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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

:)

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

more please :)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

LOVED IT!!! Cant wait to read more, Friday can't come fast enough and not just to read more of this story. lol

Reviewer: broadwayrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

I love this story :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Loved it :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Loved it:)

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Loved it!! Looking forward to more. Especially their house search living together and what is actually going on with Alice and jasper! Thanks again. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 10:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

You are going to string out this proposal, aren't you? I am dying for it! Can't wait until next time...

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

More tgan ten please I kive thus fuc

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

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Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

*sigh* The intensity of their feelings for each other....wow! 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 1:16 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Loved it! So sweet!

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 11:36 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Awwwww loved it!! Thank you. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 8:02 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

:)

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

:)

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Loved it! They are so cute together! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

That was a sweet good bye she put it all out there if he ever had a dought I think he knows for sure now lol

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I loved it now how long before he asks her to marrie him hmmmm update soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Love how sweet this story is

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Now the news that this story will be ending soon;  that it bittersweet.

Reviewer: Mart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Love this story and the progression!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Aww her leaving us do sad.  Hopefully the time apart will go fast this time.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

So happy to get chapters 3 times a week, so sad only 10 chapters left... XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I love the sweetness between them.

Reviewer: smudgenbuster Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I worked in a cigar bar in a five star hotel, and many celebrities came in. 

I didn't recognize George Clooney because he had a full beard for Syriana.  I thought the guy with him was a cute college kid, until I saw he was Matt Damon.  They were so nice and polite, and they left a huge tip. 

I also met Shirley Jones.  She was having dinner with a gorgeous younger man.  They ordered two martinis.   When I brought them, I placed them in front of each of them.  Shirley winked at me as she pulled gorgeous guy's drink to her side of the table.  "Oh, nooo," she said. "They're both for me."

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: sjdavis84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Love this! Such a great story!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I actually prefer stories to "lemons".  Perhaps I am old, but honestly after a while they all read alike

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 2:02 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I like the fade to black...most of the time I skip sex scenes anyway...most of the time.  I like the romance, don't stop!  Paris is the biggest target for romance.  I like how Bella is trying to share her expirence with Edward.  Most of the time you can go some where and never actually be there.  He's getting his chance too.  Thank you.  I love this story.  

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 12:39 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

wow  what a wonderful date he planned.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

:):)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Loved it :)

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

merci! xoxo *.*

Reviewer: Callgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 11:07 PM Title: Prologue

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Reviewer: Callgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Hi,  quickly change the pantheon which is in Rome to something like Sacre Coeur, or Arc de Triomph, check spellings though, that are in Paris.  I just quickly checked as I am waiting till this story completes before I read it,  btw the pantheon is wonderful, and the square it is situated on is one of my favourite places ever, so I am sure Bella would have loved it.



Author's Response:

The Panteon is also the latin square in Paris as well. It was originally built as a church to honor St. Genevieve. Just thought I'd let you know that...I did a lot of research before choosing all the places she went and saw. Thanks for tryign to look out for me though.

xx Dee

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Loved it! Great story so far! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I would love a trip like that its amazing they are amazing

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

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Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Loved it

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Awe Bella is so sweet to try and show Edward everything she is doing with out him try to make it as if they both where there so sweet

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I was expecting a proposal. Surprised me!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

It sounds like a wonderful place to be

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 7:19 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

:-)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

What a great chapter you wrote. Thanks.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

aww poor e.  Hate seeing him so tired.   Glad she got out to do some sightseeing though.

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Loved it! can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 11:20 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Lovely chapter  ... now I want to go to Paris

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Beautiful.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 6:40 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Loved it :)

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Loved it! Looking forward to reading more!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Ahh, spring time in Paris with the one you love. It could only be better if he didn't have to work. I am envious!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Loved it! Bella and Edward make an adorable couple!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

I loved it they are so in love now my hubby saw shara michelle gellar and she thinks so high of herself she wanted the building closed for her so no could come in and take her pictures but thwy saud no she went and not one person took her picture and he said she was stuck up

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

:)

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Loved it

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

International travel is so much fun, especially when you have Edward at the other end.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

At least the staff didn't give her crap about getting to the room.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Wonderful story!  Can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 2:01 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

:-)

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 8:57 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Aww 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Hehehehehe I loved it they are both too cute now I am surprised you used my encounter it was so simple bit I thought it was cool thanks

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

loooking forward to more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

:)

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

:)

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Loved it

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Congrats on writing your first song! Awesome. I am ready for more for this couple too!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I thought you did good.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter Twenty

Loved it!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

OMG, you are amazing!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:16 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 10:04 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

:-)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

The song is great Thanks.  That was a great weekend they never wanted to end.  I cant wait for spring break

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Holy hell, This is such an amazing story. I love the low angst as well as the celeb meet n greets you have had through life.

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I like the song and I like the chapter.

 

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

:) ... I am glad to see the school worked with bella. 

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

:)

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

GREAT!! So sweet again Loved it!! Thank you!

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

well done!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

LOL for you personal story at the top.

 

Such sweet times together.  He is an angel.    Aww for her new intership wanting her song.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter Twenty

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Date: 07 Jan 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen

About 10 years ago I waited on Marlon Brando when I worked at CoCo's Bakery Restaurant in Barstow. He went in with his son & his family. There
were about 8 of them. I didnt talk to him much at all. I don't even think he ordered for himself. To me he seemed senile. He spent the meal talking and playing with the kids. He was scolded along with kids for their rudeness. But they never listened. I remember they waited forever for him to get out of the bathroom.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen

:-)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 12:29 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

:-)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen

:-)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

I love when there are bitches like Alice in a story. It's so much fun when they're put in their place.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Oh, how I miss my weekly mark-out.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

:-)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

Why are they asking her about christmas? They should be talking to Alice. The fact that she isn't there shows nothing has changed.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

I can't wait to find out how Alice gets put in her place.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter Twenty

Yeah!. What a wonderful way to end a day that had a horrible moment earlier. I hope Riley is locked up for awhile.

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter Twenty

more please :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter Twenty

That was very sweet and worth the wait.

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 6:14 AM Title: Chapter Twenty

I love lemonade.

 

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