Date: 22 Oct 2012 12:08 PM Title: The Heat
Only one word. Wow.
Author's Response:
HI, thanks and the next chapter is up!
Date: 22 Oct 2012 10:35 AM Title: The Heat
I'm checking everyday for updates . How did the last slave die , is she ever going to escape . I really love this story please update more. 😃
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks. You'll have to wait and see and as far as escape goes, who knows? Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 21 Oct 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Lovely chapter. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 11:50 PM Title: Hell On Earth
Poor Sookie...
Date: 19 Oct 2012 11:23 PM Title: I Fight
I love dark Eric, and I must admit, I've never read an extremely dark Alcide...this is gonna be goooooood:)
Date: 19 Oct 2012 5:30 PM Title: Hell On Earth
Well that was horrific. I am fully hooked into this story, hopefully we will get to know more about the inner workings of Sookie two tormenters.
Author's Response:
Hi yeah it was pretty gruesome! I'm glad you're hooked and the next chapter will be up in the morning. I want to know more about her tormenters too:)
Date: 19 Oct 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
I've read many of your stories (on fanfiction.com) and even though this one has only just begun I have to say it maybe my favorite. I'm soory to read you chose to leave fanfiction but I understand your reasons, it's very unfortunate. I have read so many stories and I have gone back to re-read them and they are gone because they were too mature, well duh, that's why there is a rating system. It's a bit maddening! If their intention is to keep kids away from the nasty bits they have to realize that if these kids have a computer they mostlikely have access to on like porn (not that I am comaparing the two but they do). So keep up the good work. And may the muse Gods be kind to you and you in return are kind to us. XoXo
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you feel that way! Yes I hate what has happend to that site, it's my absoulte favorite place to post. Thanks for the review and I hope you like the chapter I just posted!
Date: 19 Oct 2012 4:57 PM Title: Hell On Earth
Love the darkness. I've never read an Alcide/Eric so I am very intrigued. I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Hi! I'm still reading Hex House and liking it! Thanks for the review and when I did the Eric/Alcide pairing I wasn't sure if it had been done a million times already, glad it hasn't been!
Date: 19 Oct 2012 4:52 PM Title: Hell On Earth
woooo!!!!! that all i got even thou i would totally fake it and then kick some one in the face.. sure they would retaluate but head you would have that one kick to the face to laugh about. But the pain she is prob goign through... god i really hope she gets good hits in to them when she can.... asses !!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Well if she woulda kicked them in the face she'd probalby would have been fucked up majorly, but I get your point. Thanks for your faithful reviews!
Date: 19 Oct 2012 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Adulfanfiction is notoriously hard to navigate but don't be discouraged. The readers there don't really give much encouragement or support. My stories there don't garner nearly half the attention that they do on the other sites. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this story. I'm a big fan of your dark fics. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Well even though most people that read my stuff can't find me there at least the ones that do review. Here almost no one does (not including you of course) its just so frustrating because if I was writng this story on FF.net then I would be getting a ton of feedback. I really appreciate the encourgement cullens_pet. I didn't know you were a writer! Twilight fics?
Date: 19 Oct 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
ok i found you again heheheh .. im here know this one is wayy move simple to guide through.. heheh like ericnorthman.net.. this one is going to be fun to read through.. write on camp im waiting heheheh...!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: HI Kpkisses! Thanks a bunch for reviewing!
Date: 18 Oct 2012 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for making it so easy to find you. I look forward to reading you without restrictions:)
Author's Response:
You're welcome! Thank you for reviewing! Please pass the word around if you want that I'm here! It's going to be awesome to write without any holding back!
Date: 18 Oct 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see you here. Looking fwd to your story
Author's Response:
Hi! Yay! My first review over here! Thanks I will be posting the second chapter in a minute.