Date: 22 Apr 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
Please continue writing this story it is so different and fascinating...your writing style and structure has grown in leaps and bounds after reading your most recent stories but the story of good verses evil you have woven so far is so complex and compelling. I am definitely feeling a pregnancy on the horizon and then what will Edward do when he is forced to reveal himself? Oh my mind is spinning with the possibilities of where you could go in this situation
Date: 05 Apr 2017 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
Please continue writing this story it is so different and fascinating...your writing style and structure has grown in leaps and bounds after reading your most recent stories but the story of good verses evil you have woven so far is so complex and compelling. I am definitely feeling a pregnancy on the horizon and then what will Edward do when he is forced to reveal himself? Oh my mind is spinning with the possibilities of where you could go in this situation
Date: 28 Apr 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
I like this story very dark. Not like Rosalie very much. Can't wait til Aug
Date: 22 Apr 2016 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Nooo til August? Ahhhhhhh
Date: 13 Apr 2016 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
I do hope you finish this story eventually. It is really extremely interesting!!!
Date: 25 Jan 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
Any chance of an update? I've been thinking about this story.
Date: 09 Dec 2015 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
hope you come back soon
Date: 12 Nov 2015 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really miss this story! Please update soon :)
Date: 12 Nov 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story!!!! Hope you update soon
Date: 21 Sep 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh boy....and now Rosalie let loose Peter....what of Alice!?!? How different will she be when she awakens?!?! What about Bella....she's in more danger now than ever!!! And they have no clue!!! More soon please!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
Excellent chapter!! Please update again soon!
Date: 15 Jul 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
This is ridiculous. One minute she doesn't want him and vows to resist him then the next she can't get enough of him. This Bella is quite irritating and the chapters are getting repititive. Its the same thing going back and forth with she and Edward. Alice is quite timid as well. This is what, the twelfth chapter and Bella is still in the dark? This story is moving so slow. I like other aspects if it tho.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
Rose really wants to die huh?
Date: 25 Apr 2015 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
:) :) :) Good to see an update, these two facinate me.
Date: 23 Apr 2015 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next! T
Date: 22 Apr 2015 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
"What if her efforts failed and the master found out of her betrayal?" Rose is a nasty character. Hopefully there's some good torture planned for her 'cause she pisses me off::))
"There would be no good outcome to come of this, he knew that. Unless she would become...but he could never, would never do that to her." Guess no matter what species he is, he's an idiot:) Not that I want Bella to become a demon which is in a whole other ballpark than a vampire::))
Date: 22 Apr 2015 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
thank you for th eupdate...who has Rosalie called? what will Peter do? What will Mason do when he finds out?...until you post again
Date: 22 Apr 2015 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more 😉
Date: 20 Apr 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Awww something tells me bella will be a pawn to peter getting even. I think the min edward calls bella her name instead of miss swan will be the day he himself admits he has fallen in love too,
Date: 20 Apr 2015 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
love it but awful long wait
Date: 20 Apr 2015 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG what has Rose done Edward will be in a fight to protect Bella even more than before
Date: 20 Apr 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG! It has been along time since the last update, I loved it!! Please super Duper please update soon!!!!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2015 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
thanks,, thought you had quit this and us..
Rose and Satan and Peter how apt.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
Looking foreword to next chapter :)
Date: 20 Apr 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
And we all know he gets everything he wants..... Poor Bella has a bullseye on her back ow. Great chapter. Hope we don't have to wait so long for the next chapter. Love this story!
Date: 20 Apr 2015 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
So glad that you have updated. I am worried about what Peter and Rose are planning.
Date: 20 Dec 2014 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 13
loving in the stars wow what else could be better. why is Rose wanting Bella out of the way so bad??
Date: 19 Dec 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
She know something is not right but just cant put her finger on it. Did Rose find her?
Date: 11 Dec 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my......more soon please!!!! Will she be successful? Edward is gonna be beyond pissed when he sees Rose has not learned her lesson!!!
Date: 11 Dec 2014 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Been checking this site everyday hoping you have updated. Please give us more chapters soon. This story is really good and I enjoy reading it.
Date: 11 Dec 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 13
Sounds like rosalie is not going to give up easily.
Lol I am thinking Edward is falling in love.
Date: 05 Dec 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
What is she planning and when Edward finds out how fast will she die
Date: 03 Dec 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
I guess Rosalie has not learned her lesson.
Date: 30 Nov 2014 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
been a long wait but it was a good chapter
Date: 26 Nov 2014 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
What is Rosalie up to????? As always you leave me wanting more and more. Hope you update again soon.
Date: 25 Nov 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
LOVED IT AS ALWAYS! THANK YOU!
Date: 22 Nov 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
I loved it!!!!!!! Plz update soon!!!!!!
Date: 22 Nov 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
"I bet you secretly love it when they bow to you," "You would be correct," lol lol It's interesting how Bella isn't really very intimidated by Edward, at not in a fearful way.
Edward either knows what Rosalie is up to & is just letting her hang herself or he has a flaw in his power.
Date: 22 Nov 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
This is a great chapter. Thank you so much. Can't wait to find out what Rosalie is up to.
Date: 22 Nov 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Hope Mr Mason saves her. Another great chapter.
Date: 22 Nov 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 22 Nov 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
Happy birthday to me hun it's like reading paradise lost book one where are you going with thus one hun it's stunningly brilliant
Date: 21 Nov 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love! Very update did not disappoint. Devilward is hot! More please.
Date: 21 Nov 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ugh Rose doesn't know when to stop does she.
Date: 21 Nov 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good chapter.
Date: 21 Nov 2014 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow I didn't think she would do that. Ok rose has me worried what she is doing. Great chapter. I am surprised he just doesn't have them married.
Date: 21 Nov 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
Will Bella get pregnant with a devil spawn? Roselie is just asking to be brutally killed by him.
Date: 21 Nov 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
I wish he had killed Rosalie. She is horrible.
Date: 21 Nov 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
Rose.. more evil than the Devil himself.
Date: 21 Nov 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
Rosalie is crazy! I'm talking C-R-A-Z-Y with a straitjacket
Date: 21 Nov 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter again... Jeez, Rosalie is really nasty. I hope she is dealt with swiftly and painfully. Thank you!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
More please more Cristina
Date: 06 Nov 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh boy, Oh boy, Oh boy...
Date: 01 Nov 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
LOVED IT, THANK YOU!
Date: 31 Oct 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
"Well, well, well. What do we have here?" I suspect Rosalie:( Obviously, Edward isn't all knowing. His arrogance seems to make it impossible for him to believe his 'followers' would ever work against him. As always in fanfics, Bella is the one to suffer for his stupidity.
I'm really curious what Edward has in mind for Bella's future even tho I suspect he currently has no idea beyond the immediate (sex)::))
Date: 31 Oct 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
This story is so creepy. It is a love hate relationship with this Edward.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
I am really loving this fic!
Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
Another Chapter soon please!??
Best wishes, T
Date: 30 Oct 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
Rosalie?? Loving this!!!
Date: 29 Oct 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm following your story but can't help but wish that there wasn't any blood sacrifice in it. (I know I know you warned me, but still)
Concerned about Esme and Carlisle. Keep them safe please.
Date: 29 Oct 2014 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm so confused.... Update soon
Date: 28 Oct 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Esme. hmm mind control huh. That's not good.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh crap! I'm guessing Roselie has once again snuck into the castle.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG!I love your story can not wait for more .Best story out here.Great writing.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
The well well must be Rose..
Date: 28 Oct 2014 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
Is that Rose???? I was so glad to see your update this morning. Poor Alice. Now that she has accepted Edward as her master will she still try to get Bella away from him or will she try to get them together now. I can't wait to find out what Rose jas planed for Bella.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
Taking thats rose at the end? Can edward imprenant bella, idk if the demon can or not? Loved the lemon.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
I like it, I loved it please update soon
Date: 28 Oct 2014 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
What a great story. Very unique :)
Date: 28 Oct 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my fucking god noooooo dont end this chapter with me so close to the ed gee! !!!
Date: 28 Oct 2014 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
I wonder who is with Bella... Great chapter. Love this story.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
Holy crap! Hope that isn't Rosalie!
Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 27 Oct 2014 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
So the lady in black is Esme. Was Bella a virgin? I can not believe he just took her like that and just disappeared for a few days. I would be mad too.
Date: 27 Oct 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Rosalie is one side ck woman. She is crazy.
Date: 27 Oct 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
So Rosalie wants Edward for herself. I am thinking that Rosalie was the one that "lead" Bella to the hidden room that night. Edward will distroy her when he finds out. Hopefully Alice will mention this conversation to Jasper and Jasper will mention it to Edward. I don't want Bella hurt.
Date: 27 Oct 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
Omgosh!!!!!!! I can not believe that she gave into him. I was surprised that he made it snow in July. He is being brave or stupid
Date: 27 Oct 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
I can not believe that Edward did not know that Bella was there witnessing what was going on. How in the world is he going to explain what she just saw?
Date: 27 Oct 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
I was surprised that Edward was in the church.
Date: 27 Oct 2014 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hot hot hot!!!!!!!! Poor Bella she is in so much lustful trouble.
Date: 27 Oct 2014 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
So is he truly a demon? He is not a vampire?? Is he manipulating her feelings? He blow in her face and made her say yes, even though I thought no she would have said yes anyway.
Date: 27 Oct 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
Enjoying this story
Date: 27 Oct 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to find out more about Edward.
Date: 27 Oct 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 24 Oct 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wonder if Edward's taking Bella's virginity will protect her...from Rosalie?
Date: 24 Oct 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
As much as I am not a fan of the devil or evil spirits, I love Edward so much. I think I am just as torn as Bella. It would be hard to not want Edward.
Date: 22 Oct 2014 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love this story! I just started it last night. I can't wait for more!!!
Date: 21 Oct 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved the lemon. I have a feeling that since edward claimed bella, he will kill rose for trying to harm whats his. Wonder why bella passed out for 2 days after she had lost her vcard?
Date: 21 Oct 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
YOUR BACK! MORE PLZ,LOVE IT!
Date: 21 Oct 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow! Glad you're back. Love this story. Thank you.