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Reviewer: brumby Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 34

Evil JenRar, evil, evil, evil!  Cliff hanger ending and I'm leaving to go mustering cattle for the next 15 days!  Please have the next chapter waiting for me when I come back!

Other then that, really enjoying this one so far.  Thank you for sharing it with us!



Author's Response:

LOL  I know, and I'd apologize, but...  ;)  haha  I'm glad you are enjoying it.  Sorry you'll have to wait!  The next chapter will certainly be up by the time you get back.  :)

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 34

Love the football game... I could hear Esme from here yelling at them all. It is not good if the police are calling her. Edward and Charlie are going to go crazy and I bet Bella moves in with Edward.... Can't wait for update love this story :)



Author's Response:

Hehehe  Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 34

Let me guess...that bastard Laurent broke into her place!

 

Arrgh!...it's soooo hard to wait!  : )



Author's Response:

Hehehe  Thank you for the review.  ;)

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 34

Excellent  Chapter!  I love the family interaction!  I'm worried about why the police called.  I hope you don't make us to long. 

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved it! Sloooooow lovemaking.....damn! How hot is that?!?!
Phone call in the middle of the night?? Me thinks Laurent paid a visit to Ms. Swan......
Great chapter....more please!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  ;)  You'll find out more next chapter!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 34

Who could resist Edward? I don't like the sound of that phone call. Post again soon please.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  :)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 34

I wonder if the stalker made an after hours visit to Bella's shop or vandalized her car? I think Alice is correct in her concern that Bella will miss out on Black Friday sales with her. :)

Author's Response:

Hmmm, you'll find out next chapter!  :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 33

Aw man....*whining*...Icn't wait for the updates!  One of the best I've read so far!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  :D  I'll have an update posted tomorrow!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 24

Beautifully done.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 21

I like that you are giving them time to get to know each other before jumping into bed.  It's very sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 33

Loving Thanksgiving so far!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 33

Well that was steamy, I would not be paying attention to the ads either. Who needs to go shopping? I would be upstaire with my man.



Author's Response:

Hehehe  Well, I might have been, too, except for Charlie.  ;)  LOL  Thanks for the review.  :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 33

Dirty texting.....brings a whole new meaning to hand held device!!
Loved it!

Author's Response:

LOL  Yup.  :D Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it!!!  The holidays are meant to be happy and spent with those you love!! 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  :)  More tomorrow!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 32

I love this story!  All the characters are so wonderfully real.  Thanks for updating.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 30

How right you are? I met my husband and it was love at first sight as well. He ask my mom the first week and we annouced it at a family reunion a month later. We married a year later and have been married 18 years. You just know. These people who want a long engagement or who say they will learn to love each other are in denial of their true feelings.



Author's Response:

Well, I wouldn't necessarily say that a long engagement or whatever are bad.  To each their own, I think.  Everyone is different.  :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 21

Good job. I'm glad things are accelerating.

Author's Response:

Yeah, things definitely pick up.  :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 20

Good!!

Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 18

Talk about a fairytales! Loved it!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

Always loved a man in red!

Author's Response:

Mmm, I know, right?  ;)  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 15

Very romantic. Thanks for giving enough detail so we could "see" what was happening but not too much where we couldn't let our imagination take over!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I'm glad you liked it.  :D

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

Lots of detail.
Slow & steady....right?
You have a great way of painting a picture with words.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I appreciate that.  :)

Reviewer: kcmbrown2445 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 30

WOW!!! Great story.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved their camaraderie.
I think it's cute....Bella & Edwards "dance" as they get to know each other!

Author's Response:

Hehe  Thank you for the review.  :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Intriguing....can't wait to see what happens.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed chapter 1.  :)  I hope you continue to like it!  Please let me know more!  :)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

I feel so sad for her but i know that she will be fine she is stronger than she thinks + there is edward lol



Author's Response:

Hehehe  Yes, there is Edward.  :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

I liked it can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: ksm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 30

Yep, by the third date for my hubby and I.  Although, due to school and lack of steady work after college graduation, we didn't get engaged until we had dated for two years.  But we knew.  Good chapter.  Enjoyed it.

Kat



Author's Response:

hehe  Thank you!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 30

Great chapter! Please update soon...this is one of my favorite stories!:)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: Nara13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bella cried out and Edward roared. How close do Rose and Emmett's neighbors live? LOL! Very excited for all the meet the parents stuff. Especially eager to read the conversation between Charlie and Edward. Always did love me some Charlie!



Author's Response:

Hehehe  Thanks.  ;)

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Im going to read this starting right now!!! It sounds cute! Besides People Like us rec'd it and her story is a very fave of mine!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)  I hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: ksm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 8

So, I'm reading "People Like Us" and she rec'd this story.  I'm really enjoying it!  I've been searching for sweet stories and this one is filling the requirements.  There is only so much angst that I can read and I really need stories like this to help the balance.  Do you happen to still have the links for this story?  I would love the visual.

Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  :)  Yes, all the images for this story can be found HERE

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 29

I found this story yesterday and I read straight thru to the current chapter. I love this story and I am so impatient for the next update. :)Of course, this story is now on my favorites list!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 29

Glad you r back. I can't wait to see what Edward wants to talk to Charlie about. Could it be what I think it is about? Can't wait for the update....



Author's Response:

Possibly.  ;)  Thanks.  :)

Reviewer: XYLIA Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 28

Jen, Love...great story.  Just one question.  I haven't seen anything mentioned about him being a Vamp.  Is this an AU version of Twilight?

Anyway...love it.  So sorry I haven't reviewed until now.  RL has been kicking me around lately and I don't get to the boards near as much as I'd like to. 

I'm really hoping this isn't the last chapter.  There's so much more I'd love to read of the story.

Xy

 



Author's Response:

Hey, Xy!  Nope, this is all human.  :)  There will be more, I promise, just gotta kick my muse!  lol  Right now I'm working on a Halloween Criminal Minds story, so...  lol

I read about everything that is going on.  I hope things are continuing to get better!  *big hugs*!

Jenny

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

aww, poor Bella



Author's Response:

Don't worry, it'll get better for her!  :)

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 27

So can't wait for her to meet Esme and Carlisle. You are doing a really good job with the story... Can't wait for the update I hope it is soon....



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

i really like this story so far...



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: anallbr Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 27

Just wanted to let you know I completely love this story! You are a genius hahaha  Great job!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :D

Reviewer: BELLWARDC Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a great start.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: faitheternal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like this story! Bella all independent!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :D

Reviewer: shirley123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

like the story so far

Reviewer: shirley123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

like the story so far



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: gabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

I like the story so far...can't wait for E/B to meet.  Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  More soon.  :)

Reviewer: gasuz09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I follow this story on FF but I am glad to see it here as well...with all my favorites seeming to be getting pulled from over there!

I guess I need to learn how to move around this site now too!

 



Author's Response:

Heheh  Thanks!  FF is taking down fics with explicit smut, due to some group's complaint.  They are targeting Twilight fics as of now, so...  I figured I'd hedge my bets and go ahead and post here too, just in case!  lol

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