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Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 12:48 AM Title: Outtake

One of the best out takes ever!

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 12:14 AM Title: Outtake

THANK YOU <3

Reviewer: nello1418 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

wow, an original song? it was really good. another great chapter

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 3:12 PM Title: Epilogue

Looking forward to the sequel!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 1:22 PM Title: Epilogue

This was such a sweet story!  Thank you for sharing!  I really liked your Bella and Edward!

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 2:49 AM Title: Epilogue

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 1:12 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved it :)

Reviewer: broadwayrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 2:39 AM Title: Epilogue

So excited for a sequel!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 11:59 PM Title: Epilogue

Wonderful end.  Thank you for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 10:51 PM Title: Epilogue

I am so excited that there story will continue I have loved them so.  Thanks so much

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:43 PM Title: Epilogue

Tears in my eyes at that last line!! I loved this story and I cannot wait to start True Confessions of a Hollywood Dad. Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

Happy Valentine's Day!

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:17 PM Title: Epilogue

Congrats well done loved every single chapter

Reviewer: be johns Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 6:30 PM Title: Epilogue

Thankyou for completing this enjoyable story. Look forward to future works.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 3:31 PM Title: Epilogue

loved this story.  Looking forward to the sequel

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:33 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved the story and I am excited to see the story will continue. These just have so much to share with the rest of us especially little beans arrival.

thanks for creating and sharing with us.

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:28 PM Title: Epilogue

Yay! So glad we are getting more of these two :)

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Thanks for sharing my story at the beginning! That's so cool :)

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 1:46 PM Title: Epilogue

Oh I am looking forward to reading the second part to this amazing story. It was an amazing journey thanks so much for the ride.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 1:40 PM Title: Epilogue

I Can't wait for the sequel to come out. Love this story!!

 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 1:28 PM Title: Epilogue

Looking forward to seeing were the next chapter of their lives take them

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 1:26 PM Title: Epilogue

Cant wait to see if they have a little cafe aul'ait (girl) /esspresso (boy) or a pair of lattes (twins)! :-)

 

 

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 12:44 PM Title: Epilogue

Omg omg omg!! I have loved reading this story from beginning to the end!! And soooooooo looking forward to the sequel!! ( squealing). Lol

thank you so much for sharing and can't wait for more!! Happy valentines day! Xoxo

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 12:17 PM Title: Epilogue

I will definitely be there for the sequel Thank you for this great story loved the coffee girl memories xo

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 11:15 AM Title: Epilogue

:-)

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 10:31 AM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for a great story.  I am looking forward to the sequel.  

Reviewer: Abstical Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 9:11 AM Title: Epilogue

Awesome story thanks for the journey! I can't wait to read more of your work :o)

Reviewer: detsinbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:29 AM Title: Epilogue

will there be any of malice. ha-ha.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:24 AM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for this story that I have thoroughly enjoyed.  Looking forward to the sequel...love the title.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 4:53 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Loved this story so much...  Great job

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 10:33 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

:):)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

That was most amazing wedding

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Awesome! I could feel the love! I really think this sweet couple deserves a sequel. ;) I hate for their story to end. I also loved the lava rock tradition.

You used my celeb stories, too! Thank you. I am still a little ticked at my sister-in-law and my husband for their camera malfunctions though. lol

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

The sentiments spoken between bride and groom were very fitting for their romance.
Such a beautifully described location on the beach for this wedding.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

:)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

:)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

This has been such a great read I hope to read more of your writing

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

:)

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Are u going to write a Sequel???? I truely hope so please or at leat plan writting a new stor because I  am truely going to miss this story!!!

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: broadwayrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I love this story!!!

 

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Have truly enjoyed this story. I have loved every post and look forward to the epi and outtake. Thanks for sharing and creating.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

awww sweet ceremony.  gonna hate to see it end.

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Thank you! T

Reviewer: she-rah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Beautiful

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: bird1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter Two

just started reading your story. im enjoying it so far. will there be a edward pov.

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Everything sounds so beautiful!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 3:51 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Sweet chapter and great celeb story!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 11:57 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 10:00 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 7:15 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

That was so sweet and worth the wait because they are perfect for each other. I love the mom advice that is something she can take to heart.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 7:03 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I loved it the moms are awesome now its time for them to say I do

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

wonderful talk with the mom's and sweet prep time for the wedding.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Wonderfully encouraging and supportive words from both moms.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

How awkward for Esme as the other females, besides Bella, inquire after Edward's physical prowess in bed.
Is Bella's dress made of T-shirt material?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Em the cockblocker and goof.    Can't wait for the wedding.  Kinda feel sorry for Jasper for being stuck with Malice.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 1:25 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 6:30 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Im glad to know Alice will not be there I was worried about that.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

:):)

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

:)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Wishing I was in Hawaii right now, dreaming of a world without snow, wind and below zero weather...just saying. Loving this story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: pinkdiamondsparkle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 12:29 AM Title: Chapter Two

That is SO SAD that NPH is a dick. He's just so pretty in person! Too bad.

Reviewer: pinkdiamondsparkle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 11:57 PM Title: Prologue

Intrigued! I can't wait to delve into the story :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

I am assuming the someone is Emmett. I think everyone needs at least a year to be a couple before becoming pregnant. There are so many adjustments in that first year. Babies are great, but that first year should be about cementing the couple relationship. Edward and Bella are smart to wait awhile.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Awww yey for Rose.   love that B installed the coffee maker just for E.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Is Alice and Jasper in Kauai already??  That was a welcome home that Edward would leave again to have the same kind again when he came home again ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

loved it, cant wait to read more

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Loved it :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

I do not want this story to end. Sequel??

Oh, good chapter. I knew that's what her big reveal would be!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

:):)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Well these two have definitely upper the anti in the battle between make-up sex versus reunion sex. Hahaha.

Awe, Rose and Emmett are having a baby. Great wedding surprise.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Can't wait for more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

Woo hoo.  Glad the Moms are being so great with the changes.  the Malice thing worries me too.  Did Jasper disappear too?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

I am so glad that Bella is getting her dream. I wish Alice could wise up and be a decent person. It is hard to loose a child.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 4:52 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

When will Edward learn that it's very important to speak with the wife first before any major actions are taken. Haha.
Glad the moms understand Bella's fears and concerns about a media circus.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

:)

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 11:16 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

Love it can't wait for the wedding!! Bella is doing a lot of breaking down. Stress or pregnant? 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 9:12 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

:)

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

Bella is realy hormonal is she pregers??? 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

Loved it

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One

I love the sound of this wedding.

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter Thirty

Bella does have dignity and class. A private wedding on a beach in Hawaii is beyond perfect!

 

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter Thirty

:-)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter Thirty

I think Bella did the only thing that she could do about Alice...unfortunately.

I love their compromise about the wedding. It should make Charlie confortable, too.

It's good to hear that there are some young stars who know how to treatt their fans well. Get them when they are young, and they are a fan for life!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 11:33 PM Title: Chapter Thirty

Loved it :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter Thirty

This type of wedding sounds perfect. I don't understand huge expensive weddings. It is the marriage part that is important.

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter Thirty

Can't wait

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter Thirty

Beach sounds wonderful.   Kind bad leaving the Malice decision completely up to her though.  Lot of weight on her soldiers.

Reviewer: jillapet Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter Thirty

Yay! Beach wedding! 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter Thirty

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter Thirty

Love this story! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter Thirty

She is handling the Malice thing just as she should like she is nothing to her very good.  I love how Edward puts her at ease even when he is so far away.

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