Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
"WOW" is right! Wow, what a chapter! I loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love LOVE this story!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
Noticed the banner change. It's not bad acutally though I don't really see the point, but complience is what's needed.. Edward's not used to someone calling him out when he's being an ass.. good for Bella.. till next time.. Pam B.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love this story. Sorry for all the hassles you have been getting. Only people who loose are the people who love these stories. XOXO, Cheri
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter! I never thought Edward would open up that much. Can't wait for more.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
I really hope he shows up. thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 11
Dang woman!! What an amazing chapter! It's about time Edward starts showing some deep down emotion!! Way to write it...Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love it... I love this freaking story!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
i want to say thank you for writing and I was not part of the backlash, i am just happy you wiil finish the story. take care
Date: 14 Jan 2014 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loving this story! Thankyou for sharing! Can't wait for next chapter!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
This was great :) I really loved it! SO glad you're staying here on TWCS.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG I freaken love this story!!! As well as your other stories!! Please keep updating and soon!! Looking forward to more!!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
Sorry you are having so many problems I like the story and would like to see what happens next.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! This is so good! Like this Bella too, she has some "kick" to her!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
Pls keep story going.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
FUCK THOSE PEOPLE WHO COMPLAIN.I LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORIES ! BUT THIS STORY LOVE LOVED IT . YOU ARE GREAT WRITER.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am shocked at how he just completely turned cold on her. You are always so good at writing the cat & mouse games! Thanks so much for the update & continuing the story! It is one of my faves!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
thank you for the update...........Bella is trying to put her foot down......Tanya screwed the pooch...lol..serve's her right....until you post again
Date: 13 Jan 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
GREAT GREAT CHAPTER!!!! I can't wait until Tonya gets kicked out on her rear end LOL!!! don't let what others say bother you. As you can see by the remarks there are a lot of us that do like it. People are so closed minded so you know what F**k EM!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am so glad you are keeping story here. I heard that fanfiction is getting ready to censor stories again. And your story is at the top of my list. I wait patiently for each chapter because this story is yummy
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you for this amazing story ! I hope to learn more about Bella's father and E&B interactions with his familly. Tanya finally screw up big time !! I love Edward's attitude problems. Lol. I hope they can found a happy ending...
Date: 13 Jan 2014 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh shit I never thought of that. This is amazing.
I just have to say this story was a real life saver. Insomnia is a bitch and this made it easier.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
God Tanya is shameless. And Charlie is a real peace of work.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2014 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
I fucking love this story,
dont read the bad comments ,fucking moralists, closed minds, they're probably some envious whores XD
Date: 13 Jan 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Shit. World war 3 just started.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh god Edward is going to go postal.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
fuck the complaints or bitching some negative people like doing. sweetie you do your magic and don't worry about the negative shit. loyal readers will continue to read your stories. update soon!! ( sorry if i cum off harsh but enough is enough )
Date: 13 Jan 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
Chapter 11 is not showing up on twcs.
Loving thr story so far. I want to see rose and Tanya get what's coming to them. A few spelling and grammar errors but otherwise well written.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
That was a very sweet thing roger helped Bella do.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Tanya only has herself to blame for that one.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
I adore Esme. I'm so glad she is on Edward and Bella's side. Because really I think she is the only one that matters.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
Okay now I do feel bad for Edward. Sure he is going about it in a shorty way. I mean he married Tanya for a company. But really where is Tanya's self respect. She brought all this on herself. I just hope Bella makes it out of this okay. It's obvious that she loves Edward. And he loves her to. Hopefully they can have a happily ever after.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can't decide if I feel bad for Edward or not. He seems so cold but from what he and roger have told Bella I can see that there is a very good reason for it.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
WHO IS COMPLAINING? FUCK THEM. I LOVE YOUR WRITING YOUR THE BEST! THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT WITH US.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
Never mind. I found the story
Date: 13 Jan 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow this is intense. And hot as fuck.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
He basically just told her he was feeling close to her if she reads between the lines. Tanya kind of screwed herself.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love it...love it. Cannot wait till the next update.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
just let me know ...I will follow the story anywhere
Date: 13 Jan 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love this story! Edward is so demanding which makes his sexy as duck! Keep it going and I will continue to review
Date: 13 Jan 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow! What a good chapter. Edward hurts my feelings when he is so cold to Bella. I hope she sticks to the two days off.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
Yes he found a way out, lets hope he will be satisfied with Bella and not do the same thing to her as he did with his wife.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
Don't let envious people make you doubt about your stories.
Im enjoying so much the way you write! Keep going!! :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
man edward does give you whiplash
wow he is so night and day
poor bella but i guess she signed up for her right and is being paid well
Date: 13 Jan 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loving this story, can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2014 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
You are doing a great job. O shit things are going to hit the roof now. Tanya is in big trouble now. Charlie bad bad bad feeling about him.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
So I just made an account on here just for this story incase it gets deleted from fanfiction because of all those assholes. I love this story though and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
I will read this story where ever you post it!! This chapter made me feel sad for Bella. She has already fell for him and I think he is falling for her also. I can't wait to see how things go with Tanya now. I love this story. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well I love this story. I want to know more about your characters and the only way to do this is to read it. So please continue to update.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love your story. Something different from what is usually out there to read. Don't let the jealous haters get in the way of your creativity. Please keep going with this story!
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this story!!
Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
i love this story! screw the haters! keep it up, totally enjoy your creativity and writing.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this story and would be very upset if it disappeared. I totally agree with your reaction there is a little x people can press if they don't like.
Totally loved the chapter by the way. :)
Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
stay strong and dont let the bullies get to u ... write what u want how u want and if they dont like it they dont have to read it .. i for one like ur work and look forward to updates
xo
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm glad you're not letting those people break your groove and are going to continue to post here.
I enjoy reading how Edward desires Bella above everything else. It appears Tanya may have finallly set her fate.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Again I will read it no matter where you put it! F the haters! I hate when people do this crap to good writers! I can't believe people give you shit they suck! I am behind you. You are awesome don't forget it!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad to see you still posting on this story. I love reading your stories.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2014 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
When will Tanya ever give up? She's so delusional to think she's gonna be able to hang on to Edward much longer. And Charlie, did not see that coming. I think he's looking for compensation of 'losing' his daughter to a billionnaire. I wonder what all Tanya has told him.
One by one, Bella is gaining the acceptance of the Cullens.
Update again soon please.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
great to have you back ...
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2014 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for the story update and welcome back
Date: 10 Jan 2014 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
glad you're back
Date: 10 Jan 2014 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love this fic do glad u updated
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2014 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
i what a man like him
Date: 10 Jan 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
THANK YOU FOR CUMING BACK!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
wow i think they have both fallen
oh bella
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 9
wow to see a little into bella's family life wow
seems carlisle is a little more accepting of bella
love the chapter
Date: 10 Jan 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
Damn awesome babe! I wonder what he did to Tanya? Bella shouldnt have to do anything for Carlisle when he really hasnt done anything for her yet. Great chapter hun, I cant wait to read more :)
3> Sassy_Mami :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
This is how I'd like to see this go....
B's year is almost over, she finds out she's pregnant but doesn't tell E due to things he's said or because of his behavior toward herplus he's still married. She realizes she has to protect her child(ren)She leaves, has the baby(s)......
Date: 10 Jan 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for the update! I love this story.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
I freaking love Edward...He's an ass but in a good way
Date: 10 Jan 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you so much! I love this story!
Date: 10 Jan 2014 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
Looking forward to more
Date: 10 Jan 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great development with charlie and carlise
Date: 10 Jan 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
wow! more please :)
Date: 10 Jan 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
yea your back glad to see you back great chapter loved it and dont know how he does either but ya got to love him
Date: 10 Jan 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love love this story and sooooo happy to see you back. Love the update and can't wait for more!!
Date: 10 Jan 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am loving this story, Tanya is going to get it...can not wait for the next installment
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love it!!! Glad Bella was able to handle Charlie can't wait to read what happens next.
Date: 09 Jan 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
I ws so excited to get this update from you. Hope you update soon again. I have missed this story.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
glad your back i was missing this story!!!!
Date: 09 Jan 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow Tanya is such a snake....and Charlie...I have no words
Date: 09 Jan 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Another fail for Tanya :-) Charlie got pretty short shrift and Bella gained a potential ally in Carlisle. Not what she was hoping for. Finally, it can be most empowering to be in a business meeting without knickers on, and that's all I am saying !
Date: 09 Jan 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad to see another chapter. Great one like always
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
Absolutely loved it
Date: 09 Jan 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love his last text!
Date: 06 Jan 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm addicted to this story. Please update soon!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
Please update again soon!!!
Date: 17 Dec 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
Brilliant. If you are not a professional writer... Than you have missed your mark in life!
Thank you for sharing your creativity.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2013 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
LOVE YOUR STORIES, CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT/.
Date: 11 Dec 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hope you post soon. Its really a good fic.
What are you going to do with tanya and rose ??
Date: 08 Dec 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMGosh!!!!!!! They are falling for each other!!!!!!!!! I knew Rose was going to be furious with Emmett. I can not believe that Edward spent that much on a company. WOW!!!!!! He really has it bad for Bella. I have now caught up with all the chapters. NOW I have to wait on an update. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon. This is really a great GREAT story. Thanks for sharing it.
Date: 08 Dec 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
So, Alice is talking to Bella now and Emmett is taking up for her. Well, this is getting very interesting. I wonder what Rose is going to think.
Date: 08 Dec 2013 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
I was soooo hollering "You go girl, you go girl" to Bella when she told Tanya off. LOL!!!!!!!!! They are starting to fall for each other.