Date: 13 Dec 2013 8:48 PM Title: Chapter Nine
Not a good way to meet Em. Uh oh pics are gonna fly now.
Date: 13 Dec 2013 8:37 PM Title: Chapter Eight
Glad they made up. Hope Renee really deleted the pic. Glad they are taking their time.
Date: 13 Dec 2013 8:33 PM Title: Chapter Seven
awww poor E...he was just trying to help silly. Glad mama E came to talk to her. Renee is going to cause issues I think
Date: 13 Dec 2013 8:27 PM Title: Chapter Six
aww what a wonderful date. they are too cute together. At least B doesn't have to worry about Rose falling for E. LOL
Date: 13 Dec 2013 8:19 PM Title: Chapter Five
what a nice first date. What do you wanna bet Renee does something stupid
Date: 13 Dec 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter Four
awww what a sweet proposal for a date. Glad Jake is away from her. That is an issue waiting to happen.
Reviews are our payment for your writing. I would rather you write than respond. Unless someone asks a direct question, I wouldn't worry about it.
Date: 13 Dec 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter Three
awwww flirty E comes back with Mama E. Uh oh Jake is going to be an issue I think.
Date: 13 Dec 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter Two
awww E's smitten and B's distracted.
Date: 13 Dec 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter One
Always loved and hated the opening shifts too. Loved becuase of the quiet and peace, hated for shiftmates not showing.
Ooooh E's made her a bit mad huh?
RIP for Mr Ritter. He was hilarious.
Date: 13 Dec 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 13 Dec 2013 6:11 PM Title: Prologue
Cute intro. Can't wait to see where you take it.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2013 5:15 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
I loved it her life is falling into place and it is going so good but I am not sure I trust UMPG will they try and trick her hmm update soon I need more Edward he makes me swoon with his words
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Love it!
She will have to watch out for Victoria and co, but I'm sure Bella will come out on top if/with any problems they can create.
Date: 13 Dec 2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Another awesome chapter. Thanks! I can't wait to see what the future holds for Bella's career.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2013 2:13 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Great chapter!
Loved how Bella stood up for herself
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2013 12:30 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Can't wait for more
Date: 13 Dec 2013 9:07 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
She has no comfedence in how good she is the blood suckers will try to get everything they can out of her it is good she has Edward to help her. I cant wait for dinner and why is Alice still being a little bitch??
Date: 12 Dec 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
I love this fiesty Bella.
Date: 12 Dec 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
Wow this is a really good chapter. I enjoyed Bella standing up to Alice. If I were Bella I would not be so inclined to attend a family gathering with the Cullens in the near future. It is not their fault but Alice is family and she obviously did not want Bella around.
Date: 11 Dec 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Loed how she handled Aloce. Can't wait for the Christmas plans
Date: 11 Dec 2013 7:24 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Loved it, cant wait to read more
Date: 11 Dec 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 11 Dec 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Never understood why people would bitch/moan about a ff story. If it isn't your cup of tea (coffee lol) then find something else to read. *sigh*
i actually have a couple of celebrity stories myself. Would be happy to share. :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
I just love this story! Wow did Bella let Alice have it. LOL I bet the family let her have in a way that she will not soon forget. I think you should have Bella visit Edward while he is gone. Keep up the great work!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Great chapter! Love Bella for being so strong..
Date: 11 Dec 2013 12:38 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Wow, Bella was actually a little harsh, imo. If I was Alice, I'd probably have anyone dating my famous brother investigated. How is she best friends with Skanky Tanya though and why would you want your brother dating a skank? Ah well, Bella and Renee told her. Go, Renee!
How do people even review as guest? The site always makes me log in before reading. Anyway, it's YOUR story so write it the way you want. If they don't like it, THEY should quit reading or, here's a thought, write their own story!
I am thrilled to know that Batman really is a super hero!
Date: 11 Dec 2013 7:50 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
I can't wait to see how Christmas turns out... And why is Alice such a Bitch!
Date: 11 Dec 2013 7:14 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
loved the chapter looking forwrd to more
Date: 11 Dec 2013 6:47 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
Love Bella she is a fisty little thing and all the Cullens love her well maybe not Alice lol. I think guest reviewers are chicken shit plain and simple. I think Renee loves Bella very much she just doesnt always thinks before she talks .
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
Loved it
Date: 09 Dec 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
Edward better set Alice straight right now. She has some nerve.
Date: 09 Dec 2013 8:07 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Looking forward for the next chapter
Date: 08 Dec 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 07 Dec 2013 7:47 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Alice is being a bitch is she doing it because she cares or she is just a bitch??? I love the I love yous.
Date: 07 Dec 2013 4:37 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
It's the holidays + family drama = art imitating life.
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2013 4:30 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Great chapter!
Can't beleive Alice... wonder what else she digged up on Bella and her family?
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Damn alice is a bitch
Date: 07 Dec 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
ooo alice is a bit of a bitch love that bella stood her ground have a blast at your party
Date: 07 Dec 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Don't ask me why but a bitchy Alice is a serious bitch unlike a bitchy Rose who can't be blamed because she's' just drawn that way'. A bitchy Alice is almost evil. Well written. I love that they were solid and a united front before the Alice hit the fan.
Date: 06 Dec 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter Ten
I freaking love it!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter Ten
Loving your story! Just couldn't stop reading once I started.
More please!
Date: 05 Dec 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Busted by dad, the cop. Could it get worse than that? Yep, that worked out well.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2013 5:59 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Oh hot damn she got Emmett good now will he try to find her mom to get the home movies heheheheheh loved it
Date: 04 Dec 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Best chapter yet.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Can't wait for more
Date: 04 Dec 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Poor Edward has shit in his pants now lol what a way to meet dad lol. Bella is a riot
Date: 04 Dec 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter Ten
I'm guessing the phone calls he didn't take have to do with him & Em playing tug of war last chapter.
Loved Em, Rose, & Charlie
Date: 03 Dec 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter Nine
WOW that will be good for gosip
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2013 11:36 AM Title: Chapter Nine
That was too funny! I like that the have declared thier intensions as well.
Author's Response:
Thank you. It was about time, huh? They're officially official. :)
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2013 1:28 PM Title: Chapter Nine
Great chapter. That would be hard to see, even though you know it's fake.
Author's Response:
I agree, but when he got permission for her to come to set, he didn't know what they would be filming that day. So we gotta give him the benefit of the doubt.
Thanks for taking this journey with me,
Dee xx
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2013 12:29 PM Title: Chapter Nine
Oops was all he had to say.....Oops well that was real sensitive of him.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I let that one slide. It's crazy to me how differently people pick up on little bits and pieces of the story. He got the permission, but didn't know what exactly they would be taping that day...he's not the director, just does what he's told, but he could have been a bit more understanding...especially after his jealousy of Jacob.
xx Dee
Date: 30 Nov 2013 12:10 PM Title: Chapter Nine
Loved it update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you Sassy! It's coming.
xx Dee
Date: 30 Nov 2013 9:41 AM Title: Chapter Nine
Brotherly love lol. Now there is some fun for the tabloids.
Author's Response:
Boys will be boys! lol. Pesky tabloids. ;)
Thanks again doll,
Dee xx
Date: 30 Nov 2013 8:48 AM Title: Chapter Nine
Ha! Emmett was getting his payback.
Author's Response:
He totally did.
Thanks again,
Dee xx
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chapter Nine
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you hun!
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter Nine
Oh boy I would have be so excited to be there too and Emmett he like causing trouble hehehe
Author's Response:
He's a big teddy bear, that Emmett. Thanks for your continued support!
xx Dee
Date: 30 Nov 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter Nine
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you Lanigirl!
xx Dee
Date: 27 Nov 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter Eight
Loved the chapter. They are too cute. But I just know Renee is going to out them. Happy Thanksgiving! Thanks for the story!
Author's Response:
lol! She will not. I promise. Hope you had a good Thanksgiving as well.
Thanks for reading and reviewing,
Dee xx
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2013 9:35 AM Title: Chapter Eight
Happy Thanksgiving
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you had a Happy Thanksgiving too!
xx Dee
Date: 27 Nov 2013 9:21 AM Title: Chapter Seven
I like to share your stories about meeting celebrities with my mom & husband.
Author's Response:
That's so cool. Glad you have others enjoying my little tales.
Thanks,
Dee xx
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2013 9:06 AM Title: Chapter Six
I used to work at Starbucks. (:0)
Author's Response:
Love to one of my fellow former Baristas!!!
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2013 8:48 AM Title: Chapter Five
I guess I forgot to add this to my favorites before.
Author's Response:
Well I'm glad it's there now!
xx Dee
Date: 27 Nov 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter Eight
Sweet
Author's Response:
Thank you!
xx Dee
Date: 26 Nov 2013 8:33 PM Title: Chapter Eight
Loved it update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's coming soon!
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter Eight
Edward is so sweet. Renee is such a pain. I would not trust her to not tell someone or post pictures.
Author's Response:
lol. I love the emotion! Renee is harmless. I promise.
Thanks,
Dee xx
Date: 26 Nov 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter Eight
I loved it Renee is such a teen lol.
Author's Response:
She really is. Thanks TR!
xx Dee
Date: 26 Nov 2013 10:30 AM Title: Chapter Eight
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks Lani.
xx Dee
Date: 26 Nov 2013 10:04 AM Title: Chapter Eight
I do not believe that Renee deleted the video. Bella didn't check either. I love how they are together but what will happen when they are found out? I can just imagine Bella alone and hounded ending up in the ER. And possibly all thanks to selfish Mommy Dearest. Edward will go apeshit if that happens.
Author's Response:
I love the emotion you poured into this review. Like I said in one of my ANs...Renee will never be the one that outs her daughter. That's a promise. Whether she deleted the video or not, she wouldn't hurt her child.
Thanks for your review and for reading as well,
Dee xx
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2013 8:50 AM Title: Chapter Eight
I loved it awesome Edward really knows how to woo a woman for sure I want him for my very own lol update soon
Author's Response:
lol. I think we all want an Edward of our own. The next update is coming.
xx Dee
Date: 24 Nov 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter Seven
I found your story tonight and am so glad that I did. I am looking forward to Edwards return.
Author's Response:
Thanks hun, I'm glad your enjoying it so far! Hope it stays that way.
xx Dee
Date: 23 Nov 2013 3:33 PM Title: Chapter Seven
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Tis coming!
Thanks!
xx Dee
Date: 23 Nov 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter Seven
Mamma to the rescue lol.
Author's Response:
She did rescue the two confused lovers! Thanks,
Dee xx
Date: 23 Nov 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter Seven
thank you for not drawing it out understand bella's point of view anxious for the next one :]
Author's Response:
Drawing out any small amount of angst beyond two chapters is too much for me, so never fret! lol
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
xx Dee
Date: 22 Nov 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter Seven
Hey, no hate here. And thanks for taking my hints about rather reading a chapter than getting a response to a review. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks hun. I strive to do both, but soemtimes real life gets in the way. I'm still going to try and do both!
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter Seven
I loved it this makes them seem more real now what's next for them hmmmm
Author's Response:
Thanks MM. Hopefullt more good times with a little roller coaster of a ride as well.
xx Dee
Date: 20 Nov 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter Six
I love this story. Looking forward to more. I like reading your personal stories as well. So funny. It is amazing how some people just aren't what you would expect.
Makes me think back to my years working onboard a cruise line. Met a number of different actors but one stood out. Macaulay Culkin. He was in his early teens at the time. He was onboard for his tutors wedding in Mexico. He was quiet but years beyond his age in maturity. He just wanted to hang out with the youth staff instead of teens his own age.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I loved reading about your star interaction too. I agree. I always try to give the benefit of the doubt, but some people just don't deserve it.
xx Dee
Date: 19 Nov 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter Six
That was a perfect first date and he has layed his feelings out for her
Author's Response:
Thank you...I'm glad you enjoyed the date!
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter Six
This is an awesome story but this chapter was a little too Disney for me....Everything was so perfect with the song and everything, it was coming too close to cheesy
Author's Response:
Your response made me laugh. I had to show him pulling out all the stops before a bit of angstiness could take place. Hope you continue to read, but I can't promise to hold back on the cheese...it's a fluff story after all.
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2013 2:17 PM Title: Chapter Six
Absolutely loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
xx Dee
Date: 19 Nov 2013 1:26 PM Title: Chapter Six
Perfect first date! Lovely chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
xx Dee
Date: 19 Nov 2013 11:30 AM Title: Chapter Six
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you Lani! xx Dee
Date: 19 Nov 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter Five
Enjoying the story a lot. V card info 5 minutes into a first date is inappropriate and awkward, as is blurting out your salary and bonus, and net worth. Just no one's business until a relationship is established.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it...while agree that on a normal first date, that isn't something that should be blurted out, he has already told her he wanted to marry her, so I don't think it was too forward in this one instance. lol
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2013 1:00 AM Title: Chapter Five
Whoa! LOL! Love your Joey Lawrence story. He was definitely one of the guys I would always cut out of those teen magazines, like Bop! and Teen Beat. LOL!
Author's Response:
lol! The was suck a sweetie...I don't know what I expected, but he was awesome. A true gem.
Thanks,
Dee xx
Date: 18 Nov 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter Five
Another great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
xx Dee
Date: 18 Nov 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter Five
Thank you for the extra chapter and more please. More More More...please.
Author's Response:
You're welcome, but thank you as well. More tomorrow!
xx Dee
Date: 17 Nov 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter Five
Well deserved such a great story and thanks for the extra you will get my vote. He is very good at first date but this will be he last first date ever. I love that she told him that she holds her V card she should not be ashamed of that ever.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, reviewing, and voting. As for the last first date...what do you think? ;) I agree, a woman shouldn't be a shamed of holding on to her v-card, it shows she values herself.
xx Dee
Date: 17 Nov 2013 10:14 PM Title: Chapter Five
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks Lani!
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2013 9:51 PM Title: Chapter Five
Oh she's not going to be able to handle the love scenes......What woman could
Date: 17 Nov 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter Five
Wow awesome first date. Great chapter. Going to vote now. Thank you for the surprise chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. And for the vote too. I'll keep trying to surprise you guys when I can!
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2013 9:45 PM Title: Chapter Five
First I want to say congratulations and I hope you win now I loved it and I have meet a couple of stars but the one that s5icks out is Michael Duncan Clark his voice is really that deep but he isn't as tall as I thought but he was a little full of himself and cheep I was a bartenderat a strip club in LA and he came in he spent little to no money hahahaha
Author's Response:
Thank you hun! I would have loved to meet Big Papa Bear before he passed...as for the money thing, he hadn't worked in awhile maybe he didn't have the money. lol
xx Dee
Date: 17 Nov 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter Four
Tuesday and Friday please, no teasers necessary.
Authors hardly ever respond to my reviews so it's always a pleasant surprise to receive one. Don't let review responses delay your updates please!
ps: my Starbucks of choice is a Venti skinny mocha, 3 pumps of the sugar-free mocha only, no foam, stirred (just fyi lol)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback and for reading and reviewing. Responding doesn't get in the way of updates...I'm way ahead, I just was wondering what readers expected. My Starbucks drink is a Grande Vanilla Misto (aka a Vanilla Cafe au Lait) lol!
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2013 11:44 AM Title: Chapter Four
When my review is my usual smiley face a response is not important at all.
Author's Response:
:)! Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate the smiley faces just the same.
xx Dee
Date: 16 Nov 2013 5:18 AM Title: Chapter Four
I only care if an author replies if I have a question. Like how often do you update kind of question. Anyway...I wonder what Angela was thinking throughout this interaction. I would swoon too. I love the little celebrity notes too. I always forget how to.tell the Olsen twins apart. It is good you got an autograph to know which one she was. HA!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. It was always easy for me to tell them apart...I think it's because they were a staple in my house as my sister was growing up (an 11 year age gap will do that)! Angela was too busy being dumbstruck to give any kind of coherent reply. ;)
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter Four
Yeah they have a date! I like Tuesday and Friday updates. I don't read teasers I like to wait and read the whole thing. It doesn't bother me when the author doesn't respond to my review . I'm just thankful to have a great story to read. I know it is probably hard to respond to all of the reviews. Can't wait for more!