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Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter One

Wow she met Edward already.  Thats great.  I hate when authors drag it out. 

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 5:35 AM Title: Prologue

I cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter Twenty

I don't blame her for not wanting to go back to the job.  School should waive that for her all things considered.

Sweet surprise.

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter Twenty

I loved it!!! Thanks for another great chapter!! Gah Tuesday seems to be so far. Lol enjoy your weekend. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter Twenty

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen

Kick ass, Bella!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter Twenty

:)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter Twenty

I loved it it was sweet romantic and very beautiful it was so worth the wait update soon

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter Twenty

Loved it 

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen

Great chapter!! Can't wait for Saturday. I love this story!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: leinchen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen

Okay - let me say it in a few simple words ...

I . LOVE . IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A really well written story - nice plot - good use of words.

I have to admit that I'm a little bit shocked about Alice and Jasper.

We'll see what happens.

I'm desparately waiting for the next chapter and really looking forward to it!

Greetings from Germany!

leinchen

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 12:55 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen

so glad Riley got what was coming to him

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 12:15 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen

oo two more sleeps!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 10:30 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen

Good for her kick his ass.

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen

Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next! Go Bella!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen

ooh  So glad Charley had her take self defence.  What a dick Riley is.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen

Absolutely loved it

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen

I love this cheeky Bella.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 8:59 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen

You too 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 7:47 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen

six weeks that is to long for these two to be apart .  I love the fisty Bella she is not going to let them bitches get one up on her lol

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 5:05 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen

Glad Kate was being reasonable.   Hate jealous skanky bitches.   

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen

Cant wait for more 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen

This was such a cute and sweet chapter.

Reviewer: IANticipate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:44 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:34 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:25 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:13 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:03 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 10:53 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

loved it! Funny chapter!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 10:44 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 10:34 AM Title: Chapter Ten

loved it! Poor Edward!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 10:22 AM Title: Chapter Nine

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter Eight

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:29 AM Title: Chapter Seven

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter Six

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter Five

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter Four

awe!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter Three

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter Two

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter One

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 10:11 PM Title: Prologue

Loved it!

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:17 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Holy cow!!  What the hell is Alice's problem?? Just curious how long Edward will keep Jasper & Alice employed!! Love what you are doing with the story girl...your writing style kind of reminds me of Janet Evanovich with all the humour!!

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter Ten

That was hilarious!! Poor Edward didn't know what to do!! Love the story!

Reviewer: Annabanana09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 3:38 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

Lovely story so far! Can't wait for more! :-)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 7:58 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

He is no longer hollywood's most eligible bachelor is is taken and all can see that ;)

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

Can't wait for more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

Omg. I love it! Can't wait for more!! Happy new year!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

I just caught up on the last chapters. I loved the coupon line in this one! I always tell my husband that even if we won the lottery, I would still use my coupons.

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

Very nice!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

Aww  glad Rose and Jane are helping her out.   Actually liking a Jane for a change.   Wondering when Malice will pop out again though

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: fallenangel8526 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen

:)

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen

Aww! damn. I wish Rob would have did the GG with Kristen.Good Story.

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2013 6:18 AM Title: Chapter Three

please let Jake fall into the dishwasher and drowned

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen

Esme and Carlisle will be so disappointed in Alice and Jasper. They have no reason to be cruel to Bella. If anyone is a leech it is those two, since they both work for him. They aren't independent. They totally depend on him for their livelyhood. Edward was so smart to fire them.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2013 7:23 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen

Alice what the hell is her problem I am glad that Edward fired both of them. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: she-rah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen

Merry Christmas!

Yay Bella for being proud of her V card. However, I anticipate future trouble with Malice. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2013 4:45 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen

woo hoo.  SOOOOOO glad Malice was fired.   Surprised Jasper put up with her.  They need to call Esme before Malice gets to her first and tries to lie.  

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

xoxo - *.*

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2013 3:21 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Great chapter! 

Al buying his own coffee... it could happen you never know. 

Can't stand hire Alice and Jssper are with Bella a good reality check would be good for them. 

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2013 8:25 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Love it

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Such a good chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen

OMG, what is Alices' problem?

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Great chapter..Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

I would like to kick Alice in the teeth and I think Edward would to.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 9:49 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Wow you would think that Rose being an actress would be more stuck up than a sister working for her brother hmmmm she needs a reality check update soon

Reviewer: Maggie79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 8:11 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Love it! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

wow  sweet present.   Guess Alice is going to be a complete biatch.  Jasper better reign her in soon.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Loved the chapter. I am so glad that Edward stood up to Alice.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

I love your make believe world it is so much fun.  Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Asper needs to be fired and he and Malice need to be shipped home on the first plane out of Vegas.  In Coach, no less.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Loved it can't wait for more

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Great chapter!

So happy that both families could look pass Thanksgiving and come together.

Side note: Kerrie Robert's version of O Holy Night is amazing!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

I love this story.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

rock on with your bad ass self bella! *.*

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 12:59 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Great chapter.  It will be interesting to see how her internship goes.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

How beautiful I can picture the home and I love it and how beautiful was the singing thank you

Reviewer: she-rah Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 5:17 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Merry Christmas!  Thank you for your enjoyable story. :-)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Oh, I am going away and I do not know if I will have Internet access on Friday. Boo. I will have something to look forward to when I get back. Merry Christmas and thanks for the cute story!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Fun times with out Alice

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 3:04 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Absolutely loved it

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Glad Christmas is going so well.

Reviewer: LoviV Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

I am loving this story!  I wasn't too sure at first, but I kept hearing others talk about it so I thought I would give it a shot.  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Great chapter.  Glad the interview went well.   Nervous about what James and Victoria are going to pull regarding the internshoip

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 9:16 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

OMG  LOVE LOVE LOVE Bella's speech.    Happy B is not a pushover.   Good for her wanting to do college on her own.   Whip was hilarious

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 9:02 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

oooh So we have a bitchy Alice instead of Rose.  Thats a nice switch.   Alice has really pushed it huh?   Wonder what cop Daddy will have to say about that check.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Loved B teasing Em and E too.    OMG for getting caught by charlie.   hmmm thinking Alice has some news about pics.

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