Date: 17 May 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
hmmm Daddy C is a bit of a prick huh?
Date: 17 May 2013 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
aww poor Heidi. Hope she'll be ok
Date: 17 May 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
I really like this story:)
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Thank you
Date: 17 May 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like E is having a major pity party. LOL
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Thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
:)
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Date: 03 May 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
Please tell me that you are still going to be working on this story.... It has really captured my attention
Author's Response:
I just updated, so it kinda means I'm still working on this.
Date: 02 May 2013 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm glad you didn't make Edward marry Heidi. In my culture, back in the days, and still practiced in our country of origin, the family will make the wife of the late older brother marry his younger brother, especially if there were children (sons in particular) or wealth involved as to keep it all in the family. It was a selfish thing to do. And honestly, I think that as adults, we go into something fully aware of our actions and with every one of our decisions come consequences. So if we're willing to take actions, we should also be willing to accept the consequences, whether good or bad.
Now, I understand that Bella can be confused and angry after Edward's revelation. But she also needs to accept the fact that they weren't together during the time when it occured. Yes, it is very hard to accept. But I think men and women differ greatly in how we manage our emotions. As women, if we feel down, the last thing we want is sex. For men, I'm incline to believe that when they feel down, sex is a relief. I'm not saying what he did was right. All I'm saying is that we look at it from both their point of view. He didn't necessarily cheat. She dated too even if she didn't sleep with anyone else. They both tried to move on. Forgivesness is probably one of the hardest thing to do because to truly forgive would also be to accept that person's faults along with his goods and to forget about the mistake.
Author's Response:
Customs sometimes dictate what one should and shouldn't do, as you just clearly stated. It's kinda sad, especially if one was forced to get into something just to please someone else. But, that's life. As they say, it ain't fair.
And yes, men and women are certainly different in almost all aspect. Don't you worry, Bella is a level-headed girl. She's kinda surprised and a little hurt right now, but she'll come around.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 02 May 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
If Bella doesn't know anything about this girl, including who she is, how can she know enough to be pissed off? Duh, Bella.
Author's Response:
She's taking it all in first then she'll see the light, don't worry.
Date: 01 May 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
One step forward,two steps back...what is she waiting for, so he had a fudge buddy. He Loves you.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, she's just taking it all in. Everything's gonna be good soon. Thanks.
Date: 14 Mar 2013 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
I like this Jess, too! And, if she is going to encourage a relationship with Edward then I think she's a great influence! :) I'm looking forward to this meeting that the two of them are about to have! Thanks for the update! I look forward to more.
Date: 12 Mar 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
For once I think Jessica is a good influence on her, but she can't wait forever to tell him...If he is going to be King then he will have obligations to fill and someone will come along and snatch him up.
Author's Response:
Her fear is making her second guess her feelings but Jess made her see what she might lose again if she let her fear win. Next chapter will be good, I promise. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2013 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 4th which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 12 not 14!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!! This is truely an such an amzingly well written story than so many people don't even realize it has been update & will believe it hasn't be updated since then ssssooooooooooooooo please fix!!!
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I'll try to see what I can do about this. Thank you for informing me.
Date: 09 Feb 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter! Things are moving, but I understand it will be a slow progression. Thanks for the update! :)
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Thanks.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
Sounds like the perfect first restart date. He did well. Now she needs to loosen up just a tiny bit..
Merrily
Kat
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Thank you for reading. ;)
Date: 06 Feb 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well he wants more, but can he handle everything that comes with him. loved the chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks. ;)
Date: 06 Feb 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
Her resolve is a lot stronger than mine would be. Edward is too yummy to hold out on.
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Thanks.
Date: 19 Jan 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love it! They are making progress.
Date: 18 Jan 2013 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank god she said yes to dinner! I wasn't sure how she would react!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2013 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
yipeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally !!! ok...... so let the love and lemony goodness commence.
Date: 11 Jan 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
So glad Edward put what he wants out there..... But isn't there more to say to each other? So he saw her buying lingerie.....did he not think it was for him? Let the wooing begin! I am an anxious to learn more!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2013 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
I fucking love this story!!! Kudos to the author!!!
Date: 04 Jan 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh Boy!!!! What a mess they had made, of what you have described as a timeless love story. I sure hope they find their way back to their HEA! :)
Date: 15 Dec 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;)
Date: 14 Dec 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
well I like it! can not wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 09 Dec 2012 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, this looks very interesting! Can't wait to hit 'next'. lol, Cheri
Author's Response:
Thanks. =)
Date: 09 Dec 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it :)
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Thank you. =)
Date: 02 Dec 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
I always look forward to your update because I'm so hopeful that these two can find their way back together.
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear this. Thank you. =)
Date: 01 Dec 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 30 Nov 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
I like this story, I just wish the chapters were longer.
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;)
Date: 24 Nov 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great story!
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Thank you. =D
Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
:-)
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Thank you. =)
Date: 24 Nov 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved its:)
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Thanks. ;)
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Edward, he's so screwed, thanks for the update
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Thanks
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Date: 19 Nov 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it :)
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Thank you.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Still not understanding what happened between the two of them and why his family doesn't like her?
Author's Response:
This is kind of a slow burn, and we are getting there. I didn't mention the reason for their break up yet ... trying to establish some things first. Be patient for a little more.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
So a lot is going on in her life and even her family is worried about it reflecting on them. What happened why did they break up
Author's Response:
No, Alice just assumes Bella's past with Edward could affect their business.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Thanks.
Date: 26 Oct 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Still confused
Author's Response:
Lol. Still?
Date: 20 Oct 2012 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
well... way to leave us hanging.......update soon!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks. =)
Date: 19 Oct 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
He obviously loves her. What else is going on here?
Author's Response:
Answers will be revealed as we go along, so stick with me here. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
WOW, that was hard to read! Poor E&B.
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=)
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
He hurt her what happened need to know
Author's Response:
Soon, don't worry.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am waiting for Bella
Date: 19 Oct 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
what happened with them
Author's Response:
Answers will be revealed as we go along, so stick with me here. Thanks. =)
Date: 19 Oct 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
poor guy
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
Sad, so sad :(
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Thank you for reading.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
confused about bella n edwaRD
Author's Response:
Hopefully, as we go along the story, you will get to understand them. Thanks.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can you please tell me the ages of Edward and bella's? Also do you mind making longer chapters? I'm sorry if i'm bothering you but your story is very intriguing and beautifully written that i want it badly to be longer!!!!!!! Thanks!!!!!
Author's Response:
Bella's 26 and Edward's 28. As for the longer chaps. ... we'll see. ;)
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
this looks really good
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Thanks.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
So where does he know Bella from.. great story
Author's Response:
Bella will make an appearance next chapter, so hopefully your question will be answered.
Thank you for reading. ;)
Date: 12 Oct 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm starting to get obsessed with this! It's lovely! How many chapters please say 36 and up!? And how old is Edward and Bella? The chapters are gonna be long?
Author's Response:
I'm not quite sure how many chapters yet, but my stories usually run from 25 to 35 ... so maybe between that number. Length will be like the last chapter.
Thank you for reading ... and this very nice review. ;)
Date: 12 Oct 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear that. ;) Thanks.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hmmmm...sounds like this could be interesting.
Author's Response:
Hope you stick with this. Thanks!
Date: 09 Oct 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
i like this :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. ;)
Date: 09 Oct 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! already had a lil cry lol update soon!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Thank you!
Date: 09 Oct 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Intriguing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. =)
Date: 09 Oct 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
can someone explain the plot to me?! i don't get it!!!
Author's Response:
Edward is now the next in line to be king because his elder brother died.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh wow this is hard core. i like it so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks. =)
Date: 09 Oct 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm hooked already. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the first two chapters. Thank you for reading. =)