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Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 28

I wondered how you would pull off an interview of this magnitude. Well done!

Edward even respected Tanya. Not that she deserved it. But it puts him in a much better place.
The celebratory romp in the back of the limousine was a refreshing reminder of the intense connection between them.

Puppy training, oh boy.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 28

Great chapter! That's what I was hoping they would do...in the interview, I mean!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 28

Don't think I've seen a white shepperd.    Glad she did ok int he interview.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 28

So glad for a new chapter. Can't wait for the next.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 28

=)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 27

roger is a genius.  Lawyer could have started off better

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 27

wow. more please :)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2014 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: Jewels64 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

Okay! I have got to give you some kudos. The story started off a little shaky, but you have hit your stride! It is amazing the difference in your writing in this chapter! It was more fluid, well paced and funny! Well done! I am hooked!!!

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 27

i loved the chapter. poor bella those questions are harsh.

Reviewer: vickilee Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love it so far

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 27

good

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 27

I get the feeling that she wasn´t just ¨prepping¨her, I agree that it´s unlikely that an interviewer will actually say those words...maybe in another sentence? That woman is just one of the many that feel jealous of her..

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 27

Wow some much happening its like they don't know where to look but will the interview help or make matters worse I loved it update soon

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Twiwheat02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loving it....can't wait to read ruthless people xx

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 27

James's call was interesting to say the least. He evidently feels like he can still ruin Edward. And he may do it, if Edward isn't completely honest with Bella about James' intentions.

The interview is gonna be hard for Bella, but she wrote the book, allowed it to be published, took the money for it. She needs to toughen up and face the consequences now... together with Edward, or it may just tear them apart.

Levi needs a little brother. That boy is just too cute.

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 27

I like this story.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 27

Can not wait to red more

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 27

Um wow

Reviewer: Sevendevils Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 27

Update soooooon!!!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 27

This interview could go either way.  Good luck with your finals

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 27

that was hard

it is going to get tough i sensed and i am hoping they are able to hold tight and stick it out together

wow seems it is coming from all sides now

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 27

Love seeing this update.  Can't wait for the interview.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 27

Thanks for the update

Yes her skin needs to be really tough

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 27

So James still thinks he has a chance to ruin Edward. Interesting.
Bella's so raw already from exposure that Edward's lawyer just poured salt into the wounds. Is Edward sure that his lawyer isn't upset that he decided to seek out and reconcile with this money hungry whore? She seems jealous of Bella.
Levi wanting a sibling is so cute. And typical for his age. Bella shouldn't wait too long though. To big an age difference can be a problem as well. Roger thinks a dog is the answer, really?
Edward needs to step up during the interview and back up Bella's intentions. They were never malicious from the beginning. Edward's the one who exposed himself once Bella decided to do the interview; with an alias, nun the less.

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 27

Talk shows are ruthless bella has to be able to take ALL THE HEARTLESS QUESTONS!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 27

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 27

Not sure they can survive this if that get thrown in her face every few days!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 27

A lot going on in this chapter.

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 27

Another fantastic chapter!!

:)

 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 27

OH IT'S GETTING GOOD !!!!!BELLA CANT TAKE LYING DOWN . 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 27

Thanks for the update

Reviewer: jskrk Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

hello ruthlessly yours.,

i cant count the number of ed-bella stories ive read on either ffn or twcs..n loved many of them..n this is the first time i m leaving a review for anyone..just wanted to let you know dat u r doing an amazing job with this story and i really hope u dont stop writing it..it wud b a shame..u write very well..manage to make us laugh one sec and cry the other..gud job well done..keep writing.. :)

jskrk

Reviewer: Twiwheat02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 26

Really loved this xxx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 26

awww poor lizzy

Reviewer: Twiwheat02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 14

Just read the notes......I can't believe some people can be that critical. Just to say I'm loving the story so far.....really routing for a HEA but you're the author so I'm happy to read your creation however you decided to end it xxx

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 26

I feel bad about the company, but at least it is still his company. He got the traders basically out of the company. I am so sorry about Lizzie. In some ways, I hate social media. It is in some ways worse than being physically bullied. It doesn't go away.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 26

Lizzy has Bella on her side..... its all gonna be okay!!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 26

A bit if drama for both Lizzy and her Uncle Edward.
What will Emmett do when he finds out about the cyber-bullying of his daughter? Will Rose even care enough to try and comfort her or just increase her daughters anxiety level?
Will Bella finally decide to do the interview?
How will this action affect James' attempt to take over the company? Will Tanya get away with attempted murder?

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

Never bored

Reviewer: Mikaelv Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 26

Awesome story! Can't wait to read the next chapters.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 26

Poor Lizzy. I'm glad that she finally has someone in her life that really sees her. 

 

While led it sucks that Edward had to change his business the way he did. I'm so glad that he was able to stick it to those pompous assholes. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 26

I'm so glad Lizzy came to Bella.  Vixon Bella is always fantastic especially when controlward makes an appearance! 

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 26

It was worth the wait. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 26

:)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 26

It was worth waiting for.

Great story

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 26

god that was f**king hot....thank you.....I love their relationship......the way she deals with Lizzy was amazing....and for Lizzy to want to go to her Aunt is so cool.....not only but bella understood immediately....fantasy is niiiiice.....thank you for that visual....i love the different perspectives and layers of the characters and their relationships it is like i can picture the scenes and conversations....

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 26

i loved the chapter(:

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 26

IT HAS BEEN A WHILE BUT... WELL WORTH IT. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 26

good

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 26

Lizzie needed her cool Aunt Bella to make her feel better.  Levi is so cute.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 26

Fantastic chapter. Glad Lizzy felt she could go to Bella. So glad that Bella got her to open up about what was going on. Hopefully Rose won't be a bitch and be appreciative for Bella's help.

Very impressed as to how Edward handled those trying to take over his company.

Fun times with the kids.

Loved seeing a glimpse of the old Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: MaluTara Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 26

I like that they still have that passion for one another.

poor Lizzy! I got bullied in high school, but never that bad :(

now let's see how Rose reacts....

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 26

more please :)

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 26

mmmm sex addict edwards back with his vixen

love this story well done

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 26

They are hot!  Hope they do something about those bullies!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 26

looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 26

oh my. i love that edward is learning a new way to get even with people

 

goodness these two even though they are going about things all domesticated they sure do know how to have fun

 

love it

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 23

Oh!  I've been wondering about the accident and Tanya's possible involvement.  It seemed like very serendipitous timing for her.

Thanks for the story and happy 21st.

Reviewer: MsTorres Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 25

lmfao @ "our dads are geeks" classic, too funny <3Ms Torresx

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great story!!!

Reviewer: Kelligurl_isfunsiz93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 25

Love This Story to the fullest!!!! Update Soon

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 25

I hope Edward can get his company undercontrol. He needs to hurt James. I hope Tanya was truthful about her not bothering them again. I hope in time Bella can at least be civil with Edward's family. They have a lot of work to do to show that they can be trusted and loyal. I do love Lizzie.

Reviewer: chinadoll381282001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 25

More chapters please!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter!   Thank you so much.

Reviewer: calloram Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 25

We are waiting...:)

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 25

i loved the chapter!(:

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 25

Aww nice-

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 25

Tanya has some nerve. I hope she and James pay dearly. I love seeing Edward and Bella in a domesticated scene with the boys. I like Lizzy's snark. I'm curious as to what Carlisle had to say to Edward. Bella should've punched Rosalie in the nose, she's still as rude as ever.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 25

I love your story and appreaciate your updates!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: mamarobsten Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

buena me gusta

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 25

THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC

PLEASE UPDATE SOON

WORTH THE WAIT

Reviewer: Myhubbyissoedward Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 25

I really enjoy this story it is sad but real. Please keep writing your great at it!

Reviewer: artnat Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 25

l7;l6;m0;lkl9;k2;n2;m7;l0; l4;l5;k l6;m5;kl5;n l5;lk2;k4;l0;m0;l9;n3;

Reviewer: bellaroxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 25

so glad u did update..here...i hate ffnet...i don't visit that..site.. i follow on your blog and here...  so...loved it...

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 25

I love it!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 25

Love her comeback to Rose.   Skankya needs to just dissappear.  Ha Ha for her not wanting B to write another book.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 25

=)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 25

Posting it on TWCS just gives me another chance to review!
Does Tennyson immediately understand Mr. Cullen's implication about wanting dirt on all his share holders? Maybe Edward should force a few of them to sell to Bella. That would ensure Levi's birthright!
Will Tanya be a recurring pop-up in Edward's life?
Jasper, Emmett and Lizzy seem to be the only three unfazed by Edward's instant family situation.
Levi is fun to read as he navigates the waters of his new expanded family.
What did Carlisle have to say to Edward before they left the family gathering?
Will Rose ever get over herself?
Does Alice see this new cousin relationship between Levi and Chris as a threat to her parenting; or, will this help her get to know Bella?
Tanya still needs to be prosecuted for her crimes against her husband!
Why is James going after Edward's company?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 25

cue awwww

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

I stayed up all night reading this. I'm hooked! 

Reviewer: red rose s today Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

love the story

Reviewer: LilyJean Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 24

Just got onto TWCS browsing through recent posts and came on to your story. I'm loving it.  Can't wait until your next installment.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 24

Levi is so loving. Rosalie better be nice or Bella will rip her a new one. I am glad that Edward stood up to his family. They need to know that he won't tolerate being rude to Bella or Levi. Bella needs to be patient. If she can forgive Tania then she needs to work on forgiving Edward's family.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2014 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 24

What is Rosalie going to say?  I hope he will apologize but I'm guessing it won't be that simple.

Reviewer: nello1418 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2014 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 24

Another awesome chapter. Nice one at the end, now you've got me on the edge of my seat.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 24

Oh damn I thought I had more chapters to read. *sighs* now I just have to wait like everyone else.

This was a great chapter.  Levi got to meet his family and Bella got to tell them off for not helping her in the hospital.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMG I cant believe Tanya planned his death.  What a bitch.  Well she was hurt and ..... No I think it was all about the money with Tanya.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 22

Ahhh his doggie died?  That is so sad.  It is amazing how well Levi can play the piano though.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 21

OMG I love it. "How do you breathe?"  LOL  Yeah daddy will answer that.  LOL

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 20

I wondered when he was going to let into his family about not helping Bella.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 18

Ummm Anal sex can be completely wonderful BUT I dont see how she can do that without any lubricant oil.  I mean that is just too dam painful otherwise. That takes away the pleasure when its all pain.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 24

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: calloram Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 24

waiting for an update..:) :)

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