at the whole thing.
Too bad Rose didn't insist on telling her then. ROFL for him being fucked for life. He deserves it for being an arse. LOVE IT
Author's Response:
Haha... thanks. Loving reading your reviews. :)
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Date: 19 Jun 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 10: Haunted
Well at least he admitted it to Em. Still an arse.
oooh Ian somerhalder....I'd pick Alexander Skarsgard as 1st choice though....yum
hmm so they sort of remember each other in dream land.
Author's Response:
Don't worry. He'll makeup for being an ass, later. :)
I'm not really a true blood fan but Alexander Skarsgard is definitely yummy. But I'll stick with Ian. :D
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Ann
Date: 19 Jun 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 9: Strike One
hmmm wonder what Rose is up too? hmmm why do I have the feeling the slut clothes aren't going to go over well? So is the plan for them just to meet/see each other the first time at the alter? Why weren't they at least shown pictures. If I were Bella, I'd def be suspicious.
oooh Sounds like E is going to be a wanker. Guessing he doesn;t like the "slut" clothes?
Oh E while I can understand your thought process about being faithful, you are going to regret hurting B that way.
ooooh E really has a chop on his shoulder. I was waiting for her to throw the rest of the drink on him. What an ass.
Author's Response:
Trust me, he's gonna regret it. ;)
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Date: 19 Jun 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 8: Preparations for Doomsday!
I'd kill someone who woke me up that early on my day off. My kids know not to even knock before 8 and then only in an emergency. LOL
lol for the wedding Nazi party. Can't blame her for being antsy about the wedding though. She still hasn't even met him. Craziness. Why has she not guessed that the new doc starting on Monday could be E who she was told works in Seattle?!?! Wonder if she'll change her name or not?
Troll..... Oh E. Naughty Naughty.
Author's Response:
Haha... trust me, so will I. :D
Well, there are more than one hospital in Seattle. So the chance that Ed's gonna be the new doc in her hospital is coincidental really... or totally planned, by me. :P
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Ann
Date: 19 Jun 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 7: Emergency Best Friend News Alert
Still think its wayyyy too rushed, but what do I know. Loving your Rose.
hmm E and Em going to a bar. lemme guess Rose and Em meet? Fireworks or instant hatred. Guess we'll see.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I love Rose in this one as well. :)
The rush is because he's gonna start a new job so not gonna get enough vacation time soon...
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Ann
Date: 19 Jun 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 6: Pixie Inquisition
Don't blame her for being suspicious of Alice and her motivations.
A wedding in 1 week and they haven't even met yet? Is alice et al all insane?!?!?!
separate rooms seem reasonable. What is the rush though? ROFl for slipping in Jake's checkers remark.
Author's Response:
Congrats. You're the first one to comment on the checkers remark. :D
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Ann
Date: 19 Jun 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the In-Laws
Don't blame b for being sarcastic. I def would be. and I agree with her not dressing or making herself up special for them. Kinda wierd they aren't bringing E for the meet/greet too if you ask me.
lemme guess the mothers and alice are going to go overboard with wedding plans.
Author's Response:
Agaiin, your ability to guess is uncanny. :P
I, myself, am a sarcastic bitch. So it tends to leak out in my writing, I think. :D
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Ann
Date: 19 Jun 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 4: Resigned Acceptance
nooo Bella. No giving in that fast. Even if Charlie checked him out first. I'd agree to meet him, but that's as far as I'd go at this point.
lol for thier thoughts about what the other might be.
Author's Response:
Haha... I'm glad you're liking it so far. :)
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Date: 19 Jun 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 3: Temper Tantrums
Jeez her parents are real clueless. You think they would have learned their lesson after the Jake thing. Don't blame her for wanting to leave. Lemme guess. Edward is the new doc at her hospital and the son?
Author's Response:
You guessed correctly, my friend. :D
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Date: 19 Jun 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls
uh oh. News doesn't bode well. hmm Em or Ed for the new doc Jazz was talking about I wonder.
Author's Response:
Haha... I love a doctor Ed. So it had to be him. :D
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Ann
Date: 19 Jun 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life
Cool start. Nice that she has an apartment setup.
oh I tend to talk to the characters alot. At no point am I yelling at you. :-)
Author's Response:
LOL! Feel free to chat them up. :)
Thanks and thank you for reviewing.
Welcome to the crazy world of OTC. I hope you enjoy the ride. :)
Take care.
Ann
P.S. If you like, you can check out my other stories: Change My Mind, Radioactive Love and Yes! I think you'll like them. JS
Date: 18 Jun 2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life
THAT KINDA EXPLAINS WHY THEY CAN'T GROW UP. THEY HAVE DEEP SEEDED MOMMY AND DADDY ISSUES. HMMMM!!!! YUP! IT EXPLAINS ALOT! READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing.
A lot more explaining is about to come soon. :)
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
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Ann
Date: 18 Jun 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life
Don't really understand what just happened. Why is he mad? So they moved away when the kids were little. Happens to lots of families. Big deal.
Author's Response:
First, thanks for reviewing.
It'll be a good thing if the parents got them married because they thought they make a good match, not because of some guilt they felt for separating them in the first place. It'll be cleared up in the next few chapters. Have faith. :)
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 17 Jun 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life
i don't understand what happened - what did their parents do that was wrong? did I miss something?
Author's Response:
First, thanks for reviewing.
It'll be a good thing if the parents got them married because they thought they make a good match, not because of some guilt they felt for separating them in the first place. It'll be cleared up in the next few chapters. Have faith. :)
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 17 Jun 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life
I can't wait to see what the "Rents" excuse could possibly be....
I am glad Edward and Bella stood as a united front.. Good chapter.
Thank you for sharing with us.
Author's Response:
You're welcome. :)
Thanks for reviewing.
The next chapter should be out on Friday.
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Ann
Date: 13 Jun 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter-33: Halloween Horror Stories
Has Edward had other relationships after Tanya or is he still packing his V card to.?
Author's Response:
Now that is something you have to find out... ;)
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The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
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Ann
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2014 7:08 PM Title: Chapter-33: Halloween Horror Stories
okay, again - i love this story but the wait is killing me!!!
Author's Response:
Again... thanks a lot for reviewing. :)
Just a little bit more wait? I hope it will be worth it... I have to untangle the webs I had weaved around them first... :D
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
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Ann
Date: 13 Jun 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter-33: Halloween Horror Stories
AS I BEGAN THIS CHAPTER I REALISED... SHE HAS'NT BEEN ACTING LIKE A TEENAGER, SHE'S ACTING LIKE A TWELVE YEAR OLD!! ALICE AND JASPER ARE SEEING EACHOTHER. ROSE AND EMMETT ANNOUNCE THEIR MUTUAL AFFECTION FOR EACHOTHER ALL WHILE BELLA'S GATHERING "MENTAL NOTES" FOR WHEN SHE'S READY FOR SOMETHING MORE THAN KISSING. REALLY!!!! AND SHE DOES'NT WANT TO SOUND LIKE THE SCARED "LITTLE VIRGIN" EVEN ROSE TOLD HER TO "JUST FUCK" SO THEY REVEALED SOME PASSED HISTORY I GUESS IT MADE HER FEEL BETTER ABOUT... WHAT???? HONESTY???? WHICH ONE OF THEM HAS BEEN TRULY BEEN "HONEST" WITH THE OTHER HMMM????? IT STILL MAKES ME LAUGH WHEN SHE REFFERS TO HIM AS "HER HUSBAND" LOL! LOL! FUNNY SHIT!!! THIS CHAPTER. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Okay... I thought she was starting to act more mature than before but... :/
Anywho, thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
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Ann
Date: 11 Jun 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter-32: Two L-Words
They are so silly I wish they could get there heads out of the way and just go with there hearts.
Author's Response:
They are growing up though... bit by bit. ;)
The brick wall will crash down on them soon enough... I think. :)
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The next update should be on Friday.
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Ann
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter-32: Two L-Words
Love this story - but it needs a little more, hmm ... progress? Please?
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know. It's always great to hear that someone loves my crazy story. :)
Don't worry. Progress is coming soon... :D
Thanks for reviewing.
The next update should be on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 10 Jun 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter-32: Two L-Words
HMMM!!!! INTERESTING CHAPTER... INFORMATIVE AND ENLIGHTENING BUT LEFT A QUESTION TO BE PONDERED SO IT SEEMS. LOVE OR LUST??? THE TRUTH IS YOU CAN'T HAVE ONE WITHOUT THE OTHER WHEN IT CUMS TO FALLING IN LOVE. YOU SEE WHEN IT CUMS TO OUR FAMILY OR OUR PETS OR EVEN A GOOD BOOK WE CAN LOVE THEM WITH ALL OUR HEART BUT NEVER DO WE FEEL LUST! (OR I HOPE NOT...EWWW!!!) WHEN OUR HEARTS TAKE OVER IT'S INVOLUNTARY IT JUST HAPPENDS SURE WE CAN DECIDE AGAINST IT BUT IT DOES'NT CHANGE THE TRUE FEELING. IT DOES'NT MATTER WHICH CUMS FIRST BE IT LOVE OR LUST. YOU NEVER HAVE ONE WITHOUT THE OTHER BECAUSE IT'S WHAT DRAWS YOU TO SOMEONE. IS LUST WRONG??? ONLY IF IT'S YOUR FAMILY, YOUR PET OR A GOOD BOOK (HE HE HE) OK! OK!! I KNOW I'M A TRUE BELIEVER IN LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT. (LOL) READ YOU SOON
Author's Response:
First of all, let me join in your corus of EWWWWWWWWWWW!!! :P
I know you are a true believer. :)
These two will see the light too... soon, I hope. ;)
Thanks for reviewing.
The next update should be on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 06 Jun 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter-31: Who the Fuck is Ian?
Love it he is a good man. My husband buys things for me like that even when he was my boyfriend he said it doesnt bother him he says people now he has a women at home lol.
Author's Response:
Haha. He sounds really sweet. :)
Thanks for reviewing and sharing a bit of your life with me. This is the best part of reviews, I get to know my readers... even a little bit. :)
The next chapter should be out on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 06 Jun 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter-31: Who the Fuck is Ian?
IF YOUR MAN BUYS YOUR MONTHLY NEEDS WITHOUT BITCHING.... HE'S A KEEPER! READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Hmm, might have to keep that in mind for future references. ;)
Thanks for reviewing.
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 04 Jun 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter-30: What? How? WOW!
I absolutely loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks and thank you for reviewing. :)
The next chapter should be up by tomorrow.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 04 Jun 2014 7:51 AM Title: Chapter-30: What? How? WOW!
WAS HE TRYING TO RECAPTURE HER SWEET SIXTEEN FOR HER????? SWEET YES BUT A LITTLE ON THE IMMATURE SIDE FOR THERE AGE AND STATIS. I AGREE IT WAS A SWEET GESTURE ON HIS PART BUT C'MON SHE'S NOT A TEENY BOPPER ANYMORE IT SHOULD HAVE ENDED IN A MORE MATURE WAY. HE SEEMS TO WANT TO REGRESSS AND WORK HIS WAY BACK BUT IT'S TOO LATE IN THE GAME FOR THAT BUT THAT'S JUST ME. THE ENDING WAS A LITTLE DISAPPOINTING BUT MAYBE SOON THEY'LL REALISE THEY'RE NOT TEENAGERS ANYMORE ALTHOUGH IT IS FUN ACTING LIKE TEENAGERS ONCE IN A WHILE. (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
I am trying to make them amp up the heat but they won't listen, I swear! :P
The next chapter should be up by Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 04 Jun 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter-30: What? How? WOW!
OMG that was my favorite chapter also things are heating up love it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
I hope you continue to love it. ;)
The next chapter should be up by Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 31 May 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter-29: A Little Piece of Me
I think he is so sweet and Charlie is very happy with him.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Yes, many more sweet moments to come soon... ;)
The next chapter should be up by Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter-29: A Little Piece of Me
A BIT OF A FILLER BUT ENJOYABLE NONE THE LESS. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Yes, it was a filler but it lays the ground work for the next one. Besides, I really wanted to write a chapter showing Rosalie and Bella's school mischiefs. :)
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter will be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 28 May 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter-28: The Geek and His Nerd
SO WHY DOES EDWARD CONTINUES TO REFFER TO BELLA AS HIS WIFE IF THEY DON'T KNOW EACHOTHER VERY WELL AND SHE CONTINUES TO SEE THEM AS NOTHING MORE THAN FRIENDS???????? HMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!! (LOL) SO IS EDWARD SUPPOSE TO BUY HIS FRIEND A BIRTHDAY GIFT OR HIS WIFE? DECISIONS! DECISIONS!!!
Author's Response:
That's why I said, "Poor Edward." :P
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be out by Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 28 May 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter-28: The Geek and His Nerd
I am sooooo addicted to this story! I love the slow burn! I hope he blows her mind away for her birthday!!
Author's Response:
Yes! I have successfully made you an addict, just like moi. :P
I am glad you are loving the slow burn. I am cranking up the heat... bit by bit. ;)
Don't worry, he will blow her mind... I can gurantee it. :D
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be out by Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 27 May 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter-28: The Geek and His Nerd
How mush longer? at least first base!!!
Author's Response:
They did go first base, in chapter-27.
Just keep a little bit of patience. Remember patience is a virtue. ;)
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be out by Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 27 May 2014 8:04 PM Title: Chapter-28: The Geek and His Nerd
They are having good times with each other. what is he going to get Bella for B-day.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are. Lots of good times ahead... ;)
Don't worry about Bella's B-day... I'll think of something. I mean Edward will think of something. :P
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be out by Friday.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 27: Who Said First Dates Should Be Awkward?
I hope you will update this amazing story soon! I can't wait to see where their relationship will lead them to in the future.
Author's Response:
Aww thank you for loving this crazy story and for reviewing. :)
The next chapter will be up in a few minutes.
Enjoy and take care.
Ann
Date: 24 May 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 27: Who Said First Dates Should Be Awkward?
HMMM!!! FROM WHAT I'VE HEARD MOST FAMOUS MAKE-UP ARTIST SAY "BLUE EYESHADOW" IS THEE #1 NO NO. I LIKE DARK NAVY EYELINER BUT THAT'S JUST ME. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Meh, who cares about makeup artists? I personally am not a big fan of eyeshadows but eyeliners are a totally different matter. I have 4 dark navy ones that are NOT the same shade... despite what my mom says. :P
The next chapter should be out on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 24 May 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 27: Who Said First Dates Should Be Awkward?
That was a great first date and got to love how Bella put buttonless in her place.
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks and thanks for reviewing. :)
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2014 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 26: Lonely Beds and Miserable Hearts
Awesome chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for the review. :)
The next chapter should be up by tomorrow.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 26: Lonely Beds and Miserable Hearts
I love this story. I have it and you on my favorites, but it hasn't been showing up with updates, so I just have to keep watching to see if the chapter number goes up.
Author's Response:
Aww... thank you so much!
Well, you can find me on facebook under the name TwiAddict Anne... I post there when I update the story. You get a teaser of the upcoming chapter there the day before as well... :)
Thanks for reviewing.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 26: Lonely Beds and Miserable Hearts
IN READING YOUR AUTHORS RESPONSE AND RE-READING YOUR PROFILE THE LIGHT BULB FINALLY WENT ON. I NOW UNDERSTAND WHY I COULD'NT QUITE GRASP YOUR INTENTIONS FOR THIS STORY AND NOW I DO. IT'S BECAUSE WE VIEW LIFE IN TOTALY DIFFERENT WAYS. ME BEING FROM THE USA AND YOU BEING FROM SOUTH EAST ASIA I'M SURE WE WERE RAISED WITH DIFFERENCES NOT ONE BEING BAD OR BETTER THAN THE OTHER JUST DIFFERENT. OK.... NOW I'M GOING TO TRY TO SEE THINGS FROM YOUR POINT OF VIEW. GOT IT!!! (WELL NOW YOU KNOW I'M A HORNY PERV LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
LOL! I am constantly trying to visualize things from your point of view. But yeah, it is different in my side of the world. I tried to incorporate both sides in my writing. :)
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
P.S. I am a perv too. So no worries. Your secret is safe with me. ;)
Date: 20 May 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 26: Lonely Beds and Miserable Hearts
Thank god now all they have to do is say what is on there mind silly people lol.
Author's Response:
LOL! If asking out took 26 chapters I wonder how long that will take? :P
I'm just kidding... mostly! ;)
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 20 May 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?
still following you on here and ff.. great job.
Author's Response:
Aww... Thanks for your double support!
xoxo
Ann
Date: 17 May 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?
HMMMM!!!!THIS STORY IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES AND I LOOK FORWARD TO EACH AND EVERY UPDATE BUT IT'S ALSO THE MOST FRUSTRATING!!!!!!! I GUESS IT'S HARD FOR ME TO UNDERSTAND WHY THEY CAN'T GET PAST ACTING LIKE KIDS. I'M A TRUE BELIEVER IN "LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT" YES IT'S POSSIBLE TO FALL IN LOVE WITH ONE LOOK. YES IT'S POSSIBLE TO HAVE SEX SOMTIMES THAT FIRST DAY YOU MEET (ALTHOUGH I DID WAIT APPROX 2 MONTHS) BUT I KNOW FOR A FACT THAT LOVE CAN AND DOES HAPPEN WITH ONE LOOK. I SAW MY HUSBAND WHEN I WAS AROUND 10 OR 11 YEARS OLD AND FELT AN INSTANT CONNECTION. WE STARTED SEEING EACHOTHER (9/21/76) WHEN I WAS 15 HE ASKED ME TO MARRY HIM (10/09/76) DO THE MATH. ALMOST 38 YEARS LATER AND I STILL LOVE HIM. OK! OK! ENOUGH ABOUT ME... IT'S JUST FRUSTRATING THAT BELLA AND EDWARD CAN'T SEEM TO GET PASSED THE "BE MY FRIEND" STAGE WHEN THEY ARE ALREADY "MARRIED" (LOL) LITTLE RANT OVER...... READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
First, thank you for your review. I actually enjoy reading your little rants. :D
Second, Your RL love story made me go 'AWWW' for a few minutes. All I can say is lucky you! :)
I believe in love at first sight, but I also love to frustrate to hell out of people... including myself. ;)
I also believe friendship is the first step of falling in love. For Edward and Bella in OTC, this is a story about how they fall in love bit by bit with each passing day. So their friendship is the first step of their something more... for me.
Arranged marriages are the norm in my society and honestly, I see so many couples being together, yet not knowing each other in their whole lives. Because they are not each other's friend and I wanted to focus on that first. But things are starting to move faster in OTC now. :)
All right, I guess I ranted a bit as well, sorry! :P
The next chapter will be up of Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 17 May 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?
Oh Bella... When are you going to realize you two are perfect for each other and falling in love?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. :)
The next chapter should be up by Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 16 May 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?
She has been nailed by the arrow right in the heart and so has he they just need to stop thinking about it and go with it.
Author's Response:
Lol! You are right about that... I think. ;)
The next chapter should be up by Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 14 May 2014 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 24: Decepticons Prepare for Battle
HMMMM!!!!! CAN'T WAIT! READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. :)
I cannot tell you what's going to happen... but it's gonna be hilarious! ;)
I know I'm EVIL for making you wait. :P
The next chapter will be up by Friday.. hopefully.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 14 May 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 24: Decepticons Prepare for Battle
I love it cant wait to find out how they ended up the next morning lol. Its good thing for Alice or I dont know when they would of moved in with each other.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. :)
I cannot tell you what's going to happen... but it's gonna be hilarious! ;)
Alice is in total helping mode now. :)
The next chapter will be up by Friday.. hopefully.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 14 May 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life
Thanks for responding and yes it was a typo my Kindle just fills in words for me if I don't check. ;)
Author's Response:
You're welcome. I try to respond to every review I get. :)
I know what you mean... it gets annoying with the spelling check sometimes. :D
Date: 14 May 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 24: Decepticons Prepare for Battle
Tease! You had to stop there, didn't you?! Please update soon! I really love this story :)
Author's Response:
Yep, I'm EVIL! :P
The next chapter will be up this Friday.
Thanks for reviewing and loving my crazy story.
Take care.
xo
Ann
Date: 13 May 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 24: Decepticons Prepare for Battle
Does she not ever what to have a husband wife relationship with him? She acts so discussed by the thought of him being her husband or anyone knowing. He seems to always have to give in to her but she is always a bitch to him.
Author's Response:
First of all, thanks for reviewing.
Second, she's not disgusted (I'm assuming you had a typo there...), she's just scared of the concept of sharing her space with someone else. She's an only child so she's not used to sharing her life with someone else like this. But she's warming up to him. Just hang in there.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 13 May 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 24: Decepticons Prepare for Battle
I hope they go a little faster with their relationship.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing.
Yeah, the story's picking up speed and so is their relationship. :)
Take care.
Ann
Date: 06 May 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 23: Tentative Friendships
I AM SO GLAD EDWARD FOUND HIS BALLS AND FINALLY!! EXPRESSED HIS FEELINGS TO BELLA. NOW! THERE BEHAVING LIKE "ADULTS" LET'S HOPE IT CONTINUES. (STUDY HARD AND GOOD LUCK) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the good luck wish! :)
I am halfway through with my exam... I just have to appear for a viva voce tomorrow and then back to fic-world! :D
Oh they'll continue behaving like adults... unless some freaky idea comes into my mind... :P
But as far as I can see there's gonna be bonding time for now. :)
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter will be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 06 May 2014 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 23: Tentative Friendships
Thank god they talked love it Edward was so sweet and it was from the heart. Bella is going to have to move into there room sooner than she thought. I think it is time for snuggle time lol. Good luck in the test will be waiting for you.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the good luck wish! :)
I am halfway through with my exam... I just have to appear for a viva voce tomorrow and then back to fic-world! :D
I am glad you loved Edward's speech... I did too... ;)
BTW snuggle time is right! I actually have a pretty funny idea about that... let's see if it goes the way I want it to.
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter will be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2014 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 22: Eruption of Bella-vius
FINALLLLLYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! You know when I finished writing the chapter that's exactly what I had said! :D
Thanks for the review. :)
This chapter was sort of a stepping stone for their growth as a couple... so a lot more E/B time coming soon...
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday... hopefully.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 03 May 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 22: Eruption of Bella-vius
OK! FIRST I AM SORRY IF SOUNDED MEAN OR RUDE IN THE LAST REVIEW I TRULLY WAS'NT TRYING TO BE... I WAS FRUSTRATED WITH BELLA AND HER IMMATURITY. AS FOR THIS CHAPTER IT WAS A START IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Hey, relax. We're good! You weren't rude... I was frustrated with the last chapter myself but I swear, it wrote itself... I just needed to give them another hard push before reeling them in. I'm EVIL! :P
Yeah, this chapter was kind of a stepping stone for their growth as a couple... they're gonna have to learn how to be a part of a whole (since they both have pretty much non-existant dating history), how to communicate, how to support each other... and maybe they can even fall in love in the end! ;)
So, for the forseeable future I don't see anymore of Edward-Bella fighting... :)
The next chapter will be up on Tuesday.. hopefully.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 02 May 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 22: Eruption of Bella-vius
Thank god he took Bella by the horns lol. I am loving these two they just need to learn to talk to each other. I cant wait till everyone knows they are married
Author's Response:
Haha... nice metaphore! ;)
Thanks for the review and for letting me know you like them so far. :)
This chapter was sort of a stepping stone for their growth as a couple... so a lot more E/B time coming soon...
With what I have in mind, when it is disclosed there's gonna be a HUGE surprise for everyone! But not a bad one... ;)
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday... hopefully.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 30 Apr 2014 1:53 PM Title: Chapter-21: Back to Square One
Alice is cool she knows they would be great together just giving the chance. Edward needs to take Bella and show her how he is feeling about her NOW lol
Author's Response:
LOL! You're right. And he will... soon... ;)
Thanks for the reivew.
Next chapter will be up in a few minutes.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter-21: Back to Square One
DOES BELLA NOT UNDERSTAND THE MEANING OF " MARRIAGE " REGUARDLESS OF HOW OR WHY THEY GOT MARRIED SHE AGREED!!!!!!!!!!!!! UNLESS SHE HAS A MENTAL DISORDER SHE OF HER OWN FREE WILL AGREED TO ENTER INTO A MARRIAGE AND EVERYTHING IT ENTAILS. SHE'S ACTING LIKE AN IMMATURE CHILD!!!! I SURE HOPE SHE GROWS UP SOON AND EITHER GETS THE MARRIAGE ANULLED OR ACCEPTS "RESPONSIBILITY" FOR HER OWN DECISIONS. THIS CHAPTER WAS VERY FRUSTRATING!!!!!!! READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Can I say calm down? Okay I know it was frustrating but that was the last of it... sort of... at least for now.
Thanks for the review.
Don't worry they'll start talking real soon.
The next chapter will be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 30 Apr 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter-21: Back to Square One
These two need to be locked in a room together until they learn to communicate with each other....Edward needs to ask Bella out on a date or something.
Author's Response:
I may do just that... you never know ;)
Thanks for the review.
Don't worry he'll man up real soon.
The next chapter will be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 28 Apr 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 20: Time for Drunken Dancing!
Poor Edward is trying to be a good guy. What is he going to do and will she remember in the morning.
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks for the review.
The next chapter will be up in a few minutes and you're gonna get your answers.
Hope you enjoy!
Take care.
Ann
Date: 27 Apr 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 19: Truce?
When are these two going to talk.
Author's Response:
They will talk... soon... maybe in the next three chapters? I am not sure yet...
Take care.
Ann
Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 18: Nosey Pantoprazole Lover
I am proud of her for saying she was sorry. This is a story it should not be offensive to anyone if they dont like it dont read I am loving it.
Author's Response:
Aww... thank you.
It really means a lot to me that you love it so far. :)
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2014 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 17: Strike Two
Bella should only be angry at herself. She asks for one thing, but really wants another. Edward is respecting her space. She wanted he one room. She has it. Neither one said where they worked. She is being unrealistic to think he wouldn't work at Seattle Grace. If she was smart, she would have picked up on the fact that a new doctor was starting at work and Edward is a doctor who is starting a new job. Bella also needs to get her name changed. She is being disrespectful. She agreed to the marriage. She needs to stop being a brat. Her own mind is telling her she is being one. She just needs to listen to her smarter side.
Author's Response:
First of all, thanks for reviewing.
Yeah, she's being a brat and she needs to grow up... they both do and will... in time. Just have patience and enjoy for now!
Take care.
Ann
Date: 25 Apr 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 17: Strike Two
She has a hot temper. Edward wants her to get her name changed now. How is working together at work going to be alowed once everyone finds out they are married.??
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Yeah. They both need to grow up and communicate with each other... and they will. It will all work out, I promise! ;)
Take care.
Ann
Date: 24 Apr 2014 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 16: Grocery Shopping and Cereal Boxes
They have a lot of work to do getting to know each other but that wont work if they keep running from each other. The shoping was fun.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review as always. :)
They both have a long way to go. The running part is just the beginning! ;)
Take care.
Ann
Date: 23 Apr 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter-15: Who The Hell Doesn’t Like Coffee?
I love this story!!! Seriously, your Bella and Edward are the best!!! I hope there isn't too much anger when they discuss Wednesday at the club; unless it results in a make out session :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
I hope you continue to love the story... and maybe keep reveiwing... *Hint!Hint*
This will be a light-hearted and hopefully zero-angst story... but make out sessions will be plenty! ;)
Take care.
Ann
Date: 23 Apr 2014 8:47 AM Title: Chapter-15: Who The Hell Doesn’t Like Coffee?
They need to have the talk about how he acted when they first meet. He has made her very happy having that libray
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Don't worry they will talk about it.
It's my dream library anyway... :D
Take care.
Ann
Date: 22 Apr 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 14: Step Into My Life
I do like this one too.. I am reading it over on ff. Great job. I want to give anything off.
Author's Response:
OH! I just saw your review there. :D
Thanks for reading and liking it so far. :)
Take care.
Ann