Date: 30 Jul 2013 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
An employee? Chilly? And creepy?
Date: 30 Jul 2013 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
She's kind of hilarious in this chapter. At least she wasn't mad? Wonder what is in that box.
Date: 30 Jul 2013 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yeah keeping it from her is a bad bad thing!
Was that their version of making love ;)
Date: 30 Jul 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wonder if its going to backfire...
Date: 30 Jul 2013 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
Ha ha you have some crazy stories!
i wonder why Bella didnt say anything to rose ? I mean I know she wanted her to enjoy her time, but that would be quite the shock to come home to.
Date: 29 Jul 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
Absolutely loved it!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2013 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ha! I wish he would have given he a nicer car... Maybe a shiny Volvo. Can you tell I'm not a ford fan? Maybe a Toyota or a Mazda!
Date: 29 Jul 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
great ending. glad they got a hea. ty for writing and sharing
Date: 29 Jul 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
I so want to know what he was smirking about! lol
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2013 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 24
:) loved this story
Date: 29 Jul 2013 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loving this fic :)
Date: 29 Jul 2013 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Finally! A date!
Date: 29 Jul 2013 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
He needs to own it!
Date: 29 Jul 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ok so I didn't really want to read the less naughty version so here I am! Because I like naughty!!
Date: 29 Jul 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks loved your story!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 22
"I peed myself." Aw, it's gross, lol, but poor thing and the way Edward is with her such a sweet moment.
Date: 28 Jul 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 23
Ok so he isn't police,,,I knew she was pregers.....Leah is the bad guy......Carlos is a jerk....and I can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2013 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh no, something tells me Carlos is a threat! And she is definitely pregnant, the hieghtened sense of smell, puking, crying emotional roller coaster...
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
Ohhh, I had a feeling it'd be her, hmmm. And is she preggers?! The smells, lightheadedness and tiredness... not like her, and she was sick awhile ago, wonder if the cold meds she was taking were antibiotics!
Date: 27 Jul 2013 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
Why is edward asking bella why she didnt tell him she was pregnant, she didnt know herself, right? Loved how he asked if she would say yes to marriage.
Date: 27 Jul 2013 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
ooh lots happened. what a cliffy ending.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
What??! 0.0 next....
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2013 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
Well then I think it'd be Sam, Aro, or maybe Leah. But it could still be James "creepy guy," with Victoria as his inside girl?
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2013 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
Aha, so she does have a stalker then? I was thinking probably not a jealous ex girlfriend of Edwards because I had forgotten about the roses. They never came up. So Chilly is Victoria, which pretty much seals it- creepy guy has to be James. Mentioned Leah looking like Emily, a drug mule, interesting. That why he's been watching her, did he think she was Emily? Is Leah up to no good? Haven't gotten a good read on her character, she's moody maybe a bit shifty. Hmm, I'm curious, isn't Jacob his best friend? Because he doesn't say ex-best friend. So, did Jake sleep with his ex-wife? Was Edward married to Angela, and now she's married to Jake? Or did Jake cheat on Angela and she forgave him, after sleeping with Edward? Or, maybe it was someone else entirely, lol!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
"The family..." Yeah they do totally come off like they're the mafia. Can't wait until Bella actually asks him (if she does), that should be interesting! Oh, I like the theory the girls came up with too. I thought, if there is a stalker, it'd be a guy from the club, but a crazy jealous ex of Edwards would totally make sense too.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2013 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow 0.o :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2013 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
If there wasn't a note, why would Rose assume they're for Bella? I mean it is her apartment and she did just have a fight and make up with her boyfriend. Just saying. I am curious though if there is some sort of stalker of the women at the club or something with how strange they were acting, and even Leah too. And "pipes bursting," sounds more like a plumbing problem than an engine one, lol. I get it though, someone tampered with her car and they just didn't want her to know. Why doesn't Edward want her to know though? Wouldn't she be safer if she was aware of the danger?!
Date: 26 Jul 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
Leah is a def psycho.
Date: 26 Jul 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 22
More please!!!!!!
Date: 26 Jul 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 22
So Ed is a cop? Hummm..glad they found her!
Date: 23 Jul 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
As I said my left hand is messed up, So I have not reviewed as I normally would. Bella is a basket case. She is nuts..
Date: 23 Jul 2013 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am reading along not reviewing. My left hand is hurting so bad I don't want to type. So very sorry. I like your story. I wish the best for Bella.
Date: 23 Jul 2013 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Not from Edward.. well
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2013 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved the chapter and looking forward to more. See ya next time.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 22 Jul 2013 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
Such a great story! Loving it!
Date: 22 Jul 2013 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 9
Can we say mob?!?? Yummy
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG! Is it Carlos? Is Leah really not involved? GAH! CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT!
And could Bella be pregnant? That's what Edward was thinking right?
Thanks for the update, Lolo!
xoxo
Mina
Date: 21 Jul 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow E doesn't take her too seriously huh? Uh oh for the end
Date: 21 Jul 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 21
It is Carlos? I am as confused s Bella!
Date: 21 Jul 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
I think bellas preggos so does edward. Looks like carlos might be the stalker. Cant wait for next update
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
What the hay crawled up Edwards ass? Does he think shes pregnant?? O.o
Not gonna end well... :)
Date: 17 Jul 2013 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
I KNEW IT!!!!! love this story so far! cant wait for more!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh please update soon! So Bella is pregers or being drugged. Must be pregers!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
I really don't believe him..
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
So James is a cop...interesting
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
Back to the real world!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
Renee does have a point...
Date: 02 Jul 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
What s going on?
Date: 02 Jul 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh oh..dang that was hot!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh you are so not wrong Bella!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad she was tough he did have no right to be like that dork!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
What is up with Leah? Not trusting that...like esme's advice!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yeah finally! I always find it funny how Edward never has an ordinary cock it is always huge and had tremendous girth! Bela is a lucky girl! LMFAO!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ok we need some Ed and bella love and less self love :p
Date: 02 Jul 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh boy...hiding things already Ed?
Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh Ed you are suave!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ok is Ed old cause Emmett is his nephew?
Date: 02 Jul 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
Better luck for Bella! Self love is good but Ed love would be better :)
Date: 02 Jul 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh boy! How does Alice know Ed? Hummm...
Date: 02 Jul 2013 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Rose is a hoot and I like your Bella!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bella...she does need some luck!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
More please!
Leah is a sneaky one.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
If Edward's so worried about her, why doesn't he have a man at the club watching/looking out for her? That way if she doesn't feel well that person would be the one to drive her home or whatever
Date: 20 Jun 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you! Just found this, and read right through...love it!
Keep them coming, T
Date: 19 Jun 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
Aw, wosh there had been more to read ;) Loved the story, even though at times it was a bit confusing.
Date: 18 Jun 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
hmmm so Leah huh? interesting. The yogurt thing sounds cool
Date: 18 Jun 2013 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh he'll maybe it's Leah lol
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Duh duh duun! Great cliffie...
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well... O.o
Date: 16 Jun 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Say what now???!!!! Ruh roh!!!!
Date: 16 Jun 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oooo is leah the stalker and is bella pregnant?
Date: 12 Jun 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it!! :D
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
The cop is probably one of those ones who tell rape victims that her clothes asked for it. morons.
Date: 11 Jun 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Alice does like to talk huh? Think the cops will be useless. They mostly are until someone is acutally hurt.
Date: 11 Jun 2013 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
The tenderness in him is surprising and so sweet. I am glad to see the mystery is staring to unfold and looking forward to it.
Date: 10 Jun 2013 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
IM CLUELESS AS TO WHO IS STALKING HER. THANKS!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awwwww... That was sweet coming from this edward. Like jump him sweet... Go head B, jump his ass ;)
Looking forward to next update!!!!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
So if edward is clean...what will he do wen he finds bellas stalker
Date: 06 Jun 2013 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
If it makes her feel better than she should involve the cops