Date: 23 Jan 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
more please :)
Date: 23 Jan 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
LOVED IT!!! Cant wait to read more, Friday can't come fast enough and not just to read more of this story. lol
Date: 23 Jan 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I love this story :)
Date: 23 Jan 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Loved it :)
Date: 22 Jan 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Loved it:)
Date: 22 Jan 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Loved it!! Looking forward to more. Especially their house search living together and what is actually going on with Alice and jasper! Thanks again.
Date: 22 Jan 2014 10:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Looking forward to more
Date: 22 Jan 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
You are going to string out this proposal, aren't you? I am dying for it! Can't wait until next time...
Date: 22 Jan 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
More tgan ten please I kive thus fuc
Date: 22 Jan 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
*sigh* The intensity of their feelings for each other....wow!
Date: 21 Jan 2014 1:16 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Loved it! So sweet!
Date: 21 Jan 2014 11:36 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Awwwww loved it!! Thank you.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Loved it! They are so cute together! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 21 Jan 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
That was a sweet good bye she put it all out there if he ever had a dought I think he knows for sure now lol
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
I loved it now how long before he asks her to marrie him hmmmm update soon
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Love how sweet this story is
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Now the news that this story will be ending soon; that it bittersweet.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Love this story and the progression!!
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Aww her leaving us do sad. Hopefully the time apart will go fast this time.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
So happy to get chapters 3 times a week, so sad only 10 chapters left... XOXO,Cheri
Date: 20 Jan 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I love the sweetness between them.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I worked in a cigar bar in a five star hotel, and many celebrities came in.
I didn't recognize George Clooney because he had a full beard for Syriana. I thought the guy with him was a cute college kid, until I saw he was Matt Damon. They were so nice and polite, and they left a huge tip.
I also met Shirley Jones. She was having dinner with a gorgeous younger man. They ordered two martinis. When I brought them, I placed them in front of each of them. Shirley winked at me as she pulled gorgeous guy's drink to her side of the table. "Oh, nooo," she said. "They're both for me."
Date: 18 Jan 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Love this! Such a great story!
Date: 18 Jan 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I actually prefer stories to "lemons". Perhaps I am old, but honestly after a while they all read alike
Date: 18 Jan 2014 2:02 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I like the fade to black...most of the time I skip sex scenes anyway...most of the time. I like the romance, don't stop! Paris is the biggest target for romance. I like how Bella is trying to share her expirence with Edward. Most of the time you can go some where and never actually be there. He's getting his chance too. Thank you. I love this story.
Date: 18 Jan 2014 12:39 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
looking forward to more
Date: 18 Jan 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
wow what a wonderful date he planned.
Date: 18 Jan 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Loved it :)
Date: 18 Jan 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
merci! xoxo *.*
Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Hi, quickly change the pantheon which is in Rome to something like Sacre Coeur, or Arc de Triomph, check spellings though, that are in Paris. I just quickly checked as I am waiting till this story completes before I read it, btw the pantheon is wonderful, and the square it is situated on is one of my favourite places ever, so I am sure Bella would have loved it.
Author's Response:
The Panteon is also the latin square in Paris as well. It was originally built as a church to honor St. Genevieve. Just thought I'd let you know that...I did a lot of research before choosing all the places she went and saw. Thanks for tryign to look out for me though.
xx Dee
Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Loved it! Great story so far! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I would love a trip like that its amazing they are amazing
Date: 17 Jan 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Loved it
Date: 17 Jan 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Awe Bella is so sweet to try and show Edward everything she is doing with out him try to make it as if they both where there so sweet
Date: 17 Jan 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I was expecting a proposal. Surprised me!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
It sounds like a wonderful place to be
Date: 16 Jan 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
What a great chapter you wrote. Thanks.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
aww poor e. Hate seeing him so tired. Glad she got out to do some sightseeing though.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Loved it! can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 11:20 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Lovely chapter ... now I want to go to Paris
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Beautiful.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 6:40 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Loved it :)
Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Loved it! Looking forward to reading more!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
looking forward to more
Date: 15 Jan 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Ahh, spring time in Paris with the one you love. It could only be better if he didn't have to work. I am envious!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Loved it! Bella and Edward make an adorable couple!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
I loved it they are so in love now my hubby saw shara michelle gellar and she thinks so high of herself she wanted the building closed for her so no could come in and take her pictures but thwy saud no she went and not one person took her picture and he said she was stuck up
Date: 14 Jan 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Loved it
Date: 14 Jan 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
International travel is so much fun, especially when you have Edward at the other end.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
At least the staff didn't give her crap about getting to the room.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 11 Jan 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Wonderful story! Can't wait for the next update
Date: 11 Jan 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Hehehehehe I loved it they are both too cute now I am surprised you used my encounter it was so simple bit I thought it was cool thanks
Date: 11 Jan 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
loooking forward to more
Date: 10 Jan 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Loved it
Date: 10 Jan 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Congrats on writing your first song! Awesome. I am ready for more for this couple too!
Date: 09 Jan 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I thought you did good.
Date: 09 Jan 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
looking forward to more
Date: 09 Jan 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 09 Jan 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
Loved it!
Date: 08 Jan 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
OMG, you are amazing!
Date: 08 Jan 2014 10:04 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
The song is great Thanks. That was a great weekend they never wanted to end. I cant wait for spring break
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Holy hell, This is such an amazing story. I love the low angst as well as the celeb meet n greets you have had through life.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I like the song and I like the chapter.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
:) ... I am glad to see the school worked with bella.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
GREAT!! So sweet again Loved it!! Thank you!
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
well done!
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
LOL for you personal story at the top.
Such sweet times together. He is an angel. Aww for her new intership wanting her song.
Date: 07 Jan 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
About 10 years ago I waited on Marlon Brando when I worked at CoCo's Bakery Restaurant in Barstow. He went in with his son & his family. There
were about 8 of them. I didnt talk to him much at all. I don't even think he ordered for himself. To me he seemed senile. He spent the meal talking and playing with the kids. He was scolded along with kids for their rudeness. But they never listened. I remember they waited forever for him to get out of the bathroom.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
I love when there are bitches like Alice in a story. It's so much fun when they're put in their place.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Oh, how I miss my weekly mark-out.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Why are they asking her about christmas? They should be talking to Alice. The fact that she isn't there shows nothing has changed.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
I can't wait to find out how Alice gets put in her place.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
Yeah!. What a wonderful way to end a day that had a horrible moment earlier. I hope Riley is locked up for awhile.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
more please :)
Date: 04 Jan 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 04 Jan 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
That was very sweet and worth the wait.
Date: 04 Jan 2014 6:14 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
I love lemonade.