Date: 04 Jan 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter One
Wow she met Edward already. Thats great. I hate when authors drag it out.
Date: 04 Jan 2014 5:35 AM Title: Prologue
I cant wait to read more.
Date: 04 Jan 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
I don't blame her for not wanting to go back to the job. School should waive that for her all things considered.
Sweet surprise.
Date: 04 Jan 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
I loved it!!! Thanks for another great chapter!! Gah Tuesday seems to be so far. Lol enjoy your weekend.
Date: 04 Jan 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
Looking forward to more
Date: 04 Jan 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Kick ass, Bella!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
I loved it it was sweet romantic and very beautiful it was so worth the wait update soon
Date: 03 Jan 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
Loved it
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Great chapter!! Can't wait for Saturday. I love this story!!!
Date: 02 Jan 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 02 Jan 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Okay - let me say it in a few simple words ...
I . LOVE . IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A really well written story - nice plot - good use of words.
I have to admit that I'm a little bit shocked about Alice and Jasper.
We'll see what happens.
I'm desparately waiting for the next chapter and really looking forward to it!
Greetings from Germany!
leinchen
Date: 02 Jan 2014 12:55 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
so glad Riley got what was coming to him
Date: 02 Jan 2014 12:15 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
oo two more sleeps!
Date: 02 Jan 2014 10:30 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Good for her kick his ass.
Date: 02 Jan 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next! Go Bella!
Date: 02 Jan 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
ooh So glad Charley had her take self defence. What a dick Riley is.
Date: 02 Jan 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Absolutely loved it
Date: 31 Dec 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
I love this cheeky Bella.
Date: 31 Dec 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Looking forward to more
Date: 31 Dec 2013 7:47 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen
six weeks that is to long for these two to be apart . I love the fisty Bella she is not going to let them bitches get one up on her lol
Date: 31 Dec 2013 5:05 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Glad Kate was being reasonable. Hate jealous skanky bitches.
Date: 31 Dec 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 31 Dec 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! Poor Bella!
Date: 31 Dec 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Cant wait for more
Date: 30 Dec 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
This was such a cute and sweet chapter.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:44 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
loved it!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:34 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
loved it!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:25 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
loved it!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:13 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
loved it!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:03 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
loved it!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 10:53 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
loved it! Funny chapter!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 10:44 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
loved it!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 10:34 AM Title: Chapter Ten
loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 10:22 AM Title: Chapter Nine
loved it!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter Eight
loved it!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:29 AM Title: Chapter Seven
loved it!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter Six
loved it!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter Five
loved it!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter Three
loved it!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter Two
loved it!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter One
loved it!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:17 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Holy cow!! What the hell is Alice's problem?? Just curious how long Edward will keep Jasper & Alice employed!! Love what you are doing with the story girl...your writing style kind of reminds me of Janet Evanovich with all the humour!!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter Ten
That was hilarious!! Poor Edward didn't know what to do!! Love the story!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 3:38 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Lovely story so far! Can't wait for more! :-)
Date: 28 Dec 2013 7:58 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
He is no longer hollywood's most eligible bachelor is is taken and all can see that ;)
Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Can't wait for more
Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Omg. I love it! Can't wait for more!! Happy new year!!
Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
I just caught up on the last chapters. I loved the coupon line in this one! I always tell my husband that even if we won the lottery, I would still use my coupons.
Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Very nice!
Date: 28 Dec 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Aww glad Rose and Jane are helping her out. Actually liking a Jane for a change. Wondering when Malice will pop out again though
Date: 28 Dec 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Looking forward to more
Date: 27 Dec 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Aww! damn. I wish Rob would have did the GG with Kristen.Good Story.
Date: 27 Dec 2013 6:18 AM Title: Chapter Three
please let Jake fall into the dishwasher and drowned
Date: 26 Dec 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Esme and Carlisle will be so disappointed in Alice and Jasper. They have no reason to be cruel to Bella. If anyone is a leech it is those two, since they both work for him. They aren't independent. They totally depend on him for their livelyhood. Edward was so smart to fire them.
Date: 25 Dec 2013 7:23 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Alice what the hell is her problem I am glad that Edward fired both of them.
Date: 25 Dec 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Looking forward to more
Date: 24 Dec 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Merry Christmas!
Yay Bella for being proud of her V card. However, I anticipate future trouble with Malice.
Date: 24 Dec 2013 4:45 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
woo hoo. SOOOOOO glad Malice was fired. Surprised Jasper put up with her. They need to call Esme before Malice gets to her first and tries to lie.
Date: 24 Dec 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 23 Dec 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 23 Dec 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
xoxo - *.*
Date: 22 Dec 2013 3:21 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Great chapter!
Al buying his own coffee... it could happen you never know.
Can't stand hire Alice and Jssper are with Bella a good reality check would be good for them.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Such a good chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
OMG, what is Alices' problem?
Date: 21 Dec 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Great chapter..Merry Christmas!
Date: 20 Dec 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
I would like to kick Alice in the teeth and I think Edward would to.
Date: 20 Dec 2013 9:49 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Wow you would think that Rose being an actress would be more stuck up than a sister working for her brother hmmmm she needs a reality check update soon
Date: 20 Dec 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
wow sweet present. Guess Alice is going to be a complete biatch. Jasper better reign her in soon.
Date: 20 Dec 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Loved the chapter. I am so glad that Edward stood up to Alice.
Date: 20 Dec 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Looking forward to more
Date: 20 Dec 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
I love your make believe world it is so much fun. Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Dec 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Asper needs to be fired and he and Malice need to be shipped home on the first plane out of Vegas. In Coach, no less.
Date: 20 Dec 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 20 Dec 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Great chapter!
So happy that both families could look pass Thanksgiving and come together.
Side note: Kerrie Robert's version of O Holy Night is amazing!
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
I love this story.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 18 Dec 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
rock on with your bad ass self bella! *.*
Date: 18 Dec 2013 12:59 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Great chapter. It will be interesting to see how her internship goes.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
How beautiful I can picture the home and I love it and how beautiful was the singing thank you
Date: 17 Dec 2013 5:17 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Merry Christmas! Thank you for your enjoyable story. :-)
Date: 17 Dec 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Looking forward to more
Date: 17 Dec 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Oh, I am going away and I do not know if I will have Internet access on Friday. Boo. I will have something to look forward to when I get back. Merry Christmas and thanks for the cute story!
Date: 17 Dec 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Fun times with out Alice
Date: 17 Dec 2013 3:04 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Absolutely loved it
Date: 17 Dec 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Glad Christmas is going so well.
Date: 15 Dec 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
I am loving this story! I wasn't too sure at first, but I kept hearing others talk about it so I thought I would give it a shot. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 14 Dec 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Looking forward to more
Date: 13 Dec 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great chapter. Glad the interview went well. Nervous about what James and Victoria are going to pull regarding the internshoip
Date: 13 Dec 2013 9:16 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
OMG LOVE LOVE LOVE Bella's speech. Happy B is not a pushover. Good for her wanting to do college on her own. Whip was hilarious
Date: 13 Dec 2013 9:02 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
oooh So we have a bitchy Alice instead of Rose. Thats a nice switch. Alice has really pushed it huh? Wonder what cop Daddy will have to say about that check.
Date: 13 Dec 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter Ten
Loved B teasing Em and E too. OMG for getting caught by charlie. hmmm thinking Alice has some news about pics.