Date: 07 Jan 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great story ... I hope it does not take something awful to happen tp make Alec's family come around
Date: 07 Jan 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it! Something tells me though that things can get harder. Perhaps she does receive that phone call... So someone needs to screw the Cullen's heads on straight! Emmett hurting his son, Tanya acting like a brat, Esme and Carlisle enabling, and Charley and Renee thinking they know it all. Edward is trying to man up though and be the man Bella needs him to be. Bravo! I'm looking forward to your next update -- as always!
Date: 07 Jan 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Bella needs to move back in with Edward. They need to get settled and show everyone how happy they are.
Date: 07 Jan 2014 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
I loved the chapter(:
Date: 07 Jan 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, between the family get together and Jack they've had a hard day. I wish Renee would pull her head out as it is not that bad.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm glad Bella and Alec have each other. I don't think that I would want to attend any of Edward's family funtions in the future. I hope he won't subject her to that anymore.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
Sweet cant wait to read
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow Jacob has lost his mine..Edward should have gotten there a lot sooner...well done..thank you for the update...I'm ready to beat Tanya within a inch of her life.......Why would Emmett treat his son that way?until you post again
Date: 06 Jan 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow Edward has the family from hell. Hers is not much better but Renee will get over it and be a good sister. Charlie is cool. Emmett needs a stool shoved up his ass
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 14
Emmett is an asshole!!!
Date: 06 Jan 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
Uhh rose and skankya are pathetic. And em is too. Need more normal people in the family
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
Still hate Tanya and Rose, they are both nothing more than parasites, all though it was nice to see that Rose somewhat defended her son to her fucking douche nozzle of a husband. I think it is offical I pretty much hate all the characters in this story, have hated them all except bella at one time or another. Someone needs to beat the fuck out of Tanya, for sure. Emmett is a HUGE COCKSUCKER and I know he is straight but honestly his actions make him eat more dick than his gay son's ever drempt of! WTF! Esme is cray-cray if she thinks this family getting together for anything is a good idea, unless of course the somewhat sane and not so asshole-ish Charlie and Edward sign the rest of the looneybin in for a 72 hour psych hold. I freaking hate Jake now even more, what a worm. Oh and don't forget Renee, who I still say is a jealous, bitter harpy who doesn;t deserve to have Bella's forgiveness or friendship, much less be called a sister. UGH ... I iwll get off my soap box, but I have the feeling from the wonderful warning that i am far from being done ranting.
Date: 02 Jan 2014 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
I loved the chapter hopefully things get better.
Date: 01 Jan 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
Renee needs to step back and be a sister, not a mother. Does she even know how much she has hurt her sister? I love that Bella stood up to her and also that Bella stuck up for Alec! They are becoming quite a family - Alec, Bella, Jasper, and Edward! Wonderful characterizations and detail. The "no junk food thing" happened to my friend whenshe was expecting. Thai - no problem, healthy - no issues, but one little bit of junk food and she was miserable. You really did your homework! Kudos!
Date: 31 Dec 2013 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
Did Alec call him or did he come by when Bella didn't text him? Either way it was wonderful for him to come over and take care of her. These two love each other so much. I am glad they are working on communication. None of this would have happened if they would have talked truthfully from the beginning.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2013 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
What a bitch! Renee has completely floored me. She has gone from protecting Bella like a mama tiger to someone who is ashamed of her. And poor Alec. He has quickly become one of my favorite people in this story. I know Mike and his friends are not done with either him or Bella and I have a really bad feeling that it is going to take something life threating to one or both, to get Emmett to change his attitude towards him. Great story and I can't wait for the next update.
Thanks, Maria
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
What the hell does Renee think she is doing I know she is thinking she is protecting Bella but now cool at all.
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
Okay, Renee is now officially no better than Tanya or Rose in my book. And if that's what Em thinks about Alec, maybe someone just needs to blow up that whole house.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
! more please :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Alec, and as for Renee - I'm speechless!!!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
Renee is an idiot to think that would go over well Skankya is so pathetic as well as the bullies.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
Okay first off, I really hate Renee, she is a cunt and I am no longer sure there is any form of redemption for her. What a snatch! Edward I have forgiven, and hopefully he doesn't let her down again, because this time I think it would break this girl. I expect loads of trouble from Mike, and if Emmett is allowing this shit to happen to his son and condoning it no matter how much of a princess his son wants to be, he needs to be drawn and quartered. ARGH! I forsee something shitty on the horizon and I'm betting that the Queen cunts from both families will be heading up the personal hell against our girl. I wanna snatcha few of these characters and beat them down!
Date: 26 Dec 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
She is going to her home with Edward or to the boys apartment? I am so glad that they talked and are on their way to healing.
Date: 22 Dec 2013 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
To funny loved the end
Date: 22 Dec 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story!! Just finisher reading and getting caught up!! Edwards POV was made everything clear. Looking forward to more thanks and
Merry Christmas!!
Date: 22 Dec 2013 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
I was afraid you were going to have Rielly tell him. I'm glad it didn't lead to an angry Edward
Date: 22 Dec 2013 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
Hearing things from Edward's POV makes all the difference now! So many false steps and misses! They will never be a "normal" couple, but maybe they can finally just be themselves. Thanks for the update. I wish you and yours a very Merry Christmas and marvelous new year to come!
Joanie
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2013 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
:) Merry Christmas to you too
Date: 22 Dec 2013 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
I loved the chapter(:
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2013 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Happy Holidays and this was another good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
WOW, okay so I do not absolutely HATE Edward anymore, but I still think he is very ingorant when it comes to the ways of his wonderful little niece and her POS mother. I really cannot stand much of Edward's family at all. I think Alec is the best one. I also really think that Renee is not done being a bitch. I just don;t trust her much. I really believe she would thrown her sister under the bus at the first chance.
Date: 22 Dec 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 12
That was perfect and out in the open I cant wait til everyone else finds out and where is Bella going to call home??
Date: 22 Dec 2013 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
Still really not liking Renee. I am so glad that Edward knows about the baby, and that they know they love each other. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 22 Dec 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
oooh Riley violated HIPAA laws. Naught Naughty buy. Renee's reaction doesn't bother me.
Still so pissed at Tanya.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
These two have some serious talking to do, as well as, some forgiving. Bella needs to realize that other people have scars. She is not the only one. They need to work it out because they are going to be parents together. Edward wants more. You can tell, but Bella has acted like she is in heat, since they met. She has not let her feeling be known. Edward is more reserved. She is letting Tanya win, if she doesn't fight for her man.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
i loved the chapter
Date: 18 Dec 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
I luv your stories always interesting
Date: 18 Dec 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
Someone needs to beat the shit out of Tanya and junk punch Edward for even having that kind of conversation with that little bitch. How is he going to react to the baby he better be happy.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
I really hate that Edward turned out to be such a dick. Poor Bella. He knows how bad Tanya always treated her. Why would he talk to her about Bella? I can't wait for the next update. I love this story. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 17 Dec 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am so sad for her that she is pregnant. Right now, it's safe to say that the only people I like in this story are Bella, Alec, and Jasper. The rest of them can all go to hell. Oh, and I would be happy to send Tanya there by running her over with her stupid, pink, Miata.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow E really has his work cut out for him. What a dickhead. Glad Alec is turning out to be a nice guy. Rose and Skankya are going to flip over the pregnancy.
Why do i get the feeling Riley is going to run into the wrong person and flap his gums? ACK
Date: 17 Dec 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad Alec is being nice with her. E is really being a dickhead and so is Jake. Poor B
Date: 17 Dec 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
Outstanding chapter! You brought us all from the height of happy excitement to the very depths of pain and gut wrenching agony to cool realization. Bravo! It was done with flair and with a real pull at the heart strings. I love Alec and all he has become and is. Willing to be to Bella! Who'd have thought he had so much within him?! You really flesh him out and help us understand why Jasper cares so much for him and wonder how many hurts he has received from the very people so eager to hurt Bella. Thanks again for a wonderful story!
Date: 17 Dec 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
ROFL for the cake fight and E being jealous. But if he is keeping her as a dirty little secret, he shouldnt be surprised if she acts like normal.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad she is able to get along with Alec a little bit for Jaspers sake. Jealous E is so cute. aww for B's bad day
Date: 17 Dec 2013 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
Jeez E is giving me whiplash reading this. I'm sure Bella is confused.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow E is really bi polar with the mood swings. Crazyness. LOL for his black eye. Surprised Rose and Tanya haven't been around to give her crap.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
ooh looks like E is a bit jealous.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
Can't wait fOr the talk I love this story
Date: 17 Dec 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad she got to say her peace at the wedding despite Rose's comments. Eek Drunk Sex prob not a good thing. He's gonna freak in the AM
Date: 17 Dec 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow Tanya is one mega bitch.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
hmm His family does seem to have stick in those places. But as long as Charlie treats Renee well, I'd be happy as her sister. Aww for Mr Gentlemen E. LOL for the eye roll thing.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow this is going to be a trip of a story. Good start. Can understand B being touchy with having to deal with that lot.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapte but you know Bella left her name tag at Riley's and Edward is going to assume the worse & jump to the wrong conclusion.
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2013 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
I knew it would end badly, and I fully expected to hate Edward within an inch of his life. I am still not super happy with Renee, and I don't think she will be supportive at all to her sister. Charlie is a decent guy. Can we just have Tanya ran over by a dump truck because she is rather a trashy cunt anyway. I think riley will end up spillign the beans to Edward before Bella can tell him, because of the missing name tag, I am guessing she left it at her appointment. All hell is going to break loose. I freaking HATE several characters in this. UGH POST MORE SOON, PLEASE!
Date: 15 Dec 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love the new relationship developing between Alec and Bella. He sees and knows her for who she is - Edward is still working on that. In an odd way, I do love the tension between Bella and Edward too. Not just the sexual tension, but the honest- to- God tension of two people coming from different mind sets trying to get together. You are amazing at that! If one gave in too much it would not seem natural. You always find the perfect balance! Kudos there! I have the same suspicion Alec does at the end here. Bella is pregnant. Now comes the big question: will Edward step up and be a father, lover and husband? Or will he go off half cocked and lose Bella assuming the baby is or can be someone else's? I can't wait to find out! This is truly one of my favorite fictions to date. Thank you!
Date: 15 Dec 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
Evil I tell u just evil u are
Date: 14 Dec 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
Omg your killing me Please post soon
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
This was a great chapter, I was wondering about birth control while they were havign sex. Can't wait to see more. Oh snap is he going to call her a whore again and make her leave???
Date: 13 Dec 2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
I loved the chapter(: i think she is pregnant
Date: 13 Dec 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
He needs to stop with the pouting because he is going to be a daddy how is he going to take that I hope he doesnt call her a whore again or he will sorry.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward needs to think before he speaks!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2013 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am still not very happy with Edward. Yes, he is treating her so much better, but if he keeps up the dirty little secret shit, then Bella needs to go postal on his ass. I have a feeling Tanya is going to end up ruining this for all of them for awhile. And can we get an AMEN for Renee finally sticking up for her flesh and blood? I get that she wants to fit in with her new family, but her letting them treat Bella like shit was making me want to punch her.
Date: 10 Dec 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love the fun Bella is able to coax from Edward and now Emmett and Alec. Perhaps her new bonding with Alec and Jasper may bring Emmett and his son closer. Edward's birthday gift and the charms it includes are fascinating. Is there a double meaning? Another winning chapter! Although, I must confess, I grow more and more curious as to why Bella is so reluctant to talk about her mother's death. Kudos for that too!!
Date: 10 Dec 2013 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love it just to bad they are hiding but they are having fun
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
getting good
love it
Date: 09 Dec 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 9
I loved the chapter!(:
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2013 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
I actually kinda of liked Renee this chapter, but I still have a hard heart for her and the way she kinda pissed away Bella's feelings in the beginning. Tanya is a royal twat and needs to be throat punched or cunt kicked one or the other or both at the same time too would work. Rose is a horrid scab of a bitch for not being a better mother. Edward pisses me off with his dirty little secret shit ... Renee is a assbag for trying to push Jake and Bella into more. Jake needs to back the fuck off. Yeah post more SOON, PLEASE!!!! Its almost a month since my birthday ... just sayin'
Oh come on you know I love you both, but I want to know what the hell Edward's deal is ...
Date: 06 Dec 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
Now, if Edward is not there when she wakes up and gives her the silent treatment again after sex, her heart may just break. Also, what could she have mumbled to him half incoherently? "I love you."perhaps? Loved it! She is even getting along with Alec!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hate waiting Lol
Date: 05 Dec 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
I loved the chapter(:
Date: 05 Dec 2013 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
Finally! And yes, Edward better not be a dick about it!
Date: 05 Dec 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
How much more together can they be Now he cant go back to the way they where acting.
Date: 05 Dec 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
He wasn't drinking for once. Thanks for writing
Date: 02 Dec 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
She is so confused we know he likes her alot but why is he so distant
Date: 02 Dec 2013 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it! They are indeed drawing closer, but both Edward and Bella have issues they need to work on. I loved the end here!! I laughed so hard knowing that situation must have actually happened to people. It certainly will bring a family closer! Again, thank you for all the hard work; I look forward to more.
Date: 02 Dec 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
I loved the chapter (:
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 7
great update girls.
Date: 29 Nov 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
Mismatched is putting it mildly! They fit though, in an odd sort of way. If Edward were a little less starchy and Bella, a little less defensive, they would see how well! Lovely work! You are a crafts person. It shows in the details and feelings just below the surface! Kudos!
Date: 27 Nov 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
I loved the chapter(:
Date: 26 Nov 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
He is so confused he doesnt know what to do. She is going to lose her mind. I think the black eye is to funny . I cant wait for the camping trip
Date: 26 Nov 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Come on Edward just say what you already know u want to bang her when bees not drunk
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh edward why are you not making your move
poor bella being so frustrated.
her boys are a hoot
love it
Date: 26 Nov 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
ooohh i dont see a very happy edward come the next chapter!!! exciting!
Date: 25 Nov 2013 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, Edward....Jasper is gay!
What is the deal with Edward?
Love Bella.
Date: 25 Nov 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is confused about her relationship with the boys. He needs to make his move
Date: 25 Nov 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Silly Bella - hope Edward knows Jasper is gay.
Date: 25 Nov 2013 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
That girl is going to drive poor Edward to distraction! Her world must look fascinating from his POV. Bella had better learn to bend in their friendship - relationship if she truly cares. Loving the story!!
Date: 25 Nov 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
I loved the chapter(:
Date: 25 Nov 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wedding sex????
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved this, but I am worried that Edward will think it is more than it is and he will start seeing someone else. What a tagled web we weave sort of thing.