Date: 08 Nov 2012 5:30 AM Title: "Welcome To The Dark Side"
crazy
Date: 08 Nov 2012 5:22 AM Title: I Wish I Was The Moon Tonight
damn
Date: 08 Nov 2012 5:15 AM Title: It Passed By And I Smiled
what the hell?!
Date: 08 Nov 2012 5:11 AM Title: The Enchantment Of The Grave
damn
Date: 08 Nov 2012 4:44 AM Title: The Theme Songs of Torture
damn this is sone tramatic shit
Date: 08 Nov 2012 4:32 AM Title: The Hoop And The Brains
wtf
Date: 08 Nov 2012 2:37 AM Title: The Mercy Fists
they are such crazies!
Date: 08 Nov 2012 2:30 AM Title: The Thorn Bushes
smh high in the swamp? at first i thought she was dreaming
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 2:18 AM Title: "Why don't you save me?"
You are so my chick I love that song Under My Spell, I don't know anyone else who knows it. I'll have to check out the other Desire song. Well I guess I should review... Is there a running contest between the sickos who can mind fuck the best? Just when I am feeling sympathetic towards Anton I'm back to thinking he's a creep. And also you used my favorite cuss cum dumpster!
Author's Response:
I love that song too! I think the other song is called "Don't call" Yes I think there is. Anton is the most messed up one i think sometimes but I like him anyway, sort of like Sookie does. LOL i stole that from another story, i couldn't help it I loved it so much. Thank you for this review, it means the world to me!
Author's Response:
I love that song too! I think the other song is called "Don't call" Yes I think there is. Anton is the most messed up one i think sometimes but I like him anyway, sort of like Sookie does. LOL i stole that from another story, i couldn't help it I loved it so much. Thank you for this review, it means the world to me!
Date: 08 Nov 2012 1:53 AM Title: The Darkness
nows shes starting to piss me off, lol
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 1:48 AM Title: "Welcome To The Dark Side"
Anton signing w/ Sookie nice touch another way to make her feel more connected to him but I have a feeling he won't last long if he keeps up his adoration. Anton seeking out someone to kill is eerie after his softness w/ Sookie. Maybe he's more like Alcide than I thought.
Author's Response:
So sorry! I meant to reply to this when I first got it. I'm worried about Anton too. He's creepy as all hell but I like him. I like dark characters though. Thanks for reviewing so consistently, I love you for it!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 1:07 AM Title: "Welcome To The Dark Side"
Understatement of the century: Eric's psychotic ass is scary!!! By threatening her with the death of her family, he attempted to take away any chance she would try to escape...I'm not sure she's completely given up yet though. I was surprised Anton let Sookie get another glimpse of who he really is in this chapter...I loved it though...there's something extra disturbing about devils disquised as angels...know what I mean? We expect our bad guys to look the part...and when they don't it throws us. And then you give them qualities that make us care about them lol!!! Seriously though...This story is so good...
Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:52 AM Title: The Falling Light
She is such a moron!!!! She clearly is the masochist to their saddist!
Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:44 AM Title: The Heat
....oh...my Though she really only has herself to blame, you would think by now she would get that obedience is her friend...
Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
ah poor sookie!!!
Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:30 AM Title: Hell On Earth
so sadistic, so they aren't supernatural in this fic?
Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
Somebody's in trouble!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:17 AM Title: I Wish I Was The Moon Tonight
So playing Sookie's iPod cruel or kind? As a reader I think it's cruel but as for Alcides's motives I really don't know? He declared his love so is he trying to make her happy or is he trying to make her miserable because he loves the misery? Conundrum. "Shit kicker song Strawberry Fields" I am assuming its not the Beatles song? I don't even know what to say about the contract out on Sookie's family, fact/fiction? The sick fuck that is Miguel & company probably fact. And don't worry I think everyone screws up Disney Land/World.
Author's Response:
So sorry that i didn't respond to this sooner. I"m about to pass out so this is probably going to be inchoherent and rife with spelling errors. I don't think Alcide is capable of real love, or should I say healthy love? Youtube that song, you migt like it, or you might hate it, I can't recall who sings it but its touching. The contract is real i think. I'm so sad that almost no one is reviewing this story but fuck it, sometimes its good to write for me and me alone. Thankyou for all your awesome reviews. Yeah but I've been there befoe so I was a litte shocked and ashamed when I fucked up.
Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:09 AM Title: I Fight
wow she is a glutten for punishment!
Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
im intrigued...
Date: 07 Nov 2012 11:01 PM Title: "Why don't you save me?"
Another good chapter. Again, how do you find so much time to write?
Author's Response:
Well its easy because I don't work. I'm on disablity
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 10:27 PM Title: It Passed By And I Smiled
I wonder if Alcides's addmition will be the death of her. Is it naive of me to look forward to Sookie going to Disney? 1) Who knows if she'll really get to go. 2) if she goes will it be worse to have a few moments of normalcy in the sun. I'm glad she has found someone she is found of even if it is Anton the rapist cousin/drug addict/spoiled rich kid. See you next chapter (you know I have no will power when it comes this story & after your PM how could I stay away? "Just when I think I'm out they pull me back in").
Date: 07 Nov 2012 10:16 PM Title: "Welcome To The Dark Side"
:) Good chapter.
Author's Response:
:) Thanks!
Date: 07 Nov 2012 8:43 PM Title: "Welcome To The Dark Side"
The way you write these characters is amazing.
They keep me so off balance. I start to like them and then the next sentence reminds me how sick they really are. I so want sookie to off them. BTW good chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you! Yeah they really are some sick twisted bastards. But I don't want any of them to die, its like thier my babies now, sick I know. Thank you this review!
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 2:36 AM Title: I Wish I Was The Moon Tonight
This is getting so beautifully complex...I almost feel sorry for Alcede...and that's fucked up!!! He's just so damaged...The horrors that guy must have lived through to become the monster he is...I can't even fathom. And Anton...he's a wild card...he seems to be just as screwed up as Alcide but who knows what he's going to do...I used to think he was Sookie's only chance to survive. But, I just don't know. These guys never do what I expect them to do...and I love it...thanks for another great chapter...
Author's Response:
Thank you. I feel bad for him too, I have something brewing in the back of my mind, something in particualr that happened to him. I adore Anton personally. You're welcome and thank you for these thoughtful reviews! Appreicate your readeriship and feeback so much~
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 1:44 AM Title: It Passed By And I Smiled
Miguel taught Eric and Alcide well...the evil fucker...they've brutalized her to the point that they have essentially destroyed Sookie's sense of self. It seems she's already started to accept her horrific treatment as her new reality. And to finish off her mind fuck...they're showing her small acts of kindness to confuse the hell out of her...It's brainwashing 101...You know, you really are doing a kick ass job on this story. You could have gone the easy route and just wrote a lot of gratuitous lemon's and left it at that. But, the way you've developed these characters...and used such graphic imagery to detail Sookie's abuse and subsequent psychological damage has made this so much more...you should be proud of yourself...
Author's Response:
I love your reviews! They fucking rock! I like to mix cruellty with kindness because it makes the characters more complex, and thank you for saying that. I never want this story to end, hope you like the chapter I just posted, hope to hear from you again! Thanks again!
Date: 06 Nov 2012 10:27 PM Title: I Wish I Was The Moon Tonight
Nice chapter. I had wondered how Eric was going to make her cooperate. I figured that he would do something like that. The new question is, why was she sick? Hmm... Another thing to ponder.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 12:34 PM Title: It Passed By And I Smiled
Nice chapter. I can't help but woder if Disney Land is code for something else? Maybe I'm just being a little paranoid. Good job.
Author's Response:
Its not lol, they really are taking her to Disneyland. Thanks and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06 Nov 2012 12:08 PM Title: It Passed By And I Smiled
I'm wondering if their Disneyland is the same as our Disneyland.
Author's Response:
Yes they are taking her to the real Dsineyland. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 2:31 AM Title: Barathrum
you should be very proud of your work..you have amazing talent.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 1:20 AM Title: The Enchantment Of The Grave
That confession was unexpected. Looking forward to more unexpected events.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 12:57 AM Title: The Enchantment Of The Grave
WOW!!! That was fucking brutal...and disgusting...and sexy as hell...I think little sookie may have bought someone a death sentence. I wonder who? I think Miguel brings out the worst in both Eric and Alcide so I can't wait to see where you take this next...Oh! thanks for another update...your spoiling us.
Author's Response:
Cool! Thanks and yeah it was sort of hot in a really sick way. It takes courage on your part to admit being turned on by this chapter so thank you! Miguel is so evil. I just posted another chapter FYI, look forward to hearing from you again as I love your reviews.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 12:26 AM Title: Barathrum
I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed. I love your dark stories and I appreciate the way you write your complex characters. I'm embarrassed to say how excited I get when I see an update:)
Author's Response:
It's all good! Thank you for that. I always try to make my characters have depth. I adore the last part of this review, it's very flattering. Thank you for putting in your cherised two cents.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:58 PM Title: Barathrum
This story is a guity pleasure --so much going into the character profiles. How will this end for Sookie? Good, bad? Will she survive --mentally as well as phsyically? So many questions to your Poe-like tale...
Author's Response:
I'm starting to think that its a guilty pleasure for most of you, lol. Who knows how it will end? I know I don't know. I adore Poe. Thanks for this review.
Author's Response:
I'm starting to think that its a guilty pleasure for most of you, lol. Who knows how it will end? I know I don't know. I adore Poe. Thanks for this review.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:06 PM Title: The Enchantment Of The Grave
Wow, I wonder what Eric will do? Nice chapter.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:00 PM Title: Barathrum
Not egotistical. It's alright to feel proud of your work. Not everyone has the gift for the art of good story telling. It takes a good writer to transport you to another time, another place, and to make you feel what the characters feel. Anyone can string a few words together and make a sentence, it takes a little something special for those words to take on a life of their own, to cause reactions and feelings in those that read them.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 10:23 PM Title: Barathrum
Before I reached the end of the Ch. I already had Googled the lyics and found the song. And I must confession I have The Distant Blue playlist on my iPhone (okay I know it makes me a weird fanboy err girl but i'm fine with that). As for reviewers maybe some people are afraid to comment I know it took me awhile to post comments when I first started reading fanfic I always felt like other reviewers would be critizing my review but you know what I say fuck'em.
Author's Response:
I gave another shout out to you but you know I like to respond to your reviews. I acutally almost blushed when I read this review. I had never thougt anyone would do this, make a soundtrack of my work. I'm so flattered I can't tell you how much. I suck at reviews personally and I don't read FF that much (which I know is horrible) I'm very picky with what I read. Anyway thanks.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 6:46 PM Title: Barathrum
You mention writing this story for yourself...GOOD!!! THIS IS YOUR BABY!!! You know, there are a lot of great "cookie cutter" stories out there that are very enjoyable to read. I follow several of them. But personally.the stories that really stick with me are the ones that shake me up a little...by shocking me, or scaring me, or breaking my heart...I don't want to dictate the course a great story takes. I want to be surprised!!! I want to feel something!!! Even if its disgust or outrage...So, keep doing what your doing...I know I'm enjoying the ride...
Author's Response:
Ha! You are by far one of my favorite reviewers for this story. I don't read cookie cutter stuff, sadly I am unable for the most part to read anything that isn't sickening. I'm pleased that you don't want to do that, sometimes people try too. Love your reviews and I will post another chapter soon! Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 5:47 PM Title: Barathrum
I really love this story. I think Miguel is really going to hurt her worse then eric and alcide . She needs to get her hands on Eric's gun.
Author's Response:
Hey! I think he might too. We shall see. Thanks for reviewing it means the world to me!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:30 PM Title: The Crush
This was a very informative chapter & enjoyed the interaction between Sookie & Anton. Sookie may be held captive but it nice for her to get a stay of exicution from pain & shame but unfortunatly it won't last. I also love to add learning more about the background of these sick twisted fucks is my favorite part besides the "normal" conversation Sookie had w/ her captors.
Author's Response:
It turned out to be. And I did too. Thanks agian, I was happy to find out Alcide's back story too.
Author's Response:
It turned out to be. And I did too. Thanks agian, I was happy to find out Alcide's back story too.
Author's Response:
It turned out to be. And I did too. Thanks agian, I was happy to find out Alcide's back story too.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:28 PM Title: The Crush
I really liked this chapter. We got some of the answers that have been swirling around. I also like the fact that you were able to create a character that even her captors are afraid of. And Anton is starting to grow on me. Before he was just creepy. Marvelous job.
Author's Response:
I liked it too. I always knew that I would grow to love Anton. Thank you for saying that as I have been proud of this story for last couple of days. Again I appreciate these reviews!
Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:22 PM Title: I Like Her
Not sure what to think of this chapter. They were almost normal. i can't wait to see what happens next. Guess i'll click the little button and find out, ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for this review, I'm starting to think that no one really likes this story all that much.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:39 AM Title: I Like Her
You write complex so well. I never know what any of these characters will do next which is fitting i guess, since most are psychopaths and the rest PTSD. Reading these two chapters i find myself thinking that the worst possible outcome is not her death or continued abuse but her acceptance. What if she were to escape and missthem in some strange way? After all that is one of the worst aspects of traumatic abuse...the mindset of the victim starts to be that this treatment is "NORMAL". Not so much stockholm syndrome more like soldiers that return from war only to reinlist because they can't bear normal life. Anyway can't wait to see what happens next...this is like an extremely compelling case study of deviant human psychology!
Author's Response:
This is one of the bst reviews I've recieved, so thanks. I was so sad when she didn't ask Eric to leave when she changed. I think she might miss them if she does get away, I know I said that there would be no Stocklholm Syndrome but maybe I was wrong, i like your conception of her abuse. There is no spell check this and I'm drunk so sorry i for the spelling mistakes. I like the soliers comparison. I find it comelling too, and I couldn't be more ashamed.
Author's Response:
This is one of the bst reviews I've recieved, so thanks. I was so sad when she didn't ask Eric to leave when she changed. I think she might miss them if she does get away, I know I said that there would be no Stocklholm Syndrome but maybe I was wrong, i like your conception of her abuse. There is no spell check this and I'm drunk so sorry i for the spelling mistakes. I like the soliers comparison. I find it comelling too, and I couldn't be more ashamed.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:16 AM Title: I Like Her
This was such a sad chapter even more than when she's being physically or sexually abused because now shes becoming accustom to them and resigned to her fate. I am very interested in this mentor. Well read ya later. XoXo
Author's Response:
Yeah I felt a little sad but confused writing it. I was happy she wasnt' in pain but it was sad just the same. I hope you like this chapter I just posted. Thanks for always reviewing.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:35 PM Title: Vouyer
Hmmm....Eric takes spells,could be a way for Sookie to excape.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for reviewing, since no else wants to.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for reviewing, since no else wants to.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:09 PM Title: The Theme Songs of Torture
:) Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:17 AM Title: Vouyer
I wonder how this is all gonna end. Great chapters!
Author's Response:
Who knows? Thanks for the review and as soon as I am able I'm going to post the next chapter.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 1:34 AM Title: Vouyer
;) i love how she is always thinging out how she would like to hurt them. she is getting smarter... she needs to heel up.. need to be healthy and full strength before you can put any plan in to motion. !!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I don't know if you saw it but I updated it twice yesterday. And there is another chapter already written. No one is reviewing the last chapter for some reason today. Oh well. Thanks for always being there with your thoughts and kind words of support.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 12:35 AM Title: The Mercy Fists
Thank you! Great chapter! :)
Author's Response:
You're welcome and thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 12:26 AM Title: Vouyer
OMG I got a shout out! Eric & Alcide seem to be in a completion on who can be the most Dispicable Eric last chapter & the winner this chapter is Alcide & his creepy friend.
Author's Response:
Yeah it's the least I could do considering your devotion to this tale. They are both deranged fucks, just when I think Alcide is worse than Eric, he proves me wrong. And yeah Anton is creepy. But I like him becasue I'm fucked in the head.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 12:24 AM Title: The Thorn Bushes
I am reviewing from my phone. I don't own a computer. I like reading your stories. I really do apprieciate you writing and sharing your story.I feel so sorry for Sookie. I hope she escapes. Thank you! You're doing a great job!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:27 PM Title: Vouyer
This just gets more interesting and more twisted. We finally know what happened to Cullen. Good for him serves those assholes right to have their toy taken away before they were finished playing with it. It seems like the drugs are giving Sookie enough distance to think a bit more straight...perhaps she will come up with a way to make them suffer a little as it seems she has no hope of relief or escape. Cant wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Hey I have been meaning to mention in yet another AN that I love your reviews and always look forward to your two cents. I think what gave her the distance in this particular chapter wasn't drugs, it was the basketball game. But of course everything in this story is open to interprettation. I'm sorry for the spelling errors but my spell check doesn't work on this site, I'm a terrible speller. I doubt she will but who knows. Thank you for this review it made my morning better.
Author's Response:
Hey I have been meaning to mention in yet another AN that I love your reviews and always look forward to your two cents. I think what gave her the distance in this particular chapter wasn't drugs, it was the basketball game. But of course everything in this story is open to interprettation. I'm sorry for the spelling errors but my spell check doesn't work on this site, I'm a terrible speller. I doubt she will but who knows. Thank you for this review it made my morning better.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:29 PM Title: Vouyer
Hmmm... not sure what to think of anton yet. I have a sneaking suspicion that he may try something during his little sleepover.
Author's Response:
I personally think Anton was a much needed additon to the story and besides I always love throwing in orginal characters. I do evil males pretty well I think. You'll just have to tune in for the next chapter i wrote tonight I suppose to find out. Thank you for reviewing so faithfully, I love you for that.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:33 PM Title: The Hoop And The Brains
You continue to surprise me (in a good way)...I almost don't want to guess where your going with this...I'm starting to think the biggest tragedy is going to be in Sookie losing her humanity...not just in her losing her life...keep the updates coming...
Author's Response:
HI I've been meaning to publicly acknowlege you in my AN's note I'm sorry that I haven't. Your reviews are some of the best I get. Sookie is being eroded each day, I highly doubt that much will be left of her IF she survies. This is a good review so thanks, and thank you for consistingly reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:27 PM Title: The Hoop And The Brains
I'm loving the story...yes, its intense and sick, twisted etc...but its nice to read stories that aren't all butterflies and rainbows. Yes, this was an excellent chapter, the new characters added an interesting twist.
Author's Response:
I'm pleased you are and I have to admit that I have never enjoyed writing a story this much. Thank you, I was defintly happy with the way it turned out and I think Anton is a nice addition. Thank you for all your wonderful reviews!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 2:23 PM Title: The Hoop And The Brains
Hmmm... I'm almost amazed that he didn't shoot the other guy for asking to sleep with her. Nice chapter.
Author's Response:
I think you just reviewed my last chapter so now you know why they didn't kill him. Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2012 1:25 PM Title: The Hoop And The Brains
I don't at all feel guilty for reading it, does that make me a sociopath? Just because I enjoy this story doesn't mean that I think what's happening to Sookie is good. If this were real life I would be disgusted & appalled but this is make believe. Oh I'm done w/ defending myself. I did not see it coming that Eric would just shoot some one in the head in the middle of the living room. And poor Sookie she feels so guilty for even enjoying herself playing basketball. Another great one and if your addicted to this story I don't know what to even call myself. Obsessed?
Author's Response:
I think I adore you! No it doesn't at all! Well maybe a little lol. I feel the same way about writing it, I tell myself that its fiction so its all good. I didn't see that coming either. I'm obsessed with it too, everday when I write the next chapter is the best part of my story and I can say without a trace of ego that this is my finest work that I've ever done. The basketball game really surprised me, I love how I never know what will happen next until I write it. I'm thinking of publishing this after I change the names, what do you think? I think this is going to be my longest story yet, or so I hope. Thanks for this wonderful review!
Author's Response:
I think I adore you! No it doesn't at all! Well maybe a little lol. I feel the same way about writing it, I tell myself that its fiction so its all good. I didn't see that coming either. I'm obsessed with it too, everday when I write the next chapter is the best part of my story and I can say without a trace of ego that this is my finest work that I've ever done. The basketball game really surprised me, I love how I never know what will happen next until I write it. I'm thinking of publishing this after I change the names, what do you think? I think this is going to be my longest story yet, or so I hope. Thanks for this wonderful review!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 1:59 AM Title: The High
Im just glad she was able to disappear .. well distant her self from herself. Damn if she can;t at least laugh about it for awhile. sad she had to find pleasure in something she dispised but hey .... damn i think im just glad she excaped a little for once. no pain... damn!!! crazy story you kicking out here camp but its sickly addictng i have to find out what happens. so i check it all the time.
Author's Response:
Yeah she needed that, but sometimes what we get doesn't help us, and I don't think in the long run it will help her very much. It is a crazy story and thank you for reading and reviewing :-D
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2012 10:21 PM Title: The Mercy Fists
I know you've mentioned their beauty before but does seem worse when monster are beautiful. I banked 2 more chapters but I didn't not (I know a double negitive) want to leave a review.
Author's Response:
Very true but for me personally I would rather have hot rapists than old and ugly ones, I'm sure it would be horrible though. Thanks for thinking to do that!
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:43 PM Title: The High
Good chapter. I have to wonder what she is going to think when she comes down from her high.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm sorry I haven't replied recently. I have been very wrapped up in shit. I hope you like the chapter I just posted.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 7:46 PM Title: The High
i hate to say it, but at least she has gotten some pleasure out of this ordeal.
Author's Response:
Lol, I suppose that's one way to look at it. It may be the last pleasure she has, but then who ever knows with the shit I write? Thanks for your faithful reviews.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 4:29 PM Title: The Party
oh those foul sobs
Date: 02 Nov 2012 11:58 AM Title: The Thorn Bushes
Is she having a drug induced dream?
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:46 AM Title: The Party
Oh poor, poor Sookie! Just when you think she has reached rock bottom they find some new way to degrade her further. I REALLY REALLY HATE them...but can't stop reading. Thanks for all the updates. I hope she at least gets to take one of them with her when she is finally put out of her misery.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 12:22 AM Title: The Party
Hmmm... and things take another turn.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2012 12:08 AM Title: The Mercy Fists
I feel bad for saying it...But, I'm glad you didn't let Sookie escape...It just wouldn't have been realistic...I just hope you let her get a little bit of pay back before they kill her...or they all kill each other... No matter where you choose to take this story... I know it will end the way it should... I trust you...so keep writing...and know that your talent is appreciated.
Author's Response:
So sorry I didn't respond sooner to this! I'm glad too, this story is all about realism. Perhaps she will, I don't know. Thank you for that trust I appreciate it. I hope I am worthy of it, thank you for this very thoughtful review too.
Date: 01 Nov 2012 4:19 PM Title: The Mercy Fists
Thanks for the quick update. I particularly anjoyed the last line. I can't wait to see their reaction to that.
Author's Response:
You're welcome! I'm writing the next one right now. I know I should be working on one of my other stories but this one is so addictive to write. Thank you for reviewing~
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2012 3:08 PM Title: The Mercy Fists
I really want her to kill them.
Author's Response:
Me too even though bastards are growing on me, lol. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response:
Me too even though bastards are growing on me, lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01 Nov 2012 2:08 PM Title: The Thorn Bushes
Has she really left her room ,I think it's the drugs making her think she's left. I really hate alcide I want sookie to kill him or hurt him cut his dick off or chop his hand off or she should burn his face with hot water.
Date: 01 Nov 2012 1:00 PM Title: The Thorn Bushes
Really like your stories! Please continue.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2012 1:00 PM Title: The Thorn Bushes
It's great writing... the subject matter is horrifying... But, it's kind of like watching a car crash... I CAN'T LOOK AWAY!!! Keep writing, I'm loving it.
Author's Response:
Thank you Sophi! Yes its very horrifying indeed but I can't seem to stop writing it, thanks for this great review!
Author's Response:
Thank you Sophi! Yes its very horrifying indeed but I can't seem to stop writing it, thanks for this great review!
Date: 01 Nov 2012 12:45 PM Title: The Thorn Bushes
This is so horribly fasinating. I find myself curious as to where it will go next. Alcide and Eric are disgusting but i find their psychology compelling. What happened to get them to this point, were they born this way or made monsters? Poor poor Sookie i almost hope for her death if she cant kill them or escape.
Author's Response:
Hi! Yes I find myself loving this story even though it makes me sick to write. I don't know what there story is, since it's first person but I suspect that they are both damaged from some serious shit! I pray for her death too at this point. Thank you so much for this thoughtful review!
Date: 01 Nov 2012 11:42 AM Title: The Thorn Bushes
Personally, I liked this chapter. I wonder if they will find her in time. I'm almost rooting that they don't. But then, I'd hate to see them not get the justice that they deserve. I'd almost like her to get the drop on them somehow and let her treat them with some of their own medicine.
Author's Response:
Thank you! This story won't end well, I have a very tragic ending planned but who knows I might change my mind. Everyone seems to want her to come to love Eric but in this story that is beyond unrealistic. She will never grow to love him nor that sick fuck Alcide. There won't be any stockholm syndrome in this. Thank you for writing this review, you have been one of the only readers who has done that and I appreciate that!
Date: 31 Oct 2012 8:21 PM Title: No Way Out
Im hoping eric saves her
Author's Response:
Hmm... I doubt it but then who knows? This story is so sad, I feel bad for her.
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 1:26 AM Title: Brandon And The Ghost That I'm Becoming
Now you've got me checking twice a day for updates. I'm do desperately hooked. I really enjoy your work on FF I've checked out your fav authors & stories are there any books you like that are in the same theme? BTW have to ask what is Virtue of Sin?
Author's Response:
Hey. Lol. Well some times a story has me in its claw so deep that i update twice or three times a day. I'm pleased that you're enjoying the story. Actually I wasn't going to tell anyone about the story that inspired this one because she's a much better author than me but there is a story on this web site called "Waiting in The throes" that is very well written and its about the same sort of stuff, but much better than I could ever be. I could also reccomend "Lothaire" by Kresely Cole, if you haven't readit. My all time favorite book is "The Silver Devil" by an author that I can't spell, but if you PM your email on FF.net I will send an pdf of it. Virtue of Sin is one of the favorite stories that I ever wrote that got deleted. A very dark tale, if you want I can send you an ebook of it as well. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 30 Oct 2012 5:41 PM Title: Brandon And The Ghost That I'm Becoming
Another great chapter. You nailed her perfectly with the scene in the bedroom where she soiled herself. Sometimes that makes the whole dehumanization thing complete, makes you seem more like an animal. I can't wait to see how it all ends.
Author's Response:
Well I think its going to end bably,... but don't know for sure... Thanks for the review~
Date: 30 Oct 2012 2:35 PM Title: Domesticated Evil
So glad you updated. This is so morbidly compelling. Update soon.
Author's Response:
The next update is almost finished. You know at first I sort of hated this story but writing its like a train wreak, I can't stop. Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 12:25 PM Title: Domesticated Evil
Did you remove the story or did they? Just curious. This is one of the most intreging stories I've read and is my favorite of yours & I'm pretty sure I've read them all. Keep up the good & dilligent work. XoXo
Author's Response:
They did but I'm sort of happy they did because this one person kept blasting me every time I alerted people about the chapter updates, it wsa super annoying, she's probaly the one who reported me, oh well. This story is growing on me slowly but surly, I think in a few chapters I'm going to bring in some new characters to add interest. Thank you for being such a wonderful loyal reader and Iwill do my best!
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 10:28 AM Title: Domesticated Evil
Good chapter, I think you're doing a marvelous job conveying Sookie's emotional struggle. It's hard to remember that she is just a child so she would react just a bit differently than the average woman.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah I'm really having to dig deep on this one, its forcing me go darker and scarier than ever before. Thanks for a wonderul review!
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:43 PM Title: The Heat
Well, it's certainly dark lol. I'm curious where you're planning to go with this story. I just wish it was a vampire story rather than A/H, maybe your next one will be a supernatural one (fingers crossed) :) Please update A.S.A.P
Author's Response:
Yes it is. I don't do supernatural stories usually, but hey who knows right? I can't sleep so I'm going to drink so coffee and try to update, thanks for this review!
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:50 PM Title: Against My Flesh
I take it Culleen died because he no longer fought?
Author's Response:
Maybe, but I think there will be a twist of some sort involed there, we'll see, thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response:
Maybe, but I think there will be a twist of some sort involed there, we'll see, thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response:
Maybe, but I think there will be a twist of some sort involed there, we'll see, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
At least they fed her. Her dream is quite telling.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 12:26 AM Title: Against My Flesh
An interesting treste on the psychosis of these two...
Author's Response:
Thanks and thank you for reviewing~ I'm having writer's block recently but I will try to update soon.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:12 PM Title: Against My Flesh
Wow. Very well written, totally different than anything I've ever read. Still don't understand how Cullen died hopefully this will be explained soon. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Well thank you! I'm dealing with writer's block but hopefully I'll be able to update in the morning, thanks for this review!
Date: 27 Oct 2012 3:27 PM Title: Against My Flesh
Who would have thought? I'm guessing that Cullen became complacent and even came to like the dastardly duo so they had to get rid of him becasue he wasn't any fun anymore. How terribly sad. But a nice twist.
Author's Response:
Who knows there might be another twist concering Cullen, not sure yet, thanks for your awesome reviews!
Date: 27 Oct 2012 11:43 AM Title: Against My Flesh
I always enjoy your stories no one can write as well as you.
Author's Response:
Wow that's a wonderful thing to say, thank you!
Date: 26 Oct 2012 5:30 PM Title: The Darkness
WOW Eric and Alcide are two sadistic monsters. Poor Sookie!! I'm surprised she hasn't died from her injuries. She could have internal bleeding. Hopefully Sookie can escape or poison them some how. Thank you!! :)
Author's Response:
Yes they are. This is by far the darkest story I've done, it may be TOO dark for even me. If you don't already know I'm also writing several stories over at FF.net. Under the same name.
Date: 26 Oct 2012 3:21 PM Title: I Fight
Thank you! I'm really looking forward to see how the story develops. I do feel sorry for Sookie. :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2012 1:03 AM Title: The Darkness
well at this point i think i would be at the I need to survive point so play the good slave and wait to strike..... SAy what they want maybe pour a little more. they know they took a teen so pour out the loving praises to live to see the other day. such the vomite down and kiss them full out. brain wash your self to get into survival mode. Store the anger and hate. it will fuel you to see your loved one once again.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 9:50 PM Title: The Darkness
Love this story, and have a really dumb question, but how do I find your other story? Thanks!
Author's Response:
Which other story? I have several and they are all except this one on FF.net. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Oct 2012 2:36 PM Title: The Darkness
Keep it up, girl. I don't know how you manage to write so fast. I'm slightly envious.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm a fast typer I guess :-D Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:01 PM Title: The Falling Light
Liked this chapter. I'm eager to see how this ends. I wonder how Cullen died. Will you ever tell us?
Author's Response:
Hi! I only have a vague ideal of how he died, but yes eventually I will spill the beans. Thanks for reviewing!