[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2014 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh no!! Crap on a hamburger bun, what a total cluster. Tanya is the she-devil and it sucks that Bella is now destitute. Hopefully this "New Moon" phase won't last long! I just hate it when it gets all drawn out and messy but if the story must be told... Le sigh. Thanks for writing!
Annie B
Date: 18 Jan 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
omg i loved the chapter! im just glad that there is going to be a HEA(:
Date: 18 Jan 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
OH SNAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow so good loving this story please update
addicted already
Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
This chapter made me cry
i didn't think Tanya could be so mean (I think this is the only ff that made me seriously HATE her )
i hope that the happy ending will start to show itself in the next chapter (I'm begging you for this)
Date: 17 Jan 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
After reading this chapter I turned off my phone and had to cry. I was extremely upset and pissed off. To make it worse I just had a nightmare about this story where Bella dies!! I know you're saying it will work out but damn a week is a long time to wait and find out. Patiently dying for your next update! I hope you make Tanya suffer!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Why do I get the feeling Tanya and Charlie are the cause of Edward's accident? I can't see Edward not taking back control of his life if he has come out of the coma. So memory loss or is Tanya keeping him week so she can run the show. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Why Esme didn't help Bella if she realy love Edward?
Edward is still in a come after 3 monts...? Or Tanya tell him lies?
I need more ASAP.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
That was turly so not nice!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
Tanya is a real bitch! Poor Bella
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
WOW!!! I did not see that coming at all. How tragic, Edward finally was going to tell her he loved her and was coming to her. Then the accident leaving him in a coma. Oh god. Three months has passed has he not woken or did he develope amnesia? Tanya is a real nasty piece of work. Why hasn't Bella contacted Esme, Carlisle, Alice, or Roger to check on Edward? Wouldn't they help her now that she's pregnant with their heir? My stomach is in knots. I need more asap.
Sherry
Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
What I don't get it let me guess amnesia right
Date: 17 Jan 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
---------------------------------- i cant belive you did this.. not only a life changing event but a short chapter too -------------------------- my emotions have flat lined
Date: 17 Jan 2014 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh man!!! How very sad for Bella! I hope Tanya gets what is coming to her! It always happens, they say I love you and the crap hits the fan!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG, how it all went to hell fast and then to find out she is pregnant on top of it. Waiting for the HEA
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 12
talk about a new begining. she finally got edward to give them a chance and he ends up in the hospital
bella surely loves him more by walking away so tanya didn't pull the plug. shame on his family for letting tanya get her way when they all know he hates her. wow when he wakes up i hope he makes them all pay by getting rid of bella
heartbreaking. i am glad you are keeping it bella
blown away
Date: 17 Jan 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story it't the first story i've read on twcs.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
heartbreaking
real and raw
finally the truth
like he gutted the pig and everything came out
now what
wow
Date: 17 Jan 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
You know that is a really MEAN way to leave this story. Really, mean. I look for toward the update.
What about Bella's bank account? Tanya couldn't cancel that as well.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh God Oh God Oh God! Update Please for the love of everything!
ps. bit of a lurker. sorry. all of your stories are awesome.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
I LOVE THE ANGST AND THE TWIST! YOUR NEVER DISAPOINT, THANK YOU LUV YA!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
Shock! Speechless......in a good way. Keep it coming.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh no yes am lol wow great chapter loved it cant wait to see what happens next
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 12
Whoa....Did not see that coming......Awesome twist.....Oooh that b*tch Tanya is totally going to get it when Edward wakes up especially with Bella being preggers. And something tells me she had something to do with Edward's accident......
More soon please!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
Nooo cliffieee!! Anxiously waiting for more!!! xoxo
Date: 17 Jan 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
Boy oh boy, Tanya is a royal bitch! Please let Edward wake up with his full memory. So he can send Tanya where she belongs.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG! OMG! I cannot wait for the next chapters!!! Bella is pregnant! So excited! But....Damn you Tanya!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, please don't make this all mushy now. I like strong, asskicking Edward. Someone needs to fix this pronto!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG you are going to make me wait after ending like that!!! I will wait but only for you. PS T better get what she deserves! XOXO,Cheri
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
crying. What a cliffy. Damn tanya.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
Omg...that was an amazing turn of events!!..way to go! I await your.next words with bated breath!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
omg! great chapter!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
She tried to kill him! I have no proof but so something's telling me Tanya cut his brakes.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 12
That so mean. Please update soon. Loved it.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
You have left me shocked and speechless. :)
Date: 17 Jan 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
WHAT HAPPENED???????????????????? I did NOT see this coming. Poor Bella, Poor Edward. I can not believe that Edward's family did not stand up to Tanya. At the end it is 3 months after the accident....How is Edward? Is he still in a coma?? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow, what a chapter. I will say, I saw the accident coming. But Iwas thrilled that Edward was going to tell Bella he loves her!! When he comes out of the coma, is he going to have amnesia and think that he and his wife Tanya are happily married? I hope Alice or Roger is talking to him while he is in the coma and telling him Bella loves him. Argh...we have to wait a whole week??? Poor Bella and baby.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow, but how could you leave us hanging!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow quite the twist. Please let's not have Edward suffer memory loss or anything lame like that. Or for years to go by before he gets to be with his child.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 17 Jan 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
Holy shit!!! How could you do this to me! Lol please please PLEASE update soooonnnnn!! I need more!!! Damn that was an awesome chapter!!
Date: 17 Jan 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
Holy cow! What a turn of events! Wake up soon Edward & please remember Bella when you do.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
YES!!!! I was pleasantly surprised by the turn of events. T is a very dangerous individual. I'm sure E has his intents filed with his lawyer?
Sooo looking forward to the next update.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow I knew something like this would happen and a baby too..Oh Edward is going to be so pissed off at Tanya when he wakes up
Date: 17 Jan 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Completely blindsided. Please don't make us wait a whole week. Update again soon please.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG!!! more please :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMFGOODNESS!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BIGGEST CLIFFIE EVERRRRR WHYYYY....I Cant wait until your next update but I just eant you to know you are an amazing writer and am very excited for your book to come out :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Holy cow! WTF happened? Three months have gone by! Is he dead!Can you find an assassin to off Tanya?Her voice is giving me a headache. BELLA IS PREGNANT! Oh dear, I need a cup of tea and then I am going to reread this update. Maybe I missed something. I have faith that you will make it right. Hmmm I think I will have to sneak a cookie with my tea today.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh snap a baby what will Edward do when he finds out update soon
Date: 16 Jan 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my! Didn't see that coming!
Date: 16 Jan 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
Ahh you just updated but update again soon! What a chapter! I love this story!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
excellent as per usual
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yay! So happy you're staying!
This chapter was so cute! Finally Edward admitted how he feels about Bella. That "don't give up on me" line had to totally awwwww-ing LoL And then the "aint that a bitch" line had me giggling.
I so love this story. I get crazy exicted when I see its been updated. More soon please!
Date: 16 Jan 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh darn! he Did Tayna ruthe same
Date: 16 Jan 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am glad that you are updating it here again! I really like this story and can't wait to see whathappens next
Date: 15 Jan 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
So glad he opened up to her and told her how he feels
Date: 15 Jan 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
WOW!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!
I am a little speechless and very surprised at all the emotion that Edward has in this chapter. I am truly surprised that he tells Bella about his feelings. That is a big step for Edward in my opinion. I am glad that Bella stood up to him and told him to get his shit together. Also very happy that she did not stay when he asked her to. They both need to think about things.
I am soooooooo loving this story. I am very glad that you have started back updating!!!!!!! Thanks
Date: 15 Jan 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow! They really needed this! Love it! Thank you for sharing!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ohh wow indeed...
Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
AWWWW I loved this chapter It gave some insite into Edward. I am rooting for him and B. I can't wait till the next chapter....
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Im glad he opened up so much!!! I just hope they will make this work ;)
Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
OMFG!! Wow just wow!! He was so open. I loved it!! And glad to hear you are not giving up n this story!! If people don't like oh well they don't have to read it!!
Thanks for another GREAt chapter and sooooo looking forward to next update. Hope it's soon!!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
love it
Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love it. Cannot wait for the next one.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
omg loved it cant wair to read more keep up the good work!!!:-)
Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, is right! Thanks for the update.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
speaking of confessions
Date: 15 Jan 2014 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh more please lol I can't wait to see what's next
Date: 15 Jan 2014 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 11
I can't get enough
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
Will we get E's childhood story?
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
I agree with you. I understand constructive criticism but ignorant readers just "Piss" me off. If they are that upset by a story, "STOP READING IT"!
I consider myself an open-minded reader & I enjoy sharing my thoughts. Some stories have even given me a different, refreshing view of another side to my beliefs.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
Omg!!!! I have fallen for this story didn't think I would but please post again soon I wish I could be an everyday thing :( but I understand. I can wait to see the turn that the story takes from here....
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
WOW! more please :)
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
You are a GENIUS! Those were the best emails ever!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow indeed! Who would have thought that he would open up like that.
Excellent chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
The banner change isn't all that bad actually.
Edward seems to be realizing what it'll be like if Bella did leave for good. Loved the emails. He's opening up to her, somewhat. I guess the ball is in Edward's court.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love this! thank you for the recent updates, keep 'em coming :-)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yea. At least he is admitting his feelings sort of.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
THANK YOU FOR ANOTHER GREAT UPDATE. LOOIKNG FORWARD TO THE NEXT.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
awwwww loved the e-mail.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
LOVE IT SOO MUCH, THANK YOU!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella was amazing in this chapter. I am so glad that Bella left. And I am ecstatic that she told him to come. Edward really put it all out there, that took guts.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love love love this story. I love this chapter too and how Edward finally opened up:)
cant wait for the next update!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh wow!!! I really loved this chapter, and cannot wait to see what will happen next for these two!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG!! I love this chapter, you are amazing, Bella never imagined having so much power over Edward, he is addicted to Bella. Edward had to think about losing Bella to confess that need it. I'm looking forward to more. I'm following you on TWCS. Kisses, thanks.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Ah tears can't wait to see where this goes