Date: 18 Jan 2016 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hot damn i love the and the lemon
Date: 18 Jan 2016 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 21
So i put off reading the ending cuz i didnt want to see this go. I feel for eddie Dimitri manipulated him, and i guess bella was wrong edward didnt love eddie deep down. I would wonder if anthony can do anything that will make edward kill him? I get it eddie was a child conceived out of rape, i imagine id have a hard time seeing a child that was conceived if i was raped. I admit i was hoping edward would have had someone Rape Dimitri, that would of been my revenge before i killed him.
Date: 31 Oct 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi i want to read the first want but I can't find it :(
Date: 17 Aug 2015 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow. Could not find the first one, but the sequel was great. Meg
Date: 09 May 2015 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it as always!!
Date: 07 May 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think that they are exactly where they need to be as a family. One child is more than enough to fulfill their needs. The cousins can fill in the other times when Anthony requires interaction with other children.
The three if them have made if through the rough start and can now enjoy life.
Nice wrap up to their story.
Date: 06 May 2015 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great story. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 05 May 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
Absolutely perfect! Thanks for sharing
Date: 02 May 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
I really love this story and can't wait to read others.
Date: 01 May 2015 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 22
Anthony is too funny. TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 01 May 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you for that last scene with them. It wouldn't have been complete w/o it.
Date: 01 May 2015 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
Perfect ending. Thank you
Date: 01 May 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 22
Absolutely perfect Cristina.
Thank you for sharing your awesome talent with us. I appreciate and love every word you have wrote to form this amazing story.
Sherry
Date: 01 May 2015 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
Love little AnthonyI am sure he is going to keep Edward and Bella on their toes. Love Nonna.
I am sad to see this story ending. I have truly loved reading your story. Thano you for sharing it with us.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am so sad this is over!!! I loved this story and i'm sure i will go back and read both of them again!!! Thank you for sharing this with us!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
like I said last review. I will miss this story. Please don't stop writing.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
it was a great journey
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you.
I enjoyed the journey so much that I'm going to start all over.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 22
Really enjoyed this amazing story. Thank you for sharing. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 30 Apr 2015 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
well done loved these two
edward and kitten
Date: 30 Apr 2015 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
:) loved this story
Date: 30 Apr 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 22
thank you very much....
Date: 28 Apr 2015 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
I have loved this story and hated it because you have left us. Not an update since Jan. Please don't just leave whatever the problem none of my business but your stories are always different and well written.
Date: 28 Apr 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
I didn't think Eddie should have been killed. He was a brainwashed, naive child.
Date: 28 Apr 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm not thrilled that she's leaving after having the baby but I don't judge her. As long as she doesn't ignore her child.
Date: 27 Apr 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
hmm Wonder why Sam is just walking away. Yey for Dimitri finally being dead.
Date: 27 Apr 2015 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow
edward shocked
Date: 27 Apr 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow!!! So excited to get this update. Glad Bella and the baby were both ok. Glad Edward got his "freedom" from Demtri. I was just a little surprised that he killed Eddie so easily since he was Edward's son. Sam really surprised the hell out of me. Can't believe he would just walk away and let Edward go.
Date: 27 Apr 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow what a chapter....I usually don't review but this chapter is the end of something new and can be wonderful for Edward......he finally got he's revenge and what a reward.....To be able to love his family without any strings.....painful strings to hinder his life.....if only real life was like that.....
This really would make a great ending!!!!
This Edward and Sam I like after all the animosity between those two and Sam giving him a pass, I would assume that Sam knows the reason for all the pain and anguish that Edward went through....
KIdnapping Bella, for Dimitri and Eddie was the beginning to the end....there is now bigger pain for anyone to have their family almost taken and the only relief is to kill them......and for Sam to acknowledge that was a heck of a closure for Edward.....He would be happy in his life now and be the mob boss we all know and love....lol
Date: 27 Apr 2015 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter
Date: 27 Apr 2015 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
was that the end
Date: 27 Apr 2015 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
Did Sam just save his own life or what?
Date: 27 Apr 2015 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
Excellent climax. This was worth waiting for
Date: 27 Apr 2015 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 21
I wanna hug Edward. He's grandfather was an awful man. He deserved to have the life choked out of him.
What an honor to name their son after Bella's brother.
I half expected him to allow Eddie to live. I bet Bella is gonna have a hard time excepting Edward killed his own son, no matter the circumstances.
Awesome chapter Cristina.
Sherry
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm glad Edward could kill the ghosts hunting him. Hopefully, he can move on now.
And Bella being well again is such a relief.
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
Another great chapter. I have truly enjoyed this story. I don't know how I feel about Eddie's death though. Although I understand Edward's anger, I feel really bad for Eddie. His life was sad and tragic. The only person who loved him was a pedophile and he never fit in anywhere. Ronnie's death hurt quite a bit too, but overall I love this. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
Sam let the inherant evil within this twisted family cleanse itself of the most vile member. I'm surprised but not concerned. Sam needed a clean break and the timing of all this allowed for the perfect story to complete his career.
Will Sam keep Edward apprised of his current location and status in the future?
Date: 27 Apr 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 21
Yay! Big pig Demetri is gone and so is Eddie, and Kittens awake and glad to be alive, yay! Love the babies name.
Date: 30 Mar 2015 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
I cant wait please update love the story
Date: 16 Jan 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!!!!! I am so glad that Bella came back to Edward and her baby. Can't wait till she is awake and can hold her son.
Date: 16 Jan 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMGOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know Edward is going out of his mind. I am soooooo off to the next chapter. Thank goodness I do not have to wait for an update right now. I would be going crazy if I were having to wait. I can not believe that Ronnie is really dead. I just knew that he would have on a bullet proof vest or something.
Date: 16 Jan 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm sad that Riley was a casualty of the mess with Demetri.
Carlisle doesn't know that Eddie is actually Edward's son? I thought the family was informed of the abuse he withstood at the hand of his grandfather and that slut Heidi.
Date: 15 Jan 2015 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 20
Both POV's are great. Very dramatic.
Date: 15 Jan 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
["Procedure my ass, law boy," Victoria said patting him on the back. "Welcome to the dark side," she winked] lol lol I haven't been able to figure out Sam but there's something about him I like:) He doesn't seem dirty but how he is with the Cullen's is odd.
Date: 14 Jan 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love your story can not wait for more.
Date: 13 Jan 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
Edward and Bella have been through so much. I hope they find happiness now.
Date: 13 Jan 2015 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
OK, you made me cry again! But you are doing a great job with this long story!
Date: 12 Jan 2015 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
glad the baby is ok. Poor B
Date: 11 Jan 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
THANK YOU FOR THE QUICK UPDATE !!!! AND WE HAVE A BABY BOY AND BELLA SAFE .... LOL UPDATE SOON
Date: 10 Jan 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you Cristina for another chapter quickly. Now We all have to hope that Bella does not go back to wanting out of her marriage and leaving her baby. stick it out girl. This man made mistakes but he loves You and his son.
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter. Love Edward with the baby.
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 20
Is the baby going to be named Reilly?
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm glad their little boy is fine and that Bella is supposed to make a full recovery! My heartbeat was beating double time through this whole chapter but I'm sure noe I'm able to relax - for their hopefully reunion and happy times;)
Date: 10 Jan 2015 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
This was a real rollercoaster ride you took us on this chapter. But it was all worth it to hear that Bella wants them to be a family. Now she only has to wake up.
Date: 10 Jan 2015 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
Fuck yeah! She's back!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thank goodness!!! They both made it!!! Yay!! it's a boy!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 20
If anyone can save Eddie from Edward, it will be Bella. As it is now, that boy is a dead one. I was wrong, I guessed the baby to be a girl. Edward will cherish his newborn son. I loved the part where Riley met Bella in the great beyond and told her to go back, that was very touching. I can hardly wait for Bella to wake and be reunited with Edward and their baby boy. I loved every word.
Sherry
Date: 10 Jan 2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks so much for the update, OMG this story !
Date: 10 Jan 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you thank you, for the update, I hope they can finally have a happy life together now with their son, and I hope Edward makes them pay for what they did to her
Date: 10 Jan 2015 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great story keep the good work! can't wait for the next chapter.take care and god bless your beautijful talent, as a writer :)
Date: 09 Jan 2015 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 09 Jan 2015 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
THANKS FOR UPDATING. EXCELLENT CHAPTER,LOVE YA!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter..but again with the evil cliffhanger.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
this isn't much further than last chapter, please don't make us wait long
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
I sure hope you have the next chapter ready to fly. My anxiety level is at an all time high where the health and safety and of an unborn child is concerned.
What are the chances of a live birth under this level of stress and injury?
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow knocked out for twelve hours.... Carlisle is going to pay for that I bet. Aww poor Bella.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh dear Cristina don't stop now.. I am old with limited days.
Great chapter.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
I shouldn't be surprised by another cliffie but once again I am. I hope Sam doesn't take him to lock up.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
I hope Bella and the baby are alright
Date: 07 Jan 2015 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks again for the best chapter yet, OMG this was heart pounding! Can't wait for more!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 19
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
No, no, noooooo! She has to be alright . Edward is going to kills Dimitri and maybe even little Eddie .
Date: 07 Jan 2015 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh no... finally he did get to her only to see her flatline? Thars so cruel:(
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
Another cliffie....ahh I'm dying here, cant wait for next update
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
THAT NOT FUNNY AT ALL PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ
Date: 07 Jan 2015 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh, you're evil. What a bad, bad cliffie. I hope you won't let us hang for too long!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
THE ULTIMATE CLIFFIE!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm holding my breath, everything has to be okay for Bella and the baby. Death is way too easy for Dimitri, he needs to suffer before he dies.
Fan-fuckin-tastic chapter.
Sherry
Date: 07 Jan 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
This is such a cliffhanger. Great chapter. Great author, ease don't let us hang for a long time