Date: 13 Sep 2013 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 99
Im throughy enjoying your Full Circle!
Date: 12 Sep 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 103
Just picturing first his sunburned condition, and his pouty form, then add in him in Ana's robe, well that's just priceless!
Date: 12 Sep 2013 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 102
I'm not understanding why I missed this chapters posting! I love this story!
Date: 12 Sep 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonder what Christian would do about school events, teacher conferences and school open houses.
Date: 11 Sep 2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 93
Family reunions.....How lovely!
Date: 10 Sep 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 87
I can't catch my breath! Three hard breathing chapters in a row!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 86
Oooohhhh!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 84
Sticky gooey parts next!
Date: 09 Sep 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 80
Thank you for sharing your FULL CIRCLE!
Date: 09 Sep 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 79
Giving and getting Birthday sex is magical. ;p
Date: 09 Sep 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 78
So many intriguing twists!
Date: 09 Sep 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 77
"Three children in backseat!" line is HILARIOUS! Christian has humor, wit, and a pretty face!
Date: 08 Sep 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 103
Thanks for the update and the yummy lemon :)
Date: 08 Sep 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 103
Loved Emotional Christian at the end...it shows how far he has come.
Date: 08 Sep 2013 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 103
Silly, not wairing sunscreen, he usually so precise. I'm sure he learned a lesson. But I guess tying her up was a pleasant consequence.
Great chapter!
Date: 08 Sep 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 103
Got to love it!!!
Date: 07 Sep 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 103
Whew, that was muy caliente!!!
Date: 07 Sep 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 103
Awesome chapter...loving this story...it's what I look forward to every week! Please keep it going, I just can't imagine your Greys not being in my life! Thanks for updating. I just love your Christian and Ana!!!
Date: 07 Sep 2013 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 67
It is shocking to have Ana use abusive words towards Christian. She getting a dirty mouth and should be punished.
Date: 04 Sep 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
Did you rewrite it's book in the last day? I have read it several times on TWCS and don't recall the word clitoris in the story.
Author's Response:
No I haven't done any rewrites. The story is different on TWCS than on FanFiction, if you have read it there. I could never use that word on the FF site. But aI have not done any rewrites on Full Circle.
Date: 04 Sep 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 54
No more TV for Gracie!
Date: 03 Sep 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 49
Gotta love that Ana and her well intended heart.
Date: 02 Sep 2013 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 102
Yes I think Ana will need to be brought in line as well. Thank you or the lovely update :)
Date: 01 Sep 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 102
Loved the banter at the end. Funny & sweet.
Date: 01 Sep 2013 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 39
Happy New Year to you also! Its now Labor Day weekend 2013. Throughly enjoying your Christian and Ana.
Did anyone really believe Ana was going to be undetected from Christians radar? ;)
Date: 01 Sep 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 102
Wonderful as usual!!!
Date: 01 Sep 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 102
Oh boy! I am sure Mr Grey will find it very difficult to let Ana's meeting be. Can't wait or the next chapter!
Date: 01 Sep 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 102
I love this story and look forward to Saturdays each week.
I can't wait to see how this meeting with Mr. Parker goes ... will Christian be able to keep himself or his hired hands out of the situation???
Date: 01 Sep 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 102
I wondered why he was being such a petulant ass. If the tides were turned I wonder how he would react to Ana being bitchy to him for not getting answers?
Date: 31 Aug 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 102
LOVE. THIS. STORY!!! I re-read the your entire 3 books a few weeks ago...amazing! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 31 Aug 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 102
Lord this woman is so stubborn. She wouldn't want Christian meeting some woman at a hotel but expects him to be okay with it. She better not do something stupid and give Sawyer the slip. Looks like she'll have to deal with the consequences good and hopefully not bad but, bad would make for some excitement!!!!!
Date: 25 Aug 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 101
No, you would think that after all that they have been through and how many years they've been together that she would no better and realize when something isn't right. She isn't that naive young girl anymore where she can't believe that bad things happen. She needs grow the fuck up. It just get's on my nerves that she hasn't learned anything from all the bad shit that has happened to them. Lord, will she ever learn to stop looking at things with rose colored glasses!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Aug 2013 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 101
I'm sure she will, but hopefully not before she has his promise not to interfere unless she asks him to.
I'm sure Sawyer will stay close.
Date: 25 Aug 2013 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 101
Loved Christian's speech about Ana's wedding rings! Another sweet chapter, thank you!
Date: 25 Aug 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
Just occured to me how pleasent it must be not to have a uterus. Sex anywhere and whenever!
Date: 24 Aug 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 101
If she doesn't tell him he will make it a point to find out on his own. Thank you for the update :)
Date: 18 Aug 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 100
Congratulation on 100chapters on another book of the series. Poor little Teddy. Christian was killing me with just a little more time before going to take care of Teddy. I can understand when you are almost there nothing will stop you until you finish. Lol
Date: 18 Aug 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 100
Thank you for the excellent chapter :)
Date: 18 Aug 2013 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 100
Loved having more of Christian being .. well, Christian.
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 100
Cute chapter. Shouty Christian is back!!!!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
I have laughed so much and so hard with this chapter. It is so real. Well done.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 99
snoring christian was funny...poor ana! i have a client who divorced her husband because he snored like a freight train and wouldn't do anything about it! lol
clearly, the husband was not the christian grey!!!
i certainly hope that virginia would live with them. she's lost so much precious time with christian and i think with what little time she may have left, this would be a perfect opportunity for her to continue creating beautiful moments with her dear family. i love ana, her heart is just so pure and beautiful and she definitely transferred some of that energy to her dear husband.
poor sweet teddy! it was bad enough that he was in a lot of pain from his injury but to be afraid that his dad would be mad at him from breaking his arm...i hope christian doesn't go thermonuclear on teddy and/or gale! ;)
brilliant as usual!
Date: 11 Aug 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 99
I love the idea of Virginia staying with there permanently with the Grey's. Thank you for the update :)
Date: 11 Aug 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 99
Awwwwww. Poor teddy. I hope Christian doesn't have a go at Gail. I also hope Virginia moves in with them. It will be good for all of them to have her close. I so love this story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 11 Aug 2013 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 99
It's so hard Stephen a child gets hurt.. They don't understand and are terribly afraid. Poor Teddy!
Date: 11 Aug 2013 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 99
Do you think you will start book 4 soon? Still seems like so much yet to come.
Thanks for another great chapter
Date: 11 Aug 2013 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 99
oh gosh brace yourself people Christian is in the ER and his cub is hurt! great chapter
Date: 11 Aug 2013 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 99
Oh no! Poor Teddy. I am glad that Virginia is expressing her feelings to Ana like that. I am also glad the she takes some responsibility too.
Date: 11 Aug 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 99
Whoa, Christian is fucking sexy! I love how he just tells her how it's going to go and not in a dangerous way but a dangerously sexy way! Hott for Christian!!!!!!!
Date: 06 Aug 2013 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 98
Oh my. I think Christian may need an antibiotic at this point! Listen, E, you take care of yourself and let your wrist heal. I've had wrist injuries before as well and the only thing that heals it is rest. I hope that the keyboard you ordered is one that reduces hand stress. I had one of those and it was very helpful. I am enjoying your story immensely. You are such a good writer and your story flows so easily and beautifully. I don't know how you are able to sprinkle in such details. I could never do that! I am so happy that Christian and Ana and the children are doing so well. Wait till Tommy finds out he has yet another grandma. The story is in a good place now and adore being a fly on the wall in their home. Take it easy and be well. :)
Date: 04 Aug 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 98
Yeah ... more Christian. :) And Tommy calling them mama and daddy was perfect.
hope your wrists start to mend. Thanks for continuing this story for us ... it's so good I look forward to every chapter.
Date: 04 Aug 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 98
Tommy gives her a big nod and I hear Christian chuckle. "Want part of the paper, bud?"
"Peese."
Christian pulls the cartoon section out and folds it handing it to Tommy who gives the pictures serious consideration. Christian goes back to his paper and coffee.
this adorable scene was just so natural between the christian and tommy...like a normal thing between father and son.
Christian leans in and gives Tommy a kiss on his cheek. "Bye Bud. You and Jimmy have a good day."
"Ukay. We well. Bye daddy."
My heart skips a beat and Christian stops in his tracks. Christian turns around walking back over to Tommy. Pulling him up into his arms he gives him a hug and another kiss. "I love you son."
and this one hit me hard. i got so emotional and couldn't fight my tears.
the care package was so ana. she's always been so thoughtful and caring. the time, the energy and the love she put into that was the same as when she was putting together christian's 28th birthday presents: the playroom keyholder with the digital "YES" blinking (i think or was it the seattle space needle or both?), the music, the toys, the jeans. and let's not forger the glider she left after they broke up.
the lemon was fantastic...the chapter was beautiful as always. the writing was stunning!
i hope your hands gets better. the writing can wait. it's best you take care of those golden hands of yours!
Date: 04 Aug 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 98
Great as usual! I'll miss you're frequent posts :(. But you make sure and take care of yourself, we're glad to get our story whenever you give it:). Feel Better!!
Date: 04 Aug 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 98
I'm sorry to hear about what you have been going through. I love this story and appreciate the updates, first and foremost please take care of yourself. Your health and well being comes first.
Every part of this chapter was fantastic, Christian and Tommy at breakfast was beyond precious with the coffee and newspaper, but most of all Tommy calling him daddy and their hug was so touching and heart warming.
Thank you again for the update, get well soon.
Fefe :)
Date: 04 Aug 2013 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 98
I hate colds! I hope all goes well with Tommy... He appears tot be adjusting well.
Date: 04 Aug 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 98
I love that Christian still gets surprised with Ana's love for him. I loved the kds, especially Teddy, talking with Ms. Collins. Great chapter! Hope the wrist feels better!
Date: 04 Aug 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 98
I love reading your work to much to want you to push yourself. Please take the time to heal.
This was another great chapt. We got to hear from Myra, the kids, Mrs. Collins, and hit sex. Poor Christian, I'm thinking he needs a chest x-ray to rule out pneumonia.
I keep thinking more drama us coming. The subs, Tommy's mother & boyfriend. Or, some tragedy firm Virginia. Will have to wait and see.
take care
Date: 04 Aug 2013 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 98
Great chapter. I hope they get the adoption finalised and little Tommy legally becomes Tommy Grey, BEFORE Lorna resurfaces. And OMG!, when he called Christian Daddy and Christian's response was beautiful. Watery eyes, guilty as charged, LOL. Fabulous story and I hope you are healing well so you can get back to typing with no pain. I know exactly how you feel. I have carpel tunnel in both wrists from an old job and its not nice to have. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 97
Hi I must admit I'm not very good at reviewing. I must admit your writing is brill, you give the characters so much more depth than the original writer. Have read your other works too, please carry on writing.
Date: 29 Jul 2013 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 97
LOL, Jason and his drum solo. That was cute. Poor Christian, he's really crook isn't he. I think he should be off work for a couple of more days at least. He needs some antibiotics, maybe a visit from his mother ( I can't remember if she has been to see him or not ). Anyway, can't wait for little tommy to call Christian Daddy to his face.
Date: 29 Jul 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 97
Thank you for the update :)
Date: 29 Jul 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 97
I hoped you were ok, you are always so prompt posting.
Great chapter, I like seeing personality in Taylor.
Date: 28 Jul 2013 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 97
Jason is a man of many talents," he coughs.
"Hmm. So Gail tells me." I giggle. I was giggling along right with her. Nice update!
Date: 28 Jul 2013 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 97
Awesome, fun chapter. I love the Jason & Gail characters. Would love an out take of the two of them.
Hope all is back to normal for you.
Until next time...
Date: 28 Jul 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 97
Hey, it seems Christian isn't the only one who is not feeling well. I hope your wrist is healing okay. It takes a while, I know. Thank you for posting another chapter, I cherish each one. Since reading FF, today was the first time I invited my eldest son to read a chapter since it involved drumming. Of course he turned me down, LOL! But I thought he would find it interesting since he is has been a drummer since the age of 7 too. Boy, Jason rocks, who knew? It was awesome how Ana kissed all three of her children. It won't be long till Tommy becomes a Grey. So lovely!
Date: 28 Jul 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 97
OMG Jason on the drums
Date: 28 Jul 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 97
Glad Teddy got his drums today ... and Taylor playing them was a supercool touch (and surprise! ). I hope Christian feels better soon ... I miss him.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 96
thanj you for the update.....Virgiinia is having a great visit............I don't know where Tommy mom is...how could she put some asshole before her child? I know she has issue's but the child didn't ask to come here...I hope Tommy gets to stay with Christian and Bella he'd have a better life...well done
Date: 22 Jul 2013 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 96
This update had me in tears. I hope Christian feels better soon and that the dialogue between him and Anna does not foreshadow something sad in their future. I remain hopeful for more happy days ahead! Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 96
You're the mamaist person I know. You take care of everybody. Here I thought I was marrying an insatiable sex kitten who could cook. Who knew you had this side to you."E, you always write the most cleverist lines, that was sooo sweet of Christian to say. But your'e killin' me here....
"If you live to be 100, I hope I live to be 100 minus 1 day, so I never have to live without you." I am in tears with what Ana said. That just about sums up their love for eachother because Christian feels the same. I think Tommy and Grace are too precious and sweet, but you can tell that Ana has a special relationship with Teddy. Being her "first little baby", he is mature for his age and very insightful. I believe that Gamma Ginia stares at Teddy because he looks so much like his daddy. Brava, as usual! Looking forward to 97. kiss kiss, hug hug
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 96
Cute update. see you again soon!
Date: 21 Jul 2013 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 95
He called her mama, that was a truly touching moment and definitely brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for the update :)
Date: 21 Jul 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 94
I love Grandma Virginia, it's nice to see her interacting with the family. I'm glad Teddy is okay with adopting Tommy. This is one of the best stories on TWC and FFN. I apologize for being behind on my reviews, I have enjoyed and greatly appreciate every chapter you've written. Thank you E for continuing on with this bueautiful story.
Date: 18 Jul 2013 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 95
AWWWE! Tommy is the sweetest thing! Please update soon!
Date: 18 Jul 2013 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 95
Love that little Tommy! So heart warming.
Date: 18 Jul 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 94
Everyone loves Christian!
Date: 17 Jul 2013 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 95
You're killin me here!!! I can't even type this correctly with the tears in my eyes!! What a precious, beautiful ending. You. Are. An. Amazing. Writer. Thank you so much for this chapter and for writing this endearing story. I need one of Christian's tissues!!! xxoo
Date: 17 Jul 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 95
Awwwww, that was the moment I've been waiting for for so long. Little Tommy called her Mama. I shed a few tears, well more than a few I have to admit. He must be very close to calling Christian Daddy. With things going smoothly, I have a gut feeling that silly girl Lorna is going to turn up out of the blue ( on the orders of her pimp of course ) to cause trouble. I'm so happy tommy called Ana Mama. Can't wait for more of your wonderful story.
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 95
the last part of the story where tommy called ana "mama" made me cry...tears of joy. i always enjoy reading these sweet, tender, loving and fun moments with the greys. your story is so life-like. it makes me feel like i was there with the greys and i don't care if was just the chair, the table, or the spoon as long as i was a part of their special moments.
i wish you'd keep writing about them. i want to see how much grace will put christian through hell! LOL ;) ;) it'll be so much fun seeing christian being 100x more overprotective with the kids especially grey.
brilliant as always! love love love your story, your writing, and YOU!!!
Date: 16 Jul 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 95
thank you for the update....Gramma's visit is going well.I hope Christian is up soon so he can enjoy the visit as well.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 95
This was a wonderful chapter... The best part is Tommy calling Ana mama! That is so sweet. I am so happy the his is happy and comfortable enough to feel wanted.. Looking forward for the next one... Keep up the GREAT work!
Date: 16 Jul 2013 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 95
aaaaawww.... sniff, sniff... He called her Mama.... :)
Date: 16 Jul 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 95
OMG.....I can't beleive he said mama! This is getting better and better and better!!!!