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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter- 50: What I Am Thankful For

Their going to have a baby! !!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter- 49: Knock, Knock

Babies babits babies. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter- 48: My English Boy

Loved their honeymoon! !!!!!!



Author's Response:

Aww ... thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter- 47: Renewal

Glad she finally got. "HER" wedding!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks. :D

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter- 46: Cookie Time

PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. *blushes while grinning widely*

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter- 45: When The Cookie Doesn't Come To You

They are definitely clueless.  Lol



Author's Response:

They wouldn't be themselves if they weren't clueluss now, would they? :P

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter- 44: Bottomless Love

Another perfect chapter! 



Author's Response:

Thanks. :D

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter- 43: Mine, Bitch!

OMGosh! !!!!!! I busted out laughing about James having a crush on Edward.  HaHa!!!!!!!!!!! I did not see that one coming.  Lauren and Jessica were very bold to say  what they did. 



Author's Response:

Hahaha ... I thought poor Edward should have guys crushing on him for a change, don't you? ;P

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter- 42: New Year, New Beginning

I can not believe that Jacob showed up still thinking he had a chance with Bella.  He is not the sharpest knife in the box. Laughed at Edwarddeclaring that he deflowered Bella in front of everyone.  Lol. Poor Charlie. 



Author's Response:

LOL. I actually enjoyed writing this chapter immensely. :D

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter- 41: Move Into My Heart

Loving this story. 



Author's Response:

Aww ... thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter-40: Fucking Dogs and Fake Talons

Love that Bella busted Tanya. Will they ever figure  out that Jacob was Tanya's date???? 



Author's Response:

Of course, Tanya had to have her just dessert, right?

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter-39: The Titanium Wall

They are going to let work know they are at least seeing each other. Happy for Emmett and Rose and Jasper and Alice. 



Author's Response:

Just hold on a bit more. I have the perfect revealing for them. ;)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter-38: A Taste of Coffee and Bella

Another perfect chapter! !!!!



Author's Response:

Aww ... thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter-37: Sprinkle of Love

FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY! !!!!!!!!!!

LOVEDIT!!!!!!!!!!!!

Poor Edward and the sprinklers! Lol. He was trying so hard to be romantic. 



Author's Response:

LOL. I know, right? Clueless man doesn't know that he's already a hopeless romantic for his girl. :')

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter-36: My Vampire Girl

Glad they talked to the parents.  They are ready!!!! They are ready!!!!!!!! Off to the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Bwahaha ... I made you wait for a long time, didn't I? :P

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter-35: Let’s Create New Memories, Baby!

Love love love this chapter.  Perfect for them. 



Author's Response:

Aww ... thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life

Bless their hearts. 



Author's Response:

This was the hardest chapter of OTC I had to write.

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter-33: Halloween Horror Stories

Thanks for letting us know what happened in their past. They are slowly but certainly getting there. 



Author's Response:

You're welcome. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter-32: Two L-Words

Everyone is falling in LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!! Loving this story. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter-31: Who the Fuck is Ian?

OMGosh!!!!!!!!!!! That was hilarious. 



Author's Response:

Thanks. :D

I'm glad you liked it. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter-30: What? How? WOW!

Love it!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Aww ... thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter-29: A Little Piece of Me

Love Charlie! !!!!!!!!!! Lol



Author's Response:

Hahaha ... thank you. :D

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter-28: The Geek and His Nerd

Alice to the rescue! !!!! Well maybe,  that all depends on what Edward gets her. Lol. We may need Alice to rescue him again.



Author's Response:

He might be a bit more suave than you think. ;)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 27: Who Said First Dates Should Be Awkward?

Loved this chapter!  Perfect for them. 



Author's Response:

Aww ... thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 26: Lonely Beds and Miserable Hearts

Yes.......FINALLY! !!!!!!! I just hope that Bella does not spill a drink k on him while they are on their daye. Lol!!!!!!!!! Just kidding.  Edward is killing me at how nervous he was.



Author's Response:

Hahaha ... I think he was channeling my nerves for writing the perfect chapter for them. ;)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?

I thino that cupid has shot both Edward and Bella in the butt with the arrow. 



Author's Response:

A-freaking-men to that!

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 24: Decepticons Prepare for Battle

Soo glad I do not have to wait on an update.  Can't wait to find out what Bella woke up to. 



Author's Response:

It's a ... Nah, I'll let you find out yourself. ;)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 23: Tentative Friendships

Finally! !!!!!! They have talked.  It is about time. I am wondering what Bella is going to think about Carlisle and Esme staying with them. 



Author's Response:

I know, right? :P

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 22: Eruption of Bella-vius

They both are sooo stubborn. Why does Edward blow up at Bella when he is mad at her but not the nurses?  We talks about Esme raised him to be a gentleman but then he can be so rude to Bella.  

Loving this story! !!!!



Author's Response:

We're almost there ... just hang on a little bit.

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 1:20 PM Title: Chapter-21: Back to Square One

That was a disaster.  Bella should be some Whay thankful that she did not lose her virginity while she was drunk. But I understand her feelings of rejection. 



Author's Response:

Tell me about it. *glares at these two stubborn kids*

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 20: Time for Drunken Dancing!

Love this chapter. Loved a drun Bella.  Lol. Poor Edward.  He was trying to do the right thing. Does Edward know the Bella is a virgin?  



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

No, he doesn't yet ...

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 19: Truce?

I am thinking that they are going to get drunk and thenot tell each other how they feel. 



Author's Response:

Hmmm ... nah, already done in many fics. Let's go for something different, shall we? ;)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 18: Nosey Pantoprazole Lover

Wow, she surprised me with just up and kissing him like that.  I can not believe that she did not go home. She could have at least called him or texted him to let him know. 



Author's Response:

She has a lot of growing up to do still ... they both have.

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 17: Strike Two

Love then over reacting.  Boy they are going  to have some hot make up sex once they start sleeping together. Lol



Author's Response:

*giggles* Thanks. :D

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 16: Grocery Shopping and Cereal Boxes

Edward needs to tell Bella why he acted the way he did the 1st time he meet her st that bar. 



Author's Response:

Oh he will. Just hang in there. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter-15: Who The Hell Doesn’t Like Coffee?

I am loving their back and forth with each other. 



Author's Response:

LOL. Thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 14: Step Into My Life

Poor Charlie losing his baby girl. They both are too afraid to admit they have true feelings for each other. Can't wait to see how this all plays out.



Author's Response:

I tried to stay as true to the Breaking Dawn movie  farewell Bella gives to her father as I could with this scene. :')

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 9:21 PM Title: Chapter-13: Seriously… who are you?

poor Alice. Between Edward and Emmett she and Jesper are going to have a hard time. Lol. I am glad that Bella stood up to Billy Black. Glad that Edward is so protective of Bella that he got her away from Billy. I am really loving this story thank you for sharing it with us. Can't wait to read the rest of it I am off to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Aww ... you're welcome. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter-12: Married to… who, now?

I am surprised that Bella did not bust him out in front of everyone.  Lol. Glad they decided to give each other a another chance, 



Author's Response:

They were bound to ... I'm a total agnst-wimp ... so ... :P

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter-11: It’s Happening!

Lol!!!!!!!!!!! Love it!!!!!!!!

Oh you just don't know how happy I am that I do not have to wait for an update.  I am sooo off to read the next chapter!  Can't wait! !!!



Author's Response:

Hahaha ... enjoy! :D

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 10: Haunted

Love the dreams!!!!!! Love reading about a little Edward and a little Bella. 



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

I'll let you in on a secret ... *whispers* I loved writing about their childhood memories. ;D

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 9: Strike One

Lol. Love it. They were rude to each other because they are attracted to each other. What in the world are they gonna think when they see each other on their wedding day. Lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

This one was actually one of the first scenes I came up with while working on the plot. ;)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 8: Preparations for Doomsday!

I know this is fiction. Love reading.  I just don't understand how the both of them have agreed to this without even meeting each other. Lol. Can't wait to see what they think of each other. 



Author's Response:

I know it's a little unrealistic, but well, I'm just that crazy, I guess. :P

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 7: Emergency Best Friend News Alert

I am guessing that the bar is wherected Bella and Rose go after work. Glad that Bella and Alice get along so good.



Author's Response:

Yes, your guess is very correct. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 6: Pixie Inquisition

Glad they all get along. Their meeting went good. Why are they getting married so quickly. What in the world is Rose going to say about all of this?



Author's Response:

*says in a sage-like voice* Patience, dear one. All will be answered soon. :D

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 5: Meet the In-Laws

Glad she likes everyone. What in the world is Alice up to? ??



Author's Response:

Nothing good, that's for sure. ;)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 4: Resigned Acceptance

I can not believe that Bella gave in that easily.  I would have had to meet him first.  



Author's Response:

Well, the titled says it all ... resigned acceptance. :P

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 3: Temper Tantrums

Can't wait to hear the story behind this arranged marriage.  Wonder what Edward thinks of it too.



Author's Response:

Can't wait to see what you think when Edward joins the party! ;)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls

Off to read the next chapter to find out what is going on.  



Author's Response:

Enjoy! ;)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life

Lol. This sounds really interesting.  Can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

Welcome to the crazy journey.

Hope you enjoy the ride. ;)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: audfische Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2014 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls

promising debut

thanks for this story



Author's Response:

Aww ... you're welcome.

I'm so glad you liked it. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 10:35 PM Title: Outtake-1: The Other Side of The Cookie

Glad He decided to give Bella everything she didn't get the first time aroung.



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

If there is any particular chapter you would like to see more of in the form of an outtake, do let me know. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 6:41 PM Title: Outtake-1: The Other Side of The Cookie

I have loved this story so much it deserves to win.  Edward is so sweet and loves Bella so much.



Author's Response:

Aww ... now you're making me miss these crazy kids and you guys, my readers, even more.

Thank you for loving this story so much. *hugs*

If there's any particular chapter you want me to write an outtake of, do let me know. I'd love to do a few more outtakes of OTC. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2014 6:51 AM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

What a wonderful life. Great story thanks so m much



Author's Response:

Aww ... you're welcome. <3

Thanks for reviewing each and every chapter and sticking with Smirky and his Bellarina till the end. :')

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter- 49: Knock, Knock

Bella got the baby bug ;)



Author's Response:

Can you blame a girl when she has Smirky? :D

Thanks for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 6:36 PM Title: Chapter- 48: My English Boy

What a time I would love a trip like that but I am amazed they made it out of the bedroom lol.



Author's Response:

C'mon, you didn't think Smirky would be gentleman enough to take his Bellarina out on tours? ;)

Thanks for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter- 47: Renewal

That was the best kind of fluff.  Love when Charlie told her to have Edward close the window on his way out to funny



Author's Response:

Aww ... thank you. <3

I'm glad you loved it.

Thanks for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter- 46: Cookie Time

That was perfect I loved how he got the cookie first lol.



Author's Response:

Aww ... thank you. <3

Thanks for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter- 45: When The Cookie Doesn't Come To You

She didnt miss out on anything she has it all already silly girl.



Author's Response:

Crazy girl, you mean? :P

Thanks for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 2:34 PM Title: Chapter- 44: Bottomless Love

They are learning together and they are so hot and cute at the same time lol.



Author's Response:

I know, right? ;)

Thanks for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter- 43: Mine, Bitch!

I loved it to funny James into Edward so happy they are all gone James and the skank twins.



Author's Response:

I thought it would be a nice twist to make James fall for Edward instead of Bella for a change. :P

Thanks for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter- 42: New Year, New Beginning

Jacob is an idiot and Edward is the man ;)  Bella is making him a very happy man



Author's Response:

Lol, she is. ;)

I sure hope you enjoyed reading this chapter as much as I loved writing it. :D

Thanks for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 3:06 PM Title: Chapter- 41: Move Into My Heart

I love it they are moved in together that was a great gift.



Author's Response:

Aww ... thank you. <3

Thanks for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: karemay Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 27: Who Said First Dates Should Be Awkward?

I like this story and all but WHY does Bella have to get mad at every little thing! GROW UP!!!



Author's Response:

Lol. I know. It's frustrating, isn't it? ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm sure once you continue, you'll see the characters grow as a couple. :)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: harkie5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

I loved your story! Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Aww...you're welcome. :)

Thank you for reviewing. :)

Take care

Ann

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter- 49: Knock, Knock

i love bella's relationship with rose in this fict

most make rose a nasty bitch but i really liked her in this fict



Author's Response:

Thanks. I wanted to write a different Rose from the usual bitchy one we get and this happened. :D

Thank you for reviewing. :)

Take care

Ann

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter- 48: My English Boy

english boys are very sexy lol



Author's Response:

*shakes head* Indeed they are. :P

I'm guessing you're enjoying the fic now?

Thank you for reviewing. :)

Take care

Ann

Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

Great story!   I enjoyed OTC very much.  Smirky is among my favorite fic Edwards now.

Sorry I didn't review after each chapter, but I really got into the story.  

I kept waiting for all the grammar problems that you talked with me about on FaceBook.  There were a few, but, as the story progressed they became less and less.  Perhaps it's just not being sure which adjective/adverb to use in our crazy English language.  Anywho, the story is strong enough for any reader to overlook the few that are there.

Thank you for writing for our fandom.  I appreciate you for creating and gifting wonderful stories to you many fans.

 

Elaine - Sparkle Elaine Damnu Phillips on FB   sparkledamnu on all fic sites

PS -- Thank you for posting on TWCS.  I try not to read on FFN.  You never know when stories are going to get pulled.



Author's Response:

*wipes away the stray tears* Damn it, girl! You made me all sappy with your review. :*

I cannot tell you how honored I am to know that you love Smirky so much. The greatest joy of writing is knowing that I put a smile on someone's face. So thank you for telling me this.

I still shudder when I read the first chapters of OTC, that's how much the mistakes bug me. But I'll take your compliment graciously and just say that I'm thankful to have you read and leave such a beautiful review for me.

I love being a part of this amazing fandom and having the friends I make on facebook through it (wink!wink! You're one of them. ;) )

I hope you'll join me on my next adventures as well...

Take care.

Ann

 

P.S. You're welcome. I was afraid that a one-shot of mine, Change My Mind, was going to be pulled for the rating issues. So I decided to post in TWCS as well. :)

xoxoxo

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 22: Eruption of Bella-vius

at freeking last



Author's Response:

Lol. I actually agree with you there. :P

Thank you for reviewing. :)

Take care

Ann

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter-21: Back to Square One

im sorry but to me edward did the right thing he didnt want there first time being a drunken fumble and bella really needs to grow up if he had give in and f***** her on the sofa took her virginity that would make him a total shit

their friends arnt helping try talking some sense into bella instead of picking fault with everything edward does



Author's Response:

They're friends think that their lives have been meddled with enough by the parents and they don't need their friends to put two cents into the whole mix as well.

Anyways, I hope you continue reading. :)

Thank you for reviewing. :)

Take care

Ann

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 17: Strike Two

i feel sorry for edward he cant do anything right

she is 100% bitch



Author's Response:

She seems like that, doesn't she? This story was meant to be their journey from being strangers to a married couple. So, just hang in there. :)

Thank you for reviewing. :)

Take care

Ann

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

This story was too cute. Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Aww....you're welcome. :)

Thanks for reviewing.

My new story, The Perfect Light, is now up for your reading pleasure. Be sure to check that out.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

Awwwww! Great ending! Explaining the title was perfect!

 



Author's Response:

Aww....thank you so much. :)

Thanks for reviewing.

That part was actually how this crazy idea started in the first place. :D

My new story, The Perfect Light, is now up for your reading pleasure. Be sure to check that out.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

Perfection. Great story. Unique, smart women. Nice change of pace for the characters. A fun read. 



Author's Response:

Aww....thank you so much. :)

Thanks for reviewing.

My new story, The Perfect Light, is now up for your reading pleasure. Be sure to check that out.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

good story thanks - xanath



Author's Response:

You're welcome. :)

Thanks for reviewing.

My new story, The Perfect Light, is now up for your reading pleasure. Be sure to check that out.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter- 43: Mine, Bitch!

Nice twist with James...I loved it!  Thanks - Xanath



Author's Response:

Haha....I'm glad you liked it. ;)

Thanks for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: MaryE1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

Thanks for the great story I have lo ed it so much!  :-) can't wait til you write another one!



Author's Response:

Aww....thank you so much. :)

Thanks for reviewing.

My new story, The Perfect Light, is now up for your reading pleasure. Be sure to check that out.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

Love love love sweet story



Author's Response: Aww...thank you for reading and reviewing.:') My new WIP The Perfect Light is now published. If you want, be sure to check it out. It's gonna be vastly different from OTC but equally entertaining, I hope. :) Take care. Ann

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:07 AM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

loved this story so much looking forward to more from you thank you for sharing this hope to see you soon



Author's Response: Aww...thank you for reading and reviewing.:') My new WIP The Perfect Light is now published. If you want, be sure to check it out. It's gonna be vastly different from OTC but equally entertaining, I hope. :) Take care. Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

Wonderful end.  TY for writing and sharing with us.

ty



Author's Response: Aww...thank you for reading and reviewing every chapter. Thank you for sticking with me. :') My new WIP The Perfect Light is now published. If you want, be sure to check it out. It's gonna be vastly different from OTC but equally entertaining, I hope. :) Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter- 50: What I Am Thankful For

Absolutely wonderful story! Hate to see it go!



Author's Response: Thanks. :D I'm coming back with a new story...tonight. ;) Thanks for the review. The epi would up in a few minutes. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter- 50: What I Am Thankful For

Yeah a baby. 



Author's Response: LOL! I think you are excited. ;) Thanks for the review. The epi would up in a few minutes. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 5:28 AM Title: Chapter- 50: What I Am Thankful For

I have truely look forward to each & evey update. I will truely miss reading this story update. It truely has captivated & intriguied me  evey step of the.  Thank for all ur dedication & effort in writting this amazing story. I truly have love it!!!



Author's Response: Aww...thank you so much for the sweet review. <3 It's readers like you who have kept me going. So, thank you. :* The epi would up in a few minutes. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter- 50: What I Am Thankful For

Woo Hoo for new baby news.  8 is a bit much but hilarous anyways



Author's Response: It won't be Edward if he didn't go overboard. ;) Thanks for the review. The epi would up in a few minutes. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 12:21 PM Title: Chapter- 49: Knock, Knock

Awe baby bellarinas!!

Author's Response: Haha... we'll see. ;) Thank you for reviewing. The next chapter will be up shortly. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 1:36 PM Title: Chapter- 49: Knock, Knock

Love this story!!



Author's Response: Thanks. It's always nice to hear that somewhere someone is smiling because of my crazy story. :D Thank you for reviewing. The next chapter will be up shortly. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter- 49: Knock, Knock

Yeah babies. 



Author's Response: I know, right? :D Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter- 48: My English Boy

Now that was a great honeymoon. Will there be a honeymoon baby????



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :) Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter- 49: Knock, Knock

AWWW yey for Rose and Em. 



Author's Response: LOL! Yay! :D Thank you for reviewing. The next chapter will be up shortly. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter- 47: Renewal

Awwww. That is how it should of been all along. 



Author's Response: Yes, it should. :') Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 7:44 PM Title: Chapter- 46: Cookie Time

I am ecstatic that Edward beat her to it. 



Author's Response: What can I say? The kid finally realized it. :D Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann

Author's Response: What can I say? The kid finally realized it. :D Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter- 45: When The Cookie Doesn't Come To You

Wow thinking outside the box. It matches them perfect. 



Author's Response: Haha...Gotta love Renee, huh? ;) Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter- 43: Mine, Bitch!

I loved the James twist. 



Author's Response: Lol,thanks. :D Thank you for reviewing. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 5:52 AM Title: Chapter- 49: Knock, Knock

This truely has been such a beautifully captivating story that I absolutly adore reading!!! I have impatiently looked forward to each & every update & will truely miss seeing this story updateded!!! Will u be writing a  SEQUEL pleassssssssssse??? I give this a 10 star rating!!



Author's Response: Aww... thank you so much for the sweet review and the rating. *blushes* It is an honor to know that someone loved my crazy story this much. So, thank you once again. At the moment, I have no plans for a sequel for OTC. Because I truly believe that E/B's tale has been told. But I do plan on writing a few future-takes for this story when the mood strikes. Meanwhile, you please check out my other stories. They are all one-shots at the moment, but "Trust Me, Love Me" can be turned into a full length story in the future. I do believe you'll enjoy them as well. :) And please do check out my next full-length story which I intend to start posting for from the upcoming Friday. :) The next chapter of OTC will be up on Tuesday. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter- 42: New Year, New Beginning

What a way to ring in the new year. 



Author's Response: I know, right? :D Thanks for the review. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter-40: Fucking Dogs and Fake Talons

Double whammy. I wonder what trouble is to come. 



Author's Response: If you haven't figured it out yet, I love drama... So, just have a little patience and you'll see. ;) Thanks for the review. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter-39: The Titanium Wall

So sweet. Even though I think they are both being silly. They both are in love but neither of them can say it. But at least Bella has admitted it to herself. That's a start. 



Author's Response: Silliness is the main theme of this story...so, at least they are being silly together, right? ;) Thanks for the review. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter-38: A Taste of Coffee and Bella

Aww. If they can survive Christmas shopping they can survive anything. Lol



Author's Response: Hahaha... true that! ;) Thanks for the review. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter-37: Sprinkle of Love

That was one of my favorite 'first time' love scene ever. It was real, not perfect but perfect for them. It was sweet and beautiful. 



Author's Response: Awww... thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. :D Thanks for the review. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 6:33 PM Title: Chapter-36: My Vampire Girl

I'm glad they have cleared the air. They all needed that. And she's ready.......



Author's Response: She so is... ;) Thanks for the review. Take care. Ann

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