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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 24

oh family time

the kids crack me up. sometimes i believe grownups can learn something from them

glad edward was able to get friend time with toby. he is learning

love it

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 24

can't wait to see what rose has to say

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it :)

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 24

i loved the chapter(:

Reviewer: OCA Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 24

i have bee waiting for an update, thank you

Reviewer: Nikaka Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 24

Levi is so cute!!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 24

Can't wait to hear what rose has to say

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 24

I don't blame Bella for resenting the Cullen's. I hope she tears Rosalie a new asshole. They all need to go out of their way to make her feel welcome and make amends for the damage they did years before, since they knew Edward's marriage to Tanya was a farce and he truly cared for Bella.

I absolutley love Levi.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 24

Can't blame Bella for being defensive and pissed.     ROFL for Lizzy.  Liking that kid already.   Aww for Levi and Chris.

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 24

I liked Bella's honesty about the situation. I am enjoying Lizzy and glad to see that she is on Bella's side. It looks like Levi and Chris will be good for each other. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oh that levi is just precious!!!

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 24

Ok so Bella was the other woman, but Edwards family knew that his marriage was a sham, and I agree with Bella for being angry at them,...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 24

Will the family help seek out Tanya and assist Edward in proving her culpability for the accident?
Rosalie better be formulating a really good apology to Bella for the way she was treated at the hospital.
Lizzy is a hoot! Just gotta love a gnarly teenage female.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 24

I FREAKING LOVE IT AS ALWAYS! THANKS AND LOVE YOU!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 24

Love how Lizzy is with Bella!   Hope there's more of them together.

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 24

wow, more please :)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oh, can't wait to read about that conversation. Lol, can't wait to read more. Great chapter btw

Reviewer: NyxKey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 24

I so love Levi. He's too funny.

Bella sure doesn't bite her tongue which is awesome. I wouldn't want to sit around faking the funk with them either after everything that happened.

Rosalie really needs to pull out whatever stick she's got up her butt. Hopefully that's what their little meeting will be about. If not and she starts some more mess, I hope Bella checks her again.

More soon please!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 24

so good

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 24

I'M GLAD BELLA IS BEING A STRONG BELLA AND LETTING EDWARD'S FAMILY KNOW THAT SHE IS'NT TAKING ANYONES SHIT THIS TIME AROUND. GOOD FOR HER!! READ YOU SOON!!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 24

My fav!

Reviewer: Robda Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loving this story and Levi totally is the cutest kid. Can't wait till more chapters.

Reviewer: Stellarrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

REALLY loving this story! Levi is absolutely the most adorable kid ever. And I'm waiting....WAITING for Tanya to get ripped to shreds...PLEASE!

Reviewer: bokworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 23

Hon I'm stalking u. I absolutely luv this story. Keep it coming.

 

Reviewer: LIZZ104 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

I am enjoying the story. I just ask that you check your grammar and errors

Reviewer: Imu-icu2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 23

Hi,

I am so in love with your stories and in awe of your characters. How you manage to get these plots and stories in your mind while studying have me in awe! You have an incredible gift and I just want to thank you for sharing your stories .

I await patiently for chapter updates for Reign, Deep Six and of course, Confessions....they have me riveted! They've kept me sane when the office is crazy and chaotic. Reading them at the end of the day relaxes and entertains....it's the best part of my day and I keep reading them over and over.

My apologies for not reviewing after each update. just know that Im a fan and I'm always here cheering you on. Can't wait on what happens to Tanya & James! Hmmm Edward's brand of justice sounds promising.....

Once again, thanks for sharing your incredible gift with us. Stay inspired and keep writing! Belated happy birthday and good luck on your exams. Take care & God Bless!

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 19

This was such an excellent chapter. It was so emotional and truthful, void of all their fears, smoke and mirrors. Really well done!  Thank you for sharing all of your hard work. It is so appreciated and enjoyed.

PS Chapter banners are amazing and beautiful 

Reviewer: Dresmai Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 23

Chapter was great, too short, and too long to update, can't wait for this rest, amazing story. it really is

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 23

I understand why Edward wants to kill Tanya. She tried to kill him. He is lucky to have recovered, but he lost his family. Of course Bella got rich on what happened. She got to see her baby everyday. It is a different perspective.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 23

ITS EASIER TO LEAVE A REVIEW HERE,FOR ME ANYWAY. YOUR GREAT,THE STORY IS GREAT,AND I THINK YOUR GREAT. I SUCK AT REVIEWS SORRY. BUT YOU HAVE GOT TO KNOW BY NOW WHAT A TALENTED WRITER YOU ARE. YOUR ALSO VERY BEAUTIFUL FROM THE PIC ON YOUR BLOG. BRAINS, BEAUTY,TALENT MUST BE NICE,I CANT RELATE.   LOVE YA

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 23

i loved the chapter!(:

Reviewer: calloram Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 23

good..waiting for ur update..:)

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 23

good luck with your mid-terms, but you've got it in the bag :) !!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: lillinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 23

Awesome.. cant wait for more :)

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 23

Where's Tanya?  Feeling bad for Levi being cooped up.

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 23

great chapter loved it and good luck on your mid terms

Reviewer: Robda Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved this chapter, levi is so cute can't wait till  next week

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 23

Je vous OUI à toutes les questions raconte

J'aime ce chapitre.

Edward voulait tuer Tanya! Bella est irritée!

Bisous.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 23

This seems to be moving at a slower pace than it started out?

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 23

Love the update!  Took him long enough to figure out she messed with the car. 

Reviewer: HBGO Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

Love it, just wish the entries were longer

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 23

Good luck on your mid-terms.
I'm not sure Bella wanted to contact the family so soon but she had no choice.
What was Edward thinking. That's right, he wasn't!
Now that he remembers, can he file charges against Tanya? What happened to his car? Can it still be checked for foul play; severed brakeline?
What about James........

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

Love the new chapter! Should have known it wasn't an accident!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

Levi is so cute & huggable! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 23

:)

Reviewer: Katemonster Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 23

awesom :-) !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 23

good =)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 23

FIRST AND FOREMOST GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR MID-TERMS. IT'S BEEN A WHILE SINCE YOUR LAST UPDATE BUT STUDIES ALWAYS CUM FIRST. THIS CHAPTER WAS SHORT BUT INFORMATIVE. READ YOU NEXT WEEK.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter

Reviewer: Czar on Lyfe Conflicts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 23

I love the plot

 

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 23

!!! omg. wow. more please :)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 23

Oh gosh this is so good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 23

I loved it

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 23

:)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

Good luck with your mid-terms.

Tanya had it all planned out. What a bitch. Hopefully the police did a complete investigation instead of assuming Edward was just speedling, and realized the breaks had been tampered with.

I'm with Edward here. I want Tanya (and James) destroyed. But I'd really like to see Bella get a chance to put Tanya in her place and how happy Edward is with Bella and Levi.

Sherry

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 23

Oh Tanya...you are way dirtier then I thought!

Reviewer: csmdkmka Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 23

I don't have a twitter account and check fb about once a month. I'm horrible at reviewing. But I like all of your stories! 

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 23

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 23

We don't want Tanya dead. We want her to suffer a LONG...LONG time. I am anxious to see how Edward handles Toby's mother. Good luck with mid-terms!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 23

hmm wondering if the cops looked at the brake lines on the car of did they just assume he was simply speeding.    Hope they nail skankya to the wall.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 22

I just love this little family, but Bella has to realize that she caused all of this herself.

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 9

bad charlie

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 8

poor bella

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 7

go emmett

Reviewer: Kritty67 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 22

Such a great story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 22

The family foibles may not be as minor as they each profess them to be, but they are forgivable if true heartfelt remorse is shown. It would appear that Bella is the first to feel this way; hopefully everyone else will follow suit quickly.
Father and son at the piano was an awe moment.
Roger is such a delight!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

HAPPY B DAY! THANK YOU FOR THE GIFT!

Reviewer: MaryE1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 22

Happy Birthday! And I really love this story.

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 22

happy 21st!!!!!!!!

your talent is indeed a gift to anyone who reads your works

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 22

Woohoo I hope you enjoyed your birthday!

 

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 22

I so want you to write a few chapters of her infamous novel ...espically the part where she was homeless ...living from her car

Reviewer: calloram Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 22

happy birthday..:) awesome gift..:)

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 22

Thank you for the birthday update.

Reviewer: Nikaka Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 22

Well Happy Birthday...Possibly belated since I didn't check update date. It was a really cute chapter

Reviewer: mela3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE this story!  The characters are flawed, as are all humans, but they are developing and addressing their demons.  It is just the perfect blend of reality and fantasy.  Keep the chapters coming :)

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 22

Happy Birthday!  Thank you for the gift, it was lovely!

 

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 22

great chapter

well done

the sexy/kinky times are coming back

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 22

nice chapter, more please :)

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 22

I find I'm not forgiving of his family even still. I loooooove little Levi! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Reviewer: ticia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 22

happy birthday!thank you

Reviewer: raissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 22

happy bday 

Reviewer: manaal18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 22

Happy Birhtday !!!!! :D

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thank you...and a very happy birthday!

...May your home be a place of happiness for all who enter it

a place where the old and the young are renewed in each others company

a place for growing and a place for sharing

a place for music, a place for laughter and place for love

and may your days be good and long upon this earth

Best wishes, T

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thank you for the chapter!

It is us who have a beautiful present.

I like this chapter.

Edward and Bella are again together.

Levy is deserving son of his father.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 22

Happy Birthday JJ.

I love Roger. He's always been there for Edward. I see him being as devoted to Levi as he is Edward.

Carlisle and Esme had some nerve showing up uninvited, but I'd rather it be them than Alice. Bella has a lot to overcome and think about as to where Edward's family is concerned, as well as a lot of other things. She needs to make the move soon though, before they come back on their own. She needs to control the situation and do it on her own time and turf, without giving them any advantage points.

I like to see Bella get pregnant soon, so Edward could experience the pregnancy with her.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 22

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!! AND THANK YOU FOR YOUR GIFT ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 22

happy birthday!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 22

Happy 21st Birthday.  Enjoy your day and thank you for the great update.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 22

     Happy Birthday you very talented young woman!  Thankyou for your wonderful stories!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 22

Happy 21st!   Thank you!  What a wonderful and precious gift,  Levi and Daddyward at the piano! 

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 22

Happy birthday!

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 22

great need more

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 22

A wonderful and sweet chapter!  Love that Roger!!  21st bday??? Happy bday then!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 22

Happy Birthday!! Thanks for giving us a present. I just love Levi. I really enjoy seeing Edward and Levi together. Edward's family better be good to Bella when she does spend time with them. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: nubian cutie Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thanks for the birthday gift. Its a nice surprise!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

Happy Birthday! Loved the chapter!

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 22

Happy B-day!

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