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Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 22

Happy 21st Birthday, hope you are having a great day.

 

Great chapter btw, cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 22

happy birthday

 

wow alot for bella to take in. i get where she is coming from. she just got him back and needs there bubble

 

but she does acknowledge family and she will and it will be full and awe inspiring

love it

Reviewer: PDubbs Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 22

Great chapter! :D By the way HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Hope you have a great one!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 22

Happy b-day!  You are legal now go have a drink!  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Maxlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

I want to thank you for this wonderful chapter, and I hope you're truly enjoying your Birthday Day with the people you love and I hope you have blessed day enjoying your bday! much love 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 22

Glad Edward didnt let his parents push thier way in.   Paparazzi should be banned.  At the very least, minor children shouldn't be allowed to be exploited like that.

Reviewer: Twins storms Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

My daughters 21st birthday was on Monday the 10th so have a very happy birthday!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 22

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: JenGail01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 22

What a wonderful gift.  Happy 21st!

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 21

I didn't think that would happen, I hope whoever tipped off the media gets payback.

Reviewer: Myhubbyissoedward Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 21

Wow live this story can't wait for more . I started reading this before but then wanted to wait so started to read from chapter 9 . I have carted yelled and smiles and awed . All I gotta say is wow she has been through a lot. I feel happy that they are together. I am still upset about his family but kinda understand . Tanya is a bitch to do what she did even though they were married it was just on paper.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 19

That was one of the most heartbreaking stories I have ever heard. 

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 21

i loved the chapter(:

Reviewer: Dresmai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 21

I've now caught up from since chapter 8. This was fantastic. Please update soon. Can't wait to hear how he explains how they breath lol. And who was it that contacted the Media, was it truly Toby's mom? It would be a shame now that the kids friendship is ruined over that.

Reviewer: marysway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

I actually appreciate you not dragging the months they were apart on for chapters on in. :-).  So far so good.  Sometimes less is better.  You can only take so much angst before you cut your own wrist.  So a big thanks to you.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 21

This is a great story.  I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 6

bleach really

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 5

catfight brewing

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 21

I love this story. Please update soon!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 21

Love it!

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 4

interesting view esme

 

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 3

an honest moment

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

hostile welcome

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

interesting agreement

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 20

Awesome!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 21

Awe.......love that take charge Edward is back!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 21

What a mean person to do that to not just Bella and Edward, but Levi. Now she is making it so her son lost his bestfriend. I am glad that Edward is getting them out of the fire of paps. Bella needs to write a new book about how they found each other again. I can't wait for them to get married so she will stop calling herself a whore. He never thought of her that way. That word is all on her.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 21

How do you breath? Daddy will answer that.. Loved that.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

best chapter... Get help then be a better family.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 17

she got hurt before. I get that. She struggled and the story is what brought her life out of poverty. Too bad Tanya is not suffering from her deeds.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 21

Ugh  Despise those hateful people who do things just to hurt people.   Poor Levi.  Paparazzi should be banned.  disgusting.     

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 20

Glad He called Esme out.  They do have a lot to answer for.  Can't wait till the lawyer finds the money and they take down Skankya.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 13

She can not be that woman again.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 12

I  am not glaring at you. I am just wishing you would not say HEA. I like to be surprised..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

So Tanya started out the same way. Well that is what it is.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 21

So didn't see that coming

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

Tanya screwed herself.. well okay

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 9

Of course Tanya calls Charlie and they start their little deal. Tanya is really getting nasty well that won't end.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

King Edward and the rest of the round table. LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

childish behaviour Tanya.. bleach on clothes..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

Thank you for Esme, Emmett and Jasper and I guess Carlisle too.

Reviewer: raissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

well this was a lonbg time coming

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

I have read them all.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 2

Well Tanya or not she is his wife. He chose to get into this mess. Bella should know better than screw a married man. Oh well thats the story.. too bad for B

Reviewer: Robda Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 21

Love it, keep it coming , can't wait for Seattle .

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 21

=)

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG... this is Sooooooo Gooooood. CAN not wait for MORE....

Reviewer: shadow4092 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 21

I love this story! Can't wait to 'see' what happens next!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 21

love that bella handed the kissing question to edward, Priceless

 

well it seems bella will get to see familyward in action. he is hanging in there and so willing to prove he is in it for the long haul

they have a road to go down and baby steps

love it

Reviewer: crazy4rk Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 21

OMG! They are just the cutest family EVER!!!

Reviewer: LoveMsCilla Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 21

LOL!  That was cute! "how do you breathe?"  :) 

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 21

lol great chapter loved it

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 21

Poor Bella....that other mother is such a bitch!!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

:):)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 21

How will Levi process this mess?
So glad neither Edward nor Bella are running from this situation.
Does Elana have lawyers?
I hope Edward crushes anyone involved in this media mayhem.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 20

I think I'm upset that Esme and the family knew all about Bella's situation!
Food fight, priceless!
Edward moving things in to Bella's home, perfect.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 21

Absolutely loved it as always can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 21

fab chapter

well done

Reviewer: OCA Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 21

awwh sweet. i hope they do not break up again, but instead start to build a solid foundation of reliability, loyalty and trust; where they can both lea on each other to get through this. Even though the reltionship is new it is still an old one so it will be tested to see how strong it is, liking both chapters.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 21

THE QUESTIONS OUT OF THE MOUTHS OF BABES HMMMM!!!!! MAKE YOU WONDER... DON'T THEY?????????????? ( HE HE HE ) UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 21

damn. more please :)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 21

Mara is a spiteful bitch.

The food fight was such a great family bonding thing to do. Edward being able to celebrate Levi's birthday with him is so special after Tanya robbed them of so many years.

I'm glad Edward called Esme out on the Cullens not helping Bella and protecting her from Tanya. I can hardly wait to see how Tanya answers for all she's done wrong.

Fantastic how Edward is proving to Bella he is gonna be there for her and Levi to love and protect them. Glad Bella is willing to work it out with Edward and not turn tail and run.

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

Just added this to my favs, and low and behold, my prayers were answered! There was another update!! WooHoo! But now I have to wait for the next one. ~pouts~

Love how Edward and Bella are sticking it through together. And it is really what is best for Levi too. Definitely stronger together, than apart! Can't wait until the next update.

peach

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 20

Absolutely loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter! Where is Edwards 3 million? Why didn't his family help Bella? I LOVE meteor showers!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 20

The food fight was a great bonding moment for them as a family. Adored the way Edward was unsure of how to get Levi dressed and that Levi let Edward find his way through it. Sweet of Bella to tell Levi let Edward do it since he hadn't done it before.

I was wondering when the Cullen's were gonna make themselves known. I'm glad Edward called Esme out on not helping Bella, and that he's persuing Tanya on stealing the money and lying about everyting. I can hardly wait to see what she has to say for herself and about Levi.

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 20

aww really great chapter loved it

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

Love this story!

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 20

Cute little family, but thet do need to work on their issues. Im loving this story.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 20

This story has been great to read can't wait for your .next chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 20

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: neffy09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 20

Aww poor Edward missed all those years with Levi.love the story

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wow. Edward is one hurtin' unit. Hope everything works out.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 20

Beautiful.

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 20

wow, i was wondering when the rest of edward's family would make themselves known. cant wait to see what happens to tanya. great chapter, awesome story. more please :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 20

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 20

good

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 20

SOON!!! CAN'T CUM FAST ENOUGH.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 20

:-)

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 20

i loved the chter(:

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 20

SO love the relationship they are finally building.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 20

I'm dying to hear what Tanya did with the money.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved family time and he is moving in little by little....and Look out Edward is going to bring the smack down to everyone that had wronged him while he was in the hosiptal.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 20

wow the food fight was great.

it shows a human side for all and they are living and enjoying their time together

she is letting him in

blown aay love it

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 20

Sweet!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 20

Sweet!  Loved it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 20

Awwww! Super perfect! Can't wait to find out what the lawyer finds out.....and how it's handled.....and the. Dropping the bomb like that on the other family.......burn! :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

This was such a great chapter. It was hard to read because it felt so real. I can't wait until the next one.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

Ben, Angie and Roger are my favorites right now!
How old is Roger?

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 19

i loved it! edward's story is so sad it broke my heart

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 19

Damnit! I've been reading for a couple of hours now and all of a sudden I can't hit the next button!!!  Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 17

Yay!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 16

Awe! Gosh...THat had to be sooooo hard!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 14

Love that Roger! Manor man....Edward is at rock bottom......bless it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh wowza!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wonderful emails! He finally opens up! Sweet cab driver too!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

I'm sorry about your inbox...but I love this story! Keep it up sweet girl!

 

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