Can't wait for more!!!!!

interesting..... bella s going to introduce edward as a piano teacher..good good:)

She is right, skankya is going to embarrass her as much as possible.  I love Em.

Interesting start.  B's in over her head I think.   

Wow...sooo happy...can't wait for ed and roger to mett levi...

wow. more please :)

Can't wait for them to meet x

Ok ok I did the blog. :)  u rock

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Ok so I follow your blog and read a while ago but had to re read again!! Thank you! 

First thank you for the 3 chapters and second I LOVED Them!! Loved Edwards email letter to Bella and Levi is sooooooo cute! Can't wait till they meet and start piano lessons!! Sooooooo please update again SOON!! Thanks again!! 

:)

Some may hate the turn your story has taken but not me i love it andit's your story so write the way you see/feel it can't wait for the next chapter

Good.

dear jj , 

i love your story's all of them 

i may not like somethings but they go with the plot of the story you are writing so i can 't hate you for it 

i even was not able to sleep yesterday cause i wanna know what happend to bella an dedward and how fucked up tanya was able to be to the both of them 

keep typing and you will get where ever you wanna be in life cause i love what ever you are typing 

xxx lin a fan from belgium

Your story is awesome and people are just dumb for being ugly about it!  I can't wait for more!

I for one am glad you did chapter 13 and this chapter that way. usually when they ship ahead they go back and remember events I like you just use the years and wrote the importan events and got on with it. Can't wait for more.

First off I Would Like to Say That i Really Enjoy This story. About The angst, i Think it is done excessly Sometimes. i Don't Think i Could've read this story if You Would've had 4 Chapters of it. well not til it was finished. i Find That reading stories that has tons.of angst often leave me feeling depressed and tend not to read them until its completed. 

Good story and writing...cant Wait For more!

amazing

LOVE it!!!!!!! I am glad that Edward read her book himself. Glad Roger made him. Also glad that he knows the truth about what Tanya did to Bella. Hope he and Bella together will take Tanya down. I hope he takes his anger and turns his life around. He would make a great dad. 

I like the skip of four years, forget the haters

Another brilliant chapter. I was a little surprised by the time skips but I think it was a good call for both of them. Loving this story still.

Loved it :)

I like it even with the time skips but I'm not keen on their child being so smart why cant he be a normal 3-4 year old. 

I am loving it. I am excited about Edward eventually meeting his son. 

Dear Ruthlesslyyours aka JannMcCole

Thank you.

My best wishes and warmest regards.

Shirley Hashim.

great chapter least he has the chance to try and right his wrong and hes no way like his dad

I'm sorry to hear that you received negative feedback on the last chapter. I have enjoyed both and feel they add to the story. It's interesting to see their lives over the course of several years and especially to see Edward's reaction. While a quick HEA might have worked, it needs to be done this way so that they can truely accept each other and build a future.

I look forward to reading the next chapter.

I can't even imagine how hard it is to have readers. Much less angry readers. HOWEVER, YOU ARE THE GODDAMN WRITER. NEVER let someone determine which path you take with a story. Maybe that's selfish or ungrateful to the people that read your stories, but ultimately, you provide us with a piece of you. A piece that should be cherished. I'm sure you take countless hours out of your time to offer up this amazing work of fiction and, honestly?  We should be thanking you for anything you give us. You don't do it for the money (although, you totally could!!); you do it because you enjoy it! I trust you as an author. Your work is fanfuckingtastic. Whatever you put out...I know it will be golden. That being said, maybe these "angry" readers need to get the fuck over themselves and have a little faith in the writer. It's okay to share opinions or give constructive criticism, but if you're spouting off hatefulness, you're out of line. People need to get over themselves. 

While I'm ecstatic about the glimpse into Edward's turmoil during their time apart, it wasn't necessary.  I trust you. If you think time needed to speed up that quickly, then you're right. You're the author. Period. I trust that. 

You're amazing. Plain and simple. This story is one of the best I've ever read. I can't wait for more and I hope you'll continue to be true to your vision without allowing others to interfere. I may not review religiously...single mom and all that jazz, but this little gem is ALWAYS, ALWAYS a priority when it's in my inbox!! Keep this fabulousness coming!

I for one love the way you did the time jump - it often makes me flounce when an author drags it out and details every second they were apart over umpteen chapters. We know they suffer while apart, the important thing is what happens when they get back together- you did it perrfectly :)

it was a great chapter, i think how u handled it was great, thank you. but i have to tell u when i read that last bit i thought oh shit she did not stop it there and we would have to wait a week or whenever u updated but then i read ur a/n and breathed a sigh of relief that u would be updating again today. I hope u slept well, and ur homework got done. :0). Oh and just incase u didn't know i can't wait to read more.....

I thought the time skips were quite well written. Who wants years of bullshit? You brought us right to the best parts.

I get why you did the time jumps. If you had drawn out the pain they experienced while apart, it would have gotten repetitive, and boring. Thank you consolidating their separated years. We still know what they each went through without it drawn out. 

I feel sorry for Edward having to learn of his child from a book and how Bella was treated. Finding out how difficult life was for her. I hope once he talks with Bella again, they talk honestly.

I'm looking forward to more. Don't let those that didn't like how something played out bother you much.

Sherry

omg! i agree with you, the time skip im not sure how but for me, it made the story that much better. cant wait for more, literally i think you made my day by updating two chapters so fast :)

good

Loved it! Your right if you had drug out the their pain people would have accused you of doing it for reviews. I am really loving it and can't wait for more.

Thank u for writing!! Love it!

wow 4 years later, man tanya you are a witch and i hope you got what was coming to you. you are like those people if you can't have him or be happy then noone else can. man edward didn't love you and wasn't happy he wasn't going to change his mind. 

so long being in a coma. i am glad finally carlisle came around to look after edward. edward read the book and find out what your family and tanya kept  from you.  you have a son spitting image of you and just as smart

oh bella listen to your heart

thank you

OMGosh!!!!!!! I can not believe that she did not get in touch with him after he woke up. Does Edward know that he has a son?????? I hope he does not try to take Levi away from Bella. I hope we get Edward's POV on what he went through when he woke up from his coma till he found Bella. I am loving this story. Edward has missed 4 years of his son's life. I hope to goodness that he does not get mad about that and take it out on Bella. I was like WOW, that he fucked her right than and there. I was reading it with my mouth hanging open. 

i love all your stories. have you thought about writing an EPOV from the time he awakes from the coma till he finds Bella? i would love to read about his reaction when he finds that she left, his divorce and what happened with Tanya. you're a great writer and i can't wait to read the next chapter.

She'll end up back with him. Not sure how I feel about it unless she makes sure to put Levi first.

I loved the chapter(:

That was shocking but I completely understand why Bella is doing what she is doing. And any one who is a mother would also. I really want Edward's point of view when he reads her story.

Thanks for sharing!

wow!!! more please! :)

Loved it! Glad I had to wait a day, it made a  great birthday present. lol

Will definately start following the blog. Please update again soon please.

loved this

Following NOW! Ugh, I missed a day. WOW, what a chapter! I have to re-read and digest it.

love it

=)

what is going on? edward is in a coma..tanya wants to prevent the divorce so she can get as much money she can..and now bella s pregnant..?! what was she doing for the past three months..where was she staying..?! edward s still in a coma?!

drama..more nd more...