Date: 23 Sep 2013 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 123
I dunno, maybe I'm just not that trusting but it feels like Elizabeth is playing Bella. She turns the tears and sorrow on and off too easily. If I'm reading it all wrong then I'll be glad to be proven wrong but a part of me thinks she really has an agenda. I hope she doesn't cause trouble for or between Bella and Edward -- she scares me. Like I said though, I fully admit that I could be wrong. I hope Bella does tell Edward, that she decides to trust her man and not go against what works for them. As long as the three of them (Bella, Edward and Eddie) are well though, that's pretty much all that matters to me.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 122
Poor Edward, that's gotta ache. Lol, I laughed the that sucked line. It seems like they've truly found their groove. I am happy for them.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 121
Oh wow, two sides to the story now. Such a sad story too. I am glad Edward did not have to hear it first hand. Even if Bella recounts it when they're alone, she knows him best, she can gauge how he's feeling and reacting -- she'll be there for him and not colored by the emotions of the memories.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 123
Well holy shit
Date: 19 Sep 2013 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 120
Wow I love liz's digs at es ...
Date: 19 Sep 2013 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 120
Great couple of chapters. His mom. Wow. I can't wait until you tell us what Edward knows.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 120
Love the surprise updates as always! Love poor Esme. Nervous Edward doing shots is a hoot!
Date: 18 Sep 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 120
Still loving this story! Looking forward to more!
Date: 18 Sep 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 120
3 good chapters, thank you for sharing.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 120
Poor Edward and Bella. Elizabeth should have stayed away. She is nothing but trouble. I feel for Esme, knowing this woman loves her husband and he loves her. Edward was right to stay away from the crazy lady. He has a new family. He does't need her.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 120
"So old," Elizabeth repeated. "I thought the same when I saw your face." Oh, I really thought the fur would fly with that statement. But, Esme seems to be on her best behavior.
"She gave me that-it's from AA. She's got two years sober." "And you're toasting to that with Jack Daniel's?" I had to agree with Bella here. It was an odd way to toast his mom's achievement.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 18 Sep 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 119
Well, that meeting went well, I think. But, is the fur going to fly once Esme gets through the door? Can't wait to find out.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 18 Sep 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 120
I'm wondering what's going to happen next.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 119
So great to get multiple chapters of this story.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 118
So talented to keep up with all these different characters.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 120
I expect there to be fireworks between Elizabeth and Esme. At least Esme tried to be pleasant, as to Elizabeth being a bitch to her. Esme had to good grace to overlook her though, wonder how long that will last before it blows.
I like that Elizabeth realizes she can't be Edward's mother, but hopes they can be friends... that's good but fucked up on so many levels.
Isn't one of the 12 Steps in AA to make a mends with those you've wronged in the past, shouldn't she be trying to make amends with Esme?
This dinner is about to get interesting, as well as the coming weekend.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 119
I agree with Edward, a strange group of people to have in one place, given their backgrounds with each other.
Is Elizabeth stoned? She's acting a little fried.
Can't wait for Esme to join the party and see her reaction to Elizabeth.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 118
Em's a jerk!
Ut-oh... they didn't use protection... can't wait to see if anything comes fromt that little slip.
Glad Edward loves her unconditionally.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 120
Damn! Almost a cat fight in the kitchen! I feel some drama about to hit.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 120
So bella pumps and gives her breast milk in a bottle? Smart. Shit is weird with esme and elizabeth like frenimies.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 120
love family dinners when some of the family is at war..
Date: 18 Sep 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 119
oh I hate things like this. Family with all the tension.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 120
Wow this is going to be a wild weekend
Date: 18 Sep 2013 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 118
THis Emmett is not a good one.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 118
Wow I'm either reading to much into stuff or there is a lot of foreshadowing. I could see you taking this in so many different directions.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 120
Holy shit
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 120
Thank you so much for the up date I love this story and have been checking every day your the best writer can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 120
The interaction between Elizabeth and Esme made me cringe and laugh all at the same time! Seems like Liz was poking at Esme and her wine....I like what Liz said to Edward about being his friend now. Seems pretty sensible to me. Bella seems kind of uncomfortable about the whole evening...I would be too! Entertaining chapter!
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 119
He's right. This is one weird mixed up combo of a family. But you know, most of us are like that....Bella has some self-esteem issues still, I see. I'm glad you're posting more of this story now....
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 118
He likes her a little chunkier, doesn't he? The mother-in-law visit should be interesting...
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 120
wow Esme and Elizabeth...what a love/hate thing huh?
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 119
I'm so glad you did more than just one update. I'd be dying if the doorbellringing was where this stopped.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 119
hmmm now what did E find out I wonder. He's really discombobulated.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 118
I love these characters. They seem kinda raw and vulnerable. Thanks for updating!
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 120
Loved these updates! Passing little Eddie around like a peace pipe! Hilarious!
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 118
Em is such a goof
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 118
love it....thank you so much for continuing this story
Date: 14 Sep 2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 117
0MG they're so fucking cuteeeeeeee. Update soon please baby. Love yaaaa
Date: 08 Sep 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 117
oh boy, Godfather went to pick up Edward's Mom & woman he loved, plus they are all gonna have dinner together tonight? bet Esme is gonna love that lol ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 116
adreneline rush sex, yum! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 115
holy hell that was a lot of info. I think your longest chapter in this story! lots of questions answered. so Edward is gonna take this option right? I think Bella will agree he should. Jaz just broke some cherries lol ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 114
wait? "He palmed his face"?? how did he palm his face if he is hog-tied? oh, nevermind. with both his kneecaps shot out he isn't going anywhere anyway. this is gonna be fun. I love that Edward did that LOL ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 113
so who is gonna get to take out Joshie???? ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 112
man, hoping it was not the godfather who gave the order :( ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 111
holy shitstorm!! way to go Edward & Bella!! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 110
uh oh, who is not knocking on the back door? ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 109
awwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 108
ok, Alice didn't need to say that! I remember watching an ER episode of an emergency pregnant lady that ended in tragedy when I was pregnant, not good. I had 3 days of labor, which sucked, but delivery was fine & she is turning 18 on 9/30 :) ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 107
well the Riley situation makes sense now ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 106
awwww, Edward is doing great job! hate those non-smoking facilities. they made every public place in Michigan non-smoking, so it really sucks up here, gotta be really sneaky now! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 105
Toni Braxton? lmao! too funny ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 104
I knew, labor & sex. so funny these two ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 103
she is in labor, I think, and they are trying to have sex? this could only happen to them LOL ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 102
ok Jaz, time to step up & get the job done. especially since it was all done for him, for whatever reason ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 101
wow! cleaning always sucks, sure hope Bella is asleep LOL ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 08 Sep 2013 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 100
well shit. like I said, I liked Riley, for that time. Never trust anyone. but he has to make sure his Bella-Boo is ok, so cleaning up a mess it will be ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 99
uh oh, what does he want with Jaz? ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 98
good Valentine's Day for them, awww ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 97
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 96
I have faith in your HEA promise cos shit happens, just sucks going thru it ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 95
he took out Aldo???? ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 94
pressure is on & it sucks ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 93
I like Riley, so far at least. ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 92
Jaz sure does have a quick temper these days ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 91
finally an A/N, some words from ya! I have no idea why someone would read something they hate. sometimes I start reading a story & think "Yay, I like this storyline" then few chapters in, "Um, who is writing this shit?" I don't review at all cos I personally don't like it, I just stop reading. To each their own. Just cos I don't like it doesn't mean I have a right to criticize their style. I mean, UGH! anyhew, I love your writing style so I read your stories, so THANK YOU for sharing!! DEA huh? that does not sound good for CJ, nope, not at all ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 90
dang! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 89
ok, that was better. more info. so old man isn't blind or dumb & is giving Edward some respect too ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 88
hmmmm, lots of info but lots more questions too ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 87
yep, she is tough. sometimes it just takes a shove to make you strong but it is in there & comes out when you need it ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 86
well thank goodness sex opened Bella up, in more ways than one ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 85
busy day for Edward. luckily he had a sexy weekend with Bella to recharge him ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 84
that was just absolutely perfect for them!!! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 83
awwww, they said it & now they are really doing it. not just sex but loving each other. just awww, in their own lil way ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 82
well at least Alice is being helpful, pushing them in the right direction. just worried for Edward it won't happen again. ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 81
poor Edward ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 80
date is going well :) ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 79
ha, trying to hide her in a coat & Bella didn't even realize it, too funny. ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 78
perfect! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 77
uh oh... hope they still get to have date night ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 76
I am beginning to wonder if you are a mob wife in RL? lol ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 75
RL made that a hard chapter to read, PTSD is a bitch! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 74
gez, they are all over the place. I loved that Jaz walked in, saw them in midst of their crazy shit, grabbed his coffe pot & just left with it, too funny! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 73
first hickey for them both lol ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 72
he doesn't even realize that he is actually earning it himself! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 71
awww, CJ likes being a daddy! I guess no definition in A/N is needed for "bookyak" :) ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 70
well most of them worked it out. they are at least talking, which is good. I am actually looking forward to Edward taking Bella shopping, bet she will have a ball lol ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 69
awww, it is cool! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 68
that mouth indeed ;) ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 67
of course Bella was gonna defend Edward, but dang Alice not remembering she was prego, no good. they will all work it out, they all love Bella & see will see to it ~Tracey xoxox