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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 20: Makin’ Waves

love it

such an exciting trip

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 19: Sunny Days

howard was a great deal of help

how cool bella seems to be getting the boat or yahct of her dreams

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 20: Makin’ Waves

Sounds like a great ocean trip. It's handy having your own personal chef onboard. With all the new skills everyone is learning, they are going to be very well rounded folks. It's great that they are always learning new things. It helps keep life exciting. They are lucky they ilve in the gulf coast where they have warm water for all these water sports.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 20: Makin’ Waves

So much fun for these two. I would love to see more interaction between Cassie and Edward. I think that relationship would be absolutely beautiful to see unfold.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 20: Makin’ Waves

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 20: Makin’ Waves

I am so glad tht everyone got to be a part of this special time. I was wondering how involved Edward and Bella are. How far has their relationship gone?? I know they have kissed and they have shared a bed but from the story I don't think they have done anything. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 20: Makin’ Waves

Woo hoo for the boat and everyone coming down for the launch ceremony

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 20: Makin’ Waves

:):)

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 20: Makin’ Waves

And now I want shrimp! Yay I loved this chapter.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 19: Sunny Days

This sounds like it is going to be an amazing boat. It will provide years of fun for the whole family.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 19: Sunny Days

Great chapter!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 19: Sunny Days

Wow that would be the life

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 19: Sunny Days

Sounds like the trip was a rousing success

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 19: Sunny Days

:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 19: Sunny Days

Glad that they found a yacht.  So Edward and Bella share the bed at the hotel. Was Billy surprised by this?  It kind of seems like you skimmed over that like or was no big deal. Have they moved their relationship into a more physical one yet? Did we miss it? 

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 19: Sunny Days

Yay they have a boat.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 19: Sunny Days

Looking forwards to the next chapter

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 18: Take a Dive

things are going better than ever

feel sorry for the stephensons. but bella and the family will help them

 

loving it all

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 18: Take a Dive

Wonderful family times.  Glad they had a good time with the diving.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 18: Take a Dive

The moments between Edward and Cassie are so sweet. It's nice to see everyone growing closer. Tell Edward he is lucky he got to do his certification in a lake. I had to do mine in the cold ocean. Their trip sounds like it's going to be fun. Looking forward to hearing about it.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 18: Take a Dive

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome job

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 18: Take a Dive

I normally don't like the slow burn very well, but the way you write it with these to makes it so worth it. I enjoyed this chapter.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 18: Take a Dive

OMG he is just the sweetest man alive!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 18: Take a Dive

:)

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 17: Get Your Feet Wet

Love it!

It looked like quite the day, no wonder Edward was tired.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

Great first date!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 17: Get Your Feet Wet

This place sounds so wonderful. I would love to live there. I love Texas. 

I love how close Edward has gotten to Cassie.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 17: Get Your Feet Wet

Picturing Edward playing with Cassie all day, so sweet.

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2014 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 17: Get Your Feet Wet

Bella can see the love that her baby girl has for Edward and he has for her so sweet

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2014 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 16: Summertime

I love what Esme said everyone sees the way he feels for them so cool.

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

I love your story & the innocence of the characters...that is what made me fall in love with the twilight series as well...Innocence & true love are rare in today's world...Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 17: Get Your Feet Wet

Love Edward and Cassie spending time together.  I am thinking that Bella over heard what Edward told Sarah. Glad that Jessica is ok with Bella moving on with Edward.  I just have to ask. .......where were the dogs for the day?  Just wondering.  lol

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 17: Get Your Feet Wet

So nice to see some Edward and cassie bonding time. I like the fact that Edward always makes sure that Bella gets her good night kiss, even if she is asleep. So sweet!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 17: Get Your Feet Wet

Wonderful chapter.  Love seeing him with Cassie.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 17: Get Your Feet Wet

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 17: Get Your Feet Wet

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 17: Get Your Feet Wet

AWE such a lovely chapter. I do enjoy the Edward/Cassie time. They are adorable together

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 16: Summertime

Looking forwards to the next chapter

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 16: Summertime

Absolutely wonderful.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 16: Summertime

Poor baby having a seizure. My nephew has them also. It is so hard to watch. I am so happy that Bella is opening up to a relationship.

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 16: Summertime

Love it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 16: Summertime

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 16: Summertime

Wonderful chaper.   Glad Cassie has dasher and her family to help with the seizures.  They def can be scary.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 16: Summertime

So nice to see everyone bonding together. I hope we get some description of Edwards diving lessons. I have taken those and they are interesting.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 16: Summertime

LOVE this chapter.  I am glad that Edward and Cassie got to spend some time one on one time. I am surprised that Edward did go check on Bella and Cassie during the night after the seizure. 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 16: Summertime

*sigh* I love Edward and Cassie together. So sweet!

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 16: Summertime

Awesome! :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 16: Summertime

Can this Bella do everything?? Superwoman.

Reviewer: Myhubbyissoedward Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

Can't wait for more. Great story !

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

They are both simply romantic. I love their chemisty.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

That was a sweet date and what a list

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

thrilled  em and rose are going to be foster parents to hedi

how cute cassie will have her little partner in crime on the ranch how cute

well the date seems to have gone great

love it

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

What a lovely date!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

Love it!!!!!!!!! Their date was perfect! !!!!!! I want to know  where Jane and the others are. Can't wait for more.  Loving this story. 

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

Love it

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

Sweet chapter!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

Woohoo yeah baby!! love it and wish you posted more than once a week.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

awww sweet first date.    Ugh   Guessing that Jane and the Call boys are going to cause a lot of trouble soon I bet.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

:)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

Ah these two are so cute. And quite the globe trotting bucket list. Hopefully they will get to do some of those things some day. 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Mice Will Play

oh look out.

bella is going into protection mode

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

love it and look forward to more

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Mice Will Play

Jane is crazy and Bella is going to get her

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Mice Will Play

Poor Edward. Crazy stalker won't leave him alone! I look forward to seeing how the family will handle  her.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Mice Will Play

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Mice Will Play

:)

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Mice Will Play

So  many question with each statement from Jane!

Great chapter.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Mice Will Play

Seth should have kept his mouth shut until the girls got back. You don't do anything to mess up a girls weekend. It could have waited.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Mice Will Play

Poor E.   Skankya et al are just continuing to mess with his life.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Mice Will Play

Esme is scary and Sarah is too. Jane better run. Between Bella, Esme and Sarah, Jane does not have a chance, lol.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Mice Will Play

Can't Edward catch a break. Though I think Bella would be more upset with Jane, then Edward never mentioning her. I mean he didn't think he would ever see her again, and its not like he ever did anything with Jane.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

Jane is just crazy. I wonder what she has planned. The girls seemed to have fun. I wonder what the boys did besides get drunk and deal with Jane.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

Love it! 

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 11: Something New

Love it! 

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 8: Learning the Ropes

Great chapter! 

I'm as concern as Jasper with that hay barn...

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

So Bella's preparing to give Jane the lesson of her life - I really look forward to reading that one :D I hope the boys get it all cleared while the girls are away! They really deserve to have some days off and especially Bella to have the chance to further sort her feelings!
I'm really happy that she said goodbye to Mike and accepted Edward's invitation! He will make her happy and she will make him heal as well!

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

oh hell no jane is back. I wonder if tanya has her following cullens. I feel bad things for that. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

Love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

Jane is going down when Bella gets ahold of her.  I cant wait for the date

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

Love that Edward gets so concerned with Bella. Good to see Edward and Cassie sending time together. Oh boy, I think Jane has met her match in Bella. I can't wait to see Bella in action with Jane.loved this chapter. Just know the boys were going to get thrown in jail. Lol

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

:)

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

Knew Jane wouldn't stay gone for long. So the girls were pissed about Jane, not that the boys were drunk, right. Cassie is to cute, and Im with Edward, ketchup on eggs is just wrong, that's one southern thing I just never picked up, and I was born and raised in Dallas.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

Oh no Jane followed them?  Poor E.

 

Love the family trips out.   Wish I had a big, close family like that sometimes.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 12: I Don’t Wanna Miss a Thing

thank you jessica for talking with bella and letting her see the past and future

baby steps. she is ready and taking on life head on

look forward to the date. dying to see what edward plans

 

love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 12: I Don’t Wanna Miss a Thing

She is ready to move on so happy for them.  I would love a weekend like that

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 12: I Don’t Wanna Miss a Thing

I can't wait to hear about their date but it sounds like we are going to have some good girly gossip first. Now, hopefully Edward will be ok being seperated from his girl. Maybe he will take the time to get to know Cassie better. Start learning a new role maybe....

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 12: I Don’t Wanna Miss a Thing

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 12: I Don’t Wanna Miss a Thing

Glad Jess talked with her.  Girls weekend sounds nice.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 12: I Don’t Wanna Miss a Thing

Another chapter that I LOVE!!!!!!!!!! I can just picture muddy puppies and a wet Edward. Why did Emmett not have to at least help get them clean since he was the reason that they were muddy. lol!!!!!!!! I liked how she told Edward that she would go on a date with him. :) Oh by the way, LOVE the pictures of the puppies that you shared on FB. They are soooooo cute. As always, you leave me wanting more and more. 

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 12: I Don’t Wanna Miss a Thing

Hmmm, please tell me that while the girls are gone we will get some Edward and Cassie time together. I know it sounds weird but I'd rather read that then a girls weekend. Glad Jessica finally talked some sense into Bella.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 12: I Don’t Wanna Miss a Thing

:)

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 11: Something New

A very nice chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 11: Something New

:):)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 11: Something New

Wonderful day.  Glad E finally told her how he felt.

Reviewer: jmthorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 5:54 AM Title: Prologue & Chapter 1: Settlin'

Finally! The feelings are out! Can't wait to see what happens next! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 11: Something New

AWESOME!!!!!!!! LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!! I am so glad that Edward finally told Bella how he felt and she told him too. Loved her reaction to the puppy!!!!! AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 11: Something New

Wow that was perfect love puppys.  How is Bella keeping together she knows she wants him??

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 11: Something New

Perfect, he finally told her where he stands with his feelings. So excited for this story and every chapters incite.

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