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Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved this chapter!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 5

H hahaha :)

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

Let's blow Tanya up!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this first chapter. I'm happy Bella is a mind oriented woman with her own sense of intelligence and some snark! 

 

Reviewer: Robda Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 19

OMG I'm crying this whole chapter, can't wait for the next one. Love this Edward with his son , they are so cute.

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 19

So good! I'm sobbing but so good!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 19

Absolutely loved it :)

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 19

Ben was able to do the one thing no one else could. Getting Edward to talk. Wow! I expected that his father severely abused him, but I didn't expect that Edward had killed him and that is mom still won't speak to him. Bitch! Gotta love Roger. And Levi is just to cute for words. I hope this puts Bella and Edward on the path to each other again. What has happened to Edward's family in the past 3 years? What kind of trouble have they been up to?

Thanks for the great chapter,   Maria

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

So now the healing can begin! This was a great chapter!  I thought Ben was great & Edward's comments to himself were very funny!

Reviewer: OCA Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 19

emotions on steriod. wonderful chapter now the both of them can start to heal.

Reviewer: LoveMsCilla Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 19

Holy Shit!  I found your story this morning and haven't stopped reading all day.  Happy Birthday to me! I was supposed to be going to the movies, but here I am reading.  I love this story, but this chapter... whoa!  

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

I hope you post soon

Reviewer: jmthorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

I have no words... just WOW!

Reviewer: NyxKey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

Whoa so that's what March 14th is all about. Well Edward's father definitely deserved it and now he has better memories for that day in Levi. So glad to see Edward and Bella finally opening up to one another. Now they can help each other truly heal.

Are we going to see any interaction between Edward and his birth mother since she's still alive? I would love to see how years of watching her son become a success without her from a distance has effected her. I would hope the guilt and pain has been eating at her all this time.

Once again another great song to go along with a great chapter!

More soon please!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 19

great chapter loved it cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 19

now that was an amazing chapter ....please say chapter 20 is not far behind

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 19

I like how you condensed their lives without drawing it out. Jumping right into the fire and laying it all out there. The significance of March 14... how devastating to take a life then have a life born. March 14 has a new meaning for Edward now.

I feel awful for Edward and what he had to endure during his childhood. Thank goodness for Roger. When Carlisle didn't sweep it under the rug and took action. How did Edward's mother escape criminal charges for child neglect or even conspiracy to coverup the abuse?

Ben is correct... now there getting somewhere.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 19

Poor Edward.  What an awful childhood

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 19

PROFOUND!!!!!!

Reviewer: noomom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

Not the story told in chapter 19!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 19

YOUR RIGHT NOW! WERE GETTING SOMEWHERE.

Reviewer: flossieMay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 19

Oh. My. Gosh! Wow. The chapter was intense to say the least. Keep them coming! Please!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wow is all I have to say

Reviewer: ticia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 19

Poor Edward, that made me cry.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 19

blown away

wow they both have a huge and heavy past, my goodness

ben is a hell of ita doctor

he got them to open up wow. i am amazed. i do believe ben and angela both will be bale to help them

love 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wow  Ben is one hell of a counsellor.   Those are two messed up kids/families.

Reviewer: calloram Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 19

oh god!!!!! tearful chapter.... artfully written :)

Reviewer: mom2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 19

Love this story thank you for updating so quickly

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 19

:) more please!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 19

Omg, this was perhaps the best chapter of Any and All stories I've read over the last 4 years,  Bravo! 

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wow great chapter! Edward's mother shouldn't be in the Hamptons, she should be in jail for not protecting her child. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: beausoir Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 19

This chapter is the best one yet. Point blank. So many questions got answered. I appreciate your writing so much. Thank you!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 19

=)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wow. Poor Edward. I can't believe his mother is alive! Not that she deserves to be. I hope your Ben is a really, really good therapist!

Excellent chapter. Thank you!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 19

I thought there was childhood abuse but what E did to his father surprised me. Good hook.

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 19

wow

potent stuff poor edward and poor bella

god they really need each other

well done

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 19

Very good!  I think Roger should have gone after the mother also for letting it continue, I have never been in that situation and I do understand she was a victim also.  What I cannot understand is not fighting for your child.  I told my husband once after he had a bad dream about hurting us that he really didn't need to worry about that cause if he ever went after the kids that I would kill him first.

 

Reviewer: BigBsMom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 19

This chapter made me cry.  Just wow!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 19

OMG, I knew it was bad but had no idea. Still loving this story. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: shadow4092 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 19

Are you going to have tanya pop up again?

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 19

I Love the way they just laid it out there. Now they can start healing

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 19

loved it, cant wait to read more...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 19

Poor Ed.. How terrible!  Bella too :(

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

I loved this chapter. I am so happy that they are going to work on being together.

Reviewer: NyxKey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved this chapter, loved the sponsoring song - one of my favs from the Twilight soundtrack.

So glad they're going to therapy, they definitely need it.

Levi is so cute! I can't wait for Carlisle and Esme and the rest of the family to meet him.

More soon please!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 18

I really like being able to read this story in two places.
Bella saw another piece of Edward's past as he explained to Levi how his mother and father responded to him as a small child.
Can't wait to read Ben's approach to their therapy.
The Disney reference was very cute.

Reviewer: raissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 18

i dont know what's wrong with you bella but i would'nt mind having sex on my as you so eloquently put it''innocent kink free bed'' in fact i would jump him all night lol

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 18

As always great job

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 18

LIKE THE PHOTO. SKELETONS HUH!!! OK LOOKING FORWARD TO SKELETONS. UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 18

wow. more please :)

Reviewer: mom2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 18

You are a very very good writer can't Waite for your updates

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 18

God I love this j j

Reviewer: calloram Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 18

nice... the photo is fitting...i like the font....waiting for edward to reveal more skeleton's from his closet...:)

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 18

love it. thrilled they are bonding and edward is truly trying

they gave into the passion. finally 

they have alot to get through but if they stick with it and keep up with the therapy these guys can get it together for levi

he deserves both of them

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

I know it must be bad whatever he can't talk about and I can't even imagine what you have up tour sleeve for us to discover? 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 18

yummy chapter.   Wonder what Ben will say when he find out everything.  Glad they agreed to get counselling.   Wonder how long till the rest of his family finds out.

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 18

great story. Can't wait for more. Thanks!

Reviewer: redbug Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 18

Love all your stories and watch for every chapter. Thank You for taking the time to write them.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 18

I love this story sooo much. Poor Edward waiting quietly on the bed to be thrown out. 😢

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it :)

Reviewer: OCA Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 18

right step for both of them and it is  nice to see them comunicating

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMG!! That was awesome. I can't wait to see what happened on the 14th. Has Bella been with anybody since she left Edward? Has Edward? This is my absolute favorite story! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: chelleb Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

Finally!  Now can we work in a little Tanya revenge??

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 18

Fantastic chapter! Very emotionally moving.

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter! Loved it!!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

great chapter loved it and yes loved the photo

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 18

=)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 18

Angela is a wise friend.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

Wow....didn't see all that happening!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

ohhhhh what is edward gona say

glad to see they have come clean to each other again they need each other

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 18

Wow that was one good chapter and I love the picture.

Reviewer: chrisbraddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 18

GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!   I can't wait to find out what is in Edwards past!!!!!  I love this story I can't wait for an update!!!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

And the "W" word is back again. I like the banner. From me, that's high praise.

I LOVED the chapter and that's the truth!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 18

Whatever the significance of March 14 is to Edward, he now has a new meaning for that date. Looking forward to learning what that date meant in his past. Being Levi's birthday will overshadow the demons.

I'm thrilled Bella finally made a decision about Edward and herself. Jumping his bones may have not been the best thing to do until they get counseling, but what is done is done. They're moving forward, which is fantastic for Levi's sake.

I'm curious to find out what all his demons are that he has buried.

Sherry

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 18

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 17

I'm am so happy that Bella allowed Levi to know the truth about Edward so soon. They both deserve it. 

I really hope that they can work it out. Edward is being so sweet and I'm so glad that he put it all out there. He's right life is to short to waste time. And it really is commendable that Edward is willing to get help. 

Rodger as Yoda. Classic. 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 17

love it

i am thrilled that bella seemed to listen to angela and after spending time with edward and levi knowing he has a father there could be a chance. 

levi is so special and it seems edward might be a little more understanding of his mind. i can see where bella might be a little jealous of edward. levi and edward are so alike,it is great edward is willing to get help and is begging to be in their lives. i truly believe he would give it all up to be with them.

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

i love that you updated really fast!

Reviewer: OCA Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

that was so sweet sometimes when it is meant to be it will always be full steam ahead no matter how hard you stamp on the breaks.

 

Reviewer: dommie06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

i love it cant wait for themto finally get together and be a family

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

I love the father and son bonding. It appears to me that Edward has changed for the better.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 17

They are almost back together! Hip hip hooray!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 17

Well she should be sinking. She loves him. She needs to stop trying to fool herself. She is mad at herself for how they started, but she should not be mad at him. She would not be where she is without him.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 17

:):)

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wow loved loved it!! They are getting on track!! Yeaaaa loved how Edward told her joe he feels and she breaking!! Looking forward to more and soon I hope. Thanks for another great chapter!! 

Reviewer: calloram Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 17

good...:) bella has finally given her reason...angela is great...she puts her points in an amazing perspective
:)

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

One chapter is never enough.....

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 17

They need some alone time to really talk

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 17

great chapter love it

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

LOVED IT AS ALWAYS AND ALWAYS WANT MORE PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lilredridinghood Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 17

More !!! more!!! more!!!!!! I'm on the edge of my seat ok figuratively speaking lol

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 17

FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW THAT'S THE EDWARD AND BELLA WE ALL KNOW AND LOVE.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 17

good

Reviewer: motita Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 17

Awwwww, I loved this chapter!! Thanks for the update! Looking forward for the next one ;) now I want my own little green man lol 

Reviewer: Dreamer2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 17

Awesome!! On pins and needles, until the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 17

She's not sinking, she's falling.

Great chapter

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