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Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 42

Loved it :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 42

Uh-oh indeed!!!

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 41

what the hell bella???????????

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 41

Sweet

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it can't wait for more:)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 41

Oh, peggo, hmmm. Loved the chapter, cant wait to read more .

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 41

Parents can be soo annoying.  wonder if Alice and Rose can keep the secret.

Reviewer: keira30250 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 41

so glad you updated so soon :) 

a baby would be great ! I feel like they need a little bit of an adventure right now 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 41

:)

Reviewer: leslieljs713 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 41

I don't mean to take this out on you, but ugh, I hate baby stories. I read to escape reality a bit and it seems to be big now that every female character is getting knocked up whether she wants to or not. I hope she's not pregnant. I realize it's usually the next step after people get married, but this is fantasy for me. Why can't they live childless and ride unicorns and skip over rainbows for a few years. lol

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2013 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 40

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 40

Jazz is too funny.  glad he got a job though.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 40

loved this

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 39

Awww for Alice and jazz.   Lol for jazz walking in on them.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 39

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 39

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2013 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 38

OMG Vic did not send that???   ROFL

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 38

Loved it ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 38

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 37

yumminess

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 37

Loved it :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 37

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 36

Oooh sounds like it's gonna be a yummy honeymoon

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 36

THAT WAS HOT! MORE PLZZZ!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 36

:) loved this

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 35

It was sexy, hot, sweet, all in one beautiful package ...
I would like to see more of his past in the office, I do not understand how they hide from others, they were always fucking eyes.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 35

:)

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 35

thank you for the update..........There honeymoon is starting off great!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 35

Go Bella!!!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 34

I miss Slob, he was so sweet.
Bella and Edward could have avoided all this if they had said that ese love.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2013 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2013 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 34

Mothers are pushy huh?   ROFL from throwing her dildo at him.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 34

:)

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 33

Great chapter!! I'd like to see Edward behaved with other guys around Bella when they were not dating.
Edward seems to be the jealous type.
I'm looking forward to Saturday.
Kisses.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2013 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 33

Loved it as always :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 33

:) loved this

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 32

Wow  Rose is one biatch.   Hope she get run over by a bus.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 32

Poor Bella! Poor Edward!
In life we make decisions and stupid we can not go behind.
The important thing is that they love and will bem.Rosalie a cow is disgusting, even in a difficult time she thinks only of his anger.
I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 32

:)

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 31

OMG!! They married, it was beautiful, I love it!
James knew all about them, they sap perfect together!
Kisses.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 31

awww sweet wedding

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 31

Awewwwwwwww I loved 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 31

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 30

Aww gotta love Esmom and Victoria

Reviewer: keira30250 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 30

OMG I can't wait for the scene to come ! 

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 30

:/ sad chapter

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 30

Poor Bella

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 29

Finally! They will get married. After all that passed, the relationship that they would not classify as dating, I would like to
see them more in their relationship hidden in its denial.
They were slow to accept that love, I'm glad they were able to make the wedding.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 29

lol for her not wanting to be pampered.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 28

OMG!! Edward really picked a bad time to say
"I love you", but Bella overreacted, and now she is in so much pain.
I'm glad that they will solve all, they are great jubtos.
Great chapter.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2013 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 28

wow she really overreacted.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 28

Poor Edward

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2013 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 27

thank you for the update..........they are having fun

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 27

That was hot!!
Good way to end the night ... the lyrics and the music was perfect.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 27

Great fun times at the club.   

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2013 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 26

I love this story!!
Bella is afraid to deliver? She is already in love with Edward, it is visible. Edward stopped resisting, he aeitou they love, and comcerteza a year together is something solid.
Kisses.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

awww poor Victoria. lol for tricking her into dating

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 26

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it :)

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 25

thank you for the update........Alice will get her man.....he's on the way........well done

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2013 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 25

Cool Party.  Makes me wish I had one for either of my weddings.  LOL

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved this

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 24

dun dun dun for the ending.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

The two combined costume, sure James suspects something, nothing screams more "we're a couple" than matching costumes. They are so involved with each other, they are caring and concerned, now that the two cute together, he with his hand on his face. I'm eager for more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 24

:) loved this

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 23

lol for tradition breaking.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) loved this

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 23

Bella and Edward are so funny!
This is so different from his past, when met, I'm anxious about halloween and watch them getting to know and falling in love, even without querer. I'm glad you're putting two chapters, I love this story.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 21

thank you for the update...that was a nice surprise...Happy Birthday Bella

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 22

yey  B gonna get promotion!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2013 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 21

Wish someone would buy me a car.  LOL

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 21

I'm so sorry for Slob, it is very sad to lose his friend, having to make a decision as difícil.Eu had two dogs, one as a kid, a sweet and protective shepherd, he was amazing, died of natural causes, suffered a lot, told my parents that I never wanted to other dog . I get married and win a rottweiler, his name was Teddy, and despite its size, that was what he was, sweet, obedient, intelligent, he died of cancer last year, I think is better to love and lose than never love, dogs love a sincere and selfless way.
I love to see the evolution of their relationship, past and future.
Kisses.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 21

Poor Slob :(

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 20

Chapter amazing! They are increasingly passionate.
They see how they are attached?
I'm afraid when they break.
I'm so glad you update more often.
Kisses.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 20

Women like Heidi give us all bad names.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 20

I LOVE YOU ! SERIOUSLY, I LOVE YOUR WRITING AND ANIMALS.  THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 20

love this

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2013 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 19

lol for her food pickiness.  glad B and Rose talked over things.  Poor Slob

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2013 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 18

so cute seeing B with the family

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) loved this

Reviewer: Lemonbutt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

Mr. Brown = James?

Reviewer: Lemonbutt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 2

im getting hooked on this story.

Reviewer: Lud Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 18

That was so beautiful!
Even when they will deny that they are in love?
Kisses.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 17

james is a wanker.  awww Poor kid

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