[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Your right about Bella maintaining her dignity as well as preventing futher heartache for the Cullen family.
Of course Edward owns property with his family that is, on the beaches of Hawaii. They are very adept at compromise already. Let's hope that it stays this way throughout their marriage.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2014 1:01 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Love it!
That sounds like a perfect setting for a wedding.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 9:48 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 31 Jan 2014 8:06 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
This story is great. I can't wait to see what happens next
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Here's my celebrity/twiligh encounter. In 2012, my sister, niece, my friend and her daughter and I went to the Twilight convention in Rosemont, IL. The girls, who were 10 and 9 at the time were able to have a meet and greet with Booboo Stewart. What an absolute sweetheart. My neice had made a cutout of Booboo that was mounted and lit up. He was so excited that he asked to keep it. Even his parents were loving it, taking pictures of the girls, Booboo, and and the cutout. Later that day, we were walking through the hotel after some lunch. Booboo happened to come from a side door and saw the girls. He left his "entourage" and ran up to the girls. He put his arms around them and walked with them all the way back to the venue, just chitchatting away with them. He made those two girls so unbelievably happy and gained lifetime fans from the two moms and aunt. What a wonderful young man!!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 6:33 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I feel bad for Carlisle and Esme. It would be hard to realize that a child of yours could be so back stapping to your other child. You can't help but wonder what you did wrong.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 2:22 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
The end was great
Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:40 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I love this Bella. Very good chapter.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Wow Malice is a real piece of work. Hope they make her and Skankya pay for this. Hope B will be ok.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Loved it :)
Date: 29 Jan 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I figured it had something to do with her money flow being stopped but I didn't think she went to that level. I know that stuff happens in the industry. Love the story!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Will Edward file charges against Tanya and Alice; get a restraining order?
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2014 12:54 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Wow! Alice has been very bad!!! Wouldn't it serve her right to be left with no money for her expensive lifestyle and for her to be forced to shop from Target!!! LOL!!! Can't wait to see what you have in store for the little she-devil.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2014 12:49 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Not really surprised with Alice but didn't think that's what she was doing. Great chapter!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:38 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I wasn't surprised-not because I had it figured out-because I did not. I just had no clue and it could have been anything! I was shocked that she attacked Bella. I thought she'd beg and plead. Great chapter!
That Harrison Ford story is priceless. It's so good to know that some celebs are genuinely nice and I am glad he is one of them. Thanks for sharing, Rebadams7!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Thanks for the quick update. Bad Malice, looking forward to her comeuppance!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 10:40 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:17 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Can't wait for more
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
OhOh! Will Edward give up for Bella's sake? I see that Malice has no remorse or change of heart either.Too bad.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I met my husband in March and we married in December and have been together for 24 years! Love this story!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
i want bella to deck alice this time and find out what her problem is i am sick of her
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:46 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Loved the chapter. I would have been overwelmed by the paps as well. Rocking the care is just crazy.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 10:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
loving this
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
wow. finally alice. more please :)
Date: 28 Jan 2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
He has been afraid something would happen to scare her off but she is in it for the long haul he better get use to it. Someone needs to just slap the shit out of Alice.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Maybe Malice wad just the distraction they needed to recoup their thoughts and unify themselves against the onslaught of her vile words. Will Bella finally tell the rest of us the information her father has gathered about Alice?
The stress of being in the public eye has turned Edward stupid! Or just fearful that the love they share will crumble under duress.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Sweet words of encouragement .... after that ending?? No no, you'll have to wait until Wednesday. Then you'll get sweet words, maybe! ;)
Thanks for writing.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Malice is a bitch!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Hard for me to hate Alice, but easy to hate Malice. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Why Alice why
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Loved it :)
Date: 28 Jan 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
omg! i want that house
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 12:15 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Oooh, the "evil princess" needs to go down. I'm not an Alice fan to begin with. I find her very manipulative , but this Alice has thorns. Can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Edward takes her down.
Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
I want to know what Alice's problem really is. I want half that house, too! I'd settle for a quarter of it.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Damn can't wait for more
Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Ugh. You just had to let malice live and appear again. Bitch. Paps are ridiculous.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Wow, everyone in the coffee shop at that time was privy to a very sweet and romantic treat. Great proposal. Loved the idea behind the ring!
Wondering about the information Charlie relayed to Bella about Alice and Jasper's secret.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I'm sad the Cullen family rift is still in place.
Laughed with Bella at the visual of Officer Pornstash Swan holding his beretta at some pap trying to get a photo of Bella.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
As I read the opening paragraph in this chapter, I realized how right your words are. I too imagined my life and it's future, with children, as I admitted my complete and utter love for the man in my life. I've been happily married now for 28 years. But I've known my man for a total of 33 years. Two beautiful adult daughters, both married to their dream guys. And I've been blessed with two adorable grandchildren. I imagined a blissful family, but I've been blessed beyond all reason.
I'm thoroughly enjoying the moments and memories of all the stars you have met.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Definitely filled with romance!
Beautiful chapter!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Poor Edward, exhausted.
The Louvre Museum in Paris sounds like a magical place.
I chuckling at the thought of Renee trying to keep track of her daughter through public media.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Bella seems to be the envy of women all over the world.
Will the tabloids get any pictures of them in Paris together?
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Wow, congratulations on a well worded song. The rhythmic words just flow of my tongue as I read them. I wish there was a melody to match them. This could easily be made into a country song, a pop song, a soulful blues song. I'm impressed!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
Well worth the wait!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Well, I suspected either James or Riley would attempt to put some sort of the move on Bella, but I didn't think Riley would take it that far.
How will this affect her internship?
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Good to know Kate is still hangin in there as a good friend would.
How steep of a learning curve will phone sex be for Bella? (smirks)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
I really like how Jane and Alec are so professional yet seem to understand the dynamic between Edward and Bella and that it is in their best interest to help solidify her place beside him. Jane's actually growing on me as a character.
Lovin the support Rose is giving Bella throughout this adventure.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Wondering if the Cullen family rift will be repaired in the coming year?
Edward needs a new PR person, hm. Who will he choose?
Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I loved it. You know when you find your soulmate. I don't understand people you date 6 years and still don't know if they are going to get married. They are wasting their lives with the wrong person.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
I'm enjoying your make believe world.
Is Jasper just as condescending ad Alice, or has she manipulated him as well?
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
I had to check out Berries Roberts version of O Holy Night. Very enjoyable!
Can't wait to see where Bella's talent leads her.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 2:11 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Riley and James have me a bit nervous!
I wonder if Victoria will go after Edward once everyone figures out Bella and he are together?
Let's hope that Bella has a hood legal back drop to project her and her music from the potential pirates; Victoria, James and Riley.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 1:55 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Mistress Bella, perfect! Haha
(sing-song voice)Rose has a crush on Charlie, Hehehe.
How long before Alice comes crawling to the family for forgiveness?
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Love it!
Very fitting where he proosed.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Is Alice afraid Bella's out to take her cut of Edward's money? If Edward stays single than the family gets his money. Snarky little sister needs to be put in her place.
Wondering what Charlie thinks about this line of questioning?
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Coitus-interruptus! Haha
Did Charlie just admit that Renee is the aggressor in their bedroom affairs? Pornstash, now that's funny.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
that was just awesome...loved it!! can't wait to find out the info Charlie was able to get on Alice & how the family will handle it.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter Nine
Bella was baptized by fire, walking into Edward's world of acting. Glad Emmett was available for the support and a bit of levity.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter Eight
I hope Renee isn't the one to betray their budding romance to the tabloids.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Absolutely perfect! Bravo!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter Seven
Does moma Esme have to run cover for Edward very frequently?
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Go Bella!
Great chapter.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Noce proposal
Date: 26 Jan 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Wonderful story, wonderful characters! XOXO, Cheri
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter Six
A true romantic at heart! Edward pulled off the perfect date. I hope the phone calls begin soon.
Will Edward tell Rosalie about his coffee girl?
Will Bella gush to Angela about her date?
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:04 AM Title: Chapter Five
Renee acted like a cheap tart!
Really, she would expose her daughter to ridicule and endless torment from the paparazzi through social media? What an awesome mother!
The real Edward is endearingly sweet.
The virginity issue should be a bonus for him.
What other confessions do they have for each other on their first date? Chuckling.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter Four
Edward's addiction and Bella's babbling is creating very sweet and likable characters.
A date, wow. She really did get under his skin. And the approval of his mother.
Hehe.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter Three
Edward's rather forward in the presence of his mother, don't you think? Wonder if he'll blush once he realizes his mother is taking in the entire scene.
Bella belting out that song into a broom handle was hilarious.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter Two
Well, at least momma's boy had enough sense to quickly explain his thoughts on her voice. Saved his hide just long enough to plant the notion in her brain that he is indeed interested in her.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter One
So it would seem that neither one of them put their best foot forward. Haha
Will she give him a tongue lashing (pun intended) before he has a chance to explain himself?
Trusty little car, those Honda Civics.
What an amazing set of memories you take with topic from your days of being a coffee girl.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I loved it!!! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:12 AM Title: Prologue
I am delighted to take this journey with the coffee girl!
Let's read on.
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Loved it :)
Date: 25 Jan 2014 12:57 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Love it!!!
Date: 25 Jan 2014 10:14 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I loved the proposal it was very fitting and well done. I am the same as you I moved in with my husband a little over 2 months after meeting him it took us 10 years to finely get married but we have pasted being together 29 years so you never know who know when to soon is. I am loving your story so thanks so much
Date: 25 Jan 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
kind of want to know whats up with alice and jasper. nice chapter, more please :)
Date: 25 Jan 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
awww what a wonderful proposal.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Well you love story is the same as mine "We met 2 months later we lived together we were married at 6 months and in october we will be married 25 years he is my soul mate ! It's a wonderful thing to have your husband, lover, best friend, soulmate all in one being!
You are doing a awesome job on this !!
Date: 25 Jan 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
If it's meant to be it's not too fast. My husband started dating within the first week of meeting, said I love you weeks weeks after dating, he proposed 2 months after we met and got married 7 months after the proposal. My husband says he knew I would be his wife the moment he saw me. We have been married 9 years and are still happy and in love.
Date: 25 Jan 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Quite the proposal! Loved the ring idea.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I loved it I meet my husband and talked and hungout with for three months and than a week after we became a couple I moved in and a month later I found out I was pregnant and just over a year after we were a couple we married that was 10 years ago life happens when it wants to
Date: 25 Jan 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
looking forwqrd to more
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Time is not important, you know wenn its right, i married my hubby with 19 and still are, 26 years in mai. Great love story, keep going just love it. Thanks hug sanna
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Absolutely loved it
Date: 24 Jan 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Yeah Bella. Graduation and starting your life with the love of your life in one day. You go girl.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Oh, it looks like Daddy swan has some inside info on our grouchy snooty couple. Looks promising for the next installment.
Date: 24 Jan 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I am enjoying this fic and also the Hollywood encounters almost as much so I thought I'd share mine which is a twilight encounter. I live in Alabama and my friends and I had joked around about driving to Baton Rouge on a "vampire hunt" while they were filming Breaking Dawn 1&2. It was getting close to them finishing up so we loaded up and just drove all the way there, got a hotel and roamed Baton Rouge all day. Didn't see anyone so that evening we went down to the bar strip and while trying to find a parking place I caught sight of Guri Weinberg (Stephan) standing outside a hotel/bar, his beautiful eyes gave him away. We whipped into a parking spot and I jumped out and walked over to him shaking like a leaf. He was so sweet and signed our books and took pics then he went inside and brought out Daniel Cudmore (Felix) Valorie Curry (Charlotte & now plays Emma on The Following) and Noel Fisher (Vladimir) they were all so amazing and talked with us, signed our books and took pics. The following day I started my Twitter account and so did Noel Fisher. I followed him and thanked him for everything the night before. He came back and started following me and we talked every day for months/years. When my husband had to have a tumor removed from his neck Noel and Guri woke up early the day of the surgery and tweeted with me from 9am till 9pm that night trying to keep me from loosing my mind. Noel and I developed a wonderful friendship and he not only helped me out that day but also has helped my daughter with auditions and even helped her bring her grades up in school. He talked with her online for an hour one night about how he got into acting. He has become very popular since BD2 and now his show Shameless so we don't talk every day like we used to but he will always be considered one of my fondest friends. Such a sweet heart. I've also had the very amazing privilege of meeting Jackson Rathbone (the very sexy Jasper Whitlock) he was just as gorgeous in person and he shook my hand so I have successfully met and touched 5 vampires!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Can't wait for the next update !
Date: 23 Jan 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Nice big step. I think the family is liking not having the Alice drama so sad
Date: 23 Jan 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
awww for moving in. Paps are so ridiculous in what they get away with.