Date: 15 Aug 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life
You know there are only 355 days in a year not 360, right? lol
Author's Response: Umm... if you have noticed the A/N's I put in the next chapter then you will see that I have never been to the US and since it's a fiction, I didn't care for statistics and went with what I felt the story needed. I'm sure the extra 5 days of rain wouldn't hurt anyone. P.S. I'm assuming you meant to say "That's only 355 days in a year and not 360" because in a year, there are 365 days.
Date: 15 Aug 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter- 49: Knock, Knock
Aww! So cute I can't wait the hormones the crazy, Edward freaking out about everything. And I have the perfect thing for him to freak out about to. Bella starts to show so she has a little belly, at work she needs a medicine that's on the top shelf of the Pharamacy so she grabs a step stool and climbs up and Edward sees her on the stool and freaks out.
(My husband did when I started nesting I could have dust in the house with a baby so I decided to dust shelves well then I notice that the ceiling fan left that crap in the ceiling. So can guess what he walked into. He had a major freak out that I could hurt myself or the baby. I laughed but he really didn't think it was funny at all)
Author's Response: Aww... your story is so cute. <3 Thanks for the review and the suggestion. If it doesn't happen here, I will put it in my 'think tank' for future use. :D The next chapter should be up on Tuesday. Take care. Ann
Date: 15 Aug 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter-35: Let’s Create New Memories, Baby!
Okay I have to admit that was pretty amazing. I'm so glad they are getting to know each other's bodies slowly. I think a lot of people forget there are a lot of pleasing steps that can come before sex.
Author's Response: When I said it was going to be a slow burn, I actually meant it. ;) Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 14 Aug 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life
I'm sure they thought they were doing the right thing.
Author's Response: Yeah, but sometimes the right thing done in the wrong way can be wrong. Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 14 Aug 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter-32: Two L-Words
They are so clueless. It's very endearing.
Author's Response: Haha... thanks. :) Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 14 Aug 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter-31: Who the Fuck is Ian?
Now that is love, tampons, chocolate and watching Ian. Lol
Author's Response: In my world that is it. :D Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2014 7:59 AM Title: Chapter- 48: My English Boy
That was a very sweet chapter.
Author's Response: Aww ... thanks. :D Thank you for reviewing. The next chapter will be up in a few minutes. Take care. Ann
Date: 14 Aug 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter-30: What? How? WOW!
The sexual tension is rising. I wonder which one of them will give in to it first.
Author's Response: You'll find out soon enough... ;) Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 14 Aug 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter-28: The Geek and His Nerd
They are adorable together.
Author's Response: IKR? :D Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 14 Aug 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 27: Who Said First Dates Should Be Awkward?
That was a wonderful first date. I love the itchy little slips. Lol
Author's Response: Haha... thanks. :) Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter- 47: Renewal
I really have enjoyed reading this story so much. It will be sad when it ends.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) I will be sad to end it, but I will be coming back with another version of Edward and Bella and hopefully, you'd love them as well. :) Take care. Ann
Date: 13 Aug 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter- 48: My English Boy
What a wonderful honeymoon.
Author's Response: Aww... thank you so much. :) Thanks for the review. The next chapter should be up on Friday. Take care. Ann
Date: 12 Aug 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?
She has totally fallen. Lol
Author's Response: Rose is a genius, isn't she? ;) Thanks for the review. Take care. Ann
Date: 12 Aug 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 24: Decepticons Prepare for Battle
They are cuddling in the center of the bed. I hope anyway.
Author's Response: I think you'd be surprised when you get to the next chapter. ;) Thanks for the review. Take care. Ann
Date: 12 Aug 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 23: Tentative Friendships
Thank God she likes her in laws or else Edward would be in the dog house.
Author's Response: Who wouldn't fall in love with such a family? :D Thanks for the review. Take care. Ann
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter- 48: My English Boy
Loved it!
Author's Response: Aww... thank you so much. :) Thanks for the review. The next chapter should be up on Friday. Take care. Ann
Date: 12 Aug 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 22: Eruption of Bella-vius
Bella really is all over the place. I hope they sit down soon and talk.
Author's Response: Yes, a long overdue talk is coming soon. They already hit the rock bottom. So, it's time to move forward. :) Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 12 Aug 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter-21: Back to Square One
Now that is bullshit. Bella needs to pull her head out if her ass. No persons first time should be because they are drunk.
Author's Response: She will. She knows it in the back of her mind, but she's pretty confused about her life at the moment. Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 12 Aug 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 20: Time for Drunken Dancing!
The right thing.
Author's Response: I know. And in the back of her mind, even Bella knows he did the right thing as well. But the sting of rejection got her pretty hard. :/ Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 11 Aug 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 17: Strike Two
Alright Bella is wrong this time. She was late, they never talked about where they worked. Sure Edward was a jerk about having a pharmacist on staff, but it wasn't personal. I dated a pharmacist for 4 years and never knew him to do rounds. Sure he worked closely with the doctors (he made chemotherapy) but never rounded with them. But I get it works better with the story and Edward did get his license from England.
Author's Response: I'm not gonna bore you with theoretical sh*t. So, let me just say, thanks for being an understanding reader. :) Also, thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 11 Aug 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter-12: Married to… who, now?
I think that was sort of cute. Edward apologized, I hope he fesses up the real reason he acted like that.
Author's Response: If you haven't figured it out yet, I'm a sucker for adorableward. So, he can be super adorable at times. ;) Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 11 Aug 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter-11: It’s Happening!
Too funny.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2014 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 27: Who Said First Dates Should Be Awkward?
That was the perfect date. Every time they kiss they are barely keeping control.
Author's Response: Aww... thanks. :) Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 11 Aug 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 10: Haunted
Once they get over the initial shock they are going to have some explosive sex.
They were very cute together when they were little.
Author's Response: You can count on the explosive part. ;) Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 11 Aug 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 9: Strike One
I can't wait until the wedding.
Author's Response: Haha... neither could I when I started writing this story. :D Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 10 Aug 2014 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 8: Preparations for Doomsday!
I can't wait for them to get to work on Monday and realize they are working together as well you really are brilliant.
Author's Response: Awww... thanks. :) Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 10 Aug 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 6: Pixie Inquisition
Alice put Bella at ease. She really is a good sister.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann
Date: 10 Aug 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 4: Resigned Acceptance
Okay this story is crazy great. Everyone is so complex, the modern arranged marriage is great. And sorry this is my first review but my reader is working today it seems. At least 4 chapters at a time anyway.
Author's Response: Well, first let me welcome you to the crazy world of OTC. I hope you enjoy the ride. Second, thank you for leaving a review. :) Take care. Ann
Date: 08 Aug 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter- 47: Renewal
awww wonderful renewal ceremony. Never understood the night before thing either. Silly superstitions.
Author's Response: Thanks. :) Thank you for reviewing. The next chapter should be up soon. Take care. Ann
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 17: Strike Two
she's being such a bitch
Author's Response: Yes, but if you continue with the story, I'm sure you'll see how much their characters grow together. Just hang on a little and continue reading, if you want to. :) Take care. Ann
Date: 05 Aug 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter- 46: Cookie Time
Her mom really has no filter. LOL Aww for new proposal
Author's Response: That's the Renee I picture every time I think about her. :P I'd glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing. The next chapter should be up in a few minutes. Take care. Ann
Date: 05 Aug 2014 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life
I can't wait for your next update please have a sequal !!
Author's Response: Thanks for the love you showed my silly story. :) Right now, I have no plan to write a sequel for OTC. But who knows what the future might bring? ;) If you are interested, you can try my one-shots. And I intend to start another multi-chapter fic right after OTC is finished. The next chapter should be up in a few minutes. Take care. Ann
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter- 45: When The Cookie Doesn't Come To You
They are the cutest, clueless couple I've had the pleasure to read about :-D! Keep it coming😃
Author's Response: Thank you. :) They are a pleasure to write about as well. :D Thanks for the review. :) The next chapter should be up in a few minutes. Take care. Ann
Date: 03 Aug 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter- 45: When The Cookie Doesn't Come To You
I CAN UNDERSTAND HER FEELING LIKE SHE NEEDS TO DO IT RIGHT WITH ALL THE BELLS AND WHISTLES SHE OBVIOUSLY MISSED OUT ON. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :) The next chapter should be up in a few minutes. Take care. Ann
Date: 01 Aug 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter- 45: When The Cookie Doesn't Come To You
I never considered Bella doing the proposing. After their odd and forced beginning, this would be a perfect way for them to seal the deal.
Author's Response: All I'll ask of you is to wait a bit, sit back and enjoy... ;) Thanks for leaving a review. The next chapter should be up on Tuesday. Take care. Ann
Date: 01 Aug 2014 4:16 PM Title: Chapter- 45: When The Cookie Doesn't Come To You
Glad her mom had good advice for her. awww Rosie getting married too.
Author's Response: I couldn't leave Rose hanging there... :D Thanks for leaving a review. The next chapter should be up on Tuesday. Take care. Ann
Date: 30 Jul 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter- 44: Bottomless Love
Cute chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. :) The next chapter should be up in a few minutes. Take care. Ann
Date: 30 Jul 2014 8:23 AM Title: Chapter- 44: Bottomless Love
INSATIABLE IS ABSOLUTLY RIGHT! READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response: LOL! The song was suggested by a friend of mine and when I listened to it, all I could think about was this... ;) Thank you for the review. :) The next chapter should be up on Friday. Take care. Ann
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter- 44: Bottomless Love
What a lovely Valentine's Day! *swoon* Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you and thanks for leaving a review. :) The next chapter should be up on Friday. Take care. Ann
Date: 29 Jul 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter- 44: Bottomless Love
I am loving this story!!! Thank you!! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: You're welcome. :) Thank you for the review. :D The next chapter should be up on Friday. Take care. Ann
Date: 29 Jul 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter- 44: Bottomless Love
awww wonderful V day
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :) The next chapter should be up on Friday. Take care. Ann
Date: 27 Jul 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter- 43: Mine, Bitch!
Recently found this story and am now caught up. It's been lots of fun and looking forward to more.
thanks
Author's Response: Aww... you're welcome. And let me welcome you to my crazy world of OTC. :) The next chapter should be up in a few minutes. Take care. Ann
Date: 27 Jul 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 14: Step Into My Life
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :) Take care. Ann
Date: 26 Jul 2014 10:38 AM Title: Chapter-13: Seriously… who are you?
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks and thank you for reviewing. :) Take care. Ann
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter- 43: Mine, Bitch!
That was unexpected, and I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks and thank you for reviewing. :) The next chapter should be up on Tuesday. Take care. Ann
Date: 25 Jul 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter- 43: Mine, Bitch!
LOL for them betting on E/B. yey for Angela. Ugh for the skanks. LOL for James
Author's Response: Thanks for review.;) I'm guessing you enjoyed the chapter? The next chapter should be up on Tuesday. Take care. Ann
Date: 25 Jul 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter- 43: Mine, Bitch!
I'M ON MY WAY OVER TO READ THE O/S. SWEET CHAPTER. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks and thank you for reviewing. :) As always your reviews were a huge ego boost for me. :* The next chapter should be up on Tuesday. Take care. Ann
Date: 23 Jul 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter- 42: New Year, New Beginning
NOW THAT'S HOW YOU START OFF A NEW YEAR WITH A BANG. (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
LOL! I thought you might enjoy it. :D
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 9: Strike One
oh goodness not a great meeting
Author's Response:
I'd say so... ;)
Thanks for the review.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 6: Pixie Inquisition
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Thanks for the review.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 23 Jul 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter- 42: New Year, New Beginning
Loved how they handled Jake
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 23 Jul 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter- 42: New Year, New Beginning
Love love love it and he got a punch at Jake!!
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 22 Jul 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter- 42: New Year, New Beginning
Woo Hoo Wonderful chapter. Wow Charlie should have shot Jake's arse. What a wanker
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Friday. :)
Take care.
Ann
Date: 22 Jul 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter- 42: New Year, New Beginning
LOVED it!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up by Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 21 Jul 2014 10:42 AM Title: Chapter-40: Fucking Dogs and Fake Talons
Great party in your face Tanya lol where did Jacob go
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
You'll get your answer soon... ;)
The next chapter should be up soon.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter- 41: Move Into My Heart
Oh boy, New Year's with Alice! LOL! ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
You might enjoy it, though... ;)
The next chapter should be up in a few minutes.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter-40: Fucking Dogs and Fake Talons
Woo hoo! Bella told Tanya! LOL! That was great! :D
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Thanks for the review.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 19 Jul 2014 9:09 AM Title: Chapter- 41: Move Into My Heart
CHRISTMAS IN JULY WAS COZY. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 18 Jul 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter- 41: Move Into My Heart
aww sweet presents and yummy lemons. Charlie is so silly. They are married after all.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Charlie is just being a dad, I suppose. I think it's hard for every father to see his baby girl grow up and move to find solace in another man. Don't you agree?
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 17 Jul 2014 10:08 AM Title: Chapter-37: Sprinkle of Love
Funny, the song I heard when I read this was, Etta James...At Last!
Author's Response:
LOL! The title is very fitting for our duo. ;)
Thanks for reviewing. :)
Take care.
Ann
Date: 16 Jul 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter-35: Let’s Create New Memories, Baby!
Finally!
Author's Response:
I know, right? :P
Thanks for reviewing. :)
Take care.
Ann
Date: 16 Jul 2014 2:31 PM Title: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life
Aww, sweet, but sad. You know, my little grandson has a Bellarina of his own. Hmmm.
Author's Response:
Really? That sounds cute. :D
Thanks for reviewing.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 16 Jul 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter-40: Fucking Dogs and Fake Talons
READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. :)
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 16 Jul 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter-40: Fucking Dogs and Fake Talons
LOVED THE DRAMA! I'm glad it was Bella telling Tanya off! Please add a lemon to the next chapter before they head into work 😁
Author's Response:
I'll see what I can do! Lol! Besides, I'm having lemon withdrawls myself. ;)
Thanks for reviewing. :)
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter-40: Fucking Dogs and Fake Talons
Love your story so much thanks for writing it!
Author's Response:
Aww... you're welcome. :)
Thanks for the sweet review.
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter-40: Fucking Dogs and Fake Talons
OH please please please let someone have an issue and then they come clean to shut them up... please please please.....they both deserve a good bitch slap to everyone!
Author's Response:
Lol! Bitch slaps are coming up, don't you worry... but maybe not where you expect. ;)
Thanks for reviewing. :)
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 15 Jul 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter-40: Fucking Dogs and Fake Talons
hmmm Skankya and Jakey huh? Wonder where he ran out too. This can't be good.
Author's Response:
Did I tell you that I love your naming? Well, I do. :D
Thanks for reviewing. :)
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 15 Jul 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter-31: Who the Fuck is Ian?
OK, this is my tampon story. I sent my reluctant husband to the drug store for tampons. (Unlike Bella, I was specific about brand and absorbancy). While in the checkout line, the customer in front of him became upset about something and made a huge scene. That customer finally left and my husband, the comedian, place the tampons on the counter and asks the clerk, "Can I bring these back if they don't fit?" Everybody cracked up.
Author's Response:
OMG! You made me laugh out loud in real! :D :D
I love your story! :P
Thanks for reviewing and sharing your experience with me. :)
The next chapter should be up in a few minutes. :)
Take care.
Ann
Date: 14 Jul 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?
Catching up on your story. Enjoying it a lot so far.
Author's Response:
Aww... thank you for reading and letting me that you're enjoying it. :)
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 3: Temper Tantrums
Bella is furious!
Author's Response:
If you were thrown into such a situation then I bet you'd be too.
Thanks for reviewing. :)
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life
Bella comme d'habitude, je l'aime comme ça!
Author's Response:
Merci. :D
Sorry but that's as far as my french goes.
Thank you for the sweet review. :)
Take care.
Ann
Date: 13 Jul 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter-39: The Titanium Wall
I love that she finely gets that she is in love with him. They are so sweet together.
Author's Response:
Aww... thank you for the review. :)
The next chapter should be up in a few minutes.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter-39: The Titanium Wall
Very swoony chapter! Congrats! Sorry to hear you were ill. Glad you're on the mend!
Author's Response:
Aww... thank you for the review and for your concern. :)
The next chapter should be up in a few minutes.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 11 Jul 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter-38: A Taste of Coffee and Bella
Loved it! More soon please!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing.
The next chapter is already up. :)
Take care.
Ann
Date: 11 Jul 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter-39: The Titanium Wall
I THANK YOU FOR THE LONG PEACE OFFERING WELL DONE. I'M GLAD YOUR FEELING BETTER AND LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
You're welcome. :)
Thanks for reviewing.
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 11 Jul 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter-39: The Titanium Wall
Glad she got to talk things out a little with her mom and girl time with Rose. They need a spa day or something some weekend.
Aww the ILY's are coming soon I bet
Author's Response:
I think you might be onto something... but I'm not gonna give anything away. ;)
Thanks for reviewing.
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 06 Jul 2014 9:11 AM Title: Chapter-38: A Taste of Coffee and Bella
I love these two they are so sweet
Author's Response:
Aww... thank you. :)
I'm sorry for the late reply and for not updating last Tuesday. I was pretty sick.
The next chapter should be up soon.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 05 Jul 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter-38: A Taste of Coffee and Bella
NO GUESSES I TRUST YOU TO DO YOUR MAGIC. THIS WAS A SWEET CHAPTER BUT HAD IT BEEN ONE OF US AMERICANS WE WOULD HAVE BEEN GOING AT IT LIKE TWO ENERGISER BUNNIES AT LEAST FOR THE FIRST WEEK (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Aww... thank you. :*
I'm sorry for the late reply and for not updating last Tuesday. I was pretty sick.
Oh trust me, they're gonna go at it... I'm just not writing all of it. But you're free to use your imagination! ;)
The next chapter should be up soon.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 05 Jul 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter-12: Married to… who, now?
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 2:17 AM Title: Chapter-11: It’s Happening!
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 10: Haunted
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 9: Strike One
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 8: Preparations for Doomsday!
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 7: Emergency Best Friend News Alert
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 6: Pixie Inquisition
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the In-Laws
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 4: Resigned Acceptance
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 3: Temper Tantrums
Uh-oh!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 04 Jul 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter-38: A Taste of Coffee and Bella
How sweet!
I don't understand their parents. The premise seemed a little ridiculous, but haven't you pulled it together. It 's a great story. Edward & Bella are so perfect together.
Thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
You're welcome.
Thanks and thank you for reviewing. :)
I know it sounds ridiculous to you guys but where I'm from it's pretty much a common phenomenon. So, I wanted to see what happens when Edward and Bella are thrown into a situation like this. And voila! You get OTC. ;)
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 04 Jul 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter-38: A Taste of Coffee and Bella
Sweet chapter. Glad they are getting along so well. Wonder when they'll tell the hospital
Author's Response:
Thanks and thank you for reviewing. :)
Everything will happen in due time... just have a little bit more patience. ;)
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 02 Jul 2014 5:17 PM Title: Chapter-37: Sprinkle of Love
for setting off the fire alarms
Happy Lemon Dance for first time.
Author's Response:
Aww... I love the lemon dance! :D
Thanks for the cute review.
The next chapter should be up in a few minutes.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 02 Jul 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter-37: Sprinkle of Love
FINALLY!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL. I was actually thinking that's what you're gonna say... ;)
Thank you for reviewing.
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 02 Jul 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter-37: Sprinkle of Love
Slow burn worth the wait. It makes it better.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Thank you for reviewing.
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 02 Jul 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter-37: Sprinkle of Love
That was so special they made it a time they will never forget fire and all lol. Emmett is to funny now Bella knows why she thought Emmett was out of his mind ha ha. When are they going to tell everyone they are married??
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Thank you for reviewing.
Everything's gonna happen pretty fast now. So buckle up and hold on tight. ;)
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 02 Jul 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter-37: Sprinkle of Love
Wow. Totally. Worth. it.!!!
;)
Author's Response:
Thanks and thank you for reviewing. :)
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 01 Jul 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter-36: My Vampire Girl
She has marked him will he return the favor lol. So happy that they cleared things up with there parents.
Author's Response:
He might... in the future... ;)
I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for reviewing.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 9: Strike One
Hahahahahaha, wonderfully written meeting.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the review.
Welcome to OTC. :)
Take care.
Ann
Date: 27 Jun 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter-36: My Vampire Girl
ATHE START OF THIS CHAPTER BELLA WAS SAYING "WE'RE NOT THERE YET" I WAS JUST WONDERING...WHERE IS THERE??? HELOOOOOO IT DOES'NT TAKE A GENIOUS TO FIGURE OUT..... WET PUSSY HARD DICK YOUR "THERE" THEN SHE ENDS WITH " I THINK WERE READY " OK! SOMEONE NEEDS A LITTLE PROZAC. (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
I read your review... went back and read the whole chapter but failed to find where she said "We're not there yet." But anyways, she's inexperienced, so I think we can forgo the Prozac for now. :)
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann