Date: 18 Feb 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 11: Something New
Yummo love it!!
Date: 18 Feb 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 11: Something New
Yay Edward! He really is a good man, I'm glad he told Bella how he feels. I just hope she lets herself be with him. They need each other. This was a great chapter.
Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 11: Something New
In my head I am hearing the Chairmen of the Board singing, "Give me just a little more time, and our love will surely grow".
Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 11: Something New
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 11: Something New
Patience grasshopper..Something tells me that Edward is going to be reminding himself of that a lot on this journey. Hopfully Bella won't make him wait too long.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 10: Something Old
poor bella. she is having such a hard time being so idle. she is always so busy and in too so much it is so hard for her to let her medicine kick in
oh edward your heart is so big. you and bella are a perfect fit
love it
Date: 15 Feb 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 10: Something Old
I am so excited for the party and Bella to get her puppy. Got to love Edward.
Date: 15 Feb 2014 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 10: Something Old
Another good chapter!
Date: 15 Feb 2014 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 10: Something Old
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 10: Something Old
Love, love this story! Can't wait till the party!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 10: Something Old
:) :)
Date: 14 Feb 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 10: Something Old
Sweet chapter. Loved the wedding and the new house. Lol for cassie waking e up.
Date: 14 Feb 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 10: Something Old
I feel sorry for Bella. You know that she feels useless. She is used to being so busy and for her to have to stay in the house, I am sure that is driving her crazy. Love that Edward is falling for a horse. I can't wait to see what Bella thinks of the horse that Edward has brought and her puppy. Can' wait to read about her birthday party.
Date: 14 Feb 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 10: Something Old
Great update
Date: 14 Feb 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 10: Something Old
Loved it! This was an awesome chapter and I absolutely loved the Caddie and Edward time they are too cute. Can't wait for Bella's birthday party it will be awesome
Date: 14 Feb 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 9: Home on the Ranch
WOW!!!! I was wondering about the picture at the top of this chapter. Poor Bella. I hope that she and Edward get some time together. I had to laugh that the people that Edward was trying to get the dog from laready knew Bella and Billy and ended up giving them the puppy. lol
Date: 10 Feb 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 9: Home on the Ranch
That was scary I'm glad Edward made the decision to ask her out can't wait
Date: 10 Feb 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 9: Home on the Ranch
I'm glad Edward is getting ready to man up. It will be interesting to see what Bella's reaction is. She is a strong woman but at the same time has been through some rough things.
Date: 10 Feb 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 8: Learning the Ropes
When is he going to do something and what will she say
Date: 10 Feb 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 9: Home on the Ranch
Fabulous story and I anxiously await the next chapter.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 9: Home on the Ranch
Glad Bella is ok. Sucks that she's got Lupus on top of all the other crap that has happened to her.
Sounds like E is going to tell her soon. Yey.
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 9: Home on the Ranch
I really enjoyed the first story and was excited to see there was another that followed that one. I can't wait to read the next chapters to see where the story will take this amazing group of people who are slowly beginning to become one large family.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 9: Home on the Ranch
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 9: Home on the Ranch
:)
Date: 09 Feb 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 9: Home on the Ranch
Damn! This was an emotional chapter, I'll admit I had a few tears. Glad Bella is doing better, and that they are home. Im curious to see what Bella had Jasper do, I'm intrigued. Im happy they all got on a horse and seem to like it.
Date: 08 Feb 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 8: Learning the Ropes
So glad that he is actually noticing and paying attention to his feelings for Bella. So excited when my email tells me it has updated again.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 8: Learning the Ropes
:)
Date: 07 Feb 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 8: Learning the Ropes
Love Dashed, he is one awesome dog. Yay Llue got down the stairs on his own. Yay for Seth and Jessica can't wait to see what happens with them. Looks like Jasper will be building a barn soon.
Date: 07 Feb 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 8: Learning the Ropes
I love the togetherness of everyone. I can't wait for Edward to speak up.
Date: 07 Feb 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 8: Learning the Ropes
OMGosh!!!!!! I can not believe that Seth just ask like he did, with everyone just sitting around. I can't wait for more Edward and Bella time and Edward,Bella and Cassie time.
Date: 07 Feb 2014 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 8: Learning the Ropes
hmm why do I have a feeling that the fire test has something to do with the little creeps breaking into the farm?
Aww E misses her.
Date: 07 Feb 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 8: Learning the Ropes
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Beautiful Mess
I can't wait to find out what is going on at the fence line. I wonder what they took. I love the little bit of mystery in the story.
Date: 01 Feb 2014 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 7: A Beautiful Mess
Why are they getting in the feild and what are they taking?? Bella is hooked on Edward he is such a great guy.
Date: 01 Feb 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 7: A Beautiful Mess
Love this. I just knew that Edward and Bella were going to have a paint fight and get caught up in each others arms. I hope we get some Cassie and Edward time. What is the deal with the Call's????
Date: 31 Jan 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Beautiful Mess
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 31 Jan 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Beautiful Mess
WOW! Loved the update and Bella's little slip. I hope we get more Cassie/Edward time. I really like to see them together.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Beautiful Mess
:)
Date: 31 Jan 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Beautiful Mess
OOoh the Calls are up to something. The Cams are a right smart idea. Aww for B&E painting together.
Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 6: Takin’ Care of Business
Does Edward already have a vehicle? I can't wait until Edward gets settled and back to his normal self. He still seems rather sad and lost.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 6: Takin’ Care of Business
Love it! Especially Edwards reaction at the Bank of America.
Happy to read that you're feeling better after your surgery.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 6: Takin’ Care of Business
love it
small town life is so much different
it can be good and then again everyone knows your business.
i came from a town with one stop light and took less than 5 minutes to get through. now you miss the farms and the trees they are now all replaced by houses how sad
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 6: Takin’ Care of Business
LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 6: Takin’ Care of Business
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 6: Takin’ Care of Business
:)
Date: 25 Jan 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 6: Takin’ Care of Business
Loved it. I can't wait for more Edward and Cassie time. Love how quickly they all became family. It will take them time to get used to small town livin.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 6: Takin’ Care of Business
Can't wait for more
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 6: Takin’ Care of Business
Sweet chapter. Small towns have their pluses and minuses. I'm partial to Ford products myself.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
This chapter was great.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
Sounds like a great day to me! Also, I kknow I would have had the same reaction to the snake that Esme did. I'm not sure thwt I would go back to yhe garden if I wwas her. Great job...thanks!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
love how things are coming together
my favorite story
love it thank you
Date: 12 Jan 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
Great chapter. Love seeing everyone chip in and help out. Cassie and E are do cute together.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
I want to be there on the ranch. Sounds heavenly.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
I am really enjoying this story. I like how detailed you are about them and their surroundings.
I love how Edward is with Cassie.
Can't wait tell next chapter. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
Cassie is calling Edward dad???
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’
I really like your story
Date: 11 Jan 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
I love the way you write Cassy; as a special needs mom its refreshing to see an accurate portral of the interaction between child and her family. As a mom its nice to have that "i'm not the only one" feeling.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
I caught that Cassie called Edward "Da" as in Dada or Daddy!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Jan 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
Great chapter! I could picture it all in my head... it would be an amazing day.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’
That unloading is the hard part! This is one rich Bella!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
:)
Date: 10 Jan 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
Love it
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds
Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2014 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 4: A Day of Rest
Loved it!
I just adore your story.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 4: A Day of Rest
sounds like they are all finding their stride and how they will fit in
loving it and look forward to more
thank you
Date: 04 Jan 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 4: A Day of Rest
I am truly enjoying this story. You still have not told us why everyone gasp when Edward dipped his fries in Cassie's ketchup.
Date: 03 Jan 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Day of Rest
Love it what a sweet story!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Day of Rest
Edward needs to put the little bed on his bed. He will get used to it. Then he can move it to different locations and he will know it is his. Right now it has a manufacturing smell. Once it has his smell, he will be fine and Edward can sleep all night.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Day of Rest
:)
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Day of Rest
Wonderful day!!! Glad E and R thought of rotating the dinner duties.
Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Day of Rest
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2014 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Day of Rest
Can't wait for more
Date: 30 Dec 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 3: Heavin’ the Haul
Edward is so sweet with that baby girl.
Date: 28 Dec 2013 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 3: Heavin’ the Haul
The family is growing close Cassie loves Edward already to.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 3: Heavin’ the Haul
Love it! Edward and Cassie where so cute.
Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 3: Heavin’ the Haul
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 3: Heavin’ the Haul
:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 3: Heavin’ the Haul
oh things are moving along
i love how cassie is allowing the others into her family and life
wow bella has such a big heart and is awesome about helping others
love it
Date: 27 Dec 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 3: Heavin’ the Haul
hmmm Guessing Cassie doesn't like sharing her ketchup with most people? LOL.
Date: 27 Dec 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 3: Heavin’ the Haul
LOVE that Cassie felt comfortable enough with Edward to sit in his lap, even if it was because of Lleu. lol. I am assuming that everyone gaspped when Edward took some of Cassie ketchup because she throws a fit when someone does that. Can you let us know in the next chapter, please.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 3: Heavin’ the Haul
Can't wait for more
Date: 23 Dec 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’
I would hate to pay that credit card bill. Bella is so generous, but she got some good workers and a new family.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’
love it
hell of a day and so much money
my goodness so many people to gett hings for
love it
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2013 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’
Love it!
Ya I wouldn't want to be the one unloading, it's easy when your purchasing it's "small" qantaties at a time, but then you get home you open the trailler and your: yeah ok where to start...
Looking foward to next week!
Happy Christmas!
Date: 21 Dec 2013 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’
What a shoping trip wow they are like one big famiy that know each other very well
Date: 21 Dec 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2013 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’
Outdoor stoes are the only place that accomidate hubbies size 15.
Date: 20 Dec 2013 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’
great chapter, cant wait to read more
Date: 20 Dec 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’
B is such a caring soul. Loving the slow build up.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’
I thought my 'big' shop was a nightmare to get and put away - at least it isn't as bad as this!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2013 9:31 AM Title: Prologue & Chapter 1: Settlin'
i Liked the review from bellas point of view from their journey for the prolougue and i am looking forward to see the story unfold. however, as a native german i believe that we use different words for commanding the dog. for example, find is 'Such!' (imperative of suchen which means to search instead of finden which means to find) whereas die Erfindung actually is a noun meaning invention (never said that the german language makes sense ;) ). attack would be translated into 'Fass!' (imperative of fassen) and down into Platz! (short for Platz nehmen which means take a seat). Let me know if you'd like some help on the German and thank you for sharing!
Date: 13 Dec 2013 6:11 PM Title: Prologue & Chapter 1: Settlin'
Loved reading this from Bella's POV. Thanks!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2013 2:53 PM Title: Prologue & Chapter 1: Settlin'
Great chapter, I can't wait to read more
Date: 07 Dec 2013 6:53 AM Title: Prologue & Chapter 1: Settlin'
Loved reading Swan Lakes Ranch...the story line was well thought out and very nicely done. I am so looking forward to moving along with Edward and Bella and the rest of the family with the new story. Keep writing...you are very good at it. You make it feel like you are part of the story and can actually see things that are happening. Love it! Love it! Love it! I look forward to next Friday....
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2013 3:30 AM Title: Prologue & Chapter 1: Settlin'
Its nice to kniw Bella has feelings for Edward too.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2013 10:16 PM Title: Prologue & Chapter 1: Settlin'
Can't wait to read more!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 9:00 PM Title: Prologue & Chapter 1: Settlin'
Yay...I was so excited to hear you were writing a sequel and you got that up super quick...cant wait until friday for the next chapter
Date: 06 Dec 2013 7:58 PM Title: Prologue & Chapter 1: Settlin'
Woo Hoo. Great start to the sequel. I'm loving your strong confident business woman Bella. A sweet jess is nice too.
Can't wait for more.