Date: 05 Jun 2010 10:46 AM Title: Fuse
lol it was just a dream
Date: 05 Jun 2010 12:34 AM Title: Velvet
great time all around
Date: 05 Jun 2010 12:03 AM Title: Justice
yay *claps feverishly*
Date: 04 Jun 2010 11:44 PM Title: Threshold
Bella needs to kick her ass
Date: 04 Jun 2010 11:28 PM Title: Okhotnichya
stupid Tanya kill her off please
Date: 04 Jun 2010 10:33 PM Title: Illumination
wonder what it says hmmm
Date: 03 Jun 2010 7:12 PM Title: Epilogue
That was fantastic!!! I loved it!! Absolutely amazing!! Such a tender love story!! Thanks for sharing such a great story!!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 6:33 PM Title: Goodbye
Even though your story is completed, I have to say I'm still loving it. Your rendition of B and E are different and exciting. Count me in as a Velvet Vixen too. I'm moving on to the next chapter. See ya on the bus. E
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:15 AM Title: Breathing
What a sweet, romantic story. I love B and E like this. Lemons are great but sometimes romance and longing are greater. I know this story is finished, but I just wanted to send a little review your way. E
Date: 31 May 2010 8:13 PM Title: Epilogue
It's a bitter-sweet happy end, I think, but the fiction is so beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Date: 29 May 2010 3:19 AM Title: Epilogue
Wow what an ending to bad you wouldnt let her have a baby I was wishing she would but life is still good and she has all those that love her and she is worthy of them all.
Date: 29 May 2010 2:58 AM Title: Completion
I thought my heart was going to break when Bella was having her break down
Date: 29 May 2010 2:17 AM Title: Realization
Thank goodness they are back on track and talking. What was it with the girls in Rome with the different colored eyes???? Nice birthday present for Bella nice surprise.
Author's Response:
:) You would have to be reading Lillie Cullen's A Lesson in Love to know about the girls in Rome with the different colored eyes. EC Velvet and crew appear in her story as well.
Thank you for the review!
Date: 28 May 2010 9:06 AM Title: Exacerbation
It is a good thing you had the prolouge or I would be throwing flames at your ass.
Date: 28 May 2010 8:37 AM Title: Paroxysm
Oh Fuck no he did not!
Date: 28 May 2010 6:29 AM Title: Adjustments
I went and check that dress out wow that his so hot. so I figured Bella was going to get hooked on the sleeping pills poor thing.
Date: 27 May 2010 5:19 PM Title: Harmony
It is a good thing that he got that out she made her choies
Date: 27 May 2010 4:44 PM Title: Elphaba
It is never good when anyone dies but sometimes the relif is just to much to feel to bad about it. Abby even feels that she is in a better place.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2010 3:58 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you!! this was a really good story. I really loved how you showed that one can overcome anything as long as they are loved. Hope to read more from you.
Until then :)
Date: 27 May 2010 3:50 PM Title: Change
No way what now poor kids. Did they get there activities on tape??? Is that there alliby??? I have been enjoying my time as a Velvet's Vixen
Date: 27 May 2010 9:45 AM Title: Sanctuary
Them are the kind of Lawyer that give the rest of them a bad name bunch of bottom dwellers
Date: 27 May 2010 9:07 AM Title: Proposition
So he still has not told her what is going on this could back fire on him he needs to trust her.
Date: 27 May 2010 8:30 AM Title: Unstoppable
So what is going on is she going to be attact in the hearing??? The song was great thanks
Date: 27 May 2010 7:49 AM Title: Conundrum
Happy to see Mike get another beat down and good thing Bella is feeling better. It was a nice suprise to see her friends witch are his friends now to.
Date: 27 May 2010 6:16 AM Title: Confrontation
Send Tanya up the river for a long time that was just not right and her family not one I would want. who was standing in the lobby.
Date: 27 May 2010 3:43 AM Title: Epilogue
So sweet! Loved it (of course), but it had a bit of bitter sweet to mellow it and make it authentic and show that just because their life is charmed, doens't mean it's not full of trade offs just like for the rest of us (and in some cases even more so). Pointed out for me how unenviable this type of lifestyle is in so many ways to balance the parts that make us feel it's so charmed. Knew that already, but like how this illustrated the point. Sad about the babies. The pictues were lovely. I'm gonna miss this, but appreciate how satisfying an end you created for us!
Thanks for writing and sharing, bb!!!
Date: 26 May 2010 6:12 PM Title: Epilogue
I love this story I cant say it enough.. ups and downs and in betweens.. I will be reading this again soon!!
Date: 26 May 2010 6:02 PM Title: Completion
This has been one of the best stories I have read. I couldnt tear away from it .. Im sooo glad it's finished and I didnt have to wait for more chapters to post.. Cant wait to read next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2010 4:48 PM Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed reading this story thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with us all! I am sorry I did not leave more reviews but I did not start readign til it was finished. I tend to forget to to review and plug on a read read read til it is finished. I think you did very well and I love the story that you told. Thank you again for sharing it!
Date: 26 May 2010 2:39 PM Title: Sanctuary
Tanya is a B I T C H and i hope that skank whore gets what she deserves! Maybe jasper's associates should pay her a visit!
Date: 26 May 2010 9:34 AM Title: Lucky
so what did that pig fucker Mike say about her??????
Date: 26 May 2010 8:46 AM Title: Butterfly
fuck hot is right
Date: 26 May 2010 8:01 AM Title: Epilogue
Great story. Loved all the ups and downs.
Thanks for sharing your talent
Date: 26 May 2010 7:59 AM Title: Sacrifice
So Bella is going to meet the evil people and they are not going to like her because Abby loves her this may get nasty.
Date: 26 May 2010 6:55 AM Title: Superstar
Its a green light I think they have been thinking to hard about not doing it even though they just meet in person they have known each other since they got the first letter.
Date: 26 May 2010 6:18 AM Title: Redeemed
Wow Edward has a temper Abby is one smart little girl. It is time they got a little closer.
Date: 26 May 2010 4:32 AM Title: Decompensate
wow what a fucked up ex he has and what a self centered manager it is a good thing he has 3 good wemon on his side Bella,Abby, and Rhainne
Date: 26 May 2010 2:15 AM Title: Sailing
How much longer can they hold out and what a bunch of hot cloths wow.
Date: 25 May 2010 9:50 PM Title: Epilogue
It was a beautiful story! Apparently E is quite successful even after all those years ! LOL I'm so sad that they didn't start a family : why no baby ?? ;-( So cruel !
I love the way you describe everybody's life : with the help of the picture frame ! Genius and it gives a great feeling of happy memories !
Thanks for the story !!!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 9:31 PM Title: Epilogue
a wonderful end to a fantastic story - thank you so much!
Date: 25 May 2010 7:31 PM Title: Sailing
LMAO - Something tells me it will be a *cold* shower LOL I really want Bella to beat the CO-RAP out of Tanya!! -- this is for CH 14 but i couldnt get it to post--sorry
Date: 25 May 2010 7:20 PM Title: Fuse
A dream holly shit what a dream.
Date: 25 May 2010 6:52 PM Title: Fuse
LMAO - Something tells me it will be a *cold* shower LOL I really want Bella to beat the CO-RAP out of Tanya!!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:52 PM Title: Fuse
LMAO - Something tells me it will be a *cold* shower LOL I really want Bella to beat the CO-RAP out of Tanya!!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:52 PM Title: Fuse
LMAO - Something tells me it will be a *cold* shower LOL I really want Bella to beat the CO-RAP out of Tanya!!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:52 PM Title: Fuse
LMAO - Something tells me it will be a *cold* shower LOL I really want Bella to beat the CO-RAP out of Tanya!!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:51 PM Title: Fuse
LMAO - Something tells me it will be a *cold* shower LOL I really want Bella to beat the CO-RAP out of Tanya!!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:51 PM Title: Fuse
LMAO - Something tells me it will be a *cold* shower LOL I really want Bella to beat the CO-RAP out of Tanya!!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:32 PM Title: Mockingbird
I am so glad she went and that meet in abby went better than she thought it would.
Date: 25 May 2010 5:29 PM Title: Breathing
So what kind of shit did Mike say to her??? Someone needs to Beat Mikes ass again. Edward gets to feel what it is like to have friends that just want to hang out that is cool he feels so comfortable. I cant wait till Bella meets the baby girl.
Date: 25 May 2010 4:41 PM Title: Velvet
You are so funny. So she likes all sides of him. Emmett got to love him.
Date: 25 May 2010 4:23 PM Title: Tequila
OOO MMMYYY GOOOSSSHHH!! I felt like a teen again when i read this LOL I cant wait to read the next chapter.. Im grinning like a CHeshire cat right now!
Date: 25 May 2010 3:33 PM Title: Infatuation
What a nice suprise she almost passed out
Date: 25 May 2010 3:27 PM Title: Freedom
LMAO @ Review Whore -- I like this story so far.. cant wait to continue reading.. I wanna know what eddie is line in this story
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 2:42 PM Title: Epilogue
Good story.
I wish it wasn't the end but it seems everything worked out for them.
Thanks for sharing.
=-)
Date: 25 May 2010 2:36 PM Title: Epilogue
I can't believe they never had any children together. I think Abby would have loved siblings. Besides that I think the story was good.
Date: 25 May 2010 9:33 AM Title: Justice
He loves his baby girl or should we say girls. Tanya what can I say besides I fuckin hate her. LOL
Date: 25 May 2010 9:06 AM Title: Threshold
Run dont walk and take that baby away from that unfit mother. Bella can go on tour with them and take care of Abby ya I like that plan
Date: 25 May 2010 8:41 AM Title: Okhotnichya
Yes Tanya fucked up that is a good thing for Edward not for that baby though. Bella is going to freak out about sending him a pic isnt she????
Date: 25 May 2010 8:11 AM Title: Tequila
That was cute even with a hang over she can get that excited for sure she likes him LOL
Date: 25 May 2010 7:45 AM Title: Daddy
So Tanya is a nasty ho bitch that should not be allowed to be around that baby.
Date: 25 May 2010 7:12 AM Title: Venom
OMG love it great letters.
Date: 25 May 2010 6:53 AM Title: Illumination
Thank you so much for kicking Mikes ass what did Jasper say to him. I am glad Jess left and no mater how much I dont like her I hope he did not beat her ass. OMFG I cant wait to read what he said in his letter.
Date: 25 May 2010 6:38 AM Title: Freedom
I am loving you you review whore. To bad Emmett and Jasper didnt get to kick the living shit out of that chicken shit Mike and I do hope that Jess gets what she deserves. Great letter very sweet and to the point nothing obsesive.
Date: 25 May 2010 6:18 AM Title: Prologue
Mike is a dice Jessica is a ho Bella is sweet and has some very good friends and I think I am going to love it.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 4:32 AM Title: Epilogue
I have completely & thoroughly enjoyed this story. To be honest...far more than I expected to @ first. I am quite glad that I was wrong :o) I look forward to reading it again!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you stuck with it and enjoyed it!
Date: 25 May 2010 4:14 AM Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 16 May 2010 7:28 PM Title: Completion
I'm totally head over the heels with your wonderful fiction. Thank you so much for sharing your imagination and talent with us.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 01 May 2010 6:23 PM Title: Completion
It's great that Bella starts to have a life apart from waiting for Edward!
Date: 01 May 2010 6:05 PM Title: Realization
Ouf I was scared for Bella... Thanks for the little little trip by Paris ! ;-p
I find the birthday party really nice !
Date: 01 May 2010 5:50 PM Title: Exacerbation
Is it a real suicide attempt or just an accident ? A result of the alcool & pills from yesterday and the hanghover & emotional state she was in the morning? I hope she will not become depressed or addicted and end like Tanya !! ;-(
Date: 01 May 2010 4:38 PM Title: Paroxysm
This is a fucking nightmare ! I don't know wich one is the worse : the attitude of Edward-Velvet, a drunk drogued Bella, or the pitiful ending of the night?
Date: 01 May 2010 1:50 PM Title: Adjustments
I hope Bella will not turn addicted to those pills ! It would be terrible for her marriage !
Date: 01 May 2010 1:33 PM Title: Harmony
Awesome the familly in reunited !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
For the internationnal tour, I request a stop by France. Paris could be a lovelly get away for our lovely couple ! It's the capital of the people in love ! And as a part of the Vixens I'd like to have them stop in my country ! Thanks! LOL ;-p
Date: 01 May 2010 12:52 PM Title: Change
Evil cliffly, amazing lemon, and lots of question !!! Why Bella needed to talk alone to Carlisle ? For her sleeping & anti-anxiety pills? What the hell is going on in this kitchen so early ? Thank god the next chapter is already published : I couldn't wait !
Date: 01 May 2010 12:28 PM Title: Sanctuary
Waouh the hearing is eventful ! So much crap ! I like the fact that you don't let Tania's testimony took too much place in your description. It keeps us in Bella's POV and I much prefer this !
Date: 01 May 2010 12:06 PM Title: Proposition
I love the proposal : so great ! And the familly is accepting : awsome ! I can't wait for this trial to be over !!
Date: 01 May 2010 11:18 AM Title: Unstoppable
I love the song !!! I hope that Edward's secrets will not cause Bella any pain !
Date: 01 May 2010 10:59 AM Title: Conundrum
I was very afraid for Bella's health ! No pregnancy is good for her at the moment. The friend's arrival was excellent ! I was wondering if they will see each other again!
Date: 01 May 2010 10:38 AM Title: Confrontation
I hate this cliffy !!!!! You are evil !!!!!!! LOL ;-) Quick, I need to read next chapter !
Date: 01 May 2010 10:10 AM Title: Lucky
What the hell had Mike told the press?? I hope Bella will not be crushed by the court... Will her mother Renee reappear? Will she speak about Jacob? I hope they will not depicted her as a whore!
Date: 01 May 2010 9:42 AM Title: Butterfly
Waouh ! What a powerful & excellent lemon !! Just one question : birth control? No condoms so, is she on the pill? Or will she get pregnant? ...
Date: 01 May 2010 9:33 AM Title: Sacrifice
OKay I will give you a "giddy and happy" moment : you are evil with your cliffies !!!! Hopefully I'm a late reader so I don't have to wait to read next chapter ;-p ! It has advantages !! Don't stop writing a story : it's the best way to loose readers.
Date: 01 May 2010 8:40 AM Title: Superstar
I love the Zoo project in San Diego... It was also very promising that Abby asks to call Bella *mommy*. So sweet!!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:22 PM Title: Decompensate
I love your style with the lime! Edward's Happy Time in the shower is so good!!!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 9:42 PM Title: Fuse
I love this lime : it's amazing!!! It's almost a shame that it was a dream !
Date: 30 Apr 2010 9:26 PM Title: Mockingbird
YES Bella is on the road with Edward !!!!! Awsome !
Date: 30 Apr 2010 8:53 PM Title: Velvet
Nooooooooooo I don't want to read the end of Bella&Edward together : they are soo sweet !!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 8:37 PM Title: Infatuation
Infatuation Infatuation Infatuation & euh Infatuation ? I'm crazy about your story AND I want to go to this show !!!