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Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter Four

I don't require responses to my reviews, in fact they embarass me.  I never know if I should respond back or leave the poor author alone.  Unless I'm really confused about the story or said something that affected or upset you, I would rather you spent your time writing.  A general thank you for reviews in the A/N is plenty for me.

Thanks for the story.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter Four

I loved it jake was full of himself if he thought he had a chance and Esme is cool treating Edward like a the mommys boy he is now how will the date go and monday Friday update and Tuesday teaser and for responding its up to you if you have time

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter Four

I am happy just as long as I get updates :).   I cant wait for the date.



Author's Response:

Thank you hun! I hope you enjoyed the date update I posted yesterday.

xx Dee

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter Four

any day is good for me I love it when an author responds to my review i got ridiculously excited when i got my first one :] i don't expect one every time but its nice when they do



Author's Response:

Thank you for the feedback Sarasue! I personally believe if someone takes the time to leave a review an author has an obligation to say thank you since reviews are not manditory to read. You as a reader, take the time to leave us a note, and so we should have the deciency to say thank you...even if it's only ever one time. Thank you again for reading and reviewing.

xx Dee

 

Reviewer: Mandi721 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter Four

Loving this soooo much!! I vote Tuesday & Friday updates!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you Mandi! That makes me so happy! The feedback on updates is awesome too.

xx Dee

Reviewer: dustybritches Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter Four

I'd rather you write than respond to reviews.  Tues. Friday updates.  If you are releasing chapters that often I don't need a teaser.  I love the sweetness of this story.  Thanks for working so hard to share it with us



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, Dusty...lucky for me I can respond to reivews and write! I love making sure you all know how thankful I am that you take the time to leave me some feedback, even if it's just to give me a smile on my face. I'm so glad you're enjoying the tale I'm telling. I hope that doesn't ever stop.

xx Dee

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 5:38 PM Title: Chapter Four

First, I have no preference in your posting schedule. Teasers are good, but not if doing them takes you away from writing more!!Second, responses to reviews are great and appreciated, but again, not necessary if that takes away from your writing time. Are you seeing a pattern? I like to read and I'm more interested in moving the story along and discovering more about your characters than all the extra stuff. However, I like teasers and responses if you need a break from chapter writing. Nice to know the Olsens are sweet because actually, all the media stuff makes them seems pretty weird.  

Author's Response:

lol! You're too funny. I have most of the story written(it's in the betaing process as we speak); the ending is what I'm having a problem with...I don't think I'm ready for it to end either. The wierdness I think stems from the fact that they are so shy. Thanks for your feedback.

xx Dee

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter Four

Loved it



Author's Response:

Woohoo! I'm glad.

xx Dee

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 4:55 PM Title: Chapter Four

I take updates when ever you have time, I know you share your writings for free for our pleasure so thank you.  If you can respond to review, cool but that's a lot of responding for you and I would rather you spend your time writing another chapter! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your feedback. I don't have much of a life outside of writing or banner making so responding is easy. I just always wondered what people thought. Glad you like the story too.

xx Dee

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 4:53 PM Title: Chapter Four

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you hun. More is on the way soon!

xx Dee

Reviewer: hearts play 2345 Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter Three

You are doing great job keep up the good work!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story, but I have to ask why you gave the story a 1.5 coffee cup rating if you are enjoying it...It doesn't make sense to me?

xx Dee

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter Three

Hahahahahahshs poor Jake no Bella for him so what will he do and now that they had a moment E&B will he come in more often 



Author's Response:

I think you'll get a kick out of what he does...I did when I wrote it. See you tomorrow with more.

xx Dee

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 12:04 PM Title: Chapter Three

Vanna is from Myrtle Beach, SC. I am in SC. Thanks for the shout out to Vanna!

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

I love that you enjoy my RL interludes as much as you do the story! Vanna Rules!

Thanks again!

xx Dee

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 12:02 PM Title: Chapter Two

Sad to hear that about NPH. He seems so personable in interviews. Guess he's a good actor! Thanks for the story.



Author's Response:

A very good actor! lol. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

xx Dee

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter Three

He brought mom in to approve of her ;)



Author's Response:

He did. He is  Mama's boy. ;) 

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

xx Dee

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter Three

So he brought Momma to get aproval? So sweet but I hope she is not an avoider. He can chase but I hope she allows him to catch her every once in awhile. 



Author's Response:

No worries...she won't play games, but that's not to say it's always a smooth ride. That overcome all the little bumps along the way pretty easily.

Thank you so much,

Dee xx

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter Three

Omg I am so loving this story and their little banter with each other!!! Thanks looking forward to more and soon!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much. I love seeing readers as invested in them as I am! See you tomorrow with more!

xx Dee

Reviewer: be johns Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 1:21 AM Title: Chapter Three

My e-mail alert for Chapter 4 gives me the same chapter as 3. So disappointed as eagerly awaiting update. Am I doing something wrong..?



Author's Response:

It must be....There are a total of four posted entries. One prologue and 3 regular chapters, so when you get your email it will always be one off because of the prologue. Does that make sense?

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter Three

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you hun! More tomorrow! See you then!

xx Dee

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter Three

I love her care free attitude.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I love this Bella too...If I didn't I probably wouldn't be writing her! lol

xx Dee

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 12:03 AM Title: Chapter Three

Loved it can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It means the world to me that you're enjoying the story!

xx Dee

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 2:34 AM Title: Prologue

Hmmmmm very interesting! love it cant wait to read more! how soon is updating?



Author's Response:

Thank you. Update schedule is every Friday, but I have a early update planned this week.

xx Dee

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter Two

Loving it!

Author's Response:

Thank makes me smile. Thank you!

xx Dee

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter One

maybe he likes your voice

Author's Response:

He did like her voice...Bella was just slow in realizing that.

 

xx Dee

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter Two

Nice!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

xx Dee

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 4:09 PM Title: Prologue

Yes I would like more please..

Author's Response:

Thank you! xx Dee

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter One

Nice visuals.Robbies(Edwards) perfect isn't he?

Author's Response:

lol. Yes, I figured if I was going to keep him as my Edward, then he should look like him. 

xx Dee

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 3:16 PM Title: Prologue

:)

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

xx Dee

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter Two

Oh boy he was flirting when will he come back to talk to her again now will she get him out of her mind until than update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you hun. He definitely has her all twisted up. Since I missed my teaser deadline the update will be sooner than we all expected.

xx Dee

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter Two

He put her in a tail spin he is all she can think about ;)



Author's Response:

He did and he is. Thank you so much!

xx Dee

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter Two

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you Lani. There is more coming.

xx Dee

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter Two

Loved it



Author's Response:

I'm so glad, thank you.

xx Dee

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter One

This is looking like its gonna be good!!!!

see ya Friday :)



Author's Response:

Thank you Pam! I hope you enjoy Friday too!

xx Dee

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter One

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you Lani! There will be more on Friday!

xx Dee

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter One

More please ;-)

Author's Response:

Thanks beachlover...I'm posting again on Friday, so see you then.

xx Dee

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter One

Hehehehe I really like this Bella she cool and lade back 



Author's Response:

Thank you doll! I really like this Bella too...maybe it's because I put a lot of myself into her, IDK. She not me completely, though. lol

xx Dee

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter One

I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'll be back with the next update on Friday!

xx Dee

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 1:11 AM Title: Prologue

Sounds cute!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the rest as it posts!

xx Dee

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter One

Nice meeting and he likes her voice.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you got what he meant...many haven't. See you Friday with more.

xx Dee

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 10:59 PM Title: Chapter One

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm so glad you are enjoying it so far!

xx Dee

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 6:11 PM Title: Prologue

sounds great looking forward to the rest of the story



Author's Response:

THank you hun! More to come really soon...like within the hour!

xx Dee

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:16 AM Title: Prologue

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm posting the first chapter as soon as I finishe review replies! 

xx Dee

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 4:53 PM Title: Prologue

More please.  This sounds like it will be good.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. More on Monday! Hope you still like it after that!

xx Dee

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 8:05 AM Title: Prologue

intruiging .....



Author's Response:

Thanks! Intriguing is good! lol

xx Dee

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 6:14 AM Title: Prologue

I like it can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

Thank you hun! Two updates next week! 

xx Dee

Reviewer: Stellarrose Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 12:07 AM Title: Prologue

Great start!!  More, please!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm posting twice next week so more is coming!

xx Dee

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2013 10:49 PM Title: Prologue

Please more!



Author's Response:

More on Monday! Thanks for the review! 

xx Dee

Reviewer: Rosaliek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2013 10:47 PM Title: Prologue

I'd be crazy not to follow bring on Monday lol



Author's Response:

Thank you sweets! Not only Monday, but Friday too! ;) 

xx Dee

Reviewer: Grace89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2013 8:12 PM Title: Prologue

Looking forward to reading more of this :-) right up my street!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Grace. I'm glad you're looking forward to more!

xx Dee

Reviewer: Angelmagnet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2013 7:58 PM Title: Prologue

OK, I'm in, I know I'm just going to love this story.



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks! Your faith in this little teaser od a prologue has me smiling like a loon! 

xx Dee

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2013 7:49 PM Title: Prologue

I FLOVE the banner babes it is AMAZING!  Can;t wait to read this all!  Addign to my favs, will watch for it to update!  FLOVE FLOVE FLOVE!



Author's Response:

Thanks doll! I'm so glad you liked both the banner and the intro. I'm updating on monday and then again on Friday, so you won't have too long of a wait!

xx Dee

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