[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
can't wait to see the links! yes, please send them!
Author's Response:
Be aware, there are pics in here for later chapters, so you're likely to be spoiled. ;) DESTINY PICS
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
sounds like fun! how are tehy going to move that furniture off the truck?
Author's Response:
Lots of help. ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
awww :( things should be looking up soon....right?
Author's Response:
They will, I promise! ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2011 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good beginning! Hope Edward will make a move!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it. :)
Date: 09 Aug 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 45
Yeah! They are finally married. Just they wanted nice and simple.
Author's Response:
I thought it sounded very B/E. :) Thank you for the review!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 45
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I'm so glad!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 45
That was just a perfect wedding for them... I can't wait for the honeymoon.
Of course I'm interested! I've been following this story for a year and a half!
Author's Response:
Hehehe Thank you very much! :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 45
fantastic chapter as always. i started following you on fanfic.net and moved over here to read the full fantasticness that is your writing. haven't regretted it one bit. all of your stuff is great, whether it be stephanie plum or twilight. YAY!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :D
Date: 03 Aug 2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 44
I love the Idea of a surprise wedding. Actually know people who have done that. Good job. Can't wait.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
Date: 29 Jul 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hello. I'm new to your story - I found it on FanFic. The main reason I chose your story ;is because I remember a story I read when I first found FF about Bella buying a bookstore, her and Edward getting together. It also included a part where high school students would try to make her fall so they could see up her dress and other stupid high school pranks. Her office was upstairs and near the end of the story, she had made a section of the store into a 'bookclub' area where authors could hold signings and people could come together to do bookclub type things. I don't remember the name of it but I like the way yours is starting out. It's very similar to the one I remember. Hope it's as good, I'm sure it will be:) I'm excited to read this through. thanks for writing, for as much as I love to read, I can't even begin to have the courage to write myself:)
Author's Response:
I've never read that one! :) I hope you enjoy mine!
Date: 28 Jul 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 44
I can't wait until Bella and Edward get married. Alice and Rosalie's faces will be priceless. They will be so surprized.
Author's Response:
Heheh Yes, they will. :) Thanks!
Date: 28 Jul 2011 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 44
Love it!! Your E is to die for! Damn.....no wonder women of all ages are twihards!
Oops....almost got a dyac. I put in twihards & it changed it to twinsets. Not exactly the same sentiment!
Author's Response:
roflmao Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 44
I actually paused in my reading to go to damnyouautocorrect.com and I never laughed so hard!!
I love the idea of an ambush wedding! I loved everything about this chapter :)
Author's Response:
Haha It's awesome, isn't it? :D Thanks. :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 44
Yes, I;ve loved it from the very beginning and I still do!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
Date: 27 Jul 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 44
damn that was some sweet Italian!! Fabulous chapter, and looking forward to the next. Please try not to take as long, this is a great story.
Author's Response:
lol Thanks. :) I'll try!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 44
Love, love LOVE this story. I am sad knowing that it has to end soon. I love all of your stories!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I've started a new story. NM/Post-NM AU fic, with vampy Cullens, etc. Pre-readers have really liked it so far. ;)
Date: 04 Jul 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 43
This story has been on my to read list for quite a while. I'm so glad I've found it and am loving it immensly. I'm looking forward to vegas;) Thanks for writing!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :) The next chapter is being written now, but it's slow going. Hopefully another week or two. :D
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 43
I thought Angela's dad was not going to officiate? Did I miss something or were you just talking about him doing a nice job of giving the bride away?
The family will kill them if they run off and elope!
Author's Response:
Eh, apparently that changed. *laugh* Sorry! That was just one of the details that I forgot during the time that my muse fled! :) Thanks for the reviews!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 42
Yay! The family portrait session sounded like fun! I alos recently learned how to play hand and foot. I love that game :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 41
As soon as he unlocked the door, I knew what was going to happen hahaha :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 40
Awww...how sweet! This was such a good chapter and the puppies were gorgeous!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 39
Those are two of my favorite Christmas movies! The other is The Polar Express. Even though I own the movie, I still watch A Christmas Story at least twice during the annual 24 hour marathon that TBS does every year :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 38
Very cool, and I like how the proposal was very intimate and not in front of a bunch of people. It was very 'them' if that makes sense :) Also, I am a sucker for romantic stuff like that...*swoon* :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 37
I'd kind of like to punch Laurent myself...
Love this story more and more :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 36
Good grief, 2 cliffies in a row! I would consider that an evil thing if I had to wait for updates haha :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 35
I have a feeling on who broke in...heaven help them when Edward and the guys find out :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 34
I wouold SO be upset if I had to wait for an update, what a cliffie!
Haha, the boys messed up the flower beds :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 33
Excellent :) Haha over Bella being nervous about naughty smexting :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the reviews! :D I'm glad you're enjoying it still. :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 32
*Sigh* I love the holidays...
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 31
Hahaha, I called out "Doctor Who" before you revealed the answer and I wasn't evne playing hahaha :)
I love it and it made me want to go out and buy the 90s edition!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
My parents married 2 months after meeting each other and are still married today (36 years later). I say when you know, you know :)
Excellent chapter, naturally :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 29
Yay! I knew it was gonna happen :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 28
Good stuff, and I am glad Bella had the sense to go along with the ADT stuff. Independent womanhood aside, sometimes you just need to go along with your man's suggestions :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 27
Why is it that the first thing guys will do when they move is hook up the electronics hahaha :)
I have a horrible feeling that Edward needs to get ADT installed quicker than ASAP...*shudders*
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 26
I love this story! We have something similar here called Bottlecap Alley. Pike's Place market sounds like something I would LOVE to see!
I am such a sucker for stuff like the Gumwall proposal! LOVE it :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
Haha, as I was reading this I was twirling my Nalgene lid in my hands. When I saw that it was Laurent I froze. Haha :) Ok, so now this is my favorite canon ref :)
Well I don't know if it is just me, but you wrote it well enough to send a chill down my spine!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 24
Haha, my friends and I do that to our fortune cookies too :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
I actually recognized a few of the drinks you mentioned, so I am proud of myself haha :)
I like how you still managed to mention Jane's ability at the club :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
I like the way James has already been dealt with, although I have a feeling he may not be gone for good...I don't know though :)
Good stuff as always :)
Author's Response:
Hehehehe You'll see! :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
Yay for Bella's good first day!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
I think it is funny that Edward is the one that mentioned how terrible mind reading would be. Kind of an ironic twist :)
I love the way you weave canon refs into the story! The mountain lion tat is my favorite so far I think :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) I really worked hard to integrate as many canon references into it as I could! lol
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
I like the pacing of the story. A tiny bit of me is saying "bring it on" but that's only because I want to know what happens next in a hurry haha!
Also, if the chapters end naturally for you where they do, that makes them even better. Stories can be ruined if stuff is thrown in for the sake of length :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for all your continued reviews! I love them! :D
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
I like how you have described Edward's smile differently than every other story (crooked grin). It's a nice change and it stands out :)
I also like how you did not make the waitress all titchy and flirting with an obviously taken Edward. Not that I don't lke the others, but this is a welcome change especially since I expected the usual. Good surprise!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am reviewing for more than the promise of Edward, because let's face it: this story is great! However, I still can't wait for him to show up!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
Girl time rocks! It is its own world :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
Nice...I like it and I love the innocence of it all :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
It is 2 am and I have to be at work in 7.5 hours. I am happily giving up a bit of sleep though, because I am dying to see what happens next :)
Author's Response:
hehe Been there, done that! I'm so flattered! :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 13
I like it when a story sews up different chapters in the characters' lives throughout the story and not all crammed in at the end. Love it!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 12
It's like watching a movie of this in my head! I love all the character interaction :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
I like how you hint at things that have happened in the past and then how the full explanation naturally flows into the story line a few chapters later.
I am also glad I don't have to wait for updates yet!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
"There was a chorus of cheers from the bodies littered around my living room." is SUCH a great visualization, not to mention funny :)
I love playing against my guy friends on video games, it is always so funny!
Yes, the family meetings were excellent!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my word, I laughed OUT LOUD at the video game scene and totally woke my roomie up!
I wokr in computers as well and I could totally relate to Ben dealing with goboers (last chapter I think).
I found my 2 dogs almost the same way Rose found Teeny. Rachel was the same way...took her a year to warm up to my dad.
I love how you weave so many real life elements into this story. It really comes alive the more I identify with it :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
Boy, I'll say that was the perfect way to end the day...Team Jasper all the way baby!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all your reviews! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
I LOVE the name of Em and Rose's body shop :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love it! I like seeing the different characters being developed :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like how you are writing the transitions in Bella's life. They just capture me because they are easy to identify with, which gets me more into the story :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2011 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it already! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
I'm glad! I hope you continue to enjoy it. :)
Date: 18 Jun 2011 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 43
Bridezillas crack me up. If they could only see themselves. Good job can't wait til next time.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2011 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 43
Loved the chapter! Couldn't pay me enough to co-ordinate a wedding for some one, much less do it for free!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
Date: 15 Jun 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 43
I really don't thin Alice will let them get away with Vegas unless you have them elope and not say anything which I really don't see happening. I love your story and will be looking forward to more chapters which I hope will be soon
Author's Response:
*laugh* Nah, she wouldn't. I have plans for E/B, trust me. ;)
Date: 15 Jun 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 43
If they go to Vegas, I hope they have one of the high end hotels do their wedding. I can't stand the people who go to the tacky side of the road wedding chapels. If you do Vegas, you can have a beautiful wedding at for example the Venetian. It can be nice and preplanned.
Author's Response:
Oh, no, I wouldn't do the tacky place. lol But... I have plans, I think, so... We'll see if they actually DO go to Vegas. ;)
Date: 09 Jun 2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 42
What exciting news Alice and Jasper had to share. You can plan a nice wedding in now time. As long as you have the the money to spend you can have a nice wedding planned in just a couple of weeks. There is plenty of friends and family to help.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D Yeah, it should be fun trying to write the next chapter!
Date: 08 Jun 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 42
I always like teasers!
Welcome back! I've missed this story! Great chapter getting back into it was very easy. Please update again asap.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. :) I don't have anything more written yet, unfortunately. *sigh* lol
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 42
I'm sooooo glad you updated this story! I was beginning to worry that you had lost interest in it and it's just TOO GOOD to lose! Thank you so much for continuing it. I look forward to lots more!
Author's Response:
Hehehe Nope, I haven't. I WILL finish it, I promise! Thank you!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 41
What a way to ring in the New Year? Edward will never look at his piano at work the same way again.
Author's Response:
Hehehe Nope! :) Thanks!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 41
;-)
Nice!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 16 Apr 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 41
Loved it and the fact that they finally had the piano in the background was wonderful. Glad to know that the muse has returned so that we can have more of our favorite music & book store owners.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 41
Definitely worth the wait! Sure hope your muse is back. This is one of my favorite stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
Date: 16 Apr 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 41
I am sorry you've been having trouble with your creative juices... but please know that I really enjoy this story and want to see what you have planned for your E&B.
HOT chapter... more please. Oh and I hope have hot sex in his store, doesn't bite them in the butt later.
Author's Response:
Hehe Thank you. :)
Date: 11 Mar 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 40
I loved this story I can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 39
loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 38
awww.... so cute..
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
loving this so far...
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 40
Great story, I like this Rose, happy and smiles, Edward and Bella's characters seem to be more normal than others have portrayed. I would love to read more, maybe marriage and babies??? Overall a GREAT story filled with love, happiness, a little drama and suspense and sexy times,too!!!
Author's Response:
There will definitely be more! :) Thanks for the review. :D
Date: 04 Feb 2011 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 40
I think this was probably Bella's best Christmas' ever.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 03 Feb 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 40
What a nice christmas. Can't wait til the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 40
;-). This story is nice & sweet. Sometimes that's just what you need!!
Love Christmas.......& the piano man! Nothing says love like your love writing & playing something just for you!
Author's Response:
Thank you. :D
Date: 03 Feb 2011 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 39
I loved it. And I loved the xmas pj's! Soooo fun!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 02 Feb 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 39
So sweet & I love Christmas jammies!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 01 Feb 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 39
Every Edward and Bella story needs a meadow for them so enjoy alone time. I am glad that other families do the mathing pajamas. It is just not Christmas eve without it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) Actually, I got the PJ thing from a friend, whose family did it while she was growing up. hehe
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 39
I just love this story. It's so sweet and gives me a warm feeling all over.
Thank you so much for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. :)
Date: 01 Feb 2011 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 39
I love family stuff, thanks for the idea. And yes the meadow was great, maybe have them go there in the spring so she could see the flowers. Can't wait til next time.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 01 Feb 2011 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 39
I liked your take of the meadow scene. I can just picture a young Edward going through heartbreak and using the meadow as his safe place. Very sweet.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. :)
Date: 17 Jan 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 38
Love it!! The best proposal to date... Loved this chapter can't wait for the update :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 38
Perfect!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 38
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 38
Awwwww....made me cry. So sweet. Worth the wait.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
Date: 14 Jan 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 38
soo sweet...gotta love christmas proposals
Author's Response:
Thank you. :) I know, right? I got no ring, cheap motel room, and over a pizza for dinner (that *I* made since I worked in the pizza restaurant!) when he visited me the weekend after Valentine's Day at college. haha :D
Date: 14 Jan 2011 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 38
That was so sweet. That is a great engagment story for Edward and Bella to tell. That is what I tell my guy friends when they ask how to ask their girlfriends. Will you be proud to have the story told over and over again? If not try something else. This has never failed them yet.
Author's Response:
Thank you! That's actually really great advice. hehe
Date: 23 Dec 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 37
Bella will be happy with Edward. I hope he also has an alarm system. It is ashame that Bella just bought all of that beautiful furniture and will not get to use it. I hope that creep doesn't get out for a long time.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 37
Great chapter! Glad Charlie knows & that they are moving in together!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 21 Dec 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 36
Holy crap! things just can't be somooth sailing for these two.
Author's Response:
Hehehe Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 36
If I was Bella, I would be moving in with Edward for a while. I would have that whole room emptied. I would need all new clothes. I think in the long run Edward and Bella should knock out the wall between the apartments and make one big new home.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. :) Actually, their places are separate... It's 2 separate buildings, connected by a landing. heh
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 36
Knew it was Laurent but never made a connection to James. Figures the low life had something to do with it. Glad Laurent is behind bars & will be there for awhile. No way he can make bail; he was caught in the act!
Great update!
Happy Holidays!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 36
I can't wait to read Laurant's confession and reasoning behind his actions. This is such an entertaining mix of depravity, humor and adrenaline!
MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) That may be an outtake I post later. I've got 2 more chapters written and off to beta, and it wouldn't flow right with that. ;)
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 35
The weird vagrant pervert has returned!
Author's Response:
Favorite. Review. Ever! lol
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 35
I think it was Laurent who broke in. He was creepy before & seemed too interested in Bella, etc.
Great chapter!!
Author's Response:
Hehehe You're definitely on the right track. ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 24
:)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it... ? lol :)
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 35
Bella doesn't get a break. I am glad she wasn't there. I wonder why they were so set on destroying her bed and clothes. It sounds rather personal.
Author's Response:
I know, poor girl, right? ;) Thanks for the review... You'll find out more next chapter!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 34
Edwardball Edward YUUUUMMMMY!
Author's Response:
hehehe Thanks for the review. :)