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Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it :))

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it :)

Reviewer: msbull Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 14

So good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 14

Edward will be looking for her because he want to find her but also because he will hope she has his luck.  Emmett is smart guy sometime lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 13

O it seems as if Bella's bad juju might have rubbed off on our boy! Lets hope it's only temporary. How long do you suppose it would ake for Edward to track down our beloved heroine?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 13

Edward is not liking having any luck

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

She is so use to having everything go wrong

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 11

That is so sad

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 13

Awe...he's so cute...but his ball playing will return to normal, right?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 11

Awwww poor Bella and Edward. Does this mean his luck will go back to being good while they're apart ? 

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh poor bella 

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh man I loved it lol she had me laughing too when she look behind her when he called her beautiful lol :D

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love her she confused the shit out of James to funny 

Reviewer: msbull Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 10

Yay is right love how bella ditched james

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

that was great. love it 

thank you for writing and i am dying for more more more

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

oh goodness i hope it hasn't gotten to him or the medallion fall off of him

 

but i always thought luck or lack there of was in your head

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 5

ahhhhhh their is attraction hot damn and of course bella would fall

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 4

so we have bad vs good

wow looking for the two of them meeting

love it

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it, Ladies!

xoxo

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 10

Can't wait to read more :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

Gee I hope the only reason Edward is a good ball player is because of the charm...haha

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 6

OH NO...... >:D

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 5

I hope his good luck transfers to her and not the other way around....lol. But I don't think that is going to be the case.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 4

WOW where do I get one of those charms from.....lol

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 10

awww E is so cute.  ROFL for getting rid of James

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 9

Poor Edward... I think his coin got stuck on Bella's charm bracelet... 

Xoxo

Reviewer: msbull Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

Charlie is hilarious and poor edward

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

I do think his charm is on her person...somewhere!  This should be a fun read.  Thanks!

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

Really good story :) poor Edward and Bella seem to have switched luck. Hope it doesn't hurt Edwards baseball career to bad.

looking forward to more.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 9

This is different for edward.  Love Charlie he is a good dad loves his daughter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

Poor E's luck.   Charlie is cool.  Glad it was James she won the money from.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 8

lol for picking a white sox player and telling E to hide.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 8

Haha... I can't wait to see what happens next! BTW... Any chance of a Family Services update anytime soon? Pretty please...

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm enjoying this little tale! Good  job Ladies!

Xoxo

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: Pjdb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 9

Coming together very nicely.  Can't wait for more

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

Charlie is awesome! And go Bella. Waiting to see if Edward's bad luck continues.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

please oh please don't let any bad luck get to edward during the game cause that'd be terrible and hopefully edward gets bella's number before the night is over!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!!! Can't wait to read what happens next!! :D

Reviewer: msbull Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loving it!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 8

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 8

Can't wait to see what happens next! 

Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 7

Damn, Emmett has terrible timing!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 8

Love it she is afraid of hurting someone lol.  When is Edward going to relize that his Medalion is gone??

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 7

This is a cute story. I'm liking the lightheartedness. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

i think it will be Bella because her luck has changed

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 7

awww for E coming to talk to her.   lol she'll lose the bat and hit someone with it.  ROFL

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

Haha I bet it's Bella if not Charlie!! Lol oh man so loving this story!! :D

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh nooooo....did the good luck and the bad luck switch???? I can't wait to find out. Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

I think Emmett's a walking disaster area and should probably come with a warning label!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

bella will blame herself no matter what

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

oh wow   His luck doesnt seem to be going well there at the end huh?

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 6

Aww, heck. Bad luck rules. More!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 5

lol   Em got a girl to fall for him......literally

 

Reviewer: msbull Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love it!!!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

Lovely so far...

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Bella. I guess we have Emmett to thank for making sure these two meet. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it! Need more!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 5

Awe, Edward's a softy!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 5

A banana love it what a way to meet :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm thinking that I wish it was posted in its entirety. That good!! I can't wait!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 4

Thanks  its a good thing that Bella will be going to a game soon ;)

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved getting a peek at Edward's past! It seems that neither Edward or Bella had a particularly easy road in life. Can't wait to see what else we have to learn about these two. I'm looking forward to the moment they meet. Will we have love at first sight, sparks flying everywhere? Or will we have animosity and misunderstandings? Really looking forward to finding out!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 3

So it looks like Edward maybe the hottest ball player on the planet, but at least it seems as if he's not a total man-whore! Looking forward to more!:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

hmmm the good luck charm huh?   Can't wait for more ladies.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

ROFL  Too funny.....condoms.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 2

Poor over clutzy B

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

love this

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am loving it. Ican't wait for Edward to meet his true love. Hopefully, his good luck will then extend to her!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

I hope his good luck is going to bring Bella good luck! I can't wait to see what happe a tomorrow! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love what he gave her to remember him by. Too funny!!!

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

I am loving Edward already he is not a manwhore  Thanks

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 3

I got it!  How old is Edward?

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

YAY SO EXCITED A NEW STORY FROM YOU GUYS!!!!!!!! I LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORIES THEY ARE SO GOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

Looking forward to reading more about jinxed Bella.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

Meeting Edward Cullen would certainly change my luck!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

3 is good!  I like this story. She's got this little black cloud following her around!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

Poor thing. All her applications where lost? I hope se will get to go to school at some point. Can't wait for her to meet Edward. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am so glad she has Charlie! I can't wait to see where this goes. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 2

Looking forward to the game!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

Three sounds really good to me :)  poor girl i have had days like that

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