Date: 06 Jun 2013 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
I don't think it will do any good it will just get Edward pissed off at her for not trusting him to protect her lol :D loved the chapter!! :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hmmm, she is going to get into trouble.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
Calling the popo will probably only cause more problems. She needs to figure out why they don't like her man's family
Date: 28 Apr 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh loving the story!!
Date: 26 Apr 2013 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
In don't know, but Leah is a strange chick!!!
Date: 26 Apr 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is hilarious!!! I love that she has sense and didn't fight with him.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
my, my ,my, i love this story and i can't wait for an update
Date: 18 Apr 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
love all her knicknames.
Date: 15 Apr 2013 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
A serious talk followed by some nookie...I loved it! That's how every serious talk should end in my opinion. :) I really liked that chapter & it was informative too. ;) can't wait to read more. Thanks again.
Date: 15 Apr 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 17
Hot damnthe lemon was good
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh I am caught up again.
I am thinking it is a girl
Date: 04 Apr 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait or more :)
Date: 02 Apr 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
renee is an annoying one.
Date: 02 Apr 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
Duh duh duuuuhhhhhh!!!! (I'm picturing the Lil guy from croods... You know the trailer) when is she gonna remember her convo with the new chick (forgot her name)??? Hello, vital info here???!!! Lol
Of course its better to duck and cover before you have to bob snd weave but that still sucks that shes got a stalker.
Awesome that they "reconnected" and are stronger cuzz they're talking. Woohoo!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love her I'm not about the B/S attitude it's great....To me Bella's not hard enough on Edward for some of the shit he pulls and I still say he and his fam are mafia or some shit. Things still don't seem all set on the table as they say. He's holding something back still
Date: 02 Apr 2013 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
Its aro thats her stalker huh? Or is it leah? Love the lemon
Date: 02 Apr 2013 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yea I don't really like Renee. She really has no reason to dislike Edward and he's trying but nothing works. *sigh* I did like our love scene between the two. Very yummy! Can't wait to read more. Thanks again. Bye for now.
Date: 19 Mar 2013 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love it update soon
Date: 19 Mar 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
Girl, I would be helping her pck... this shit just got scary!
Date: 17 Mar 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
That's crazy!!! I'd wanna get the hell up outta there too...
Hope your RL stuff straightens out. Hate how it gets in the way ;)
Def wanna read an update sooner rather than later but completely understand if that doesn't happen. I'll be sticking around to see this fic get wrapped up... So don't worry about me =D
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
:) cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 17 Mar 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter and I'm with Bella. I'd be getting the hell out of there as fast as I could. The closest I've had to a stalker is a student who came to my class in the middle of the year in 5th grade from juvenile detention. He was in my class for the remainder of the school year. That summer he went back to juvenile detention. When he was released and returned to our school, he would leave class without permission and come stand in my doorway or my classroom and stare at me. He's the only student I have ever been afraid of. Add to the creepy behavior the fact they won't tell you why they were in juvenile detention.
Date: 17 Mar 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
Interesting chapter, this one! I'd understood there was a stalker, but I'm still very curious...
Date: 17 Mar 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
When this is all over, I bet she's gonna have words with them for hiding stuff on them.
Date: 17 Mar 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
I thought I had it figured out. I thought for sure that Edward and the family where Mafia and the creepy guys was a Fed. Totally off base.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Good chapter!
Bella wants to leave, Edward did not seem to agree.
Thank you.
Date: 17 Mar 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hmm wonder if she does leave...imnthinking the stalkers james aka creepy guy
Date: 13 Mar 2013 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
So alice wants edward the note was telling bella she doesnt share meaning edward.....rose figured it out and was getting ready to knock alice out before she hurt bella?......am i right or is someone in the apt or they think bellas in trouble and were getting ready to attack but bella answered the door?
Date: 13 Mar 2013 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
Im thinking the cullens are somehow related to the mob and those notes arent from edward
Date: 13 Mar 2013 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ok edward sr is the owner and carisle and edward are brothers...or edward owns the club...emmette is esme and carisles son
Date: 13 Mar 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
Welll alice and him are siblings cuz of the whole face in her clevage thing was werid
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2013 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh my goodness. That's one hell of a cliffy! Loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one.
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
wow did not see that coming
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
Crap, I knew that was going to happen when I started this story... I knew by the end I would left wanting more and not being able to have.
I am not sure of your updateing schedule, but please put me out of my missery soon.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am loving this story so much. I actually thought Edward was going to be some ass, but now I get he just testing Bella.
Date: 26 Feb 2013 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Alice?! Isn't she one of the good guys? What the heck?! And rose isn't bad right? Ooh way to leave this evil lady! Lol! Can't wait to find out more. Thanks again.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
please tell me you are planning on updating this tonite?
pretty please they have come to sort out jacob hes the only other person in the house but why?
Date: 25 Feb 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
Good cliffie, great story!
Date: 25 Feb 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
Cant blame her for being worried. Eek for cliffy
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
WHAT THE FUCK??? WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?!?!?!
Maybe Jake sin't watching Bella for Edward and he is the creeper after all?
GAH! WOMAN, HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO US!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
Was Jake up to some sneaky shit and got caught by the girls....Did Alice take him out while Bella was in the bathroom? She's way too trusting
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
:O !!! I'm.. SOOO... Confused right now. O.o can't wait for the next update. What a cliffie!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
Noooo!!!!! Loved it..can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
all i have to say is brilliant!!!!!! love this story and waiting patiently for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
I loved it different I want to know what he all he is hiding and who is after bella update soon
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2013 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
love it so much going back to review cuz i was too much in a hurry to read next chapter to review and you deserve lots of reviews!!!
Date: 15 Feb 2013 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
Very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Keep up the great work
Date: 13 Feb 2013 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
this update got on my last nerve, so I quit reading it, just not into reading a spooiled rotten bitch of a Bella today, might come back and read it later maybe it got better? whatever.........
Date: 12 Feb 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 12 Feb 2013 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 13
Gah! what a chapter. I can't wait to find out what Edward is hiding, and for some reason it makes me think that it involved Bella's dad.
Thanks for the update, Lo!
xoxo
Mina
Date: 12 Feb 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
Having to cut anything from the story is just wrong!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
Can't wait to read more, really enjoying this story.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great update!
This chapter show more about what is going to come. I'm very excited to read more.
Hugs
Astrid
Date: 12 Feb 2013 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ahhh!! Lolo, you kill me!! This update was wonderful. So creepy guy and Victoria?!? I'm guessing creepy guy is James. I can't wait for more!!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well shit....
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2013 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
Such a great chapter. Can't wait for more.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
NARCs in the club or is it a rival that creepy guy and Chilly are working with/for. I knew there was something more to Edward than meets the eye. I'm curious to know how deep this goes, what has he done?
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yeah keep it to yourself for a little longer friend
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2013 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
Say WHAT?? This'll drive me crazy till the next update.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
ooh danger? I'm even more intrigued! that was a hot as hell lapdance tho. VERY nice! can't wait to read more. thanks again
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
I loved this chapter. It had a little of everything that I love. I wonder who is trying to hurt Bella and why? Looking forward to the next update.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
Who is Emily? Does it have to do with Bella being stalked and Sam kissed hmmm. What does Edward know about Bella's stalker does it have to do with her catching Edward's eye? AHHH so many questions
Date: 11 Feb 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ok... Poor thing can be really dense and naive cause really??? There's shady shyt going on, creepy guys, whispering and then you hear that end of the convo with chilly aka Victoria? Come on now!!!
Edward needs to grow some and tell her so she can at least be on alert more. She's gonna flip her lid but at least she'll know.
Smh... These two are hilarious but love they had a nice moment ;)
Date: 11 Feb 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
hmmm Victoria/Chilly and her creepo man are gonna be trouble.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella and Rosalie have doubts about Edward and his family.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
Dispute between Edward and Bella.
Date: 03 Feb 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
Im glad you oved over to TWCS, love lemons, a story is not a story without them :-)
keep the chapters coming
Date: 03 Feb 2013 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
cant blame B for having questions. E seems to be a mini mafia guy at times.
Date: 03 Feb 2013 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad E made it up to her. Maybe she'd be more careful if you told her the truth about her car and all. I have a feeling that E knows more than he's saying. LOL for Rose being back.
Date: 03 Feb 2013 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
hmmm what to think about wierd guy...... narc or just creeper????
Awwww E is so sweet sometimes.
Date: 03 Feb 2013 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
Sam really wanted to die huh? Some people really shouldnt drink.
Yummy End. Happy Dance time
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2013 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved the chapter. Bella and Rosalie are starting to put the pieces together. I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hmm sounds like this creeper dude is really trying to make her desperate for help or something. Naughty peeping b
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
Nice first date. Hmm guessing someone tampered with her car? Uh oh roses from creepy club guy maybe?
Date: 03 Feb 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Glad she talked some sense into rose. Aww for persistent e
Date: 03 Feb 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Guess Maggie blows real good. Haha. Awww for broken car again