Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
That was amazing! I really hope Bella is done fighting him on their attraction. I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
Aww. More PLEASE :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
Angela is just the right person to kick Bella into the proper mindset where Edward is concerned.
Levi talking to Angela's tummy was more than adorable. Such a tender heart felt request to grow big so he would have a playmate.
The Star Wars reference was priceless. Roger is Edward's Yoda, Haha.
I'm not sure why Bella thinks she is falling again for Edward.......she never stopped loving him! Her book proves that.
I'm chuckling at the logic you use to write
Levi's thought processes. It reminds me of my three year old granddaughter. My son-in-law is highly gifted in several areas, which makes it entertaining to watch as he deals with a gifted three year old daughter. Here is an example of a disciplinary discussion:
Dad: "You know that Mom asked you not to touch baby Isaac, but then you decided to do it anyway. Was that very good listening?"
Daughter: "No, not really....."
Dad: "OK, you're right. Maybe you can tell me why you felt like you needed to touch him tight then. Did you think Mom was joking? Or that three was some reason why you needed to touch him?"
Daughter: "No, it was a problem."
Dad: "What kind of problem?"
Daughter: "My brain. My brain wanted to touch him and I said "NO", but then it moved my arm."
Dad: "........."
That's priceless!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wonderfully done. I'm not ready for this story to end. One more chapter left? Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 17
I can't begin to explain how happy I am at the relationship between Edward and Levi! I'm so glad he knows who he is! Anxiously awaiting the next update!
Date: 28 Jan 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love it I can't wait until they are back together Thank you for updating so fast
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
Angie was right to tell Bella to make a decision. It's been a long time coming. Edward made a bold move, but it looks like it was the right move to make. I knew Levi would make connections. He's just too smart. I loved Roger being referred to as Edward's Yoda... I want a Yoda too.
Why doesn't Bella enroll Levi in a school more capable of working with him? She's already worried he'll out do her. He also needs to be around other kids to learn some socializing skills.
When will the rest of the Cullens find out about Levi? Will Tanya make a return? I'm wondering if the media will invade their utopia. Lastly, is Mike gonna sale his story to the paps?
Sherry
Date: 28 Jan 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
I've got chills!!! OMG! Levi is amazing, and the relationship he has with Edward is so cute!
i love that Edward talks now, and says what he wants! He's going go fight for her and I want someone to fight for me too :)
till next time! Can't wait for thar reunion!
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 17
She's already reached the bottom, sunk all the way down.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 17
We'll that was a bit of a risk Edward took but it looks like it may have been a good move. His words were perfect. Not the old Edward at all. I love this story. And I adore this little Levi character.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love Levi! You have created character that I cannot help but be drawn to. I cannot help but laugh, cry and root for them every step of the way. Thank you for sharing and updating so quickly!!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm so happy for them! I'm really anxious to find out what Edward's family is doing though. They need to start redeeming themselves.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Ang is right. She needs to give in. She's gonna anyway. Hmm wonder when the rest of the family is going to decend?
Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
Its about time. LOL, but i get it on her part, but the same time she needs to give him a chance. idk. Loved it btw cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
What are E's demons?
Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 17
It keeps getting better. Way to make him work for it Bella. Stay strong for your son, billionaire boy needs to get lots of help before he deserves another chance with you.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
Yes the girl is giving in! I just love Levi he is great and I really loved the "Roger is Yoda" conversation! That was perfect!
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
He is sooooo sweet! I didn't think you had it in you Ed! Levi is awesome! Love it all!!!
Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
I don't understand how Bella can be so cruel. Edward wasn't mean to her. He loves her. He always did. Bella says don't lie to Levi, but she does everyday. He needs to know that Edward is his dad. He will find out.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
Anxious for next chapter!!
Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG, Levi is so adorbable...how could everyone not love him. I am assuming Edward was advanced for his years as a kid so hopefully they can relate to each other.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edwards Leter was heartbreaking, I feel so badly for all of them. Tayna needs to be slowly tortured.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
she should be nicer to him.Edward loves her.
Tanya hurt her not him.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
wow!! intense... edward is trying... good good.... waiting for an update...:)
Date: 26 Jan 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
awww i loved this chapter!
Date: 26 Jan 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love it
Date: 26 Jan 2014 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
that is so not fair...your so evil
Date: 26 Jan 2014 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Looking forward to more
Date: 26 Jan 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm ready for Edward to tear down Bella's walls & be together again. You are amazing at writing them in any story ploy you put them in so I know any HEA will be worth the wait!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
What an amazing little boy!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love it update soon !
Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
HEY I DID NOT GET MY UPDATE IN MY EMAIL THRU YOUR WEBSITE. T LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES BUT YHIS IS MY FAV! MY HOW THE TABLES HAVE TURNED BETWEEN E AND B. BELLA NOW HAS THE UPPER HAND AND WE SHALL SEE WHAT SHE DOES, LOVE YOU!
Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
Awww I'm not crying my eyes are sweating
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
it is a start
baby steps
i am glad they are working together
love it
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
I loved it I wonder if Angela will help Edward get Bella back
Date: 26 Jan 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
I have always loved this story! I however don't understand why Bella doesn't want a relationship with Edward. He didn't do anything wrong. He was duped just as she was. I'm confused?!
Author's Response:
You have to realize, Bella only knows Edward as the married man who basically hired her to be his whore. She was homeless, jobless and broke for a long time, and although it wasn't his fault directly, it was an indirect result of being with him, of loving him. Yes, Bella is fighting a losing battle but you have to realize, this is the FIRST time in her life that she hasn't needed someone else's help. She's scared to open herself up to him again, because before, she depended on him, she compromised who she wanted to be for him, she put up with being embarrassed, abused (mentally and physically) because of situations he put her in. Yes, she had options but they were always the lesser of two evils. Now, she's not in that situation anymore and she doesn't ever want to be. Edward and his infidelity, coldness and indifference is all she knows. They never got the chance to express their love for one another before he was in the accident, that short period of mushy feelings didn't matter at the end of the day. She went through hell and his sweet email now as well as him saying he wants to be with her, won't erase 4 years of pain.
We all know this story is a HEA, and the angst won't last! I know you all miss the nasty sexy times, I do too! Just have faith, it'll all work out!
Date: 26 Jan 2014 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 16
Awww for Ben playing Big Bro for Bella. Levi is too cute.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
So first off, I'm horrible about leaving reviews, so sorry that this is my first... I've totally loved this story. Secondly, Bella is KILLING me! I mean, I get it she's protecting Levi and herself, but oh my! I can't wait until she realizes she can't be without Edward and finally gives into what she really wants :) Can hardly wait for the next chapter!
-C
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
I loved this chapter. We got to see Edward in a new light. Hopefully Bella will start seeing him in a new light as well. Levi is such a cutie. If he's half as smart as you betray him to be, he'll figure out Edward is his father in no time... and they can't lie to him... he'll know.
I need more of this awesome story.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it! Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
It's good to see B being cautious.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
wow, more please :)
Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
On its so heartbreaking. Without a doubt bBella's doing the right thing for Levi, but its still so sad to see two people who love each other so much be torn apart like this. I hope Edward makes a appointment to get help. And Bella should really do the same.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh wow. I loved this!
Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm not liking this Bella at all, This was supposedly the man she loved and was rushing to see her and say the I love You and when he is down from a car accident and the wife stops her she walks away to sell her book about her affair with the married man and make money, she is no better if she would have taken the 3 million at the end of the year per arrangement.. He atleast thought of her when he first woke up...She is not the only victim here, he is also..3 years of his sons life he has messed....would she have told Edward about Levi if he never found them
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 16
That was a great start for Edward. I think he was very humble. Thanking Angela was cool. Levi is a cutie.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
Talk about an antsy, nervous billionaire.......he was one and a half hours early! Hehe
Ben's protective nature was endearing. Angela may know the logistics behind the affair, but the remaining desires are far beyond her comprehension.
Levi is adorable in his pursuit of the piano.
Edward, prepare to be amazed at your offspring!
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
I feel so sorry for Ed. :(
i wonder when Levi is going to figure it out. I have a feeling it won't take long!
Date: 24 Jan 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
Just started to read this story. How often do u update??
Date: 24 Jan 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is blaming Edward for Tanya's actions. He was rushing to see her when the crash happened. She just said she loved him. I guess it was a lie. She really can be bought. She sold her story, so now she doesn't need him. He still needs her because he loves her. He might not know how to love her the way she wants him to love her, but they is not his problem. She knows how he is, yet she still fell in love with him. If he didn't act like he does, then he wouldn't be her Edward. She forgets that you fall in love with the person, faults and all.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
Amazing!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2014 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well shit. I dont like how Bela has changed at all. I mean yeah she thought she had to leave to save him BUT.... that is not the case now.
I dont get why she is acting like they cant be together now since he is divorced so there is nothing holding them back.
So yeah this was disappointing that Bella is acting like this. :(
Date: 24 Jan 2014 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
Another great chapter. Wow I haven't read something so hot in a long time.
Date: 24 Jan 2014 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
WOW I absolutely love this story. I love how possesive Edward is and I love his dirty mouth. LOL
Date: 24 Jan 2014 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMG! I love this story so much!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 15
Angela is Bella's conscience and common sense. I'm glad she has Angela as a confidant and friend.
Piano lessons, it's a start.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
In reply to your author's note, I feel that the four-year time gap was essential in establishing the loneliness that continue to drive Edward to find her as she began to put the pieces of her life back together.
Now the healing must begin.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
Did Edward find a way to silence the blackmailer?
Was there anyone else in the office building when he assaulted her? She would never press charges, but his physical attack on her was worthy of calling the authorities.
Will he read about his gifted son?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
How did I know Edward would have a disastrous journey getting to the love of his life.
I hope that Edward had a contingency drawn up in his Will for just a situation such as this. Maybe Emmett would take over power of attorney.
Must read on!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
It's a mutual feeling according to Edward's email!
Alice was right, don't do anything rash, Bella.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well I'm glad you did give up and stop posting at TWCS! I'm presuming fanfiction pulled your story due to its content. Too bad, their loss.
Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde seems to have made an appearance. Now that talk Tanya has broken her non disclosure agreement maybe the true Edward Cullen will return.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
Quite a few errors in this chapter, but it was still well worth reading!
Tanya's manipulation seems to have backfired. But, I have a feeling Bella will hear her father again through some form of blackmail.
Carlisle has seen a bit more of Bella's childhood; nopee sing the puzzle together he realizes they are indeed suited for each other.
I hope Bella's ability to reunite the family unit will successfully bring her into their midst.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well, Rose proved me wrong. I guess her need to remain in the social sphere usurped her brain power when it comes to her husband. Will Emmett be able to convince his wife that she has no say in Edwards life?
I think Edward has already fallen for Bella.
Will Mistress Isabella make an appearance in the bedroom soon?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hm, Alice just might be coming around.
Tanya is sure working her angle. Too bad it will not keep her husband in line with her thinking.
I'm glad Emmett was there to aid in her battle against James. I'll bet this will set the stage for good gossip!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
i finally had some time to catch up on this ... and i see you have started a new story!!! yay, i'm so so so freakin happy ... as my daughter says lol hungry for more!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
Roger and Bella polishing silver, great visual as they break down a few more barriers in Edward's messed up life.
Well at least Rose hasn't lashed out at Bella in a while.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella's more than special. At what point during the year contract will they each figure out that they need each other permanently?
Was Jasper trying to get under Edward's skin by engaging Bella in a conversation about piano playing?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
Lizzy, what a smart and independently vocal child. Of course she couldn't be any other way having Emmett for a father. Haha.
Lovin your Esme! Her advise surprised me, but for only a moment.
Hope that Alice and Rose finally see Bella for the brains and friendship she can offer to Edward.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, they broke through to a new level of an actual relationship. They truly are similar in their approach to life. No wonder their bond was instantaneous.
I like how Emmett is the only one to speak of the truths surrounding the unfortunate circumstances Edward was ropes into VIA his business dealings.
Roger is really becoming an asset to Miss Swan. I like their slow building friendship.
Edward is 28; Bella's 23.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awe, the showdown with the wife!
I like Roger. I hope he and Bella become close friends. Will Edward shove his desires for Bella in Tanya's face, hoping to force a divorce before Bella's year contract is finished?
Wow, Edward's father killed himself. What happened to his mother?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
i love this story , i love dark side of edward and you kind of write it like beauty and beast kind of way , good job dearest and i know how much time you spend on writting this story. thank you for make our boring life interesting by reading this story .
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm all in. This is very intense.
I'm guessing that Edward is in his 30's. Or is he order? How far off am I?
Must read on!
Date: 22 Jan 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
DID I TELL YOU I LOVE YOU? CAUSE I DO ONTHIS BLOG AND YOUR OWN! MORE I BEG OF YOU!
Date: 22 Jan 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
Interesting chapter! I can't wait to see where this heads.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad Angela talked her into calling him. She's right too. E does deserve to bein his son's life.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh wow. I hope E goes after Skankya for lying and all. Glad Roger is there to make him read and all.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh wow. So glad she got Ben and Angela to help her. Wonder how long till he finds out about Levi. Wow Charlie is a piece of work.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh wow Skankya is going to pay for that when he wakes up. Hope he disowns the whole family for not at least making sure B was ok after T kicked her out.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad B left to get a little distance and clarity. Aww for his email.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
wow he is def a Jekyl and Hide. Jeez Louise.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
oooh I knew Skankya would involve Charlie at some point.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
ahhhh i love it and again really appreciate the fast updates. I know im being greedy but another pleaseeeee?
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Rose is soo freakin annoying along with Skankya.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Skankya really is pushing her luck with E. Ugh for James but yey for Em stepping in.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awww for Roger telling her a little something. Loved B telling of Skankya.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2014 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm jumping all over the place reading this in 3 different places. :)
Date: 21 Jan 2014 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 15
Sorry you're getting grief for the direction the story has taken. I'm still anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the great writing!
Date: 21 Jan 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
OH wow, that was amazing! I cannot wait to see what will happen next for them!
Date: 21 Jan 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
OH MY GOSH!!!! I really hope he reads it soon.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope Bella introduces Edward, not only as Levi's piano teacher, but also as his daddy. Levi deserves to know, sooner rather than later. He's so intelligent, he may figure it out on his own. Being a gifted child, he deserves the best education available to him. I'm looking forward to Edward meeting Levi, as well as Roger.
I really wanna see Tanya pay for what she's done, not only by Edward's hands, but Bella's as well.
Sherry