Date: 24 Mar 2014 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches
WOW - Emmet pulled out a very romatic moment!
Date: 23 Mar 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches
It came together good! Great job :)
Date: 22 Mar 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches
Loved it :)
Date: 22 Mar 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches
All right Emmett. Anthony is coming! Yeah!
Date: 21 Mar 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches
one, two, three... "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW"
Date: 21 Mar 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches
Great chapter. I am so happy for Rose and Emmett.
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches
love it
thrilled em finally asked rose to marry him
baby---wow the kids will grow up together
Date: 21 Mar 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches
Very sweet!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches
Lovely chapter.
Date: 20 Mar 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches
woo I love it. Great chapter and hope you post soon
Date: 20 Mar 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 20 Mar 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches
Woo Hoo for Em and Rose. The fact that E is a bit nervous means he's gonna be a good dad
Date: 20 Mar 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches
I loved it. Glad Bella came to her senses about the house. Yay for Emmett and Rose. Can't wait for Ant knee to show up
Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 42 ~ first a funeral ...
Well, there had to be something for Jacob to talk to them about!
Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 42 ~ first a funeral ...
Jacob is being a turd. I don't know why he is trying to mess with Edward so much. Edward has proved he is a good man. He is also getting way too personal. They have a place to live. He doesn't need to know about their housing plans after they have more children. I hope Leah tears him a new one. Edward needs to tell Bella that he was going to surprise her with it. She needs to be more patient and realize that he would never do anything to hurt her,but he has a past. He has property and possessions that she hasn't seen. She knows he had to live somewhere before they met. He had to have furniture and things that aren't in their condo. I think it is exciting.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 42 ~ first a funeral ...
Good chapter. I can see how he forgot and I hope Bella doesn't freak to much.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 42 ~ first a funeral ...
ROFL for Leah at the end.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 42 ~ first a funeral ...
I think Jacob always gets in trouble with Leah lol. Bella just needs to think about it for a bit.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 42 ~ first a funeral ...
get em Leah! payback for the testing...lol. um, Edward, speak quickly..lol
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 42 ~ first a funeral ...
Loved the chapter, Jacob is so naughty.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 42 ~ first a funeral ...
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 11 Mar 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 42 ~ first a funeral ...
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 11 Mar 2014 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 42 ~ first a funeral ...
Hello, hormonal pregnant Bella open your ears, he said he hadn't thought about the house in a long while. Really why would he when he doesn't want to uproot you and Lil Bit? Plus with all that's been going on you expect him to remember to tell you about a house that neither of you even talked about looking for yet. Leah, I hope you tear into Jacob, that was kind of an a**holish move to make. It's like he doesn't want Bella and Edward married and happy.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
It is sad that they have to have the sadness of a funeral on their wedding week. Bree is lucky she has such good friends to help her through this tough time.
Date: 05 Mar 2014 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
I hate that Anthony isn't with them. But soon. Beautiful chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
Loving your story!
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 37 ~ delicious mushroom ravioli
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 35 ~ extra strawberries and chocolate sauce
Love it!
Date: 03 Mar 2014 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
Lil Bit is so sweet as is Anthony. Love Carol and Esme's ideas for the honeymoon.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 32
Oh sh*t!
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
loving the kids
glad anthony and his grandparents are coming into the fold. anthony finally gets his peace of a family and feels apart of that
look forward to the wedding
bella and the group have a big heart and love the helping of bree
love it
Date: 02 Mar 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 02 Mar 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
Loved it...just started reading this story and wow I love it...how many chapters in all do you think....I will read it again once it's complete
Date: 02 Mar 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
So sad
Date: 02 Mar 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
Thanks for the great chapter about this sweet family.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
A lovely chapter, thank you.
Date: 02 Mar 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
Love them kids. So sad for Bree but so at peace that her mom went peacefully.
Date: 02 Mar 2014 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
love the cookies especially lil bit giving them out after the funeral really nice idea wish edward could send me the picture! :] xo
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
Great chapter!
I'm thinking that this nephew really wants money...
Date: 02 Mar 2014 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies
This was a good chapter. Yes it was sad but I think you wrote it really well. I never liked the spending the night before the wedding apart tradition. Makes no sense to me.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 24 my secret recipe
Love it!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 22 ~ voila!
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 15 ~ humble pie
Great chapter!
I laughed so hard when I read that Jacob was a reverend.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
*wipes tear* so sweet i am glad anthony is taking to bella and edward in a good way along with his grandparents. bella is a great mom to lil bit and now to anthony they make a cute family together. i hope things keep going well. cant wait to see the wedding and honeymoon.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
Thanks so much for this awesome chapter
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
This was such a sweet chapter. It had me tearing.
Date: 19 Feb 2014 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
Make me want to cry that was so sweet I love that kid.
Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
Oh wow Ant is one sweet boy! He seems to be really talented! I hope Edward finds a good art school for him, I'm sure he'll be quite successfull in his life!
Edward prepared a good surprise party for Bella which she really can enjoy!
I'm looking forward to the wedding!!
Hugs,
Bella89
Date: 18 Feb 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
i love lil bit and now ant knee and seth. they are going to be fun to read. they are so cute. kids are the best, you never know what it going on in their heads let alone whats going to come out of their mouths. the wedding is going to be beautiful cant wait.
Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
Lovely chapter.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
Ant sounds so talented. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
ahhh anthony fits in so well
i love this family
it was a hell of a birthday
want more love the story
Date: 17 Feb 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
Awww sweet birthday. Lol for catching momma nekkid.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
Aw, that was incredible
Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
Loved it:)
Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
I loved this chapter, but I've loved them all!!! It's so awesome how you've blended the family. It brought me to tears to hear Anthkny call Bella Momma. I'll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
Hope you have a wonderful day!
virginia
Date: 17 Feb 2014 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
Wonderful story, thank you. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 17 Feb 2014 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
Bella's birthday has been a great one, and I guess she won't be too upset with Edward after all. ;)
hoise hunting with all the must haves they have, it's going to be crazy for whomever they hire ;)
Date: 17 Feb 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 17 Feb 2014 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
AWE I just loved it, Im tearing up over here. I just love Anthony, he is an awesome little boy.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird
omg, that was so sweet of Anthony! he called her 'momma" *melting*! i thought Lil Bit was going to say something in front of everyone that Bella was naked...lol!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
Tears in my eyes reading this sweet chapter. I love fiction!
Thank you and Happy Valentine's Day!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
That made me want to cry so sweet
Date: 12 Feb 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
So sweet. Your chapter was full of happiness. It made my heart full. Good job. Would bob and carol move to seattle too?
Date: 12 Feb 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
Paris is going to be quite the trip. I'm glad they're taking the kids, but they'll need some alone time too. Maybe two or three days by themselves somewhere before or after Paris.
I love Carol and Bob and I'm very happy they've become part of the family.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
Oh wow I loved this chapter! :)
Everybody so loves Ant and his grandparents! They'll be a wonderful big family! And now Bella's even become his "momma"!! They ahve done everything right here I think!!
Let's see what you planned for Bellas BDay and if Ant will be going to Paris with them! I think he has to, after all they're his new family now!
See you and keep going,
Bella89
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2014 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
i love how this family loves
they love with everything they have
they have welcomed 3 more into the fold
i am glad bob and carroll are embracing the family and knowing they are still apart of anthony and will continue to be
love it thank you
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
That kinda made me tear up at the end...these kids are so amazingly cute :)
Date: 12 Feb 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
wonderfully sweet chapter. Glad Carole and Bob are merging in with the C's well.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
yup, here come the tears again.....happy ones, such sweet kids :)
Date: 12 Feb 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
What a wonderfully happy chapter! I can't stop smiling.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 11 Feb 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
I love this story and how you are including Bob and Carol in the family. Makes it more realistic.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for
OMG IM getting all misty-eyed over here. I FLOVE this chapter. this really was the perfect day for them. I cant wait to read more, and have them all get to know each other better.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
ive been reading your story for a couple of weeks when i got chance and noticed that there hasnt been any updates. are you planning on finishing this story. i would love to know how it ends. there is nothing worse the investing time in reading a story only to not get an ending. its a great story thats why i chose to read it instead of some of the others. please say you will continue. thank you
Author's Response:
Hello - thanks so much for reading - i am ABSOLUTELY going to finish this story. my last chapter was a bit over a week ago and i have the next chapter almost finished ready for my beta! i hope to post before the end of the week. i love that you are reading my story and i love my characters too much not to see them through. cheers, Lillian/aileen
Date: 09 Feb 2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer
every women deserves to have a beautiful wedding and for edward to rush it just because its what he wants and then to somehow convince bella its what she wants is just wrong. they know they are gonna get married and its only about a month till that happens, he just needs to be patient and stop conspiring to change it behind everyones back. not a good way to start of a marriage.
Date: 04 Feb 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
im glad that the meeting for anthony went over well and no one had any bad experiences from it. except kate the hateful woman who lied to both edward and her parents makes for a spiteful woman who is not happy with her life. keep up the good work
Date: 03 Feb 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
Oh my...! This is honestly one of the sweetest if not THE sweetest scene I've ever read!
Anthony is just... I don't know how to put it in words, but he's the cutest boy and he's so brave! He cares for Lil Bit in an instant and immediately accepts Edward as his father!
Would like to know what Kate the Bitch told him about his father and what he thinks about his poor excuse of a mother! But I think we will get to know all this in time ;)
The Williams' are great people and Edward and Bella are really trying hard to make it as comfortable as possible for them. Of course the boy should live with his (more or less biological) parents and they can accept that seeing that it is a very loving and caring family Anthony will will be joining.
Kate's behavious is just unbelievable and I don't know what else to say about this!! I wouldn't be surprised if Bob will tell her some honest words in absence of any children... and they won't be nice, not at all. If she didn't want a child, she better check her contraception methods! She was pregnant twice from Edward and he didn't know of either child!
But for the happy parts of the story: I am glad that Bella is healthy so far and hope she will be fine in the next months as well!
So I am keen on the next chapter - keep it like this ;)
Bella89
Date: 29 Jan 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
Lil Bit and Anthony are just adorable!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
Kate is such a bitch......awesome chapter please update soon
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
Love love the growing family, beautiful chapter <3
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
I lobed this chapter! It so cute Lil Bit and Anthony reading together. I can't wait to see the family meeting Anthony!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
Awh, yes Lil Bit and Anthony, how adorable! That was pretty precious! Kate, well she's freaking unbelievable, that little darling must feel awfully unloved by his mother and what he thought was his father, but niw he will just be so cherished and loved! Awwwww, it warms the heart!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
omg! I'm crying cause it was so beautiful, and because of the rage i have for Kate. i can't wait till everyone gets there!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
I am totally ok. The love over flow-eth in his chapter. Loved it. Great job.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
love the story
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
oh my love the chapter. man i love the kids together. kate she is a waste and i am glad all the lies are out in the open. good riddings to kate. glad she is gone. the williams seem like a great couple and they are good with anthony. i understand them cover for their daughter. bella is so understanding and her and edward have a great outlook on things. they do have 3 kids no matter what. it is what it is and these two are great people who welcome the kids and are blessed. i look forward to anthony going home and having a place for him and belonging and having a parent who wants him. love it
thank you
Date: 28 Jan 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
What a wonderful chapter. Yes, a little bit weepy but can't wipe the silly grin off my face. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 28 Jan 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
They are so sweet together :) I hope his transition to living with them will be easy.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
Omg so beautiful!! I'm teary eyed! Loved it and can't wait for more!! Thanks
Date: 28 Jan 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
Edward telling Anthony that he is his Father was the sweetest scene. I chuckled at the fact that the Cullen's were already on the way. I love it. I think Bob and Carol will be a nice addition to the family.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
Love it, please update again soon, Just found your story this weekend and I love it.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
Thk you, thk you, thk you. loved this last chapter. was in tears. I really love yr story. am not good at reviews, jst know what I like. Pamela
pamhanley@tadaust.org.au
Date: 27 Jan 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
We love the very hungry caterpillar great book my little girl loves it. Got to love them kids. I feel so sorry for Kate they did not raise her that way they are good people. I cant wait for him to meet the rest of the family
Date: 27 Jan 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
That was wonderful and I am a blubbering mess! Anthony reading to Lil Bit was precious! When he called Edward daddy it was so heart warming! I am so glad that Edward is including Bob and Carol in the family. They can't help what a bitch Kate is. I will have tissues ready for the next chapter when the family meets Anthony! Thankyou so much for this wonderful story!
Date: 27 Jan 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ pre wedding jitters
My cup runneth over too. Edward and Anthony...just big sobby ugly crying. *hiccup* *sigh*
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry
I loved this chapter. I feel bad for Kate's parents, but they got a new son, daughter, and granddaughter now. They will all be a happy family. Luckily they don't live that far apart.